Luqina is a piece of work! lol
fab more soon wooooooo!!!
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Luqina is a piece of work! lol
fab more soon wooooooo!!!
:angry::angry: I will kill that woman, threating a innocent school girl.. she makes my blood boil
Go Romeo and my gawd, who does Luqina think she is :angry:
A boobie flashin tart !!!:rotfl:Quote:
Originally Posted by jojomum
oooohhhhhhhhhhhh I am gonna KILL this WITCH !!!!!:angry:
:rotfl: Thats for sure - at least Romeo hasn't fallen for it yet - hopefully he will keep seeing past her "charms" :rotfl:Quote:
Originally Posted by JustJodi
Right now Romeo is too busy heading out to the store getting replacement items ...My guess will be he will be the one to confront the WITCH eventually !!! if he does not succumb to her plastic boobs ( i guess she has had a boob job,, i dunno I am just guessing :rotfl: )
he already told her that the boob flashing doesn't work on him.. good for himQuote:
Originally Posted by JustJodi
Bachelor Boys House
Romeo has returned from the shops and is carrying on with the dinner. Claire is talking to him.
Romeo: So how comes Emma has gone home, is my cooking really that bad?
Claire: God knows...Luqina said something...but i wasnt really intrested...i mean Emma would have said goodbye...i bet that little cow upset her...she needs to be put in her place or she'll have this household under her thumb in no time...
Romeo: Oh dont worry, I've had a word with her, told her to get her act together or I'll make sure Tom see facts...
Claire's mobile phone rings.
Claire: Hello?...Mom?....why what's wrong with her....yeah I'll be right around...
Claire puts her phone away. She has a distressed look on her face...
Romeo: Whats wrong hun?
Claire: Its mom...said Emma is in tears...
Romeo: why?
Claire: I dont know, but I'll have to go and see...
Claire storms out of the house, Luqina runs to the window in a panick...
Romeo: What's up...guilty concience?...Oh i'm sure your perfectly innocent...
ooohhh the conflict.. don't let her beat you Romeo
Red Rum Upstairs Flat
Vicky and Amy are upstairs in the living room listening to music with a bottle of wine.
Vicky: Awww, i feel guilty about leaving Patrick downstairs on his own...
Amy: Dont be...its about time he did some hard graft...we deserve a night off...
Amy pours the wine into 2 glasses.
Vicky: So then what did the doctor say?
Amy: Oh erm...he wants me to go for some kind of scan...and then he can determine if i can have kids or not...
Vicky: Oh i hope it works out for you babes..
Amy: So do i...Patrick says im just the using the idea of a kid to save the marraige...which i suppose in a way is true...but thats the duty of a wife to provide a child to her husband....he might not want one now, but im sure he will be a pefect dad when the baby is born...
Vicky: What Patrick!? Are we on about the same bloke here...
Amy: He isnt the most loving husband on this earth, but i think fatherhood could change him...
Vicky: It deserves a blooming medal if it can tame Patrick!
The girls laugh.
Amy: But if you excluded Patrick from the situation...i just really want a little child...its all ive ever wanted...i used to play with by dolls...and i thought since then thats all i ever wanted to do...carerer and money didnt seem to appeal to me...as long as i was a mother...then id be content....im such a loving person...but Patricks never used that...so i want to share my love with someone...a little baby...
Vicky: Are babes...you'll have me in tears...
Amy: Im sure youll be the same one day...
Vicky: No kids are not the top of our agenda...
Amy: Our?
Vicky: (smiles to self) Yeah...
Amy: Bloomin hell Vics, you kept that one quiet...
Vicky: Yeah well we want to keep it quiet, until we know its the real deal...
Amy: You still could of told me!....So who is he then?
Vicky: Nick...
Amy: What Nick Taylor!? Blooming heck vics, youve pulled a stunner there havent you..!? And he's got a bank balance to match...
Vicky: (Laughs) He could be peniless for all i care....
Amy: Awww Vics, thats so sweet...god i miss the passion and romance of a relationship...lets hope he dosent turn out like Patrick!
Vicky: Oh no way...theres no chance of that happneing...do you know what Amy...i think he might well be "the one"...
Vicky smiles to herself.
lol!!! :rotfl:Quote:
Originally Posted by Siobhan
:wub::wub::wub: ah bless. vicky is totally in love
fabby and brilly as usual!
Bachelor Boys House - Night
Luqina and Romeo are in the living room.
Luqina: I wish you would stop this victimisation! Cant you just be happy for me and Tom?
Romeo: No! Because I know Tom can do a damn lot better than you! Your using him…
Luqina: He has no complaints…
Romeo: I will not have you abuse my friend like this!
There is a vicious bang at the door. Romeo answers it, in storms Claire.
Claire: You evil little bitch!
Claire charges towards Luqina and punches her around the face. She lands to the floor, holding her bleeding mouth.
Luqina: What the…?
Claire jumps to the floor and starts yanking at Luqina’s hair.
Claire: You twisted cow! See how you like having your haired yanked!
Romeo pulls the pair apart.
Romeo: What the hell is going on here. (pause) Claire?
Claire: This…tart…has threatned Emma…
Luqina: She’s the tart! She was after my man!
Claire: Oh get real! It was a stupid schoolgirl crush!
Luqina: I just wanted to make that clear…
Claire: By yanking her hair!? I’m not going to let you get away with it!
Claire tries to attack Luqina, but Romeo continues holding her.
Romeo: Right that’s it! I want you out! I don’t give a damn about what Tom says…I have a good mind to tell him what a twisted little bitch you really are!
Luqina: You wouldn’t dare!
Romeo: Want to bet!?
The doorbell rings. Romeo goes to answer it. Rebecca is there… a tissue in her hands.
Romeo: Rebecca, whats up?
Rebecca: I’ve just had a call from your uncle Gisapi in Italy…its your brother…he’s…he’s dead…
nnnnnnnnnnnnnoooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!! #
excellent work again :cheer::cheer::cheer:
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Bachleor Boys House - Night
Romeoe is packing his bags, Rebecca is talking to him.
Rebecca All Gisepi said was that he got into a tussle with the robber and he shot him...
Romeo: I...i cant believe it... he was only 20...
Rebecca: It's cruel i know...I'm going to come with you to Italy, we need to sort out the funeral and help your uncle with the buisness...
Romeo: Never a dull moment in my life eh?
Rebecca: It came as a shock to me aswell...
A car horn beeps, Rebecca looks outside the window.
Rebecca: Its the taxi...
Romeo: Look you go and get in...I'll just say my goodbyes to Claire
Rebecca: Ok Romeo...(hugs him) dont worry love...it will get better.
Cuts to the living room where Claire and Luqina are sitting either end of the sofa. The pair give each other evil looks.
Luqina: I take it Romyo will be going back to Italy?
Claire: Well thats pretty obvious isnt it...
Luqina: I wouldnt give my brother the time of day...
Claire: That sums you right up...
Romeoe walks down the stairs carrying his bag.
Romeo: Right then, im off...
Claire grabs hold of Romeo and hugs him tightly.
Romeo: God ive never known you get so close...i'll have to get relatives to die more often...
Claire laughs at this as she whipes away the tears
Romeo: Dont worry, ill be back as soon as i can... a month or two at the max... (to Luqina) and dont you think I'm going to let this drop...if your still on the scene by the time i get back...then heaven help me...
Luqina: Dont worry...i will be...have a nice trip Romyo...lets hope you never come back...
Claire raises her hand to Luqina but Romeo grabs hold of it. He gives her one final kiss goodbye and leaves. Claire and Luqina follow him out onto the driveway. She waves him goodbye as the cab drives off down Elmcroft Square...
Luqina: Oh what a shame...no lover boy to fight your battles now...looks like its a one woman fight... and im gonna love every minute of it...
Luqina smiles and walks back into the house.
ooo luquina i really dont like her. the bitch lol. quite liking romeo now though. he's grown on me :)
brill again. god i'd kill that lugina one.
Lugina is a bitch.. hope she gets lots of slaps :angry:
I agree :angry: ! Fab work honey i just caught up (again yes i know! :p)Quote:
Originally Posted by Siobhan
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Ozzy'z Osbourne's "We're going trough changes" plays as we see short scenes of the characters.
Andrews House
Claire is lying on her bed, stroking a picture of her and Romeo, she kisses it.
Mansfeilds House
Daniel is hopping around the living room on his crutches. Vicky is on the sofa, and she gets a text:
"Hiya babes, cant wait till lunch...luv u loads...Nick"
Bachelor Boys House
Chris feels a lemon as Tom and Luqina snog each other in front of him. In the end he walks out of the room.
Baymoore Beach
Amy walks down by the beach and sees some children playing and having fun. She smiles and holds her stomach, then looks sad.
Valentinos Restauraunt
A close up of a notice on the window: "Closed Until Further Notice"
Val's Hairdressers
Val looks on at her boarded up salon, James comforts her.
Harvey's Motors
Craig sits in his office and reads the obituries in the local newspaper, and notices Ed's:
TAYLOR
Edward. Son of Richard, brother of Nick and Tanya. Passed away on 24th December. Will be sadly missed by all. Service will take place at Torbay Church on Friday 13th January.
Honeysuckle Cottage
An exterior shot of a small thatched cottage in a pictqeusque garden. Home of Tanya and Gary. Tanya and Richard are in the living room.
Tanya: Looks like Ed's obituray is in the paper today...
Richard: I was hoping it wouldnt...becuause now it seems so real... its formal now...official.
Tanya: He might not be sharing the same air as us...or here to talk to us..but he's always going to be here...in spirit...
Richard: I dont believe all that noncense...once your dead thats it...your a pile of ashes or worm food...theres no afterlife...
Tanya: Well i'd like to think so...so dont spoil it for me...and tomorrow is important to me dad, so regardless of what you think or feel...i want it to be special...
Richard: Special...lets face it Tanya...theres not going to be anyone coming to this funeral...it was a waste of time doing an obituray, the only person outside the family would have been Rebecca...but shes gone to Italy now...
Tanya: How do you know that? Ed was known by a lot of people...
Richard: Known but not liked...and those that did are the scum of the earth...
Tanya: Look just leave it out! Im not having you disrecpect my broithers memory anymore...after tomorrow we all need to move on from this, start a new life without Ed or any of this resentment. Tomorrow is the beginning of the rest of our lives
Richard: Well lets hope its better than the current one...
really good
Excellent stuff Bry :D
Costa Del Sol (Spain)
Interior of a luxury villa. Hilary is dressed in a black trousers, a black top with sequines and a large black fur coat. She werars a dimaon necklace aroiund her neck, and many rings. She has glamarous red permed hair and fake tan and manicured hands. Her face is heavily made up.
She carries a suitcase down a large marbel staircase, her lover Segal Lorenza is following her down the stairs.
Segal: But Hilary! How can you do this to me! I thought you loved me...
Hilary: You sad little man...i didnt love you for your lucks...its seen pit ball terriors more attractive than you...i was only intrested in the money...
Segal: But Hilary I Love You! You can have it all! The House! My Money! So long as you stay with me! Hilary!?
Hilary: Ive rather choke on my own vomit then spend another night in your bed...theres only so much inadequacy that a woman can take...
Segal: But you said you loved me Hilary!
Hilary: (Laughs to self) Darling id say anything to do if it meant i got your money...adios Segal...
A taxi pulls up outside the Villa. Hilary heads out towards the taxi, Segal is on his knees
Segal: Hilary im begging you! Im down on my knees...
Hilary: So have i for half my life and it doesnt get you anywhere... adios Segal...you were a crap lover...and ill make sure the whole of the Costa Del Sol hears that... (to taxi driver) Airport por favor.
Hilary gets into the taxi and it drives off leaving Segal alone.
Taxi Driver: Going anywhere nice señora?
Hilary: Devon...England...to teach my ******* of a husband a lesson.
Hilary smiles to herself.
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The Bitch Is Back...Tomorrow!
Friday the 13th is going to be the most unluckiest day of Richard Taylor's wife when his ex wife Hilary Taylor returns to Baymoore hellbent on revenge!
This sees the change in Devon Seas as the storylines kick in, up until now we have only seen the characters develop...now is where the fun begins!
sounds good!!
What a date, eh?! Friday the 13th and all that :rotfl:
*sings* I'm so excited, and I just can't hide it!!!
Baymoore Streets
The streets are empty and quiet, the sounds of church bells can be heard. A funeral cart drawn by a black horse rides down the streets, followed by Richard, Nick, Gary Tanya, Melissa & Jacob (The Twins) Vicky, Daniel, Amy and a few others. Tanya is crying and Gary is comforting her.
Andrews House
Val and James look on from their garden
Val: Not much of a turn out is it?
James: That's what they get for treating us lot round here like rubbish...
Harveys/Kage House
Mandy is dressed up in black she comes downstairs where Craig is reading the newspaper.
Mandy: Come on get yourself ready, youve got a funeral to go to...
Craig: (shocked) But...but we barely even knew the lad...
Mandy: Its all about respect Craig...and you can deny it as much as you like but i know that you had something to do with that poor boys death...now get up and ready
Craig: (mutters to self) Ok, but we're not going to welcome...
Oh my god.. poor richard. Hiliary is making a return on the day he buries his son... :clap::clap:
well done Bry
excellent as usual.
Torbay Graveyard
Everyone is standing by the graveside, one by one they throw dirt onto the coffin.
Vicar:We have entrusted our brother Edward to God's merciful keeping;
we now commit his body to the ground, earth to earth, ashes to ashes,
dust to dust; in sure and certain hope of the resurrection to eternal life through our Lord Jesus Christ, who died, was buried and rose again for us.
To him be glory for ever and ever. Amen.
All: Amen
Craig and Many appear in the distance and head towards the crowd. Tanya spots them and charges towards them, Gary follows.
Craig: Tanya, my deepest condolences...
Tanya: How dare you! How dare you show up here!
Mandy: Wait a bit Tanya, thats a bit harsh!
Tanya: Harsh!? If it wasnt for this scumbag then Ed would still be alive!
Craig: Me? I havent done anything...
Tanya: No need to hide it from your wife, im sure she knows what your really like! This man sold my brother drugs, ran him out of town and then chased him to his death! And this is the man you share a bed with every night...
Mandy: Look Tanya...
Tanya: Dont bother! Nothing you can say will bring my brother back! (To Craig) I hope you can live with this for the rest of your life...
Craig: I've done worse in my time...and some stupid little kid drowing himself is no big issue for me
Tanya punches him to the floor, Gary grabs her and pulls her back. Craig licks the blood from his nose and smiles. He gets up...
Craig: You stupid little bint...you're going to regret doing that....
Tanya: What you gonna do! Kill me too!
Craig: No...i can think of more intresting things than that...forget what i said before...the rift is far from over...you Taylors will regret the moment you ever crossed Craig Harvey!
Craig storms off, with Mandy.
Tanya: (Screams) You *******!!!!
Craig laughs to himself as he and Many walk off.
Mandy: I think you need to explain a few things to me...
Craig: I dont need to explain anything...to you...
Mandy: But im your wife...
Craig: So? I dont have to answer to anyone...
I don't think i like craig! lol, this is fab honey i am loving reading it xxx
INT. Red Rum - Night
The pub is crowded with people for Ed's wake. Richard talks to Amy at the bar
Richard: Thanks Amy...it's nice of you to put on this spread and everything...
Amy: Its no problem Richard, its the least i could do...
Nick: Hey dad isnt it about time that you said something...
Richard walks up to the microphone, Amy rings the pub bell to get everyones attention.
Richard: Its times like this you know who your true friends are...at my sons graveside barely anyone turned up...but now your all here for the free food and grub...that makes me sick personally...but today i shall forgive you...as this is exactly what Ed would have done in any other cirucumstances...
there is a nervous uncomfortable laugh at this joke
Richard: I shant make him out to be a hero, or a great man, as he wasnt...but today lets show some compassion for a man who lost out...a man who had all his life to live, and to prove to his family that he was a good man...
EXT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE
A taxi pulls up outside the pub. Out steps Hilary: glammed up and looking devine. She gracefully walks over to the cabdriver. And gives him a fity pound note, he looks suprised.
Hilary: Keep the change...
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE
Richard: So love him or hate him...raise your glasses to be son...to Ed!
All: To Ed!
There is a deafening silence as Hilary enters the pub. Richard looks as tough he has seen a ghost. Nick, Val and James all have shocked looks on their faces. Hilary's high heels scrape across the floor.
Val: Bloomin heck! I never thought it'd see you again!
Hilary: (Gives Val a dirty look) Dito...
Tanya notices Richard's shocked face.
Tanya: Dad who is she?
Hilary walks closer
Hilary: Oh come on Richard...it hasn't been that long has it?
Tanya: Dad?
Hilary: No? Then I'll do it for you... (To pub) Ladies and Gentlemen...I'm Hilary Blackstock...Richard's ex wife...
Shocks everywhere
What an entrance!!! :cheer:
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Originally Posted by jojomum
I second that! Fab :cheer: