You are evil but that plan sounds good :p!!
Yey jake is finally ( :rolleyes: ) gonna save chrissie :cheer: More soon x
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You are evil but that plan sounds good :p!!
Yey jake is finally ( :rolleyes: ) gonna save chrissie :cheer: More soon x
Thanks everyone! Loving your new banner Layne. Nigel looks extra gorgeous in the first pic :wub:
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Eight
Chrissie was stood infront of the front of the mirror, examining her body. She looked at all of her bruises, each one more painful than the last. Everytime Den got angry he'd take it out on her. She wasn't like the old Chrissie Watts ; the feisty, powerful Chrissie Watts. She was like a wilting flower ; slowly dying and losing the feeling of being loved. It scared her how much she'd changed in so little time. Den scared her.
Jake had arrived in Samos. He put his bag down and pulled the crumpled piece of paper out of his pocket. Now all he had to do was convince her to come home.
PS - Sorry for the shortness. The next part will be longer I promise :)
great! :D jake better convince her! more soon please
Fab part! :D
Especially liked this line: She was like a wilting flower ; slowly dying and losing the feeling of being loved. :D
More soon, more soon! :cheer:
Thank yooo :wub: he is such a gorgeous man! BTW loving your new banner too :pQuote:
Originally Posted by Amber
Oh my god poor chrissie :( fab part honey but sad :(
Jake quick run go save chrissie!
Super long part now :D Enjoy! x
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Nine
Jake was stood on the road behind where Chrissie was supposed to be living. He remembered Sharon saying something about an "L" shaped pool and a water fountain. He looked through the gate, and there was the pool and the fountain, as he'd been told. He opened the gate and walked along the little path that lead to the back door. He tried to open it but it was locked. He paced around, figuring out what to do when he saw a small window. He looked through it. The key was in the lock. He walked back the door. He punched his hand through the frosted glass. He reached the handle and found the key. He unlocked it and let himself in. He was looking around the room when the door flung open. Chrissie blinked when she saw who it was. She looked at his hand.
"Oh my god, you're bleeding!" She screamed, running over.
"Oh I'm fine." He said, not wanting the fuss.
"No you're not."
She put his hand under the cold tap and told him to wait there. She got the first aid kit out of one of the cupboards and sat Jake down infront of her.
She finished wrapping the bandages around his hand and secured them with a safety pin.
"Why didn't you knock on the door instead of hurting yourself, trying to get in?" She asked.
"I dunno. I didn't really think about it." He said.
"Why are you here Jake?"
"Sharon told me that you said something was wrong. Is it true?"
She pulled her dressing gown tighter, not wanting Jake to see the bruises.
"Nothing's wrong. I-I'm fine." She said, trying to smile.
He looked at her. The happiness that was once in her beautiful eyes was gone.
"You don't have to lie, you know. I knew something had happened when I spoke to you on the phone." He said after a while.
A tear rolled down her cheek. She couldn't lie to him.
"Hey. It's gonna be alright." He said softly, taking her into his arms.
"It's not." She sobbed. "Not with Den around."
"What's he done to you? Has he hurt you?" He asked.
She didn't answer. Jake knew this was a "yes".
"I'll kill him." He said.
"No. I don't want you getting hurt."
He stroked her cheek.
"You're always thinking about other people."
"Well, Jake I really care about you."
They were interrupted by a key going in the lock.
"Den's back. You've got to get out before he sees you." She said frantically.
"When can I see you again?"
"Come back tomorrow at about half ten."
"Ok."
He opened the door and left, shutting it behing him. Den walked into the kitchen.
"What's happened here?"
"Someone tried to break in." She said, which wasn't strictly a lie.
"When was this?"
"I dunno, 10 minutes ago maybe."
"Why haven't you cleared up the glass yet then?"
She didn't answer. He threw his fist at her and punched her so hard she fell to the floor.
Jake clenched his fists. He could hear her crying and he desperately wanted to go in a make sure she was ok, but he knew he couldn't. He hated Den for everything he'd done to Chrissie. He didn't deserve to live.
EDIT: You're so modest Layne! :p
Too right he doesn't :angry: Kill den, kill him!!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by Amber
Fab part amber, poor chrissie :( Den is evil, super jake to the rescuse!!!!
Me modest ?! :p x
Oh My God poor Chrissie Jake go back and see her she needs you not Den!!!!
brill! :D omg den is so evil, poor chrissie, jake kill den lol! more very soon please
wow brill that was fab awww poor chrissie :(