Interesting Scenario (Re-try)

DON'T kill her off!!im am wellll........klets just say if tommorrow evening does come soon im going to go mad!!

Jake's P.O.V

I eventually magange to sit up. I'm behind the counter and parts of the ceiling have fallen down around me. I can hear moans coming from all over. I stick my hand under the counter, praying Ian has one. Ah-Ha a torch. Please don't let it be out of batteries. It isn't. I stand up slowly and shine the light around. I see the car in the middle, a hole in the wall. Why did it have to be dark out? Cables are hanging everywhere and the driver is slumped forward, blood over the windscreen. Then I see the horror below me. Sharon is trapped underneath a car wheel. It looks like she was dragged along when the car came through. Blood is coming from her head. Dennis is at the back of the cafe, slumped on a table. He looks okay. I watch as he starts to stir.
Jake: Dennis, can you here me? Dennis?
Dennis; (slowly) What's going on? Oh my god!
Jake: We need to call for help or something. We can't move anybody.
Should I tell him about Sharon? He hasn't seen her. Then I see Chrissie and Danny. They're both lying there. Heads against the counter. Danny's turning blue. That can't be good.
Dennis: Where's Sharon?
I have to tell him. He'll find out sooner or later.
Jake: Dennis she's been dragged along with the car. She's underneath a wheel. She doesn't look good.
I can make out the clolour drainging from his face. The expression falling.
Dennis: Is she..she...alive?
Jake: Yes
How can I tell if she is? She could be dead.
Jake: Dennis we need to get out get help.
The both of us manage to scramble out from the rubble to the outside. I can hear sirens in the distance and a crowd has gathered.
Alfie: Jake are you Ok?
Jake: Yeah I'm fine. Just a few cuts and bruises. That's all. We need to help everyone else though. Danny and Chrissie don't look good. Neither does Sahron.
Paulin: What about Sharon?
Jake: She's trapped under the car. Blood everywhere.
Suddenly the ambulans, police cars and Fire engines come into view. They stop outside the cafe and push us all away. Dennis and I just stand there staring. The most important people in our lives are trapped inside. What's going to happen?
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P.S Taster comes later
P.P.S Vote on the poll. You can choose more than one. By the way I haven't forgotten about Lucy

Oh dear god are they okay?!?!?!?!?!?!tis not fair do more!!!!!

No more till the poll closes. Better Vote or I may kill Jake!
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I don't want any of them to die! :(

nooooo! don't make any die please! :crying: can't wait for the next part! :cheer:

oh ok well tamara said i had to pick and i was gonna just vote for them all, but i couldn't do that!
I was deffo not gonna vote for chrissie or dennis, and well dennnis needs sharon and Jake and chrissie will sort things out *yeh they willl hehe*
so that left danny sowwi! x

this is soooooooooo good

okay the poll is closed and well danny is a gonner so please do the next part!!!!!

Jake's P.O.V

The firemen can;t do mcuh yet, they say they have to check the place over before barging in. The ambulance crew keep trying to drag me and Dennis away, but we just refuse. Why don't they understand? We love the people in there and they're dying. Suddenly Dennis hits me.
Dennis: Jake look the ceiling. It's coming down. We've got to get them out. The firmen haven't notice. Come on, we know where they are. We'll be quicker.
I hesitate. It really doesn't look safe.
Dennis: Think of Chrissie and Danny and Sharon and anyone else in there. We have to help.
Fine he's convinced me. We run in ignoring the shouts from outside calling us back. I watch as Dennis runs to Sharon and grabs her hand. I race over to Danny and Chrissie. They look so pale, but Danny is still concious.
Jake: Danny, can you hear me?
Before he gets a chance to reply ,someone shouts, I think it's that Lucy.
Lucy: Watch out!
I glance at Dennis and he looks as worried as I do. We glance up and see the whole of the roof falling in and crushing us! I grab Chrissie and Danny's hand and then I collapse.
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P.S I may not kill Danny. I wanted to see what you thought but certain people (mentioning no names *FLD*!) would perfer someone else to die for certain reasons! I might as well so I will see what happens