Well written!Post the next part soon!
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Well written!Post the next part soon!
excellent, keep it up.
Forbidden Love Part Fiffteen For the Very First Time (Thanks guys for reading and Replying, glad you enjoy it!) :)
*~* May 2003 *~*
It was Saturday 1st of May and it had been only a few hours since Demi found out about Leo’s brushings and his dad. She couldn’t believe that he’d been going through that all alone, all this time. They lead completely different lives now. that’s what this whole argument between ray and Keith was, the fact that years ago they were the all the same, now they lead two different lives.
Demi couldn’t stop thinking about Leo. The other night she felt something inside her, she wasn’t quite sure what it was but she’d never had that feeling before.
“Demi!” Leo called as she turned round to see Leo jogging up to her. “You haven’t told no one have ya?” He asked worryingly, she shook her head. “I said I wouldn’t didn’t I?”
“Yeah, sorry I’m just a bit worried incase it got out, what he’d do to me” Leo said as he looked to the floor.
“You don’t need to be scared.” Demi reassured him as he smiled.
“So what you doin out late at night by ya self?” Leo asked as Demi shrugged. “Dunno, didn’t wanna hang round Darren and the others much. I mean I don’t wanna sit and count how many doughnuts doughnut can fit in his mouth at once, I mean once you’ve seen it then you’ve seen it!” demi laughed as Leo chuckled. He begun to pick the grass as Demi looked at the stars. She looked back at Leo as he was sat with his knees up spread apart resting his elbows on them picking bits of grass. She realised what that feeling was in her tummy, they were for him, she had feelings for him! She had a crush on Leo Taylor, her oldest friend.
“What?” He laughed as Demi was sat looking at him, she shook her head, “Nothing.” She smiled as Leo looked up at the sky, “Beautiful aint they?” He smiled to himself, “Just twinkling away.” he smiled again as Demi smiled with him
“That’s what I like about you Leo, your sweet and sensitive, different to all those lot, special” she smiled as Leo looked at her. She didn’t know it but he had strong feelings for her too, for a long time in fact. He watched the stars sparkle in her eyes, he moved closer and closer until their lips met and they shared a kiss. Quickly Leo pulled away as he sighed,
“Sorry Demi I didn’t mean to I got carried away sorry.” Leo stuttered as Demi looked confused. “I’m such an idiot,” he sighed
“No Leo, it don’t matter.” Demi smiled as she shook her head, she didn’t know whether to tell him she liked him or not, he might not feel the same and genuinely regret kissing her, or he could like her but be embarrassed thinking she didn’t feel the same.
“Look Leo, I really like you!” Demi said just deciding to blurt it out, Leo quickly looked her in the eye. “You do?” He asked as she nodded wondering whether it was the right choice. But he leaned in again and kissed her a little more passionately this time. “I like you too” he smiled as he put his arm round her and lay back looking at the stars.
‘First time, first love, oh what feeling is this.
Electricity flows with the very first kiss.
Like a break in the clouds and the first ray of sun.
I can feel it inside something new has begun.
And when something's happens
that words can't define.
only then do you know you're in love
for the very first time…’
*
'Lyrics from Robin Beck First Time' :heart:
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FOR THE VERY FIRST TIME aww that is so romantic looking at the stars and kissing i would like that to happen to me looking at the stars and admitting my feelings for a guy i liked. any way please carry on with it i love this story and the build up to each part
aww how sweet do more soon!
awww this is a great script i love it i think its great and i think your a great writer please do some more very very soon
Its great carry on!!!
Forbidden Love Part Sixteen Twinkle Twinkle little star!
It was Sunday, the following afternoon and Demi was sat at home thinking about Leo, suddenly her phone vibrated and she quickly read the text. She smiled as she replied and ran out the house. She walked across the green over to the flats where Leo was waiting for her. She greeted him with a quick kiss.
“Alright?” He asked as she nodded. He took hold of her hand as they walked round the estate. Leo and demi stopped outside the chippy and sat eating a bag of chips. The pair of them laughed and joked as they finished their chips, they shared another kiss before heading home.
“We cant tell no one about this Dem’s.” he said as she nodded in agreement. “My dad would go mad, and your lot wont be too happy bout it neither.” He said as she nodded again, “I know, why cant things just go back to the way they were” she sighed as he put his arm round her as they walked about the estate.
It begun to get dark and Demi and Leo were snuggled up together outside, they were sat on the grass up against the wall, Leo was looking up at the stars.
“Look at all those stars Dem’s” Leo smiled as she looked up. “For every single star up there I could give a reason why I like you.” He smiled as Demi felt a funny feeling inside her, she felt all warm. “Your funny, caring, lovely to be around.” he begun as Demi shook her head in disbelieve with a little laugh. “You’ve got nice big brown eyes, I love your hair, the way you eat, the way you speak, the way you don’t care what no one else thinks of ya!” he carried on as demi looked at him, she smiled as rested her head on his shoulder.
“How you can just have a laugh with anyone about anything, how you love your family and you’ll do anything to make the people you care about happy, the way you jokingly insult your brothers but as soon as someone other than ya family do it you pick a fight with em, standing up for people you care about, I love the way you laugh, the way you sleep, the way you’d do anything if someone dared ya, how ya speak ya mind.”
He continued as he smiled to himself, “They way you sing when your happy, the way you make me feel! The way you…. Dem’s?” Leo paused as he looked down at her, her eyes were shut and she wasn’t saying anything, he smiled with a little chuckle. She was asleep, he smiled again as he rested his head on hers “The way you just fall asleep on me half way through a conversation” Leo said to him self smiling as he looked back up at the stars.
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Its great im really getting into it!Carry on , please!
yer its excellent please do some more as soon as you can