I loved how that scene was written, i wonder what Tanya has planned, she must be back for revenge surely?!
Poor Michelle...she clearly hasn't got over the abuse she's suffered. :(
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I loved how that scene was written, i wonder what Tanya has planned, she must be back for revenge surely?!
Poor Michelle...she clearly hasn't got over the abuse she's suffered. :(
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - NIGHT
Tom, Chris and Romeo are all sat down at a booth. Beer in their hands.
Romeo: So when do you start your new job then?
Tom: Jared wants me to start after Christmas, new year new job...
Chris: Which means three week of some serious drinking...
Romeo: For some maybe...but me and you have work!
Chris: Oh you have to put a downer on things dont you? Anyways...there is one positive thing from everything that's happened recently, it means we are all single again... which is what us "Bachelor Boys" should all be about...
Tom: Women are the last thing on my mind at the moment, nothing but trouble...
Chris: That's not true, there are the few odd exceptions.
Roxy is at the stage singing. Chris looks over to her and continues to speak, Romeo is slightly uncomfortable seeing Chris talk about her.
Chris: Take her for instance... perfect example of what a woman should be...thin...blonde...big, how shall we put it... assets... and on the plus side she has the voice of an angel...
Romeo: Fancy your chances with her then eh? :rolleyes:
Chris: Yeah....I'm on to a sure winner with her... you mark my words...
Roxy finishes singing. Chris calls her over and she follows.
Chris: Roxy! Over here!
Roxy walks over and smiles at them all, especially Romeo.
Chris: Me and my friends have been debating...
Tom: No...you were the only one speaking Chris...
Chris: That if you had to pick one of us three to date... it would be me :cool:
Roxy: Full of yourself aren't you?
Chris: Is that a yes? :p
Roxy: It's a no. If I had to go with any of you three it would be Romeo...because he seems to have a level head on him, he's not bad on the eye and well...we all know waht they say about the Italians...now if you don't mind the testerone buzzing around this table is offputting...
Chris jokingly acts shocked and heartbroken. Romeo and Tom laugh at him, but then Romeo folds his arms, looks over at Roxy and licks his lips. She gives him a quick smile as she goes.
EXT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - DAY
Tanya's taxi pulls up on the gravelled driveway of Honeysuckle Cottage. She pays the driver his fare in two crisp twenty pound notes. He drives off.
Tanya picks up her luggage and hobbles over to the front door. She notices the curtains closed and finds it strange.
She rumouages trough her handbag to find her housekeys. She tries to unlock the door but the key wont fit. She tries again, yet fails.
Tanya rings the doorbell. There is a long pause. Michelle opens the door, but keeps it on the hatch.
Tanya: Who the bleeding hell are you? Don't tell me this place has been taken over by squatters...
Michelle: Oh...erm...Tanya I presume?
Tanya: Yes, and who are you, and more precisley what are you doing in my house!?
Michelle: I'm Michelle...and erm...well there's no easy way to put this, but you don't own this house anymore...
Tanya grits her teeth, clearly annoyed.
Uh oh.....
Here we go for firework time - go get em Tanya!! :cheer:
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - NIGHT
Roxy is standing at the bar, a drink in her hand. Romeo walks over to her.
Romeo: Can I get you a drink?
Roxy: I've got one...thanks
Romeo: Look I'm sorry about my mate, and what he said earlier... just ignore him, we usually do
Roxy: Oh don't worry, I'm used to men like that, one of the many downsides to being a pub singer...
Romeo: Well I can assure you we aren't all like that...
Roxy: Is that a fact?
Romeo: Look I hope you don't think I'm being forward here, but do you fancy going out for a drink...or a meal or somehing some time...maybe?
Roxy: Are you asking me out on a date Romeo?
Romeo: Oh it doesn't matter, I understand...
Roxy: No... I'd love to, you name the time and place and I'll be there :)
The pair give each other breif smiles. Romeo heads off with a sucessful grin on his face.
Ok - great stuff and I'm getting confused, so ta dahhhhh :rotfl: :o
Erm....keep it coming and I'll comment properly when I've had more than 4 hours sleep :rotfl:
How is Tanya gonna react to Michelle's revelation?! There's sure to be fireworks!
INT: RED RUM PUB- Day
Richard, Hilary and Nick meet Tanya in the pub..
Richard: Tanya!
Nick: Looking great as ever, sis!
Tanya: Great to see you guys! But come on, half way round the world i've travelled- explain whats happened...
Richard: Jared Ashworth is trying to put me out of buisness, to be frank. Building casinos, and hotels and complexes, stealing my customers away.
Tanya: Bet you're heartbroken about that, aren't you Hil? The prospect of losing all the money. Though knowing you, you're probably the cause of it!
Hilary: Get out of it!
Tanya: (Turns back to Richard) The Cafe... whats happened with it..?
Richard: Its gone. I've sold it.
Tanya: What?! To who?!
Richard: It doesn't matter who...
Nick shoots him a glare, which Tanya sees...
Tanya: Tell me!
No one replys. She picks up her bag, and throws her jacket over her shoulder...
Tanya: Fine. I'll find out myself.
Oh no! Tanya is not gonna be happy at all once she finds out that Craig bought it!
Can't wait for the fall out when she discovers Craig has bought it...please say we are going to see a new badder, stronger, Tanya who is going to give Craig and Hilary a run for their money!