Bryan and Abi this has been a fantastic read, always looking for the next chapters:) i love the stuff,,, red rum pub,, murder pub eh ??
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Bryan and Abi this has been a fantastic read, always looking for the next chapters:) i love the stuff,,, red rum pub,, murder pub eh ??
Hey, Jodi, I hadn't thought of that!!!! You could be on to something there!! :hmm:Quote:
Originally Posted by JustJodi
Excellent job again Abi and Bry... I know it has already been said but Amy, wake up love, smell the other woman's perfume on your man's shirt
Wow This Is Fantastic I Cant Wait To See What Happens Next
Red Rum Pub- Upstairs Flat
Amy is on the sofa, flicking through magazines, while listening to an MP3 player. She sees Patrick go to the door and mouth something. She takes her earphones out….
Amy: huh? What was that?
Patrick: (obviously irritated) I said that I’m going out to do some shopping.
Amy: In torquay?!
Patrick: Yeah…
Amy: Its for me isn’t it?! My pressie? (looks excited) Oh my god, it is aint it?! Come on, what you getting me?!
Patrick: Well its…
Amy jumps up, and puts her finger on his lips, to stop him talking
Amy: No! Wait! Don’t say anything! (smiles) just make sure its got diamonds on it!!
Patrick: Expensive taste, as always!!
Amy: Well what d’ya expect?! Just make sure you’re not late back…
Patrick: I’ll try not, but you know what its like sometimes…
Amy: Patrick…..please, just get back soon….
Patrick: Don’t worry. Be back later, bye babe
Patrick kisses Amy, and leaves. Amy backs up against the door, smiling and excited.
INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - NIGHT
Amy walks into the room and places down too plates of food onto a candletight table. Romantic music is playing in the background and scented candles are lit all around the room. She smiles happily.
Amy sits down and looks at her watch, she waits a moment later then gets up her phone and dials Patrick's number.
INTERCUT:
INT. BAYMOORE BEDROOM - NIGHT
Patrick is busy having sex with a Baymoore resident, loud noises can be heard and Patrick's ringtone can only just be heard.
INTERCUT:
INT. RED RUM FLAT - NIGHT
Patricks answerphone message can be heard: "Hi this is Paddy, im not avaible at the moment so leave a message after the beep"
Amy throws the phone on the floor. She then blows the candles out. She sits down to eat her meal but starts crying.
Amy throws the plate at the large photo of her and Patrick's wedding day. The picture falls off the wall and the glass smashes everywhere. She gets down on her knees and starts to weep. The glass in her hands
INT: Torbay GP's- Night
Ryan is in his office. There’s a knock at the door…
Ryan: yeah, who is it?
Hilary: Just little old me..
Ryan stands up, and goes straight over to Hilary, obviously happy….
Hilary: I need a….check up. You think you’ll be able to handle that?
Ryan: Course, its my job. Love to check people up…or out…
Hilary: now, now, now!
Ryan: Little less of the talking?
Hilary: (grins) You know me too well…
They kiss passionately, Ryan begins to unbutton her blouse…. He mumbles…
Ryan: I love you so much…
Hilary: What happened to no talking? Aren’t you a naughty boy!!
They both laugh, flirtatiously…
Hilary: So come on….what d’ya say?
Ryan: that I love you…..
Ryan goes to finish unbuttoning her blouse….Hilary stops him…
Hilary: This isn’t about love. This is sex, nothing more, nothing less. I thought you got that….
Ryan: Course I do….erm… its was a……a moment of weakness….
Hilary: Lets keep it that way…..now where were we?
Ryan undoes her blouse…. The shot zooms out, to reveal the private investigator taking pictures of their silhouettes on the desk in the distance…
Gotcha Hilary has been caught out wonder what she will do if she finds out???
WHAT DOES AMY DO NEXT!? READ AMYS SUICIDAL ACT OF DEPRESSION IN:
DEVON SEAS AFTER HOURS THREAD (FOR 16+ MEMBERS)
INT. SINGHS HOUSE - MORNING
Kash is sitting at the dining table reading his paper, Sanjita is serving up breakfast. Andonis is getting ready for college, Mohammed is studying.
Kash: Mohammed go fetch the post...
Mohammed: Im not a dog dad...
Kash: No but you're my son, so do as your told
Mohammed drags his feet to fetch the post, it is clear he is used to being bossed around.
Mohammed: (To Andonis) And i hope you dont intend to go to college dressed in a tracksuit and trainers...
Andonis: Dad we can wear what we like at college...
Mohammed walks in and hands Kash the post, he opens the mail whilst continuing the conversation.
Mohammed: I dont want you dressed like a "chav", you have to mantain the family reputation (looks at post ) oh what have we here...under acheiveing in maths...and science... and computing...
Andonis: Maybe if you didnt force subjects on me...
Kash: They are for your future...you dont get anywhere in life with a grade in "Media Studies"
Andonis rolls his eyes and stops arguing with him. The door opens..
Kash: Who on earth is that...
Sanjita walks out into the hallway. Standing there is Ruby, the Singh's eldesy daughter. She has a big backpack on her back.
Sanjita: Ruby your home!
Sanjita runs over to Ruby and hugs her. Kash gets up from his seat and heads out to the hallway
Kash: Rubina...finally decided to come back and face some responsiblilty?
Ruby: Welcome back to you to dad...
Andonis and Mohammed go over to Ruby and hug her.
Ruby: Alright dont suffocate me (laughs)
Andonis: How are you sis?
Ruby: Yeah I'm great ta... it's been unbelivable going across the world! Meeting new people, seeing new places...
Kash: Waste of time!...Anyway you've had your fun...now you can go to university and get yourself a career...
Ruby: What like you you mean...owning a grocery store?
Sanjita: (Peacefully) Ruby, don't cheak your father....
Ruby: Yeah well, i've decided im not going to university... i want to have fun...live life to the full
Kash: Fun!? You've been having fun for the past year, at my expense! You will go to university! You will get a career!
Ruby: I'll do what i god damn please dad...im not a little girl no more...im my own person...and i dont have to do what you say anymore...
Kash: Rubina!
Ruby: That's final dad! (To Sanjita) Any brekkie on the go mom?
Ruby and the others head off into the kitchen, Kash is not impressed.