Devon Seas Season 2

INT. RED RUM - NIGHT

Vicky is seeing the final punters out of the pub. She bolts the door shut, as Hayley is picking up the glasses from the tables.

Hayley: You might aswell get off now Vicky, I'll finish up here...

Vicky: I can't just leave you to clean up all this on your own...

Hayley: It's just a few glasses... go on head off home, Nick will be pleased to see you :)

Vicky: Ok then, you know where I am if you need me...

Hayley follows Vicky towards the door.

Hayley: Thanks Vicky, have a good night :)

Hayley bolts the door behind her. She continues to get a pick up a few glasses. The back doorbell rings, Hayley goes and answers it, in comes some of her friends.

Girl: Hayleyyyy! Let's get this party started girl!

Boy: This idea is class man, wish my old man owned a pub!

Hayley: Yeah well let's all be thankful that they've left me on my own with the pub for a few days! :D

Girl 2: When they back then?

Hayley: Oh not until tomorrow!

Hayley turns on the stereo, which begins to blast out songs to the pub! She picks up a few bottles of vodka and other drinks and places them onto the counter.

Hayley: Right then folks, what can I get ya? :D

INT. BACHELOR BOYS' HOUSE - NIGHT

Tom comes into the house, having been to the pub. Luqina switches off the tv and gets up, prepared for a confrontation.

Luqina: And where the hell have you been!?

Tom: Out!

Luqina: Obviously...but where!? I cooked your tea for you and everything!

Tom: You've cooked a meal!? Bloomin heck you must have a guilty concience!

Luqina: I have NOTHING to be guilty about!

Tom: How about the fact that you were married!?

Luqina: Big bloody deal! Me and Danilo seperated ages ago!

Tom: That's not the point and you know it! I had a right to know!

Luqina: Why!? It's part of my past! It has nothing to do with the here and now! It has NOTHING to do with me and you, and our wedding!

Tom:Apart from the fact that the vicar wont bloody marry divorcees!

The front door slams shut. Tom and Luqina turn around in shock. Into the living room steps Romeo, a bag over his shoulder. He shakes his hair and drops the bag down.

Romeo: Trouble in paradise eh?... Look like I've come back at just the right time...

Romeo has a disaproving look on his face. Tom is happy to see his friend, but Luqina does not share his enthuiasm.

wayhey.. Romeo is back!!! Is Laquina divorced? she just said she is seperated so she might still be married!!!

INT. BAYMOORE B&B - NIGHT

Annie walks trough the front door, looking flustered. She pulls down her brolley and shakes the rain water off it. She takes off her coat and heads into the back room. Eddie is sitting at the dining table reading his newspaper.

Annie: (Concerned) Has Mandy come back yet!?

Eddie: No I havent seen her all day, I thought you was going to find her...

Annie: I did...but then she ran off... I'm worried about her...outside in this weather...

Eddie: She'll be fine... she'll come back when she's ready, why the studden panic?

Annie: Becuase she opened that letter from Margaret, and I don't think the news went down too well with her...

Eddie: Well what could it have been?

Annie: God knows, but it couldn't have been too good...

The front door slams shut. Annie and Eddie get up to see who it is. Mandy walks in, clutching the wet letter in her hands. It is clear she has been crying.

Annie: Oh thank god! Mandy we've been so worried about you...

Eddie: Mandy?... What's up love?

Mandy: It's this letter.... she's been lying to me all these years...

Annie: About what?

Mandy: My real father...it's not Alan...

Eddie: Well then who is then?

Mandy: You Eddie...you're my father...

shocks all around :eek:

didn't see that one coming. all these shocks and twists. it's so exciting.

:eek::eek::eek: oh my god.. did not see that coming..

:eek: Eddie is Mandy's father!! Never expected that!

OMG !!! Romeo is back :cheer:

Eddie is Mandy's father!!! :eek:

What a set of episodes that was!!!

INT. BAYMOORE B&B - NIGHT

Mandy: You Eddie...you're my father...

There is a short silence, as Eddie and Annie try to come to terms with this anouncement. Eddie suddenly goes faint and sits down at the dining room.

Annie: No...no...it can't be... she must be lying!... Eddie would never cheat on me! Never!

Mandy: Well it's true! It's here in black and white!

Mandy waves the letter around. Annie grabs it off Mandy and reads it, the smile quickly escaping her face.

Annie: But... this is pure nonscene! Margaret and me were friends! She would have told me all this!... Eddie wouldn't have cheated on me with her!

Mandy: Well babies dont come from the supermarket Annie!

Annie slaps Mandy around the face, Eddie gets up to try and control his wife, but she realises her actions were out of order. Annie starts to quiver, scared of how she is reacting.

Annie: Mandy...I'm soo sorry.... but...but...Eddie he's never been with Margaret! Never!

Eddie: Actually I have...

Annie turns around and looks at Eddie, a complete look of bewilderment on her face.

Annie: YOU WHAT!?

Eddie: Me and Margaret...we used to be married...

:eek:

INT. BACHELOR BOYS' HOUSE - NIGHT

Romeo: Trouble in paradise eh?... Look like I've come back at just the right time...

Romeo has a disaproving look on his face. Tom is happy to see his friend, but Luqina does not share his enthuiasm.

Tom: (Excited) Romeo! You're back!?

Romeo: Looks like it doesn't it, come on...get the kettle on I could do with a decent British cuppa....

Tom: Yeah sure mate... Luqina...kettle

Luiqina raises an eyebrow, offended at Tom's demand for her to make a cup of tea. She shakes it off and walks towards the kitchen, giving Romeo a dirty look as she goes, she does the same.

Tom: Why didn't you say you was coming back?

Romeo: Thought I'd suprise you!

Tom: Well you've certainly done that... (shouts upstairs) Chris! Chris mate! Romeo's back!

Chris runs downstairs, pulling up his jeans as he goes...

Chris: Romeo mate!

Romeo: Ten guesses what you've been up to?

Chris: How did you guess!? :D

Romeo: Good to see some things haven't changed...

Chris comes down the stairs and gives him mate a macho hug.

Chris: You back for good!?

Romeo: I sure am cowboy...well I couldn't leave you two alone to pay the mortgage, I had mental images of the house being taken over by the ballifs...

The group of friends laugh at this.

Tom: Hows everything in Italy? The family all ok now?

Romeo: Yeah they're fine, I just wanted to make sure they got back into a routine...but now I'm back...

Tom: Erm...Claire's gone...

It only suddenly hits Chris, about the entire Claire situation.

Romeo: (Uncomfortable) Erm...yeah....Emma told me...

Tom: Anyways come on...sit down...pride of place on the sofa...

Romeo: I've got to see somebody first...

Chris: A man about a dog and all that like?

Romeo looks into the kitchen and sees Luqina resting on the counter, waiting for the kettle to boil. She gives him daggered looks, he gives her a look of disgust.

Romeo: Yeah...you could say that...

INT. BAYMOORE B&B - NIGHT

Eddie: Me and Margaret...we used to be married...

Annie: Come again!?

Eddie: We were married...

Annie: What the hell do you mean Married!? When!?

Eddie: Before you...

Annie: Jesus Christ! (To Mandy) Did you know anything about this!? :angry:

Mandy: No! I'm as in the dark as you are...

Eddie: Maybe I should explain...

Annie: (Outraged) Yes! Maybe you bloody well should!

Eddie: Where should I start?...

Annie: (Trough gritted teeth) From the beginning...

Annie and Mandy take a seat, staring at Eddie, awaiting his explanation.

Eddie: It were... summer of 63... me and Margaret got together... we were loves young dream... or so we thought...it couldnt have been love tough... we were barely together a year before the cracks started to show... by 64 I just left her...

Mandy: Get her pregnant and then leave her! Nice move Eddie! :rolleyes:

Eddie: No! It wasn't like that at all! I never knew! I left Baymoore for a few years...where I got with Annie... when i come back Margaret was with Alan, and there was you...i just presumed...that you was his....she never said anything to say otherwise...

Annie: That doesn't change the fact that SHE is still your daughter!

Eddie: Do you think I don't know that woman!?... Look Mandy love...if I'd have known...things would have been so different...I'd have been there for you...no matter what....

Eddie tries to grab Mandy's hand, to comfort her. She pulls away, bites her lip to hold back the tears and leaves the room. Annie looks at Eddie, shaking her head in disbelief. An uncomfortable atmosphere in the room...

Another great set of scenes, i am loving the drama surrounding the Mandy storyline, talk about one shock after another! :eek:

INT. BAYMOORE B&B - NIGHT

Mandy is sitting on the edge of her bed in tears. She holds a photo of her as a girl with her "father" Alan. She strokes it affectionatley, and whipes the tears from her eyes. There is a knock of the door, she puts the photo under her pillow.

Mandy: Who is it?

Eddie: It...it's me... Eddie...

Mandy: Come in..

The door creaks open as Eddie nevrously walks into the room. He sits on the edge of Many's bed.

Eddie: Mandy...I don't know what to say.... I'm so sorry...

Mandy: It's not your fault...you wasn't to know...

Eddie: How are you?... With all of this...

Mandy: I dont know... it's going to take some time to get used to it...

Eddie: Time is a great healer love... and I want to make up for the time we've lost, I might be getting on a bit but I want be a father to you...if you'll let me...

Mandy and Eddie look into each others eyes, she holds his arm and smiles gently to him. Annie walks into the room, and clears her throat.

Annie: (Serious) I hate to break up the reunion, but I want a word...now...

Wow!!! Gripping stuff Bry!

So Eddie is daddy. Annie is definitely p....annoyed at that, which isn't surprising really.

Loving Romeos return! "Need to see a man about a dog" Looks at Luquina, something like that!" or words to that effect!! Pure brilliance!!

INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - NIGHT

The doorbell rings, Val stampedes towards the door in a rage, having been disrupted from her tv viewing. She opens the door and Romeo is standing there.

Romeo: Hi Val!

Val: What the bloody hell are you doing back here!?

Romeo: I live here...

Val tries to slam the door on him but he has his foot in the doorway

Val: How dare you have the cheak to knock on my door after what you did to Claire!

Romeo: I didn't do anything to Claire..it was her that ended the relationship!

Val: Yeah and she wouldnt have done that if you hadnt just buggered off and left her for six months! You broke that poor girl's heart Romeo! Living up to the Italian sterotype!

Romeo: Hey I never cheated on her once! And I havent since...

Val: What does it matter now!? She's gone....

Romeo: Well where is she?

Val: Far away from here, thats all you need to know... you and her are over... so just go...

Romeo: Actually I came to speak with Emma...

Val: Why!?

Romeo: It's about Luqina...

Val: She can do without that worry at the moment! The poor girl is suffering as it is!

Romeo: (Concerned) Why what's happened!?

Val: She was raped if you must know...

Romeo: Oh my god! Is she okay!?

Val: No, she isn't, she hasn't wanted to talk to anyone for weeks...so I know she isn't gonna wanna speak to you...now sling your hook!

Val attempts to slam the door on him once more, but Emma comes down the staircase, dressed in her pyjamas.

Emma: I do want to... let him in Mom...

INT. BAYMOORE B&B - NIGHT

Annie and Eddie walk into the living room, Annie has a stern look on her face.

Eddie: Look Annie the last thing I want is for us to fall out with each other over this... I can understand this is difficult for you...

Annie: :rolleyes: Difficult doesn't even cover it! You have a child with another woman! A child Eddie! Something I could never give you!

Eddie: You know I have never resented you for that! As long as I had you that was the main thing!

Annie and Eddie sit down on the sofa, a cold atmosphere between the pair.

Eddie: I dont even know if Many will want it to be become public knowledge...

Annie: I bloody hope she doesnt!

Eddie: Look Annie i can't see how this would effect us...it happened before we were even together...I never have and never would cheat on you... I love you too much...

Eddie tries to hold Annie's hand, but she pulls away.

Annie: Jesus Eddie! When we started seeing each other... I never for one second realised you were a father...yes you were married...but why should that matter? You were divorcing her...

Eddie: And just becuase she was pregnant...that would have changed things?

Annie: Of course it would! I spent so many days thinking how wrong it was that I was stealing another woman's husband... the irony was that woman was one of my cloest friends...and I only found that out tonight!

Eddie: Dont let it ruin your memory of her, whatever you do...

Annie: I stole a father away from his unborn child...I've ruined a 40 year relationship!

Eddie: You wasn't to know...I didn't know... dont feel so guilty about it...

Annie: It's not as easy as that tough is it! God Eddie... how could you!?

Eddie: Please...Annie dear...I'm so sorry... I would never have intentially set out to make you mad like this...

Annie: I'm not mad...it's just... I dont know... it's just going to be all change around her from now on...

It is mad that Mandy's mum knew all about this but never ever said it to Annie. Gripping Stuff Bry.. can't wait for more

INT. RED RUM PUB - NIGHT

The party is in full swing, many of Hayley's college friends have turned up. Hayley a few other girls are dancing raunchly to "Dont Cha" by the pussy cat dolls.

Hayley: Dont cha wish ya girlfriend was hot like me!? Dont cha wish your girlfriend was a freak like me!? Dont cha, dont cha

Hayley almost trips over, but grabs onto one of the boys, who looks her up and down. She laughs and places her finger on his chest.

Hayley: Naughty! All good things come to those that wait! :D

Andonis is seating alone in the corner looking into a half empty alopop. Hayley staggers over to him and manages to sit down by him.

Hayley: Hey Andonononois... (laughs) How are you!? :D

Andonis: The same as always...

Hayley: Oh cheer up! Dance! Sing! Drink! Be merry!

Andonis: I can't really see a reason to be celebrate!

Hayley: Celebrate the future! Celebrate whatever you want! Come on enjoy yourself!

Andonis: I miss Emma...

Hayley: Oh you'll get over her...look (gestures towards Girls dancing) there's loads of lovely girls here tonight...take ya pic! :D

Andonis: (Laughs to self) Not that they'd ever want to get with me...

Hayley: Don't be so harsh on yourself..

Andonis: I'm ugly...boring... with a mental family...

Hayley: Now your talking rubbish...your intresting...funny... and gorgeous...

Andonis: You don't have to flatter me...

Hayley: I wasn't I was telling the truth...

The pair look into each others eyes for a moment. Hayley gives him a peck on a cheak and goes back. Andonis holds her hands, they look at each other again, he leans in for a kiss and the pair end up passionatley kissing....

INT. ANDREWS' HOUSE - NIGHT

Emma is curled up at the top of her bed, Romeo is sitting on the edge of the bed, talking to her. She is recounting the rape

Emma: And well since then...I just cant seem to leave the house...or talk to anyone...I've just been so scared...

Romeo: Your a strong young girl Emma, I'm sure you'll get trough this...I'm back now if you ever need to chat...

Emma: Thanks :) I was quite suprised to hear your voice downstairs...

Romeo: Well I had to come back at some point

Emma: I'm sorry about mom snapping like that... she seems to have been in a foul mood for a few weeks now...

Romeo: I don't blame her, I treated Claire badly...

Emma: I'm sure you two will back it up when she turns up...

Romeo: IF she turns up... anyways moving on to the matter in hand...Luqina...

Emma: Oh god don't mention her name, she's been nothing but a vile witch recently, her and mom had a set too at the wedding, she threw mom into a pile of champagne!

Romeo: :rolleyes: It wouldn't suprise me...we can't let Tom marry her...we just can't!

Emma: I know, but he's blinded by her love... he cant see her for what she really is...hell I've tried these past few months but he wont listen!

Romeo: Well I'm back now, and trust me I'm gonna try every rule in the book... no way will I let her get her claws into Tom..i'd rather die first... you and me..we need to get together and nail her...once and for all...

INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - NIGHT

The camera pans up from the floor where Andonis and Hayley's clothes are all over the floor of Patrick and Amy's bedroom. We see Andonis and Hayley in bed, sleeping. Police sirens can be heard, and blue flashing lights outside the window. The flashing lights wake up Andonis, who soon wakes up Hayley.

Andonis: Hayley...quick! Hayley!...wake up!

Hayley sees the lights and is dazed

Hayley: What the...?

Andonis: Someone must have called the police!

Hayley: Oh ****!

Hayley quickly jumps out of bed and puts on her clothes, Andonis does the same.

CUT TO:

INT. RED RUM PUB - NIGHT

The police are banging on the door of the pub. Hayley friends have turned down the music and are unsure what to do. Hayley and Andonis run into the room in a fluster.

Hayley: Well what are you all here for!? Come on! Get out! Use the back door!

The friends start to leave via the back entrance. Hayley unbolts the door and opens it, a police man steps inside.

PO: I've had reports of loud music... we have reason to believe there's been a lock in...

Hayley: No officer, just a peaceful night in...

The police officer looks around at the messy pub, and Hayley and Andonis, dressed scruffily.

PO2: It's no lock up!

Another police officer walks in from the back, ushering the kids back into the room.

PO2: Trying to escape around the back entrance :rolleyes:

PO: (To Hayley) How old are you all?

Hayley: 18...

PO: And I'm the winner of the X factor... even so...it doesn't matter how old you are...a lock in is against the law...so you are in SERIOUS trouble.

From out the back steps Patrick and Amy, back home a day early, they walk in stunned at the scene infront of them.

Patrick: (Angry) What on EARTH is going on here!?

Hayley turns around to see Patrick and Amy, then faces back at the policeman, she takes a nervous gulp...

Good stuff! I wonder how Romeo and Emma will nail Luqina, this should get very interesting! I really like Hayley's character! I wonder if she will worm her way out of the lock in situation!

OOoo - there will be trouble for Hayley!!

Go Romeo! Get Luquina out!

Great stuff Bry

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Originally Posted by jojomum

OOoo - there will be trouble for Hayley!!

Go Romeo! Get Luquina out!

Great stuff Bry

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I knew it.. Hayley was just asking for trouble with the lock in. I wonder how much of her and Adonis is aquated to drink???

INT. RED RUM PUB - NIGHT

Hayley's friends have now left. Hayley is sat in one of the booths, Amy and Patrick sitting either side of her. The two police officers are sitting directly opposite.

PO: Locks in are a serious offence, you do realise that?

Amy: Of course we do officer, we THOUGHT we could trust Hayley to be on her own...obliviously not...

Patrick: (To PO) Look mate...there's been no harm done, can't you just let it go?

PO: If we "let it go" for every crime that was comitted sir we would be living in a world of tyrany..

Hayley: Look please...I didn't mean to break the rules...it was meant to be a party...upstairs...but they just got out of control and came downstairs...

The police officer roles his eyes. The front door opens and in walks James, looking tired.

PO: Detective Andrews...

James: (To Amy) I just got your call... what's been going on?

PO: This young lady has had a lock in...

Patrick: James mate, can't you sort something out?

James gestures for the police man to speak to him by the bar. He gets up and walks towards James.

James: Look mate, they are good people...they dont usually do this kind of thing...

PO: What are you suggesting Detective?

James: Dont charge them... make up some story...

The officer is clearly uncomfortable about this.

James: Look if anyone says anything blame it on me... I'll take the blame...okay?

The officer gives James a friendly nod. He walks over to Patrick and Amy.

PO: All right then listen up..we're gonna let you off with a cauation this time... as long as you make sure this wont happen again...

Amy: Certainly officer, I'll make sure it doesn't...

Amy gives Hayley a scornful look, Hayley folds her arms and rolls her eyes.

PO: I have no option but to inform the brewery...what they decide to do is there decison...

Patrick: The brewery! Oh come on we could loose our licence!

PO: Be thankful that you're not in a prison cell! (To other office) Come on then...let's go...

Patrick shows the officers out. He goes up to James.

Patrick: Cheers for that mate :) ...

James: No worries, anytime...that's what coppers are there for :D

The camera cuts to Amy and Hayley who are giving each other daggered looks. James leaves, Patrick walks up to Hayley.

Patrick: I think it's about time you go to bed young lady...

Hayley: But it's only 1!

Patrick: Now...

Hayley gets up, a smug smile on her face.

Amy: Don't think you've got away with this lady... I want a serious chat with you tomorrow... sleep well :D

Amy has the final line, she smuggly looks at Hayley, finally getting one up on her.

INT. ST MARY MAGDALENE CHURCH (TORQUAY) - MORNING

The vicar is polishing the candlesticks at the front of the church. Luqina walks in and glides down the isle as if it were a catwalk, wearing a revealing dress, deisgner sunglasses and high heels that click along the floor. The vicar turns around and faces Luqina.

Vicar: Luqina...:rolleyes:

Luqina: Morning vicar! :D Hows it going? Been praying to him up there!? :D

Vicar: If you mean god, then yes everyday, which any follower of the church would do...

Luqina: Nah..I can't be doing with that...have more important things to do with my time...like filing my nails...

Vicar: Is there a reason for your visit to St Mary's today?

Luqina: Mary? Whose Mary?

Vicar: The name of the church...

Luqina: Oh right, whatever... anyways yeah... I want to get married here! :D

Vicar: I've already explained to you Luqina, that I can not marry divorcees...

Luqina: Oh go on, just this once... please... do it for the sake of the lord above! :D

Vicar: It is he who said we shouldn't...

Luqina: God he needs to get into the 21st century! Theres no point getting married if you havent already been the past...it's the trend these days...

Vicar: You foul woman...

Luqina: Look I'll put it to you simply... you marry me and Tom... or I tell Jane about what you get up to with the sunday school teacher behind closed doors...

Vicar: I beg your pardon! Me and Chasity have never...I would never cheat on my wife!

Luqina: You wanna take the risk? Just one word to Jane and that's your marriage down the plugole...and your god wont be able to remarry you remember...:p

Vicar: But it's untrue! I would never commit adultery!

Luqina: Trust me Vicar I can lie for England... a couple of mock up photos, a pair of dirty knickers... I'll have your marraige in tatters before you can say divorce settlement...

Vicar: God help you!

Luqina: No, you help me! A marriage for a marraige...so then, what do you say!? :D

Vicar: Does it look like I have a choice? :rolleyes:

Luqina plants a kiss on the Vicar, leaving her red lipstick on his lips.

Luqina: Brilliant! I knew you'd see sense! I'll see you soon then Vicar! tata!

Luqina walks off swinging her handbag and walking gleefully, a smile of satisfaction on her face.

what a cow!! I hope she get caught out. come on Romeo.. get working on this quick

INT. VALENTINO'S RESTUARAUNT - NIGHT

Rebecca is laying tables at Valentinos, before the lunch time rush. Richard comes trough the door carrying his breifcase and wearing a large winter coat.

Rebecca: Richard, what a pleasure to see you...

Richard: Just thought I'd pop in for a coffee, the finest in Baymoore...

Rebecca: Well it has been since Gary's cafe closed down...

Richard: Yeah well we hope to get that up and running again soon... just want to leave Tanya to deal with it... anyways will you join me for a coffee?

Rebecca: Of course, I always have time for an old friend...

Richard sits down at one of the booths, with a view looking out to sea.

Rebecca: So then, what's up?

Richard: How do you mean?

Rebecca: Well you are usually for two busy to fit coffee into your shcedule, so I'm guessing there's something troubling you...

Richard: Well yes...there is...I come for advice really...

Rebecca finishes making the coffees, she walks towards the booth, puts the cups down and sits down.

Rebecca: Come on then, spill...

Richard: It's Hilary?

Rebecca: Isn't it always..

Richard: Well you remember Siobhan... she was our daughter...

Rebecca: Come again!?

Richard: Turned out after Hilary left me...well she was pregnant...but put the baby up for adoption...

Rebecca: Jesus...I had no idea...

Richard: Neither did I... well we found out she was a con artist...lied all along... but the point remains...me and Hilary have a daughter out there somewhere...

Rebecca: Oh my goodness...

Richard: You see I want to find her... make up for lost time...but Hilary is admanet not to get to know her...

Rebecca: So its a question of whether to go against Hilary or not...

Richard: Exactly, but she's having none of it...

Richard's phone rings.

Richard: Sorry...do you mind?

Rebecca: No, not at all...

Richard gets up and moves to the other end of the restuaurnt, where he picks up the phone.

Richard: Hello... Jack!? :eek: Oh my god...you've found her!?...

Richard rushes back towards the table, and gets out a pen and paper and writes down the adress.

Richard: Thank you so much!... I'll bring in your cheque later on today! Thanks Jack!...Bye!

Rebecca looks intrigued at the conversation.

Richard: Oh my goodness Rebecca... that was the PI...he's found her...he's found my daughter!

:cheer::cheer:guess who's back, back again, Siobhan is back, don't tell hilary!!!!

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From Tomorrow...

Michelle Grosvenor played by Claire Goose

at last romeo is back.....wonder how he is gonna stop luqina (have to admit far more intrested to see his reaction when claire comes back-him chris ooo theres gonna be blood)

but for now the bachelor boys are BACK!!

Another good set of scenes, i must admit Luqina is a bitch that can make me laugh sometimes! "Mary? Mary who?!" :rotfl: But for her getting her way, that's pure evil!

INT. RED RUM - MORNING

Amy and Patrick are in the kitchen, clearly in a mood from last night. Hayley walks in, bold as brass.

Hayley: Morning dad, sleep well?

Hayley sits down and steals a peice of Amy's toast, munching on it with delight

Amy: How dare you...

Hayley: Christ Amy it's only a peice of toast...you can have it back if it means so much to you...:p

Hayley offers a half eaten peice of toast to Amy, Amy gives her a dirty look, so Hayley continues to eat it.

Amy: I'm not on about the toast...

Hayley: 10 guess then...:hmm:

Amy: Don't you dare mess around with me lady! You have been a stupid, stupid little girl!!

Hayley: Well make your mind up, what am I? A lady or a girl?

Amy: Do you realise the seriousness of your actions!?

Hayley: It was just a bloody lock in!

Amy: Which is against the law! And which you had no right to arrange!

Hayley: Anyone would think I'd set fire to the place :rolleyes:

Amy: You might aswell of done! Becuase the brewery might take our licence off us! And that would be the end of us! All because of YOU! You and your bloody childish behaviour!

Hayley: I'm NOT a child...i'm 18 years old!

Amy: Then act like it! Grow up and take some responsibility for your actions!

Hayley: I don't even know why I'm listening to this... you are not my mom.. I don't have to do anything you say...

Amy: Fine then! Patrick, you say something to this unruley daughter of yours!

Patrick: Erm...erm... don't do it again, okay?

Hayley: Sure.. anyways I'm off to college.

Hayley picks up her bag and leaves, but not before giving Hayley a smug look. She slams the door shut behind her.

Amy: Jesus Christ Patrick!

Patrick: What!?

Amy: Letting her get off like that! You had better start showing that little madame some discipline...or there will be trouble!

INT. BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE - MORNING

Romeo comes down stairs, the house is in darkness, he looks around to see that no one is awake. He then creeps over to the computer table and acesses the internet.

He goes onto Google and searches for "Luqina Javel husband Danilo", he acesses a site with pictures of their wedding ceremony.

Tom: What the hell do you think you are doing!?

Romeo jumps out of his skin, he turns around to see Tom standing behind him, arms on his hips, showing a look of annoyance.

Tom: Well? Come on...It had better be good!

EXT. EXETER HOUSING ESTATE - MORNING

Richard and Rebecca seem out of place, as they walk trough a trampy housing estate, with littered floors, graffitit on walls and boarded up houses.

Richard: To think she's been living like this for so long...

Rebecca: We can't choose where we are brought up...

Richard: I could have given her so much better tough...

Richard looks at the note he has taken. It has the name Michelle Grosvenor and an adress below it, he looks ahead and sees the house that she lives.

Richard: She's just a name and an adress to me... and me to her a stanger in a suit... it doesn't seem right does it?

Rebecca: No...it doesn't... but this is your chance to make it better...

Richard: But what if she wants nothing to do with me?

Rebecca: You will never know if you don't try... plus it will finally be able to remove the "what ifs" that are going trough your head...

Richard takes a nervous gulp, Rebecca holds his hand. The pair walk down the garden path, with an overgrown lawn and litter in the garden. Richard presses the doorbell but if falls off the door. He ends up knocking on the front door.

Richard looks at Rebecca neverously, in need of some support.

Rebecca: It will be fine, trust me...

The door opens slowly, Michelle (Claire Goose) opens the door, looking around to see if it is only Richard and Rebecca, she is edgy and nervous.

Michelle: What dya want?

Richard: Michelle?...Michelle grosvenor?

Michelle: Yeah, who the hell are you?

Richard: I'm your father...

:eek: What's gonna happen now?! How is Michelle going to react?! Really want more! :D

EXT: EXETER HOUSING ESTATE- Morning

Richard: I'm your father...

Michelle: (Mockingly) Daddy-kins! I've been waiting my whole life for you to find me, Daddy! My whole life has been leading up to this moment!

Michelle rolls her eyes

Michelle: Oh per-lease, what kind of perverted, sick ******* are you?!

Richard: This might sound a bit sudden but -

Michelle: (Interupts) Too right its bloody sudden, you wierdo! Who the hell do you think you are, storming in here like some crazy Chicken high on Ecstacy?!

Richard: Maybe i shouldn't have come round like this, but i really wanted to get to know you and... -

Michelle: (Interupts) Sick arses like you deserve to be locked up in a mad house! Who sent you round here then, eh?! I mean, come on, thats just plain sick comin' round here pretending to be my dead father!

Richard: Excuse me?!

Michelle: Like i said, you're a perverted sick *******, and why i've even given you the time of day up to now is beyond me!

Michelle slams the door, leaving Rebecca and Richard shocked. They walk away slowly..

Rebecca: Blimey! That was a bit full on...

Richard: Dead father...? What kind of person would tell her that?!

Rebecca: Well, now i guess you've met her...

Richard: I'm not giving up that easily. Shes my daughter, i know it... and i'll find the proof, you mark my words.

So, she thinks Richards dead, so hows he going to convince her?!

INT: BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE- Morning

Tom: Well? Come on...It had better be good!

Romeo: Oh come on, you can't say you haven't wondered...

Tom: Actally, yeah i bloody well can!

Romeo: So she was married, and she doesn't tell you, and you dont even wonder why?! I knew you were in the dark about her, but you're so far into it, you're nearly back in cavemen times!

Tom: Will you ever be happy for us?! Seriously?!

Romeo: Shes not marriage material, and thats that!

Tom: So you're jealous then, are ya!?

Romeo: Get a grip! You can't marry someone, who doesn't even bother telling you she was married- how can you trust her in the slightest?!

Tom: You obviously can't be happy for us... why did i expect you to...? You're not the person i thought you were...

Tom storms out the room, disheartened. Luqina rushes into the house, and hugs Tom tightly...

Luqina: You'll never guess... the church... i got us a date!

Tom: A date...?

Luqina: For the wedding. End of the month, babe!

INT: RED RUM PUB- Day

Vicky walks into the empty pub, and wonders over to Amy who is at the bar..

Vicky: I heard about what happened... Amy, i'm so sorry...

Amy: Whatever... its a bit late now, really!

Vicky: If i'd known what she was planning, then i would've -

Amy: You should've guessed what she'd do, Vicky! How could you let her be so irresponsible!? Me and Patrick could've lost our licence because of that and you! Our home, our pub, our jobs!

Vicky: If you hadn't gone swaning off, then it wouldn't have even happened!

Amy: I went to bury a family member! Is that against the law?!

Vicky: Even so..

Amy: Sorry, but i dont know how you could let her get away with this!

Vicky: I've other things on my mind, ok!?

Amy: Come on then, whats more important then my life, my home and my job!? Go on, spill!

Vicky: I'm pregnant, alright?!

So Michelle is the new Siobhan/Emma.. well Ems, we have been replaced :crying::crying:

Seriously, I am dying to know about Luquina's marriage... Can't believe they are getting married so soon.. she is very much hiding something I wonder what :hmm::hmm: