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Fab. Tina and Johnny getting married, lovely. more now
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more more more soon please! its all good! great in fact :clap:
Sorry once again guys here in the next part and thanks for all the wonderful replies I'm glad your enjoying my sequel :wub: :bow:
Chrissie sat in the kitchen feeding her daughter her breakfast
Jake walked in
Chrissie- morning
Jake- morning
He bent down and kissed her before attempting to tie his tie
Chrissie- let me do it
She stood up and tied it for him
Jake- thanks
Chrissie- my pleasure
She wrapped her arms around him and kissed him again
Jake- you’re in a good mood
Chrissie- and why not hey weddings always make me smile
She sat back down and carried on feeding Lia
Jake- I love you
She looked at him- I know you do good job an all cos I love you too
Jake- rings
Chrissie- as the best man you better not lose them
Jake- they’re in the lounge I’ll go and get them
Chrissie smiled
As the guests filed into the church taking their seats on the bride or grooms side of the family
Noah stood outside talking to Kerrie and Ruby when his mobile rang
Noah- yeah thanks for getting back to me
He walked away from the sisters mainly so Kerrie wouldn’t eavesdrop like she did on any other phone conversations he had
Noah- that’s brilliant thanks very much bye
He smiled and hung up this was definitely going to be a day Kerrie wouldn’t forget
Ruby- here she is
Kerrie kissed Noah- see you later
Noah- by the way you look gorgeous in red both of you
He turned and walked into the church nodding to the Vicar and Johnny who stood at the end of the aisle
Tina climbed out of the car wearing a gorgeous cream corset style dress with a huge train
Kerrie- I’ll try not to trip on it
Tina smiled- I’ve got the biggest butterflies ever
Ruby- if you think yours are bad you should see my dads
Thats excellent J_B_L. Its so fab!!! :thumbsup:
i know you just posted this but still, POST MORE POST MORE! :D
I love this script, i'm so glad ya decided to do a sequel!!!
Hope the wedding goes to plan *fingers Crossed*
Jake and Chrissie how cute! :wub:
Post more soon,
Pretty Please
Luv ya
Layne
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i completely agree! need more soon! :thumbsup:Quote:
i know you just posted this but still, POST MORE POST MORE!
great! :D hope the wedding goes well, though it poss wont seeing as its in walford! :) more soon please, cant wait
more more more... what is Noah up to? Jake and Chrissie are together... yey yey
Hello thanks guys for all the replies erm the wedding went fine it's the reception you have to watch :angel:
After the ceremony was over the happy couple and all the guests headed to the reception taking place at a huge hotel and a marquee had been set up out in the garden
Dennis and Sharon stood outside talking
Dennis- I know how important it is too you
Sharon- are you sure
Dennis- we’ll find Den get ours answers and then leave it at that ok
Sharon nodded and wrapped her arms around him and kissed him
Big Mo- didn’t take you long to get over Zoë losing your baby did it
Sharon- don’t rise to it
Big Mo- that’s it listen to your big sister
Dennis- come on
He took Sharon’s hand and they headed into the hotel to get a drink
Kerrie- why won’t you tell me what’s going on
Noah- nothing is going on
Kerrie- then what was the phone conversation about before the wedding?
Noah- that was a mind your own business Kerrie conversation
Kerrie- so you are cheating on me
Noah- why is everything about cheating with you?
Kerrie- oh I don’t know may be because I don’t trust you
Noah- well if you don’t trust me why are you still with me
Kerrie- do you know what I’m beginning to ask myself that question a lot these days
Noah- you could always move out
Kerrie- me move out why the hell should I move out you’re the one whose probably cheating on me I’ve been faithful
Other guests were beginning to stare
Noah- faithful is that why you were sleeping with my brother all those years
Kerrie- he was my husband
Noah- you hated his guts
Kerrie- so did you
Noah- you still slept with him you could have said NO but then again you never were very good at saying that
Kerrie slapped Noah hard across the face before storming out
Noah shrugged and headed for the bar
uhoh Noah! you're in for it now... that was such a nasty thing to say... he knew at the time he was even in on it if i remember rightly... ahhhhhh SHaron and Dennis... ahhhh Sharon and Dennis...
this is absoultey brilliantly fantastic babes... you better keep posting... i mean it... i need to know what happens... especially NOW... more more more
Omg, this rocks hun! Keep it up :cheer:
brill! :D oh dear noah, that wasnt a smart move! :) more very soon please, cant wait
Fab babe. What was Noah up to? More more more
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Noah is being all sneaky, wonder why?
fab babes, keep it coming i LOVE it!!
Luv ya
Layne
x x x
ooooo this is really interesting!! i want MORE NOW!! :thumbsup:
Hi sorrrrrrrie really sorry for the delay here is more of my sequel and thanks for all the brill replies
Jake stood chatting to his brother when he spotted Chrissie being chatted up by some middle aged pervert he slowly made his way over
Jake- you ok
Chrissie sighed gratefully at her boyfriend’s impeccable timing
Jake bent down and gently kissed her
Jake- do you want another drink
Chrissie shook her head- no I just want you
Jake- not very backwards in coming forwards are you
The man admitted defeat and walked off
Chrissie- now I know why I love you
Jake- why because I save you from the unwanted attentions from a some pervy mate of Johnny’s
Chrissie- yeah your my knight in shining armour
Jake grabbed her hand and pulled her to her feet and he wrapped his arms around her
Chrissie kissed him gently on the cheek before whispering something in his ear
Jake nodded and they made their way through the hotel to reception where they booked a room
Zoë stared at her ex he looked happy so did Sharon she blew her chance she knew that now but that didn’t stop her loving him or wanting him
Big Mo- if they’re getting to you let me know and I’ll go and sort them out
Zoë- leave it Nan
Charlie- your Nan’s right I could always take you home if you don’t want to stick around
Zoë- I said I’m fine so can we drop it please
Stacey walked over
Stacey- what’s up with her
She followed Zoe’s gaze to Sharon and Dennis
Stacey- oh Mr Perfect still getting to you is he well now you know what he’s really like should have listened to me in the first place
Zoë- shut up Stacey
Big Mo- put a sock in it go and find someone else to annoy
Stacey raised her eyebrows and stalked off to find Ruby
Brill as usual, MORE a.s.a.p!
want more! want more! want more! want more! want more! want more! want more! want more! want more! want more! want more! want more! want more!
please! :cheer: :thumbsup: :clap:
WOW... absolutely brilliant as always... ahhhhhh Jake and Chrissie together FOREVER n EVER n EVER
you better keep posting... or i will be forced to hurt you... sorry but i will... hehe
This is great babes, JC forever and Ruby and |Stacey forever!!
More soon please
Luv ya
layne
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Fab! Lovin' all the JC stuff :wub:
Post more NOW!
Fab. Loving JC. More more more
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brill! :D awwwwwwwwwww jake is soooooooo sweet! :) more very soon please, cant wait
Aww that is so cute Jake/Chrissie and baby:)
You are all brilliant cos you read my script he he I love you all so here is the next bit :cheer:
Noah made his way over to his girlfriend as she sat on the bench outside smoking a cigarette and finishing off the bottle of wine she had with her
Kerrie- knob off
Noah- how did you know it was me I was coming from behind
Kerrie- by the way you walk
Noah- look I’m sorry I shouldn’t have said what I did
Kerrie- no you shouldn’t have
Noah- but you need to chill out over me being unfaithful because I’m not all right you need to trust me?
Kerrie- I do
Noah- then prove it
Kerrie- how
Noah- follow me and all will be revealed to you
Chrissie and Jake finally emerged from upstairs and Chrissie headed to the bar to get a drink when Dennis approached her
Dennis- hey
Chrissie- everything all right
Dennis- apart from the Slater’s using Sharon and me as an emotional punchbag I can’t take their snide comments for much longer
Chrissie- they’ll soon find someone else to have a go at
Dennis- they still think I abandoned Zoë pregnant they are never going to let this go
Chrissie- it’ll be fine I promise you
Dennis- I need to talk to you about something as well
Chrissie- what
Dennis- Sharon and me we’re going to look for Den
Chrissie dropped her glass to the floor and stared after it as it shattered into a number of pieces
She quickly bent down and began to pick up the pieces
Dennis followed her down and grabbed her wrist
Dennis- I know this comes as a shock but we need answers
Chrissie- he’s disappeared
Dennis- I know we’re going hire someone to track him down it’s something me and Sharon have been discussing for a while we just wondered if you knew where to start looking
Chrissie- I haven’t seen or spoken to him in months so no I don’t
She got up pushed through the crowds and ran outside
Dennis you won't find him he is dead!!!!
Wonder what Noah has got for Kerrie, this is like my fav script, please [post more soon
Luv ya
Layne
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o no wats chriisie gonna do???? dennis u dont really need to talk to den!!
its great more soon please :cheer: :clap:
What will Chrissie do? Plz, drop it, Dennis n Sharon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh Dennis you've upset her... and now she won't... she's not going to... oh i can't say it... Dennis your a prat...
Hi guys sorry for the wait and thanks for all the wonderful replies again
Johnny and Tina stood by the lake in the garden of the hotel
Johnny- how do you feel
Tina- great you
Johnny- yeah I feel fantastic two beautiful daughters and a beautiful wife
Tina- Ruby looks brilliant doesn’t she but Kerrie seems to have disappeared
Johnny- her and Noah have probably gone to have another row
Tina- yeah they do seem to argue a lot
Johnny- it works for them so I just let them get on with it
Tina- do you think Ruby will be ok whilst we’re away
Johnny- she’ll be fine at the Slater’s now come on let’s go and cut the cake
Chrissie stood in the garden engrossed in her thoughts they wanted to find Den there was no way she could stop them not without drawing attention to herself
Jake made his way over to Chrissie she looked tense faraway from the Chrissie she’d been earlier
Jake- hey I’ve been looking everywhere for you
Chrissie’s eyes shot up
Chrissie- sorry
Jake- don’t apologise Alfie is having a ball with Lia I doubt we’ll get her back
Chrissie- could do with the break
She laughed nervously she was so on edge nothing could steady her
Jake- baby I’ve got something I want to give you I don’t want you to say anything yet ok
Chrissie- ok what is it
He handed her over a small navy blue box
Jake- I’ll be back later for your answer
He kissed her hard on the lips before walking away
Chrissie stared at the box part of her dreaded what was in there because she knew it could never happen she’d need a divorce if she did
With a shaky hand she opened the velvet soft box and inside sparkled the most beautiful diamond ring and tears of fear, love and guilt washed down her cheeks
WOW... Great... Brill... ahhh isn't he just the sweetest thing... say yes Chrissie... say YES... post more soon... more more more
LOVE THIS SCRPT! but ya already know that! Awww poor Chrissie, this is so good, you have to post more please!!!!
Luv ya 4eva
Forever Special friends
layne
x xx x
Poor Chrissie. She can always get thjat lawyer friend to draw up some fake papers, or tell Jake. More more more. its fab
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Hi guys thanks for the replies here is my next part enjoy :lol:
Dennis wrapped his arms around Sharon’s waist he could feel the Slater’s eyes watching his every move
Dennis- you ok
Sharon- I will be, if you let it go, it’s done with
Dennis- no it isn’t I’m being painted as the bad guy and I’m sick of it
Big Mo made her way over not realising that in her way of protecting her granddaughter she was only making things worse
Big Mo- look at her she’s fine now isn’t she but you left her in such a mess it took her months to get over a waste like you
Dennis- maybe you should ask Zoë about the truth
Sharon- Dennis
Big Mo- no let him finish maybe now he feels it’s a good time for him to explain how he left his pregnant girlfriend to suffer a miscarriage alone hey
Sharon- come let’s go Dennis
Dennis- nah she wants to hear it let her
Zoë looked over to where Dennis was standing she felt her heart sink
Zoë- please Dennis
Dennis- what I’ve kept quiet all this time and still I’m getting it in the neck either you tell them or I will
Charlie- Zoë
Zoë stared at Dennis- I can’t
Dennis- then let me
The silence hung over the wedding guests as Dennis began his speech
Dennis- why did I leave Zoë come on why did I really leave I mean it wouldn’t have anything to do with you bedding my dad would it
Zoë gazed down at the floor
Big Mo- you can’t dig your way out of this one with some sick lie like that tell him Zoë
Zoë stared at her family as the tears filled her eyes
Dennis- she was never pregnant were you Zoë well not by me anyway
Zoë- please Dennis
Dennis- come on Zoë you’ve let me be painted bad guy for too long this is your moment of glory
Zoë- I didn’t mean for it to go that far
Dennis- what sleeping Den Watts yeah I can see how that’s a little bit too far
Zoë- he told me he’d tell you I wasn’t pregnant
Charlie- please tell me it’s not true
Zoë- I’m sorry dad I panicked
Dennis- so I leave and there is no baby and then what Den got you pregnant did he for real
Zoë- I can’t do this
She turned to walk away but Charlie grabbed her arm
Charlie- Zoë
Zoë- ask Chrissie
Chrissie stood next to Sharon she couldn’t think straight she could feel the eyes watching her
Turning her head slightly she looked at Jake
Zoë- Chrissie tell them I had no choice
Chrissie walked over- come on before you say something you regret
Zoë- tell them that you took me for an abortion
Jake- you knew
Chrissie took a deep breath
Big Mo- I don’t understand how could you let her go through with that
Zoë- because I was having Den Watt’s baby and she knew she helped me, she helped me kill her husband’s baby and then…
Chrissie- Zoë that’s enough you don’t need to say anything else
Zoë fled to the hotel sobbing while all eyes reverted to Chrissie
Chrissie- I’ll go and make sure she’s ok
Chrissie followed Zoë through the hotel and the stunned wedding guests took in the revelations
go DENNIS go... go DENNIS go... Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo why did zoe tell everyone? what about Chrissie and Jake... Nooooooooooooooo the stupid cow i hope she dies... stupid woman... stupid... stupid... stupid...
Go Dennis. Hope jake and Chrissie are Ok. This is really fab. more more more
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I loved that part!!! Lets just hope something like that really happens hey!!!!
Fab as usual darlin!
Post more soon
Please
Luv ya
Layne
x x x
finally she gets what she deserves!! go dennis
more soon please1!!! :cheer:
fab! :D just caught up. loved how zoe admitted everything in front of everyone haha! :) more very soon please, cant wait