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Baymoore Beach
Richard: Yes, yes it is!
Tanya: NOOOO!!!!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Gary rushes down to comfort Tanya. The police man zips up the bodybag.
Policeman: I'm very sorry for your loss Mr Taylor...
Richard: Yes....so am I...
Cut to the top of the beach where Val, Mandy and Amy, amongst others, are witnessing the trauma going down on the beach.
Mandy: Crumbs, looks like it's Ed...
Val: Oh great!...
Amy: Val...
Val: Theres never a dull moment up at the manner is there?
Mandy: Poor Richard, how's he going to cope...?
Val: Hey girls, I could earn myself a bit of dosh here, phone up the papers! Millionaires son dies in dramatic suicide attempt...
Amy: Val, how can you be so crude....
Val: Crude? Since little miss mupett burnt down my salon, i need every penny i can get!
cuts back to the Taylors on the beach.
Gary: Come on Tan, i'm taking you home...you cant stay out here all day...
Tanya: He's gone...
Gary: Yes babe...im so sorry...
Gary turns towards Richard
Gary: Common Richard...you're coming back with us...
Richard: Oh no Gary...im fine...you make sure you look after Tanya...im going to go for a walk...
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:cheer: NEXT EPISODE PLEASE !!
This is fab Bry - keep writing :D
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Love Val,, shes a mouthy cow LOL,,, NEXTTTTTTTTTTTTT:cheer:
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Im glad your back BondBoffin you really have the best Soap on Soapboards!!!
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Brilliant as usual BondBoffin. Looks like its going to be a hard time for richard.
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Valentinos Restraunt - Day
Richard is sitting on a bench outside Valentinos - an Italian restuant by the beach, owned by Rebecca Mansfield. Richard starts to cry. Rebecca comes out to comfort him...
Rebecca: Richard?...oh my...i'm so sorry to hear about Ed...
Richard remains silent.
Rebecca: Come on...lets get you inside...ill make you a coffe and we can talk things over...okay?
Richard holds back the tears and gets up, Rebbeca puts her arm around him and walks him inside.
Rebecca: Come on my dear, its ok...
Natasha Jones, who works as a waitress at Valentinos, i laying out the tables. Rebecca's daughter Vicky is also helping her.
Vicky: So then Tash, you've kept it secret long enough...who's this myserty man of yours...
Natasha: Oh he's no-one special
Vicky: No one special! Youve had a smile on your face wider than Pavaroti's pants for the past few weeks...he must be something special...
Natasha: Oh well ok then he is, but...
Vicky's phone goes off.
Vicky: Hello... yes this is Miss Mansfeild...what!?....well is he ok!?...yes sure i'll be right there...
Rebecca notices that Vicky is distressed
Rebecca: What's wrong darling?
Vicky: It's Daniel... he's been in a hit and run...I've got to get to the hospital...
Vicky rushes out of the restauraunt.
Natasha: I donno, there's always something going on in Baymoore...
Rebeca: Yes thank you Natasha...(indictaes Richard) we can do without that thank you... have a break for half an hour...
Natasha grabs her coat and walks out. Rebecca sits down next to Richard.
Rebecca: Right then, let's have a chat...
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This is great, Bry..... NEXT!
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Beach Hutt
The Beach Hutt: Deckchair and speedboat hire, hq for the beach lifeguard: Tom.
Tom and Romeo are sitting down in the hutt. Chris walks in..
Tom: Oh look who it is....
Romeo: Shouldn't you be at work?
Chris: Shouldnt you?
Romeo: Rebecca and Richard are having one of those chats...so i thought it would be best to leave them too it...
Chris: Yeah well Craig's out of town so i thought id skip work and spend it with my chums...
Tom: (sarcastic) Oh how touching...
Chris: Ha Ha, so then found anything promosing...?
Tom picks up teh paper...
Tom: Yeah there was this one... youthful busty blonde seeks male for a good time...
Chris swipes the newspaper and reads
Chris: Oh no way! You dont want to be phoning her up...
Romeo: Why?
Chris: I recognise the number...an ex, god shes a right old control freak...and had an ass to rival Vanessa Feltz
Romeo and Tom pull disgusted faces.
Chris: Well what about this one... attractive girl, seeks sensible, intelligant male late 20s for great times and long term relationship....what about that eh!? Sounds the perfects date for you...
Romeo: Go on mate give her a ring...
Tom: No, i dont think i will...i mean i havent got a clue what she's like...
Romeo: Thats the whole idea...you have to take a chance, and if it dosent work out, then well what have you got to loose?
Chris: Look Tom... the police fished out a stiff down that beach earlier...only 18 years old... life is too short...you need to grab every oppurtunity thats gievn to you...
Tom: Go on then...(grabs paper and dials number) Oh hello yes...erm...im replying to your add in the lonley hearts column, and wondered if you wanted to meet up?...no im not a pervert....no im not a woman....tomorrow? yeah sure...
Tom pulls his thumbs up and the others silently cheer.
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