Devon Seas 2006

EXT. HARVEY'S MOTORS - DAY

Craig is opening up the garage. He looks over the road, where Emma Andrews is just getting onto the bus.

He opens the shutters and walks into the garage. He picks up the post and puts it on the table. He sits down and pick up his phone, dialling a number...

Craig: Yeah Neil...Craig Harvey...got a job for you... come down to the garage later...I'll give you the details...

Craig lights another cigar and breaths clouds of thick grey smoke into the air.

Craig: The usual treatment... but it's a female... Emma Andrews... I want to see that some damage comes to her...

Craig smiles to himself evily.

:eek: No!!! Not Emma - please let her be ok. Why do this to her! Shes young! :angry:

I hope Craig gets whats coming to him and soon!!

lmao...they're gonna bug the garage but what if chris and ruby pop in for a quick one

imagine if they hear chris and ruby instead:rotfl:

you have got to do that!!:lol:

why emma im really confused now?

EXT. BAYMOORE STREETS - NIGHT

Emma gets off the bus by Valentinos. She sees a group of lads, lead by the local yob Kevin Mitchell messing around by the entance to Elmcroft Close.

She tuts to herself and decides to take the long route, trough the garages and down an alley.

Emma's high hells drag across the concrete. She takes her phone from her handbag and begins to text.

All of a sudden she hears a noise, a rustling from the bushes. She looks around but no one is seen. She continues to walk, texting at the same time.

Suddenly a figure appears infront of Emma, she bumps into them. They are bearing a dark hooded top and a balaclava.

Emma: Oh I'm sorry...

Emma smiles and continues to text, but the figure doesnt move out of the way

Emma: Can you move please?

The figure grabs Emma, before she has change to scream they have covered her mouth with their hand. Emma's faint muffles can be heard as they drag her into the bushes kicking and screaming. Her phone smashes onto the ground...

INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT

Richard and Hilary are watching a classic movie on TCM. The house phone rings and Richard answers it.

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EXT. MIAMI HOTEL SWIMMING POOL - AFTERNOON

Poolside at a luxurious Miami hotel. The torquiose pool is glistening in the summer sun. On one of the deck chairs lies Tanya, with a bronzed tan and well manicured nails. She is wearing sunglasses and speaking trough a mobile phone.

The following scene takes place between the two locations.

Richard: Hello?

Tanya: It's me dad...

Richard: Tanya! It's so good to hear from you!

There is a look of immediate fear on Hilary's face as she hears the mention of Tanya's name.

Richard: Is everything fine...

Tanya: Everything's superb...

Richard: Are you sure?... I was going to come over and see how you were doing, but seen as it's the wedding soon there will be no need...

Tanya: About that... I'm not coming...

Richard: Why ever not!?

Tanya: I refuse to condone your marriage to that woman... you are perfectly aware of my feelings about that woman...and if you instinst on marrying her..I for one do not want to bare witness to it...

Richard: (Heartbroken) Ok...well...if that's how you feel... I'll speak to you soon...bye.

Richard puts down the phone, a look of complete dispointment on his face. A concerned Hilary looks at Richard.

Hilary: Richard, what ever is the matter?

Richard: Don't take this wrong way... but Tanya... she said she doesnt approve of our relationship...she's not coming to the wedding...

Hilary: Oh my god! That's awful... but we are still going to get married right!?

Richard gets up and pours himself a drink, in total shock at Tanya's anouncement.

Richard: Of course we are...but it...Just wont be the same without her...

Hilary smiles to herself in satisfaction.

Hilary: (Mutters to self) Excellent. Nothing can stop me now...

INT. ANDREWS' HOUSE - NIGHT

Val is transfixed to the televison: Judge Judy is on. James is reading his newspaper, looking at the show and Val with contempt.

James: Emma's a bit late home isn't she? She said she'd be back come ten o clock...

Val: Oh dont worry,she's a teenage girl... she'll be back stop, stressing...

There is a few moments of silence between the pair. All of a sudden the doorbell rings continually and with some matter of urgency. A concerned James gets up and answers the door.

Emma stumbles inside, tears rolling down her face.

James: Emma love, are you okay!? What's happened

Emma sobs in despair and sits on the stairs in tears. Her continual sobbing makes it hard for her to breath. Val walks in, half watching Judge Judy still.

Val: (Casual) You should have called us if something was up...

James: Emma!? Where's your handbag... have you lost it?

Emma looks up at James but is unable to speak, all she can do is nod her head.

James: Did someone steal it from you Emma? What's up love... you been mugged or something!?

James walks closer to Emma, he brushes her hair back and notices a brusied face.

James: Where the hell did you get those brusies!? Who'd done this to you!?

Val: Luqina bloody Javel! That's who! She's been threatening Emma for days now!

James: (Outraged) Right! That's it! I'm gonna have her!

James charges out of the house, Val following close behind. Emma continues to cry in despair.

:eek: does this lead to luqinas exit omg you cant shes got to have her wedding first and romeo has got to come back and sort her out then all 3 of the bachelor boys will be back...until romeo susses chris sleeping with claire but thats a diffrent story

im jumping ahead of myself a bit

Blimey James/Val - give Emma a chance to tell you what happened. Give the girl a hug! Crumbs!

:hmm: Maybe Tanya hasn't received Siobhan/Emma's package yet - or perhaps shes saying she isn't going to be there, but shes going to turn up unannounced and ruin Hilary's big day.

More now please :D

James and Val! Why didn't you let Emma explain what happened?!!!

Weird behaviour from Tanya....i hope she turns up and ruins Richard and Hilary's wedding!

im getting so excited for the next installment cannot wait:)

EXT. BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE - NIGHT

James charges across Elmcroft Crescent from his house to theres. He bangs on the door.

Val: Calm it eh James? Your a policeman...should be setting an example...

James: An example!? I'll be making an example of that bitch!

James continues to bang, but no one answers. Curtains start to twitch across the neighborhood. Emma weakily walks out of the house and towards her parents.

Val: You go back inside love...dont worry...you're dad's dealing with it now...

James: Open this bloody door before I break it down!

Emma: Just leave it dad please! Your making a fool of yourself! All the neighbours are watching!

James: I don't care about what the neighbours think!

Emma: Please dad, just leave it...you'll make it ten times worse...im begging you!

James: No Emma! No way! No one mugs my daughter and gets away with it!

James steps away from the door in frustration. He heads off towards the Red Rum. Val and Emma follow close behind him, Emma is in complete despair shouting after her father.

Emma: Dad! Come back here now! Please! Dad!

Oh gawd - James is going to look an idiot! Stop guys and listen to your daughter!

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Originally Posted by jojomum

Blimey James/Val - give Emma a chance to tell you what happened. Give the girl a hug! Crumbs!

:hmm: Maybe Tanya hasn't received Siobhan/Emma's package yet - or perhaps shes saying she isn't going to be there, but shes going to turn up unannounced and ruin Hilary's big day.

More now please :D

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Ems I was thinking exactly the same thing u were,, and I agree maybe Tanya go the package, but shes just making it sound like shes not going to lure Hilary into false security,, wouldn't it be fun if they were at the alter,, and Tanya pops in the tape and plays it for all to hear ... oooooh doesn't that sound good ????????????:clap:

INT. IQBAL/MARCUS' FLAT - NIGHT

Iqbal is sitting down watching the television. Sanjita walks trough the front door, looking drained. The faint shouts from the Andrews' can be heard from outside. Iqbal looks over his shoulder and smiles. Sanjita throws her coat onto the arm of the sofa.

Iqbal: Hiya babe, your late home...thought you was only going to the lawyer...

Sanjita: Yeah well...it didn't turn out how I'd expected...so I ended up drowning my sorrows in town

Iqbal: Why? What's up? What did he say...

Sanjita: He strongly suggests that I don't challenge Kash's request for full custody of the kids...

Iqbal: What!? Why not!?

Iqbal switches off the television and focuses his attentions on Sanjita, who is close to tears. She speaks, but is choked.

Sanjita: Apparantly... I'm the one who walked out..I'm the one who has been a cheat and lyier for the entirity of their childhood... oh yes... and apparanltly he is a good father...who has brought them up well...with good manners and morals...

Iqbal: That's rubbish and you know it! If the kids were asked in court, it would be you who'd they'd want to be with!

Sanjita: Since when have kids had a say in the matter? It's about who can afford the biggest and best lawyer...and I have a pittance in my bank... he has a buisness!

Iqbal: Don't worry about money... I can give it you...

Sanjita: No way... the lawyer has explained my situation, and I'm not going to use my kids as an emotional punchbag with Kash... I'll just have to agree to seeing them at weekends...

Sanjita begins to cry, Iqbal holds her in his arms, concerned for her state of mind.

INT. RED RUM - NIGHT

James and Val storm into the Red Rum. The impact of the door hitting the wall causes the pub to go quiet. Luqina, Tom and Chris are standing by the bar.

Luqina: Well look who it isn't...

Val: I've had enough of your lip you smary little cow!

Val walks over to Luqina and slaps her around the face.

Tom: Oi! Val!

Luqina slaps Val back. The pair begin to fight. James pushes past Tom to pull Val away.

James: Move out of my way!

Tom: Who you pushing!?

Tom pushes James back. The pair begin to fight also. Chris grabs his pint and steps back from the action, a look of astonishment on his face. Chaos errupts between the two families as a full on pub brawl starts.

Amy: PATRICK! Get down here now!

Patrick comes down stairs, sees the fights and jumps over the bar to split the fight up.

Patrick: Pack it in! The lot of ya! Anymore of this and you're all barred!

Tom: Try telling them...coming in here and starting a fight over nothing...

James: Nothing!? Luqina has beaten up my daughter! Mugged her!

Luqina: I haven't been no where near that little cretin!

Val: Watch your mouth your lying little bitch! You slap my daughter about and then have the bare-faced cheak to deny it! You're a nasty peice of work! Really you are!

Emma: It wasn't Luqina!! Alright!? Will the pair of you listen to me!!!

James and Val look at Emma, unaware that she has been watching the whole performance.

James: Well then who was it love!? Who attacked you!?

Emma: I wasn't attacked! OK!?... I was raped!

The entire Red Rum look at Emma, in complete shock at her announcement.

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Originally Posted by bondboffin

Tom pushes James back. The pair begin to fight also. Chris grabs his pint and steps back from the action, a look of astonishment on his face. .

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haha legend that is Chris such a classic,

:eek: emma was raped oh god how low can that craig get....him getting a young girl raped, right now I think its time you got someone hard like a dennis rickman type character to join devon seas and kick the living daylights out of craig and I want NAY I demand that he gets killed in the must inhuman way you can possibly think off!

how could little emma get raped, what low life sort of person would do such a thing and now its gone all round the red rum so everyone will know...poor emma

craig :angry:

Poor Emma, plus the pub knows she has been raped. :( James and Val should have listened to Emma in the first place!

Ok, just caught up on everything.. first excellent writing Bry and Abi.. was totally shocked at siobhan story and Leah killing her mum :eek::eek:. Now Emma has been raped.. that is also a big shocker....

I see I turned into Ems... excellent... I got younger and have more kids now :lol:

INT. RED RUM - NIGHT

The pub look on in shock and horror at Emma's anouncement. James and Val's hearts sink immediatley.

James: You...what....no....no....it can't have been!

Tears roll down Emma's face.

Emma: I was raped.... it's the truth....

Val walks up to Emma, tears in her eyes. She gently caresses her daughter's cheak in support.

Val: My baby girl... I'm so sorry.... how could they?

Patrick and Amy stare at each other, unsure of how to approach the situation. Patrick rings the pub bell to get everyone's attention.

Patrick: Okay ladies and gents... I think it's best if you all leave now...sorry for any inconvienace

Without hestiation the punters begin to walk out of the pub. Luqina gives Val and Emma a dirty look on the way out. Chris, with a new pint in his hand tries to leave the pub with the glass.

Patrick: Oi! Chris! Don't you even think about it!

Chris puts the pint down on the table and leaves. The Red Rum is now empty. Val is hugging her daughter, but is lost for words.

Emma: (Emotional) He wouldn't move out of the way.... he just dragged me into the bus.... and he raped me!

Val and Emma burst into even more tears as Val hugs her, and she clings tightly to her mother. A tear rolls down James' face...

INT. CRACK DEN - NIGHT

A thilthy squat filled with drug addicts. A loud and violent bang is heard on the front door. Neil, one of Craig Harvey's thugs wakes up. Panic is heard throughout the house.

Druggie: ****! I bet it's the cops at this hour hide the stash!

The addicts run around the house hiding their drugs. Neil walks towards the front door in frustration.

Neil: I'll get the front door shall I!? :rolleyes:

Neil opens the door to Craig. Craig punches Neil directly in the face. Neil falls to the floor with the impact, blood running from his nose.

Neil: Christ Craig! What the hell's that for!?

Craig drags Neil up and punches him again. The drug addicts all stay away from Neil and Craig.

Craig: You bloody animal! Low life peice of scum!

Neil: Wh...what have I done!?

Craig: You went too far Neil! Too far! I never asked you to rape the girl! :angry:

Neil: I didn't Craig! I swear to you hands down! I couldn't find her!

Craig grabs Neil by the jaw, squezzing his face.

Craig: You'd better be telling me the truth Neil...becuase rape is one thing I will NEVER tolerate! Do you understand me!? NEVER!

Neil: Yeah cool Craig... I understand...yeah

Craig: If I find out you did it I swear to god I'll chop your bloody rapist knackers off!

Craig gives Neil a violent kick and then straightens his tie before leaving the squat. Neil gasping for breath from Craig's violent attack.

OMG :eek: So if it wasn't Craig's thug that did this to Emma - its a Baymoore resident :eek: Who is it!!??! I'm in complete shock! *tries to think of a list of suspects*

omg you never fail to surprise me ......ME THINKS KASH? out of revenge?

oh and BB im really looking forward to the D wing spinoff any news to when its out??

It wasn't Neil!!! :eek: Ok my suspects... Adonis, Kash or that Kevin guy... Bry/Abi we better find out soon

Hmmmmmm who else "owes" Craig a favour ???????

maybe its someone we wont expect at all.......hmm patrick?

tom?:eek: someone paid by luqina? :eek:

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Originally Posted by diamond1

omg you never fail to surprise me ......ME THINKS KASH? out of revenge?

oh and BB im really looking forward to the D wing spinoff any news to when its out??

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some time in September when i get back off my holidays - I am looking forward to writing it! :D

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Originally Posted by Siobhan

It wasn't Neil!!! :eek: Ok my suspects... Adonis, Kash or that Kevin guy... Bry/Abi we better find out soon

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you wont find out until way into season 2... as this isnt just one rape... it's going to turn out to be a serial rapist

INT. RED RUM - NIGHT

The police have just walked into the Red Rum, and sit down beside Emma and her parents.

PO: So then... Emma...in your own time... would you like to tell us exactly what happened...

Val: She was raped... chris...what else do you need to know!?

PO: We need as many details as possible Mrs Andrews...

Val: Can't you see that the poor girl is traumatised... she could do without the forty questions!

PO: I can understand the emotional state of Emma, but if we have any chance of catching the man behind this attack we need to asotane as much information as possible

James: She wasn't attacked...she was raped...

PO: IT's best to refer to it as an attack... it makes it more comfortable for the victim to talk about it then...

James: I am a police officer you know!

Val: Okay James! Shut up! Let Emma speak...

Emma starts to reccount the events of the evening. The Andrews are clearly distressed. Patrick and Amy look on in the distance.

Amy: The poor girl...how could anyone do such a thing?

INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - MORNING

James walks down the stairs, a look of despair on his face. Val meets him in the hallway with a cup of tea in her hands.

Val: Morning love, how you coping?

James: I'm fine... just popped in to see Emma...and well the same can't be said for her.

Val passes James his cup of tea. The pair head into the kitchen. Val closes the door behind her so as Emma cant listen in.

Val: I couldn't get a wink of sleep last night...thinking what he... that monster did to our daughter... made me feel sick to the stomach...

James: I just don't know what to do Val...how to react around her...what to say... it seems so easy when your an officer and your on the outside looking in... but when your faced with it... it's just so different...

Val: All we can do is be there for her if or when she needs us...

James: I swear to go when I get my hands on the beast!...

James phone rings: his tone is The Bill. He picks up the phone and speaks into it.

James: Hello?....Yes....Alright... I'll be right there...

James put's down the phone and grabs his coat.

Val: (Concerned) What's up?

James: Just got a call from the station... they've bugged Craig's place... want me to go and listen to something...

James hurries out of the room, leaving Val alone, wondering what it could be about...

INT. PAIGNTON POLICE STATION - NIGHT

James rushes into a survelliance room where a few employyes are monitoring various hidden cameras and planted microphones.

James: Alright lads, what have you got for me then?

PO: It's something we've picked up from Craig Harvey's garage...

James: Oh right, anything incriminating?

PO: (Hesitant) It's about Emma...

Without hesitation James grabs the earphones and plays back the message from where the officer had been listening. James has a look of furry on his face and he races out of the room in anger.

PO: James! Don't do anything foolish! James!

Moments later Lorraine walks into the room, clearly curious as to why James left in a hurry.

Lorraine: What's eating him...?

PO: This recording...

Lorraine: Put it on loudspeaker...

The police officer selects the message to be played out troughout the room.

Neil: Look Craig... you've got me worried here... accusing me of rape and everything... I swear to you I can do without this **** on my name... I'm not a rapist....

Craig: Yeah well how can I take your word for it... I told you to see some damage comes to her...and then she gets raped...don't take an Einsten to connect the two...

Lorraine: ****!

Lorraine hurries out of the room, concerned for James' state of mind.

How daft were they letting him hear that!!!! James is going to find himself in serious trouble if hes not careful! I can't believe they let him hear that! They should be reprimanded for that!!!

INT. HARVEY'S MOTORS - DAY

Chris is working on a motor, Craig is sitting at the desk working out the taxes. James walks into the gargage.

Craig: James...what a suprise...

James: I want a word...

Craig: Chris... go and get some biscuits from the shop...

Chris gets up and leaves. Craig gets up to talk to James, James grabs Craig by the colllar and pushes him against his filling cabinet. Craig breaths heavily at being caught off guard. Chris pops his head around the corner of the building.

Chris: Erm...I ent got no money Craig...

Craig: For god sake! Take that!

Craig gets a note from his wallet and throws it at Chris. Chris leaves. Craig gives James a cool look.

Craig: Surely I can have you done for police brutality...

James: And I should have you and you scummy mate up for rape!

Craig: What on earth are you chatting about?

James raises his fist to Craig, who flinches as an immediate reaction. James sees sense and doesnt hit him.

James: I know you had something to do with Emma's rape! Your scum Craig! I swear to god!

Craig: I didn't rape her...and neither did any of my mates...acusations like that can get you into serious trouble James...you should know that...an officer of the law and all...

James: You might not have wanted to, but you sure as hell meant for "some damage to come to her"!

Craig looks James pale white in the face.

Craig: How the hell!?...How did you know I said that!?

James doesnt answer, he looks uncomfortably towards the floor, cursing himself. Craig pushes James off him, straighetning his tie. He walks around the garage and in the far corner sees a small microphone. He tears it off from the wall.

Craig: What the hell is this!? Eh!? You been bugging me or something!?

James: It's the only way we're ever gonna get you sent down!

In a rage Craig throws the microphone on the floor and stamps on it, crushing it to peices.

Craig: If you or the old bill try another move like that I swear to god I'll make you all pay! Do you hear me!?

Lorraine: Police intimidation! Is a crime! I see you doing it again and I'll have thrown into the cells by the end of the day! "Do you hear me!?"

Lorraine steps into the garage. Craig steps away from James, pretending to look innocent.

Lorraine: Sergeant Andrews! Get out of here now!

James: I beg your pardon!

Lorraine: It's an order! Now move!

Shocked at the strictness of Lorraine, James reluctantly leaves the garage. Craig gives James a smug look, and then a look of disgust at Lorraine.

Lorraine: Don't you worry Harvey, we'll get you eventually... and I'll be the first in the que to make sure you suffer the true punishment that you deserve...

Lorraine leaves Craig alone at the garage, forced to re-asses his options.

Ok is series 1 almost finished now...I didnt realize it went in series because its been going on for ages now,

I thought carl was going to get framed,hopefully he might get away

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Chris pops his head around the corner of the building.

Chris: Erm...I ent got no money Craig...

Craig: For god sake! Take that!

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haha legend

funny at the worst of times

excellent.. but I agree with Em.. they should never have let James hear that tape.. now he has gone a blown the whole operation!!!

EXT: RED RUM PUB

Mandy is walking down the street outside the pub, her eyes red and sore with tears. She doesn't notice Leah coming towards her, as she mourns her mother. Leah walks over, and tries to put her arm around Mandy. When Mandy realises who it is, she pulls away in disgust...

Leah: I know... it hurts doesn't it... I just.... I can't beleive shes gone. In cold blood.... gone...

Mandy looks at her fuming. Leah doesn't pick up on this...

Leah: When i saw her, i really couldn't beleive it... Guess it still hasn't sunk in.... we're never going to see her again... I just can't accept that...

She looks at Mandy in the eyes...

Leah: Mandy?

Mandy: How dare you. I knew you were a bitch, but this? This is sick! I'm not going to talk to the murderer of my mother. Killed in Cold Blood? The only cold blooded thing around here is you!

Mandy storms off, as her eyes well up in tears..

EXT: HARVEY'S MOTORS

Lorraine walks out the garage, and pulls James away from the garage.

James: Well what did you expect me to bloody do?!

Lorraine: I'm sorry, James...

James: Sorry? Sorry for what....?

Lorraine: I'm sorry, but i dont have a choice. I can't let you do this anymore.

James: Do what? I've already said, what do you expect me to do, when he's the one behind.... behind it all!

Lorraine: I know. But thats the point. Its too close to home for you, James. You can't go messing with Craig like that! The only reason i put you on this case, is because i thought you deserved to know exactly what happened, and not get pushed to the side of it all.... But the officers in the office are getting on my back now. Letting you hear that tape... it was too far. I know that now...

James: So what are you trying to say?!

Lorraine: My hands are tied. I've got to take you off the case...

James: (interupts) What?! But...-

Lorraine: (interupts) I dont have a choice, James. And thats that, really.

James: But what about Emma?!

Lorraine: I'll find whoever it was, i promise you that. And they'll pay for it.

EXT: HARVEY'S MOTORS

Leah rushes over to the garage, but slows down and smiles sweetly as she passes Lorraine and James. She then rushes into the Garage, and into the office where Craig is, slamming the door behind her...

Leah: I can't beleive this... Maybe i didn't cry enough, or maybe we didn't stay indoors for long enough... oh God...

Craig: What? Whats happened?

Leah: We're going down... for everything... Can't beleive i even thought we'd get away with it...

Craig: Leah, calm it woman! Whats happened?!

Leah: She knows. Mandy knows it was us. Well, me... and its only a matter of time before the police do.... times up....oh my god...

Craig: Wouldn't count on that :rolleyes:

Leah: huh?

Craig: Mandys just clutching on straws, she doesn't know anything.

Leah: And the police?!

Craig: They've already been

Leah: you WHAT?! :eek:

Craig: Calm it! They dont suspect a thing. We've got away with it, Leah! :D

Great stuff going on, i hope Craig gets his commeupance soon, and a bad move letting James hear that tape!

Seriously this has got everything... all the good bit from Soap and Drama.. keep this going Bry and Abi.. I don't know what I would do without my daily fix

Ok people... for those of you who are maybe as blond as me, the rapist is someone we know (I had is confirmed) so lets get our head together and try figure this out..

I have my money on Kash, Adonis or Patrick...