aww wiked nearly over :( more please!
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aww wiked nearly over :( more please!
This is a great script!I don't want it to end!
Its great, i don't want it to end, is there going to be another sequel?More soon please!
I have written a sequeal, only thing is i've kind of killed off a certain character, :o lol. but i'm wondering weather to change it, but that will mena most of the story being totally re written and changed. lol s no sure what to do but the ending of this story is left open just in case i change me mind! lol so your views would be apppriciated. lol
Forbidden Love Part Eighty - one
Demi walked back into the living room and Leo wasn’t with Kayla no more but with Kellie. She looked at him and she caught his eye. Leo looked at her while dancing with Kellie who had her back to Demi. She stood in the door watching and Leo was still staring at her. Demi turned away and looked the other way making Leo do the same. She turned back and he wasn’t looking at her any more. Demi felt so hurt he was doing this to her. He must still feel something deep in side.
Demi watched as Kellie walked away and now it was Charlene who was with Leo, he begun dancing with her like he had with Kayla and Kellie. Demi felt so betrayed though she wasn’t even with him no more.
“Look at him…” Came a voice from behind. Demi turned to see Cael. “Like he don’t even care…”
“Leave him Ca…”
“No! You came here to set things straight with him, sort things out, get him back. And look at him. He’s bin with bout everyone in a skirt!”
“Not everyone….” Demi sighed looking down at her own. Cael sighed
“He’s out of order!” He snapped as he went to walk off, Demi pulled him back
“I said leave him!” Demi snapped as Cael stopped. “Let him get on with it. I really don’t care any more!” Demi sighed as she went into the living room and sat on the sofa just thinking, staring into space as she sat alone. Cael walked in after her worried about her, he sat beside her as she sighed.
“He’s out of order Dem’s… he knows what he’s doin, forget about him… come and have a dance, play him at his own game” Cael said as Demi shook her head with a sigh.
“Don’t get mad Dem’s… Get even…!” Cael said as he got up and looked at her. With no response he went off to dance. Demi thought about it before she got up and headed into the kitchen. Demi poured her self a drink going a bit heavy on the vodka. She was pouring it into a glass and her hand was shaking. She turned to her side to see Leo which almost made her spill it as she wasn’t paying her full attention.
“Steady on… your be getting ya self drunk” Leo said with a little smile half drunk him self.
“What’d you care…” She snapped as she filled the rest of her glass which wasn’t a lot of lemonade.
“Don’t be like that Dem’s…”
“Like what!…” Demi snapped as she sipped her drink turning her nose up wincing at the taste.
“Well first ya all saying ya like me. Watching me and looking over at me… then ya all cold like this” He said as Demi put her drink down looking at him with her eye brow raised.
“Me!… You’re the one sat by ya self one minute feeling sorry for ya self… then up dancing with any girl who gives ya the eye the next!” Demi snapped as Leo looked away. “how’d ya ‘spect me to react Leo!” she snapped again as he looked at her. “I love you…” Demi added as wondered if he’d say the same. Leo sighed looking away before turning to her.
“I’m sorry Demi… But you hurt me that night… both of ya did. It just aint that easy for me to forgive. I’m just trying to get on with my life… maybe you should do the same” Leo sighed as she walked off back into the party as Demi was left hurt and devastated by what he’d just said. Demi downed the rest of her rather strong drink as she went back into the party taking a seat on the sofa. She just watched as Leo danced with more girls forgetting about her.
“He still loves ya Dem’s… its obvious he cant just turn his feelings off like that, give him time aye” Cael said going back over to her. But Demi sighed as she kept her eye on Leo.
“He can… he don’t because he’s just told me. What have I done Cael this is all my fault, he hates me, he don’t love me no more!” Demi wailed as she looked up at her friend before having one last look at Leo before she left the party in floods of tears.
*Final Part! Demi & Leo have a heart to heart... but can they sort things out before its too late!*
oh my god! it's so excellent! please make them get back together, can't wait til the final part!!!! :cheer:
Wow! Hope they get back together!
oh please more poor demi i hope they sort it out they belong together!
Can't wait for the next part!
Forbidden Love Part Eighty - Two FINAL PART! :cheer: (About the sequeal, still aint decided but if you read the message at the begining of part 81, then it'll say it a little more detail, i dunno what to choose.lol. Just wanna say thank you all for reading and replying through out the story! :thumbsup: anyway here it is.... the final part!)
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It was the following morning and Demi had gone to see Leo. She stood waiting for him to come out of the flat. she thought he was bound to come out sooner or later and it was just a matter of waiting until he did. Demi was beginning to get board as she had been sitting there for 3 hours now. She looked at her watch and sighed but then she saw him. He was coming her way and he hadn’t notice her yet. She stepped behind the wall and waited for him to come closer until she came so he couldn’t run off.
“Leo” Demi said softly as she came out from the wall Leo stopped almost instantly.
“God Demi you trying to kill me!” He said panting getting his breath back.
“What you want anyway!” he snapped as he looked at her, she looked into his eyes.
“You!” she smiled as Leo sighed looking to the floor not wanting to look in to her eyes.
“Demi don’t!” Leo said feeling the heartache all coming back to him.
“Don’t tell me you haven’t even given me a thought Leo. I know you have because I haven’t stopped thinking about you!” Demi said as Leo sighed again looking up at her. “I love you Leo!”
“Demi! You know I feel the same, but things have moved on now.”
“They haven’t, unless you let them! C’mon Leo admit it, you miss me and you miss Cael, he aint a bad person really, he means well and he’s even admitted that he wants to be my mate, just a mate!” Demi said as Leo just listened.
“It’s you I want, I mean I love Cael I aint gonna deny it, but not in the way you think, not in the way I love you. I’ve told you that before even that I think he’s just confused. We’ve been mates ages and I think he’s confused with which type of love it is he’s feeling! Remember the old days though, all of us playing out in the street, having a laugh, playing silly little games. Sticking up for you in fights, that one with James, he stuck up for the both of us didn’t he? You wont find any other mate like him again Leo, you wont find another mate that you can share all those memories with, one that you can share the past with.” Demi persuaded as she paused.
“That’s why me and him are still gonna be mates Leo, no matter what you decide I aint letting him go just like that. Because I know more than anyone else that you really need a mate, especially when the rest of the world hates ya. I don’t wanna feel like that, I don’t want him to feel like that and I don’t want you to feel like that! Then there’s Aleesha, she needs ya, she’s gonna want to see her dad when she gets older, only it’ll be so much easier if her mum and dad get on aye?”
“You promise me one thing Demi, because I love you both so much, you’ll never go off with him. Never, now matter what! and promise you’ll never go off with anyone but especially not him. Because I miss you, Aleesha and your right, even Cael. But you’ve both really betrayed me, I guess it’s a good thing we were all so close before, that I can maybe think about forgiving you now!”
“I promise Leo, really, and Cael is so sorry and so am I and we just…”
Leo interrupted her by planting a small kiss on her lips. “Shhh. I know. You’re my oldest mates and I’ve been thinking, your right, I do need ya both, so I’m sorry and I’m ready to get things back to how they were again. I’ve missed you both so much, all three of ya!” Leo smiled as demi flung her arms round him.
“I so promise Leo, you wont Regret it!”
‘never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you’
“Don’t worry about Cael, we’ve talked and he has feelings for me but he don’t wanna risk loosing me or you again, you don’t need to worry about a thing”
“Shut up before I change my mind yeah!”
‘Dreams can come true
Look at me babe I'm with you
You know you gotta have hope
You know you've got to be strong’
Demi stood holding Aleesha in her arms as Leo put his arm round her.
I could stay awake just to hear you breathing
Watch you smile while you are sleeping
The pair watched as Aleesha smiled and gurgled up at them. Demi and Leo looked on as proud parents as they watched their daughter.
While you're far away dreaming
I could spend my life in this sweet surrender
Their daughter… some thing that they’d always have together… something no one could ever come between… they were a family now…
I could stay lost in this moment forever
Every moment spent with you is a moment I treasure
nothing could go wrong!
!!!!!THE END!!!!!
*Lyrics from, Gabrielle & Aerosmith* :heart:
oh wow!This is one of the BEST Demi and Leo scripts! :bow: :cheer: :cheer: :cheer:
:thumbsup:
:( Can't believe its over