Richard didn't do it.. it has to be a setup.. I dont' believe he would be that stupid... Oh my god!! callumn is just going to bury Kate.. what excuse will he have for michelle???
Fantastic work guys!!
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Richard didn't do it.. it has to be a setup.. I dont' believe he would be that stupid... Oh my god!! callumn is just going to bury Kate.. what excuse will he have for michelle???
Fantastic work guys!!
The hit and run must be a setup prehaps between Hilary and Craig??? This is not like Richard.
That is what I was think too BB.. it is not like Richard at all..Quote:
Originally Posted by bakedbean
INT. CALLUMN'S CAR - MORNING
Lauren is sat in Callumn's car, which is parked up by some woods. She is sitting in the passenger's seat, a nervous wreck. Callumn suddenly returns. He gets back in the car, and sits in the driver's seat. He wipes his dirty hands on a piece of cloth, then turns to Lauren.
Callumn: Are you ok?
Lauren fails to speak. She nervously nods her head. Callumn tries stroking Lauren's cheek, but Lauren flinches.
Callumn: Look...Kate's dead and buried in those woods now, we can forget about her! We can move on, get back to normal..get back to having fun!
Lauren: This changes everything Callumn, you killed an innocent woman! What if i ever get on the wrong side of you eh?! You gonna dispose of me as well?!
Callumn: Of course not! This was just a one-off, she just got in the way...and besides, your far too sexy to be killed..
Lauren: Jesus...what is it with me eh?! I should be running away as far as i can but even after what you've done....
There's a pause.
Lauren: I can't help it Callumn! I just can't help wanting you!
Callumn: Don't deny your feelings Lauren, this just adds to the danger of us being together...
Callumn and Lauren both lean in and share a kiss.
INT. RED RUM - DAY
Romeo and Chris are having a drink in the Red Rum. Tom suddenly comes in and walks towards the pair, but Romeo and Chris both try to ignore him.
Tom: Look guys, i don't know how many times i can say this... but i'm sorry...
Romeo: Sorry doesn't cover it!
Chris: "Sorry i used up the milk, sorry i forgot to feed the cat" but sorry isn't enough to cover giving our house away in a stupid game of poker! :rolleyes:
Tom: I know it was stupid guys, I realise that!
Chris: Too damn right it was! It was a good job that me and Romeo had places to go to, otherwise we'd have been homeless!
Romeo: Mates don't try and make us homeless Tom!
Tom: But i..
Romeo interrupts.
Romeo: Just get lost Tom!
Tom looks at Romeo and Chris, a look of sadness on his face. Tom turns away and slowly leaves, devastated that he may have lost his two best friends for life.
INT. TORBAY HOSPITAL - NIGHT
James is hooked up to a machine, lying unconcious. Val is sat close beside him, holding his hand tightly, she is clearly emotional. Claire comes into the room and slowly approaches Val.
Claire: Mom...
Val: Oh love, thank god you're here...
Claire: The doctor's told me what's happened...I don't know what to say...
Val: (Emotional) Nor do I love... nor do I...
Val bursts into tears, Claire squats down and gives her mother a supportive hug.
Claire: Come on mom, we've got to stay strong, for dad yeah?
Val: How can I love!? When he's hooked up to this machine! He can't even breath for hiself at the moment!
Claire: Yeah, but he's gonna get better yeah!? Keep postive mom...you have to...
Val: I'm trying to love, but I just dont think he's gonna survive the night...
The pair look at James, clearly emotional. The camera cuts up closle to James, his motionless body lying there, will he make it?
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - MORNING
Callumn comes through the door, holding a bunch of flowers.
Callumn: 'Shell, I'm back...
He walks into the living room and hands them Michelle, he tries to kiss her but she pulls away.
Michelle: These supposed to make me feel better or something?
Callumn: They're an apology...I'm sorry, I shouldn't have flipped last night...
Michelle: No, you shouldn't...
Callumn: I just felt...hurt, that you thought I would cheat on you...I want to prove to you that I'm a changed man 'Shell...
Michelle: Yeah well, when you do thing's like that...
Callumn: Please, let's just pretend it didn't happen...yeah?
Callumn looks at Michelle, reluctantly she forgives him, he kisses her. She looks at his hands, dirty with mud.
Michelle: Why are your hands all muddy?
Callumn: Were...erm...it's the flowers aint it? Had to pick them myself...no shops open this time of the morning...
Michelle: Ah, bless you, I best put them in water...
Michelle gets up and heads into the kitchen.
Michelle: Oh by the way, have you seen mom?
Callumn: Yeah, she had words with me...
Michelle: Oh no, not again! I told her not to...
Callumn: It doesn't matter...just more of the rubbish about how I've corrupted you and turned her against you...she actually looked pretty riled up, you two had a falling out?
Michelle: Yeah, I told her that if she went off at you I'd never speak to her again...
Callumn: Yeah well last thing she said was "stuff her", she was heading ogg to the coach station, so she's probably back in Exeter by now...
Michelle: Oh well, maybe it's for the best...what's important is you and me...
Callumn: Course it is, let's show her how wrong she is...
Callumn grabs Michelle and kisses her on the lips, she walks off happy, Calumn is relieved that she fell for his web of lies...
Hilary and Craig are so behind the hit and run, because Hilary has been rumbled with trying to drug Richard she is trying to get him locked up, what a bitch.Quote:
Originally Posted by bakedbean
EXT. BAYMOORE BEACH - DAY
Tom is sitting on the beach. He is watching the waves with tears in his eyes. Emma comes up to Tom and sits by him.
Emma: Are you ok?
Tom: No...no i'm not ok..
Tom bursts into tears. Emma puts her arm around him and gives him a comforting hug.
Tom: I've lost all my mates Emma, i've lost them all forever, and it's because of my bleedin' gambling addiction!
Emma: I told you not to gamble Tom, i knew you'd regret it..
Tom: I know, and i wish listened to you! You were making sense, but i ignored you Emma, i thought what i was doing was ok, and nothing would go wrong..but it did, i lost, i kept losing, and it resulted in losing the house! There's nothing i can do about it now! Chris and Romeo hate me for what i've done!
Emma: Hate is a strong word Tom..i doubt they do hate you..
Tom: Well as good as! If only there was a way i could make it up to them, show to them both how truly sorry i am..
Emma thinks for a moment.
Emma: Actually, i think i have the answer..i think i know how you can make it up to them..
INT. TORBAY HOSPITAL - NIGHT
Val is still keeping a bedside vigil for James. James is lying motionless in the hospital bed, with machines attached to him.
Val: So when your out of here, it won't be long until your retiring, we can get away from Devon, buy a holiday home maybe, somewhere to go to relax, the girls'll be moving out soon and leading their own lives...so we can spend our time with each other dearly, we can enjoy our retirement without no hassle. Maybe go on a cruise, get away from it all..how do you fancy it love?
Suddenly James' machine beeps continuously. James has stopped breathing. Val cries out to the doctor.
Val: Oh my god! Somebody help! Somebody help now!
Doctors come rushing in.
Doctor: Do you mind if you step back Mrs Andrews?
Val: No..i want to be here with my husband!
The doctors start resuscitating James.
Val: Come on James, i need you! I can't live without you love! I don't want you to die, i need you, i won't be able to live without you! Please James...come back to me..i don't want you to die! :(
The doctors keep resuscitating James, trying their best to save his life, but they fail.
Doctor: I'm so sorry Mrs Andrews...your husband is dead..
Val looks at the doctor, her face is as pale as sheet. Tears roll down her eyes and she breaks down on James' bedside, devastated. She kisses James one final time and strokes his head.
Val: I hope you've gone to a good place..i'll love you forever and ever James...forever and always! :(
INT. BAYMOORE ARCADE UPSTAIRS FLAT - DAY
Tom and Emma walk into the flat, the curtains are drawn, the room in total darkness. Emma walks across the room and opens the curtains, the room looks shabby and empty.
Emma: A lick of paint and this place will be fab...
Tom: I can't thank you enough babe for this...
Emma: Yeah well it's not like I wanted to go uni and travel the word anyways is it...
Tom: Yeah but I doubt you nan intended you to buy some shabby little flat above a games arcade does she?
Emma: She wanted me to be happy, with the man I love...
Tom holds Emma, and kisses her tenderly.
Tom: I'll pay it back, in monthly installments...
Emma: Don't worry about it...honestly...
Emma begins picking up the rubbish and puts it into a black bin bag.
Emma: Now let's get to work on this place, and then we can show it the boys :D
INT. TORBAY HOSPITAL - NIGHT
Val is outside in the coridoor, looking on as the doctors cover James body. Tears rolls down her face. Claire comes over to her.
Claire: Mom...
Val: Leave me alone...
Claire: Mom, please don't shut me out like this...
Val: He's gone Claire, and he's not coming back...
Claire: I know, and we've got to stick together, now more than ever, it's what dad would have wanted...
Val: How the hell do you know what he'd have wanted!? You weren't married to him for over 20 years!
Claire: It's not my fault he's dead mom, so don't take it out on me okay!?
Val: No, but I know whose fault it is, Craig Harvey's!
Claire: You what!?
Val: One minute he's threating your dad and now this!? It's about time some one showed him that he can't get away with the things he does!
Val storms past Claire, speeding out of the hospital. Claire looks concerned, worried for what her mother will do...
NO James can't be dead. Now poor Richard's going to be charge with murder and its all Craig's fault.
EXT. OUTSIDE THE ADOPTION AGENCY- DAY
Patrick and Amy are walking away from the adoption agency. Amy suddenly pulls out an address book from her handbag.
Patrick: What's that?
Amy: Nothing...
Patrick pulls the address book out of Amy's hands and looks at the page that Amy turned too. It has a girl's address written inside.
Patrick: Amy! Where did you get this from?!
Amy: I just got it from the adoption agency that's all...
Patrick: You stole details from the adoption agency!
Amy: Look relax...
Patrick: This is ludicrous! Not to mention illegal...
Amy: Look Patrick, i've come up with this idea, i can't afford to wait around to get a child, so i thought i'd use my initiative and get this address book, and see this woman myself..see if we can come to some kind of arrangement, without getting the agency involved..
Patrick: But you've stolen the details from the agency, maybe this girl doesn't want you dragging up the issue, hence why she went to an agency!
Amy: Look, i just got the address because i want a word with her, nothing else..it's not like i'm gonna force her to agree to anything, if she says no to my offer then fair enough, but there's no harm in trying is there?!
Amy looks at Patrick determined, but Patrick looks on, unsure over Amy's plans.
INT. HARVEY'S MOTORS- DAY
Val storms into Craig's garage, tears are rolling down her eyes. She starts screaming at Craig who is doing paperwork.
Val: You *******! You've killed my husband! :angry:
Craig: You what?!
Val: My James is dead! And it's because of you!
Craig: I swear, i had nothing to do with it, James got killed in a hit and run..
Val: Yeah and you were behind the wheel! You wanted James dead, you had a motive! It was you! You need to be taught a lesson Harvey, you can't go round getting away with everything! :angry:
Craig: I swear to you, i wasn't involved in James's death...i issued him with a few threats, told him to stay away, mind his own bloody business but i didn't murder him!
Val: Oh no...you didn't murder him did you!? You got one of your heavies to do your dirty work! :rolleyes: Your not gonna get away with this Craig! You killed my husband, and i'm gonna prove it!
Craig: You can't pin anything on me because i didn't do it!
Val: You'll get your commeupance Craig...one day..
Val leaves Craig's garage in tears. Craig looks distressed at the suggestion, clearly he wasn't involved. He gets his phone out and dials in a number.
Craig: Yep mate, i need you to do me a favour...check your databse, I've got a registration number that I need you to trace...
INTERCUT:
(FLASHBACK) EXT. BAYMOORE STREETS - NIGHT
Flashback to the time that James is run over. Craig is sitting in his BMW, looking on in the distance to the entrance of the alleyway.
He sees James running out, and within a split second a car speeds by and sends James flying onto the pavement. Craig looks on in shock at the scene infront of him, clearly things haven't gone to plan.
He quickly takes a picture of the Car's registration number before it speeds off. He stares at James body in the distance, and quickly speeds off, to clear the scene. It is clear that Craig had no invovlment in the hit and run...
Oh my gosh i am in total shock but i still dont believe it was Richard behined the wheel it must be something to do with Hilary???
EXT. LYNNE'S HOUSE - DAY
Patrick and Amy are walking towards Lynne's house.
Amy: This is the one...looks like a really nice area...
The pair head up the garden path.
Patrick: I swear you've lost the plot doing this Amy, you're crazy woman!
Amy: Yeah well thats what 12 years of marraige does to you...
Patrick: I'm gonna make sure this "Lynne" knows that I had no part in this crazy idea...
Amy: You're here with me aint you? That's as good as being involved...
Patrick: Like I had a choice!
Amy knocks on the front door. The pair stand in silence, Amy casts Patrick a disaproving look.
Patrick: What's that for!?
The front door opens and Lynne, a woman in her late teens/early twenties opens the door.
Lynne: Hello? If it's double glazing we had the front and back done the other month...
Amy: Erm we're not here to sell anything, you are Lynne aren't you?
Lynne: (Cautious) Yes, why?
Amy: It's a bit awkward actually...erm...well we saw you're name at the adoption agency and we thought we'd come and speak to you...
Lynne: I don't understand...
Amy: Look do you mind if we come in and explain?
Lynne: (Apprehensive) Ok then, come on in...
Amy: (Enthusiastic) Thank you so much!
Amy and Patrick walk through the door. Patrick casts Lynne an apologitic look as they head into the house...
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - NIGHT
The pub is in a down mood, with the news of James' death. There is slight chatter, but everyone has sad looks on their faces. Claire comes into the pub, a worried look on her face.
Vicky: Claire hun, I'm so sorry to hear about your dad...
Claire: Yeah, look have you seen my mom?
Vicky: Not recently no, is everything okay?
Claire: She's blaming it all on Craig, and she said she was going to have a word...
Vicky: Oh god, do you think she's okay?
Claire: I don't know, that's what I'm worried about...
The pub falls into sudden silence as Val walks into the pub, she has a look of rage on her face, she is shaking with anger.
Claire: Mom, what's up?
Val whipes the running mascara from her eyes, and casts each and every person a look of pure venom.
Val: Craig wasn't responsible...which means someone in here ran my James over! Come on then! Who did it eh!? What pathetic coward ran my James over and then didn't even have the decency to stop and see if he was alright!?
Claire: Mom, don't do this...
Val: No Claire! Someone in here did this! And I want to know who!
Vicky: I think you'd best listen to Claire Val, go home and sleep on it...
Val: Sleep on!? My husband is dead, how can I sleep with that running around in my head!? I swear to god, when I find out who did this to my James, I'm gonna kill ya! D'ya hear me!? I'll bloody kill ya!
Claire grabs hold of Val's arm, but Val shakes her off and storms off by herself, Claire running after her. Muffled conversations begin to take place between people. A close up of Richard who is suddenly looking very guilty, realising he could well have ran James over...
Amy's lost the plot. And Craig's in the clear from killing James my eye he is.
:crying: James is gone.. I can't believe it.. I still don't think richard did it on purpose.. Hilary and jared is behind this.. How can Callum be so callous.. poor Shell when she finds out about her mum
Cheer Bry and Davey... you have me sitting here crying... had to run out and dry my eye before anyone at work saw.. brilliant piece of writing!!!
INT. JENKINS MANOR- NIGHT
Richard is leaning on his mantlepiece, sipping a glass of expensive wine. Hilary comes in.
Hilary: My god Richard...it's only just gone morning and your starting on a bottle of wine!
Richard: I have good reason too...i think i've done something Hilary, something awful...
Hilary approaches Richard curiously.
Hilary: Like what?
Richard refuses to say anything. Hilary folds her arms in dissaproval.
Hilary: I know there's something wrong Richard...you've been acting off since you got back from the Red Rum...now, what is it? Just spit it out!
Richard: I think i might have killed James Andrews!
Hilary: You what!? You can't be serious!
Richard: Perfectly serious Hilary..i've been so stupid, so silly! I was drinking for christ sake! I woke up at a service station with a bottle of drink next too me, i can't remember what happened..i must have killed James! I must have hit and ran him!
Hilary: Dear god Richard! What the hell have you done!? Why were you drinking behind the wheel?!
Richard: Since i've started losing my memory Hilary, i've felt depressed...i mean let's face it, this is the start of me getting old, becoming forgetful, i just needed something to drown my sorrows so i've turned to drink!
Hilary: You stupid, stupid man! I know you starting to lose your memory has been hard, but you've got to face up to it love, your getting old..your not getting any younger..
Richard: I know...i know..
Hilary: So what are you going to do now?
Richard: I feel so guilty Hilary...really guilty...i mean i've killed 2 people...first Siobhan, now James...
Hilary: Siobhan was different Richard...she was a deranged psycho, she was gonna kill us all if you hadn't done anything! There was no other way to get rid of her...
Richard: But i still killed her! And James was an innocent man, a Baymoore resident for so many years and i snatched his life away from him...i feel so guilty Hilary...
Richard starts crying into his hands. Hilary gives Richard a hug.
INT. LYNNE'S HOUSE- NIGHT
Amy and Patrick enter Lynne's living room. Lynne gestures for Amy and Patrick to sit down.
Lynne: So what is this about?
Amy: Well, you see, we got your address from the adoption agency, and well, me and my husband have been desperate for a baby for a long time now, it's the only thing we've ever wanted! And we saw you were on the adoption agency, and thought we'd pay you a visit...we could always adopt your baby...
Lynne: Look i've left it with the agency to pick the most suitable parents for my child, it's the least I owe to my baby!
Amy: Please! I'm begging you! Me and my husband want a baby more than anything! I can't have my own kids, this is my only chance for a child!
Lynne: I'm sorry, but I'm going to do this officially, whoever the agency decides are the most suitable parents for my baby, then that's who my baby will go too.
Amy: What is it to you who the baby goes too?! If you cared, you would never have put it up for adoption in the first place!
Lynne shouts at Amy, hurt by her words.
Lynne: Just get out! Get out of my house!
Amy: I'm sorry...i didn't mean what i just said...
Lynne: Get out!
Patrick: Come on Amy, let's just go...
Amy and Patrick leave Lynne's living room and leave through the front door. Lynne slams the door on them both. We see Amy, who has a paniced look on her face.
Posting on Bry's behalf:
INT. HARVEY’S MOTORS – DAY
Craig is working on a car, when Tanya walks into the garage.
Craig: Tanya, what a pleasant surprise…
Tanya: I’m not here for small talk, I’ve just come to collect Simon’s car…
Craig: How come he cant collect it himself?
Tanya: I don’t think that’s wise given the circumstances, do you?
Craig: What do you mean? :p
Tanya: I suppose you think it’s funny don’t you? What you’ve done to poor Charlie!
Craig: Poor Charlie!? She’s no angel, she’s the one that asked for the drugs!
Tanya: But you didn’t have to sell them to her! Honestly! I thought even you might have some morals…
Craig: Morals are what separate the do gooders from the thilthy rich, it’s about supply and demand, Charlie wanted it, so she got it…
Tanya tries to hit Craig but he reacts fast and grabs her arm.
Craig: I’m getting a slight feeling of déjÃ* vu here Tanya, you really need to learn to control that feisty little temper of yours!
Tanya: Just give me the keys!
Craig grabs the keys and throws them onto the floor.
Craig: Get on your knees and pick them up…like a dog…
Tanya: Piss off Craig!
Craig: Well if you want the car back…
Tanya bends down and picks up the keys, she gives Craig a look of total disgust.
Tanya: You *******!
Tanya gets up and spits in his face, she then turns and leaves the garage, her blood boiling. On her way out she bumps into Jon.
Jon: Tanya, what’s up?
Tanya: Oh it’s him! He deserves to be shot!
Jon: Come on, let me take you for a drink to settle your nerves, you can tell me all about it…
Tanya: No offence but I hardly know you, why would I tell you anything?
Jon: It’s an age old saying Tanya, your enemies enemy is your friend, now come on, the first round’s on me…
Tanya and Jon head off towards the Red Rum, Jon has a huge grin on his face.
Posting on Bry's behalf:
INT. JARED ASHWORTH’S OFFICE – DAY
Jared is sat in his minimalist office, overlooking Torbay harbour, he is reading through some documents when Hilary walks into the room with a grin from ear to ear.
Jared: Hilary, what a pleasant surprise, have we got a lunch date?
Hilary: No, I just thought I’d come and tell you some amazing news…
Jared: Oh yeah?
Hilary: It’s about Richard…
Jared: Don’t keep me in suspense, what is it?
Hilary: He’s only blooming confessed to me that he might have killed James Andrews…
Jared: What do you mean ‘might have’?
Hilary: Well he woke up flat out at the wheel, he has no idea what he’d done that night…the same night James was hit down by a car!
Jared: Two mere coincidences…
Hilary: He doesn’t seem to think so, all we need is one call to crime stoppers and bobs your uncle…
Jared: Or better still, you need to convince him that he did do it, so as he confesses it to the police, then they don’t even need to find evidence…
Hilary: Oh my god! That’s amazing! Why didn’t I think of that?
Jared: Because you’re not cold and calculated enough :p
Hilary: Oh I can be when I want to…and whilst he’s behind bars I can do a runner with his money….
Jared: We all win then…sounds like a done deal, let’s got out the champagne to celebrate…
Jared heads over to his minibar and gets out a bottle of champagne, he opens it and pours him and Hilary a glass. They have huge grins on their faces as they chink their glasses.
Both: Cheers :D
Oh oh!! I think Jared killed James.. he was talking about richard confessing and not have to looking for evidence.. Poor Richard!!
INT. RED RUM- DAY
Romeo and Chris are sat at a booth in the Red Rum having a drink. Emma comes in and sits next to the pair.
Romeo: Emma...what was the call about?
Emma: Well i just wanted to get you both together..
Chris: What for?
Tom suddenly walks into the Red Rum. Chris and Romeo see this and look on with disgust.
Romeo: Oh no! We're not gonna start talking to him if that's what your thinking!
Tom comes over to Romeo and Chris.
Tom: Look guys, please..just hear me out..
Chris: You've got 1 minute...then we'll stop listening to you! :rolleyes:
Tom: I've got a surprise for you both..
Chris and Romeo look at each other, they're both intrigued.
INT. RED RUM- DAY
Tanya and Jon are sat at a booth talking, while drinking their drinks.
Tanya: So I take it that Craig isn't on your Christmas Card list either?
Jon: You could say that...he's a nasty piece of work..Craig needs to be pulled down a peg or two! Anyway, what have you got against him? I take it he's done something awful to you as well?!
Tanya: He's ruined my life Jon, i don't have any proof but, well if i did, i'd make sure he'd get his commeupance!
Jon: What happened?
Tanya: He was responsible for the murder of my husband and my twins...he's ruined my life and i'd love to see him pay, along with my witch of a mother-in law!
Jon: Jesus Christ! I'm so sorry...you must have felt awful when you learnt what happened..
Tanya: I've never got over it properly...i don't think i ever will...he ruined my life Jon, at one point, i didn't even think it was worth living! He snatched the people who i loved most in this world...
Jon: He will pay eventually Tanya, i can guarantee that too you now!
Tanya: The sooner, the better because he can't carry on like this! I mean, he hasn't just ruined my life, it's Mandy's life he's ruined too...the murder of her mother, Margaret...she was sure that he was responsible...but Carl went down for the murder, and I bet the whole of Baymoore know that Craig was responsible for Margaret's death somewhere along the line! He always thought she was a moany old bag who couldn't keep her nose out of anything!
Jon looks at Tanya in complete shock.
Tanya: What's wrong? I haven't said anything out of tone have I?!
Jon: Mandy...she never told me about her mother...
Jon storms out of the Red Rum without saying goodbye to Tanya. Tanya watches Jon leave, puzzled by his sudden departure.
INT. BAYMOORE ARCADE UPSTAIRS FLAT - DAY
Tom opens the door, Romeo and Chris follow in after him.
Romeo: What you brought us here for then?
Tom: Emma's brought the place, we've spent the whole weekend doing it up...
Chris looks around, impressed by the decor and furniture
Chris: Sweet pad Tom, this must have set you back a bit...
Tom: Yeah, well as I say Emma's money, not mine...
Romeo: Look, what's the point of this eh? To rub it into our faces that you have a place and we dont? :rolleyes:
Tom: Look, about that...
Romeo: Here we go, the crooks of the argument...
Tom: Mate I'm sorry for what I did okay!? Dya think I haven't suffered? What I did was bloody stupid, but I want to make it up to you both... I want you to move in...
Chris: You what!?
Tom: That's if you want to...
Chris: Yeah! This place is mint man! Count me in! :D
Tom detects that Romeo isn't as enthuasiastic...
Tom: Romeo? I know it's not a patch on the house...but if we want to live with Bachelors this place is gonna be more like it...just like the guys off friends, what dya say?
Romeo: I suppose so...
Tom: Thanks Romeo! It means so much! :D
Romeo: Yeah well, I suppose we all make mistakes from time to time...
Chris: But the main thing is Tom has got us this place! I think a celbration is in order! You got any cans mate?
Tom: Of course! :D
Chris gets some cans out of the fridge and throws them to Romeo and Tom.
Tom: Well here's to the new bachelor pad then :D
The three of them open their cans, and chink them together - Bachelor Boys reunited.
INT. BAYMOORE B&B - DAY
Jon enters the B&B, in a mood, he slams the door shut behind him. Mandy walks into the hallway, startled by the door slamming. She notices he is in a mad mood.
Mandy: Jon? What's up?
Jon: Just been told something rather intresting...
Mandy: What?
Jon: About your mother...
Mandy: What about her?
Jon: Why didn't you tell me that she was murdered!?
Mandy: It has nothing to do with you, that's why!
Jon: Did Craig kill her!?
Mandy: I don't know!
Jon: What do you mean you don't know!?
Mandy: Yes! Probably! I don't know! Does it matter!? It's not going to bring mom back...
Jon: I can't believe you didn't think to tell me this...
Mandy: Just leave it Jon, it has nothing to do with you...
Jon: I've heard too much bad **** about that man recently, I'm gonna have a word with...
Mandy: For god's sake Jon, can't you just leave it?
Jon: He can't get away with doing all of this stuff to people!
Jon leaves the room, Mandy follows him, trying to convince him not to go.
Mandy: Jon, don't!
Jon leaves the house, slamming the door behind him.
Mandy: Jon! :angry:
uh oh!! what is jon going to do with Craig!! I can't wait for that.. So glad the boys are back together!! nice one tom!!
Blimey Jon is doing a lot of slamming doors and storming out lol
EXT. CAR PARK- DAY
Lynne is leaving her workplace and is starting to walk home. Amy is standing by Lynne's workplace and sees Lynne leave. Amy gets up and runs towards Lynne who is walking through the car park. Lynne turns and sees Amy.
Lynne: Jesus Christ! Are you stalking me or something!? I made it clear to you the other day when you came round my house uninvited..
Amy: Look please Lynne, hear me out...
Lynne: Just leave me alone you psycho! I can do without the stress, it's not good for me or the baby!
Amy: All i ask is to talk to you for five minutes..just hear me out, then i'll leave you alone, i promise.
Lynne looks at a desperate Amy.
Lynne: Fine, five minutes, then i expect you to leave me alone..
INT. HARVEY'S MOTORS- DAY
Jon storms into Craig's garage. Craig looks at him and speaks sarcastically.
Craig: Well..well...what do you want? Do you need your car fixed?
Jon: Don't play games with me Craig...you need to be taken down a peg or two...
Craig laughs at Jon's comment.
Craig: Deary me Jon...you should take up a job as a comedian..
Jon: I'm being serious, i know what a nasty piece of work you are and your gonna pay Craig, your really going to pay..
Craig: Oh i'm shaking in my boots! :rolleyes:
Jon: I know what happened with Margaret, Mandy's mother...you killed her didn't you?!
Craig: Margaret...Carl's gone down for her murder, it wasn't me...i adored Mandy's mother..
Jon: It's not just Margaret though...there's Charlie, Jessica, Jacob, Gary, Ed...all these lives you've killed or ruined!
Craig: What can i say....it's just part of the job..
Jon: It's gangsters like you that gives gangsters a bad name! You'll pay Craig Harvey, you'll pay...
Jon leaves Craig's garage. He gets his phone out and dials a number.
Jon: Yep, i've got someone that needs dealing with..
EXT. LOCAL PARK - DAY
Lynne and Amy are strolling along the local park from Lynne's work.
Amy: We've been trying for years, we just kept saying "maybe next month" but after a while we know what was wrong, Patrick refused to accept that anything could be wrong, probably too scared that it might have been his sperm...
Lynne: And was it?
Amy: No it's me...when they told me, it was like someone had creeped inside me and torn my heart out, it's all I've wanted...all I've ever dreamt of...
Lynne: Look no offence Amy, you and your husband seem nice people...but it doesn't seem fair to do this...hearing your case, I want to give all the parents an equal chance...
Amy: I can understand that but surely you can see how much me and Patrick want...need a baby...
Lynne: And so do all the other parents that want to adopt my baby...the adoption agency will know whose the most worthy...
Amy: Yeah, but will the adoption agency pay you to hand over the baby? I don't think so... come on Lynne, I can set you up for life, you name the price...
Lynne: I'm sorry Amy, it's not right.
Amy: But...
Lynne: I'm sorry, but no...now leave me alone...
Lynne walks off, leaving Amy alone devastated.
INT/EXT. HARVEY'S MOTORS - NIGHT
Craig leaves the office and heads out of the gargae, turning off the lights behind him. He steps outside and begins to lock the doors.
Out of the shadows appear 4 middle aged men, well built, dressed in black.
As Craig puts away the keys he turns and jumps at the site of them.
Craig: Who the bleeding hell are you?
Heavy: We're friends of Mr Kerrigan, he's asked us to give you a message...
Craig: I take it it's not a verbal message?
The heavies advance towards him, Craig steps backwards, looking scared.
Craig: Look how much is Kerrigan paying you eh? Whatever it is I'll double it...
Heavy: You don't get away with it that easily...
Craig: (Nervous) Get away with what!
The lead heavy propells a heavy punch into Craig's stomach, winding him, Craig falls on the floor in pain. The others heavies charge at him, violently kicking and punching him.
Heavy: He's told me to tell you to clean up your act or else...
Craig: Or else what!?
Heavy: Or else it'll be a gun barallel you're facing rather than my foot!
The heavy deals him one final kick to his groin. Craig screams out in pain. The heavies step away from Craig, who is rolling around the floor, groaning in pain.
Heavy: Come on lads, I think he's got the message...
The heavies get into a range rover and speed off, leaving Craig on the floor badly beaten...
Yes finally craig has got what he deserves however i still dont think that this is over and i dont think Craig scares easily! But what will he do???
go the heavies!!! maybe a gang war with follow!!!
INT. RED RUM- NIGHT
Patrick has just closed the Red Rum. He is picking up some of the remaining glasses at the booths, when Amy comes in through the back room.
Amy: Hi babe...
Patrick: Amy! Where have you been!?
Amy: Talking to Lynne..
Patrick: For goodness sake Amy! If you carry on harrassing that woman, she'll have you reported to the police!
Amy: I just wanted to talk to her...i was just wondering if she wanted to agree to my deal, about letting us adopt her baby from outside the agency, but she's having none of it! She wants to do it by the book..
Patrick: And let it be that way! The poor girl just wants to hand her baby over to some suitable parents, not have some hormonal maniac stalking her!
Amy: Thanks for the support love! :rolleyes: I sometimes wonder if you actually want a baby!
Patrick: Of course i want a baby with you Ams...your just going about it the wrong way that's all...
Amy walks over to Patrick. Patrick hugs her.
INT. HARVEY'S HOUSE- NIGHT
Craig staggers home after being beaten up by Jon's heavies. Leah opens the front door to Craig and looks at Craig, shocked.
Leah: Oh my god! What's happened?! :eek:
Craig: Just let me in please...
Leah lets Craig in and shuts the front door.
Leah: Oh my god! It looks like you've been badly beaten...are you ok?
Craig: Look i'm fine..
Leah: Who did this to you?!
Craig: It was just a gang of yobs, nothing to worry about, all i want to do is sit down and relax ok?!
Leah: No it's not ok! I need to get you to hospital, you look awful...you need to be looked at, you've been really badly beaten Craig! I need to get you to hospital so the doctors can check you over..
Craig: I'm a grown man Leah...i'll survive, there really is no need to fuss!
Leah: Look let me help you walk into the living room atleast..
Leah is about to touch Craig, but he flinches, he's edgy. Leah looks at Craig seriously.
Leah: This wasn't yobs was it?! It was Jon...wasn't it?! Jon did this to you!
Craig: So what?! Maybe he did! Just stay out of it ok!?
Craig staggers into the living room to sit down. Leah looks on, deeply concerned.