Ooooo, Patrick you dirty dawg!!! Fantastic stuff Abi - brilliant.
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Ooooo, Patrick you dirty dawg!!! Fantastic stuff Abi - brilliant.
EXT: Red Rum Pub
Amy is carrying a bag out of the pub. Patrick is outside, standing next to a cab….
Patrick: (goes over to Amy) here, let me take that…
Amy: Thanks babe. I dunno why its so heavy, its not like I’ll be gone for ages….
Patrick lifts the bag into the boot, and Val comes up behind him.
Val: You can take this too…
Patrick: Val. great to see you…. :rolleyes:
Cab driver: Are we goin or what? I can’t stick around forever.
Amy: (to Val) we should go.
Patrick: (shuts boot) have a great time babe (kisses Amy on the cheek)
Val: Make sure you don’t overwork yourself…
Patrick: Course not!
Val and Amy both get into the cab, and drive off. Patrick waves them off, then smilies and walks back into the pub.
Baymoore Beach
Andonis are Emma are sitting on the beach front. Andonis has his arm around Emma, and her head is resting on his shoulder
Andonis: this is great, you know
Emma: Sure is. Its been so long since I can just relax with a boyfriend…
Andonis: And is that what you want?
Emma: course it is. Lets just…take it slow, yeah?
Andonis: If you’re sure that’s how you want to play it…
Emma: (laughs) lets just see how it goes….
EXT: Harveys Motors
Craig is standing outside the garage, obviously waiting for someone to arrive. Kal walks towards the garage, and is ushered inside by Craig
Craig: So what is it you wanted?
Kal: now, now. All good things come to those that wait.
Craig: (looks outsde) Just spit it out.
Kal: (moves closer To craig, and quietens down to almost a whisper) Tomorrow. I’ve got some more coming tomorrow.
Craig: drugs?
Kal: (almost angry that Craig said it) Course its that!
Craig: good. Anything else?
Kal: Theres a rumour about. About a brothel in Exeter, that’s up for sale.
Craig: I see…..(thinks)….That’s just a rumour though?
Kal: Yeah, but my source is reliable. He’s not the type of person that would spread gossip, if you get my drift.
Craig: Ok…Well you know the drill. Get the details, and come back to me.
Kal: So your interested?
Craig: Course I’m interested! Get the details, meet me here, same time tomorrow
Kal: (Puts hand out) Good doing business with you.
Craig looks at his hand, and then back at Kal. He then sarcastically ignores him, and walks off.
wow good part abi wonder what mandy will do if she finds out.
INT. JENKINS MANOR - DAY
Shania Twain's song "Kaching" plays over a montage of Hilary on various internet shopping sites buying clothes, jewelerry and designer handbags. She is using Richard's credit card.
The montage stops with Hilary on ebay bidding for a diamond necklace...she has just lost out on a bid.
Hilary: Damn it! As if boobtube2002 would appreciate the quality of that!
The infamous sound of Tanyas heels on the pine floor can be heard. Hilary turns around and sees Tanya standing in the doorway, arms folded.
Hilary: Taannyaaa. You know you really must find a hobbie, as it seems like your spending an unhealthy amount of time spying on me...
Tanya: If it gets you out of this place then ill do it for a lifetime...
Hilary: If you spent half the amount of hatred you have for me into loving your kids, youd be mother of the year 2006.
Tanya: Dont you dare bring my kids into this...
Hilary: Tanya i really cant be bothered to have an argument with a little brat whos scared she wont get all of daddy's attention...now just leave me alone...
Tanya stares at Hilary, then she looks at the computer screen...
Tanya: Ebay!? I thought you hadn't got any money?
Hilary: Where theres a will theres a way...
Tanya grabs Richard's credit card from Hilary's hand, Hilary tries to grab it back.
Tanya: Well well well, what have we hear? Does dad who youve been having a mini shopping spree courtsey of his Mastercard?
Hilary: Its none of your buinsess...
Tanya: Your bleeding my dad dry! Of course its my buisness...
Hilary: Tanya i advise you shut up and give me that card back...because if you tell Richard about this...you WILL regret it...
Tanya: Thats a risk im willing to take...
Tanya walks off holding the credit card, a satisfied smile on her face.
dont leave it there i want more more more
Ohh it looks like Tanya may have won i hope not lol
This is getting better and better guys - well done both of you :cheer:
Patrick, Hope he gets caught by his manhood. What is tom playing at with Caroline. Tanya is going to get burnt, I can feel it coming
Well done Bry and Abi.. still loving this
INT. BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE - NIGHT
Tom and Chris are sitting next to each other on the sofa, Claire is also sititng down trying to avoid Chris, who keeps on eying her up.
A nervous looking Luqina is sat in the corner filing her nails.
Claire: What's up with you? Guilty concience...
Luqina What?...Oh...er...
Tom: Just ignore her, she dont no when to stop it..
Claire: You'll find out one day, and then youll have no one to support you..
Tom: Claire just drop it! Okay?
There is an awkard silence. There is a violent knock on the door. Luqina jumps out of her feet and rushes towards the door.
Luqina: I'll get it..
Luqina opens the door, Kal charges trough, Luqina tries to close the door on him but he smashes it open, bagning it against the wall, pushing Luqina to the wall, he walks into the living room, where Tom and Chris have got up to see what the comotion is.
Chris: What the hell is going on here!? Who the hell are you!?
Kal: (To Luqina) This loverboy?
A scared Luqina shakes her head.
Tom: No i am...what the hell do you think your doing charging into my house...
Kal: I thought there were a few things you'd like to know about your precious Luqina...she ent the little angel that you think she is...
Luqina: Please Kal, dont, i'll get you your money...
Tom: (To Luqina) Wha...what money?
Kal: My money...money she owes me fro drugs!
Tom is shocked by this...
Tom: Drugs?...no it cant be...
Kal: That ent half it mate...she was a full on smack head...she'd do anything for her addiction...sell herslef...i got sick of her...leaching off me... the only reason she's turned up here is to find some other loser to spounge off...
Claire: Well well, looks like the truth is finally coming out...
Luqina: Shut up Claire!
Claire: I knew you werent just some innocent little hairdresser..
Tom: Shut up Claire! We dont need you chipping in aswell!
Kal: Hairdresser? (Laughs) Is that what she told you..?...She ent no hairdresser at all...shes nothing but a dirty little slag... a model...and im not talking catalouges and catworks...im talking about x rated top shelf stuff...
Tom: (shocked) No...
Kal: Yeah thats right, Luqina is nothing but a dirty little pornstar...with a drug addiction...
Chris: God i knew id seen her somehwere before!
Luqina is now in tears, she approaches Tom...
Luqina: Look Tom...i didnt mean for it to come out like this...
Tom: SHut up! I cant believe you... (To Kal)... how much does she owe you?
Kal: Nothing now...ive got my payment...and done myself a favour to the community aswell, nice guy ent i?
Kal grins, spits his chewing gum onto the floor and walks out of the house, leaving Luqina to face the music...