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EXT. HALESOWEN STADIUM - DAY
The players are leaving the staidum and heading towards their cars. As Jamie leaves, Danielle runs over to meet him. The pair snog breifly, he pulls away a smile on his face.
Jamie: Heya sexy, what you doing here, if Charlie saw you...
Danielle: Don't worry about Dad, he's a pussy cat, he won't mind, he worships the ground you walk on...
Jamie: I doubt he'd feel the same if he knew I was sleeping with his daughter...
Danielle: Don't sweat it, I'll twist him around my little finger...
Jamie: Anyways what you doing here?
Danielle: I thought I'm come and suprise you, you played great today!
Jamie: Well I aim to please :cool:
Danielle: You can aim at me anytime babe :p Shall we go back to yours?
Jamie: No, I'm gonna take you shopping...
Danielle: What for?
Jamie: There's a party at the boss' tonight for his wife's birthday, and I'm gonna show you off to everyone.
Danielle: Are you sure your ready? It's a big step...
Jamie: Of course I am, I want the world to know you're my girl...so come on, hop in, I'm gonna spoil you rotten :D
The pair get into his car, smiles on their faces.
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INT. HALESOWEN STADIUM - DAY
Noel is alone in the changing rooms, he steps out of the showers, a towel wrapped around his waist, he begins to get changed.
We see a woman dressed in a trench coat and high heels walk into the room, she puts her hands on her hips.
Noel hears the high heels, but doesn't look up.
Noel: Can't you ****ing read? Players only you dozy bint...
Jess: I'm sure I'm allowed...
Noel looks up and sees Jess.
Noel: Jess, what are you doing here?
Jess: I'm a very peristant girl Noel, it's gonna take more than an arsey phone call to put me off...
She walks over to him and grabs his crotch through his towel.
Jess: I know you want me, so why deny it? We go well together...
Noel: You're the chairman's daughter...
Jess: And?
Noel: I don't want to loose my job Jess, no offence yeah? We should just leave it as a one night stand...
Jess: Fine, but I might show you what I came all the way here for...
The camera cuts to behind Jess, she takes off her trenchcoat to reveal a thin thong and nothing else. A smile rises on Noel's face.
Jess: Cut the bull**** Noel, who cares about dad, you want me, so come and get me...
Noel walks over to her, the pair snog as he leads her into the showers...
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Urgh i don't like Colin, he is just urgh...& Noel is just after one thing :rolleyes:
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i think colin and sean should be fined a weeks wages fighting in the changing rooms only happens in the best football clubs.
I wouldnt like to be the players when michael and charlie find out about there little girls.
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Fab stuff Bry, Colin needs to calm down or he will end up being dropped
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INT. McCAN'S HOUSE - DAY
Colin storms into the house, still dressed in his football kit. He heads over to the drinks cabinet and pours himself a drink. Faith walks into the room, looking concerned.
Faith: Colin, what's happened?
Colin: Carter! He started on me in the changing rooms!
Faith: What for!?
Colin: Becuase of the goal, he stole me goal, the ****!
Faith: What you mean is you started on him! For godsake Colin, when will you get it into your thick head that your fine! Micheal thinks your brilliant, so do the fans!
Colin: Not if Carter has his way, stealing all the limelight, knocking out all the goals, sucking up to Micheal and Charlie! At this rate he's gonna drop me!
Faith: Yeah you're right, he will at this rate! But not becuase of Carter, but becuase of you acting like a ****! Do you really think he wants a skipper with a chip on his shoulder, who picks fights with his team mates!?
Colin: I don't need you telling me what to do Faith!
Faith: If you want to keep your job then you should bloody listen to me! Someone needs to kick some *******ing sense into you! Now we've got a party to be going to, so get yourself showered and shaved!
Colin: There's no way I'm gonna be in the same room as Carter...
Faith: Yes Colin, you are! Unless you want to loose all this - the house, the cars, the money! Whether you hate him or not, infront of Micheal you've got to pretend that he's your new best friend! The sooner you get that into your head the bloody better!
Faith storms out of the room, leaving Colin to chew on what she has said.
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I agree with her someone needs to sort him out :rolleyes: love it Bry well done :D
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INT. LUKE & RACHEL'S HOUSE - DAY
Luke jogs down the stairs, dressed in a smart suit, he is doing up his cuffs, as he heads into the living room.
Luke: Come on babe, we don't want to be late! Need to keep a good impression with the boss!
Rachel: (O.S) I'll be down in a minute, just gotta put on my slap!
Luke: You don't need if, you look fit as **** without it!
Rachel: (O.S) Trust me, I have to outdo the other girls or I might aswell not go!
Luke laughs at Rachel's shallowness. He straightens his collar in the living room mirror and looks out onto the drive, at his car and Rachel's car.
Luke: What car should we take babe, mine or yours!?
Rachel:(O.S)Take mine, it goes with my dress!
Luke: Where's the keys!?
Rachel: (O.S) In my bag!
Luke walks over to the coffe table and rummages through her handbag for the keys, he ends up pulling out her bag of coke, a look of suprise on his face.
Rachel runs into the room, obviously realising she'd left her coke in the bag. Luke turns to face Rachel, clearly annoyed...
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Oohhh this could be interesting, look foward to seeing what happens now
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INT. ASTON'S HOUSE - NIGHT
The guests are beginning to arrive for Jenny's 40th. Colin and Faith walk in, she urges him to go over to Sean, but he is hesistant, she drags him over.
Faith: Hiya Sean, how are you? :D
Sean: Not too bad thanks, how about you?
Faith: I'm great thanks..Colin has something he wants to say to you...don't you babe?
Colin looks at her, unhappy, but she nudges him.
Colin: I'm sorry for acting like a ****, it's stupid of me...
Sean: Yeah well, let's just forget about it yeah?
Colin: Whatever...
Micheal walks over to the three of them, he greats Faith by kissing her on the cheak.
Micheal: Faith...looking gorgeous as ever.
He begins talking to Colin and Sean.
Micheal: It's good to see you two kissing and making up...
Colin: I wouldn't go that far boss...
Micheal: I should hope so, can do without a gay scandal hitting the tabloids :D Let's hope you two can keep your differences aside from now on.
Micheal heads off to welcome some other guests, Faith walks over to the WAGS, leaving Colin and Sean alone.
Colin: Just so you know, I hate your guts, and me being nice to you is only an act okay?
Sean: Colin there's no need for this, I'm not here to threaten you, I'm just here to do my job...
Colin: So am I. You stay out of my way, and I'll stay out of yours, okay?
Colin walks off, Sean shakes his head in disbleif at Colin's problem with him.
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:rolleyes: Colin needs to get over this problem he has with Sean, good stuff though Bry :cheer:
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I don't like Colin, i reckon he has paranoia or something :rolleyes: & what is Luke going to say about the coooke....
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Trouble in paradise i see Rachel on Coke, Colin and Sean at each others throats its brilliant.
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INT. LUKE & RACHEL'S HOUSE - DAY
Rachel runs into the room, obviously realising she'd left her coke in the bag. Luke turns to face Rachel, clearly annoyed...
Luke: What the hell is this!?
Rachel: It's coke, I'm not gonna lie to you...
Luke: Oh how noble of you! What are you playing at Rachel!? If this press found out about this it could ruin our reputation!
Rachel: I'm not stupid, I know how to control it, I never do it in public!
Luke: You shouldn't be doing it at all!
Rachel: Keep your nose out of my buisness Luke!
Luke: Forgive me for trying to protect our image!
Rachel: Stuff our image, what I do is nothing to do with you!
Luke: It is when you're living under my roof! I'm not gonna shack up with some junkie!
Rachel: What are you saying Luke!?
Luke: You ditch the drugs or I ditch you...
Rachel: I'm not gonna be given ultimatums from a jumped up premadonna like you!
Rachel grabs her car keys and storms out of the room.
Luke: Where are you going!? What about Micheal!?
Rachel: Does it look like a give a toss!?
Rachel slams the door shut, leaving Luke alone, fuming.
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Ooooh good stuff Bry wonder what will happen
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INT. ASTONS' HOUSE - NIGHT
Colin is sat at the bar in Micheal's house, drowning his sorrows. Faith is sat away from him, looking over at him. Sean comes over and talks to her.
Sean: Is your husband always a moody git like that, or is just when I'm around?
Faith: Excuse me!?
Sean: Sorry, just thought I'd ask...what ever happened to the legendary Colin McCan? I was looking forward to playing with him...
Faith: It's a pity he doesn't feel the same way about you.
Sean: What exactly is his problem with me?
Faith: He's just at the end of his career, he's worried what the future holds, and then someone like you comes along...he's obviously gonna be taken aback...
Sean: Well I hope you aren't gonna join Colin's little hate club against me...
Faith: Why would I? You haven't done anything to me...
Sean: That doesn't mean I wouldn't like to :cool:
Faith is taken aback by Sean's come on.
Faith: I'll pretend I didn't hear that...
Faith walks off, unsure how to handle the situation, Sean has a smug smile on his face.
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Thats it sean because that won't make matters with Colin worse :rolleyes:
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Uh oh im sensing a bit of trouble here :rolleyes:
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INT. MICHEAL'S HOUSE - NIGHT
Jamie is looking over at Micehal, who is laughing and joking with one of the shareholders, he casts Micheal a dirty look.
Danielle: Hey babe, you never guess what...Rachel said she's going to set me up a meeting with a modelling agency!
Jamie: Wow that's great babe, go you :D
Charlie walks over to the pair, Jamie looks a bit nervous as to what he will say.
Charlie: Well well well, what do we have here then?
Jamie: Oh boss, erm...
Charlie: Don't threat about it, you're a good lad, you just look after her, d'ya hear me?
Jamie: You don't have to worry about that, I think the world of her :D
Jamie and Danielle are overjoyed at Charlie's acceptance.
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INT. LUKE & RACHEL'S HOUSE - NIGHT
Luke is alone, sat in the darkness. Rachel comes into the living room, looking worse for wear.
Luke: Where have you been?
Rachel: Out...thinking...
Luke: You best have made the right decision, because I'm not going to put up with you and a cocaine addiction...it could damage my career, and yours...
Rachel: As long as you're career's fine...:rolleyes:
Luke: I don't want to see you smashed off your head, what if something happened to you?
Rachel: Don't pretend like you care...
Luke: Of course I care...
Rachel: You care more about you're career than me...you're only with me becuase of what I am, not who I am. Look at me, I'm 30, I'm getting old for all of this...
Luke: I'm not asking the world of you babe, I'm just trying to convince you to make the right decision...
Rachel picks up the coke and flings it into the bin. Tears roll down her eyes, Luke walks over to her and whipes away her tears.
Luke: Promise me that's the end of it...
Rachel: I promise...
Luke tenderly kisses Rachel. Their differences sorted, for the time being...
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INT. MICHEAL'S HOUSE - NIGHT
Jamie sneaks down the first floor coridoor of Micheal's house, the noise of the party downstairs distant. Jamie looks around to check that nobody's about and walks into Micheal's office.
Jamie begins nosing around the office, searching through some papers on his desk. Micheal walks into the room, Jamie turns around in shock.
Micheal: What the hell are you doing in my office?
Jamie: Dishing the dirt on you...
Micheal: How dare you. What gives you the right to go into my private space and speak to me like that!
Jamie: D'ya want to know, d'ya really want to know what gives me the right!?
Micheal: Go gon! Enlighten me!
Jamie: I'm your son!
Micheal is shocked at this announcement...
END OF EPISODE 2
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well i want expecting that !
Glad Charlie gave the seal of approval, i htink he's a nice lad. Rachel is really stroppy. s
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What :eek: Wasn't expecting that! But i'm glad Charlie gave them his approval :)
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WOW!! Thats a shock, well done Bry :cheer:
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Episode 3
INT. MICHEAL'S HOUSE - NIGHT
Jamie: D'ya want to know, d'ya really want to know what gives me the right!?
Micheal: Go gon! Enlighten me!
Jamie: I'm your son!
Micheal is shocked at this announcement, lost for words.
Jamie: Did you hear me!? I said I'm your son!
Micheal: I heard you. Go on, on your bike you stupid little boy, d'ya think I was born yesterday? You aint my son!
Micheal goes to open the door, when Jamie's anouncement stops him in his tracks.
Jamie: Stacey Neil! Ring a bell!?
Micheal is suddenly silenced by this.
Jamie: 14 she was! Babysitting your daughter for Christ's sake!
Micheal: That's all in the past...we used protection!
Jamie: How noble of you! Well it looks like it didn't work, becuase hear I am!
Micheal: I'm no fool, you and your tart of a mother have made this up! What's your game eh? Trying to fleece me out of my money or something!?
Jamie: Your unbelievable! I tell you I'm your son and the first thing you think of is money!?
Micheal: I'd have known if you were my son!
Jamie: How!? You had your way with her and never saw her again! What was it you said to her "you're good for a tickle, but nothing else!?" You ruined her life!
Micheal: She didn't have to say yes!
Jamie goes to swing for Micheal, but he catches his arm just in time, Micheal twists his arm backwards, to Jamie's discomfort.
Micheal: You wanna watch yourself Cox! Coming in here spreading your bull****, and trying to attack me! You're lucky if I dont drop you from the squad, now get the hell out of my house you little tramp!
Micheal pushes Jamie out of the door. Jamie casts him the mother of all dirty looks before walking off, infuriated by Micheal's treatment of him.
Micheal is left standing in his office, devastated by the news he has just been dealt.
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INT. MCCAN'S HOUSE - MORNING
The morning after the party. Faith is sat in the living room flicking through one of her glossy magazines. She sees an advert, with Sean dressed in only a pair of designer boxers. She rembers what he said last night and flicks over the page, feeling guilty. Colin walks into the room, holding his head in his hands.
Colin: God blimey, I've got such a stinking hang over...
Faith: I'm not suprised the amount you necked last night...
Colin: Anything to avoid chatting to him...
Faith: He's not that bad...
Colin: I'd rather stick pins in my eyes than spend any longer than necessary with him!
Faith: So much for you too getting along...
Colin: That was for Micheal's benefit, not for us...
Faith: For god sake will you just give the man a chance!?
Colin: I wouldn't trust him as far as I can throw him, and neither should you!
Faith: You telling me who to see and not to see now?
Colin: I'm saying you're either with me or against me, you decide what side you take!
Colin walks out of the room, leaving Faith iritated by his ultimatum. She turns back the page and looks at the advert of Sean...
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INT. ASTON'S HOUSE - MORNING
Sunrise. Micheal is dressed in his dressing gown, pacing the living room, trying to call Jamie.
Jamie: Heya, I can't take you call at the moment, please leave a message after the beep.
Micheal tries to think of something to say, but ends up cancelling the call. He sits down, running his hands through hair in stress. Jenny walks into the room, a concerned look on her face.
Jenny: You're up early....
Micheal: I've got a busy day ahead, couldn't get back to sleep...
Jenny: Well I'm going to go back to bed and sleep off his hangover.
Micheal: Ok babe.
Jenny kisses Micheal before heading off back to bed. Micheal's phone rings, he picks it up.
Jamie: You wanna meet? Fine. Let's meet.
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I think Faith wants Seeean!! And i have a feeling Jamie wants something from Michael ... ?!
Fab work :) x
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INT. FIVE STAR HOTEL BEDROOM - MORNING
Noel's bedroom at the hotel. Him and Jess are lying in bed together. He stirs, she is sat up looking at him.
Noel: What time is it?
Jess: Just gone nine.
Noel: I best get to training...
Jess: Oh come on, just stay here with me.
Noel: Aren't you tired yet, you've had me alone all weekend...
Jess: You can't have too much of a good thing, come on have a day off...
Noel: I already did, yesterday, anymore time off and I'll get kicked off the squad...
Jess: One word with dad, and I could work it...
Noel: That would involve him knowing about me and you...
Jess: Is that such a bad thing?
Noel: You know how I feel about it babe...
Jess: But...why not tell everyone? You are serious about me aint you?
Noel leans in for a kiss, the pair share a tender kiss.
Noel: Of course I am, just give it some more time yeah?
Noel gets up, to get changed for training, Jess is left feeling a bit disheartened.
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EXT. BANKSIDE - RIVER THAMES - DAY
Jamie is standing by the bankside, loooking out at the boats that are sailing down the river. Micheal walks up to him.
Jamie: Took your time...
Micheal: I rush for no-one, you should be thanful I'm here...
Jamie: See you haven't come to terms with it yet?
Micheal: There's nothing to come to terms with Jamie, you aren't my son...
Jamie: You slept with my mother, your name's on my birth certificate...
Micheal: Your mother was no virgin mary when I met her, and i doubt she's kept her knickers on since
Jamie You wanna shout you mouth, bad mouthing her like that or I swear I'll!...
Stacey: I'm not having you fighting my battles Jame'...I'll handle it from here...
Micheal turns around, as Stacey (Lucy Benjamin) appears. His face turns pale at the sight of her former flame...
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:eek::eek: Jamie is Micheal son.. Fantastic Bry... never saw that coming..
I can see an affair on the cards with Sean and Faith.. colin is not going to be too pleased with that
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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...boffin/mom.jpg
Stacey (Lucy Benjamin)
Jamie's mother, who slept with Micheal at the age of 14, reappears in his life, to persaude him to acknowledge Jamie as his child.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...prostitute.jpg
Marie (Kellie Shirley)
Female escort, who Noel picked up at Stringfellows nightclub, only to treat her badly and disrespect her after sex. A fiesty female who wont let men get the better of her, Noel watch your back!
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Fab stuff Bry, the stuff with Michael and Jamie is amazing, keep it up :cheer:
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EXT. LION'S TRAINING GROUND - DAY
Faith is stood by the car waiting for Colin. Some of the players begin to leave. Sean notices Faith and walks over to her.
Sean: Faith...
Faith: Sean...
Sean: Colin's had to go see Charlie, he'll be a few minutes...
Faith: Thanks, is that all?
Sean: Unless you want anything...
Faith: Incase it's slipped your attention, I'm married, so you can drop your little come ons and suggestions...
Sean: Excuse me?
Faith: Oh please, don't deny it, you knew exactly what you were saying to me last night...
Sean: Is it a crime to flirt with a beautiful woman?
Faith: It's wasted with me okay Sean!? I don't like you - end of.
Sean: You sure of that? :cool:
Faith: Look Sean...
Sean touches her arm, she pulls away immediatley.
Faith: Don't you dare touch me!
Sean: I can't help it if I'm attracted to you Faith...
Faith: Well keep it to yourself okay!? I'm not intrested...
Faith sees Colin coming out. Sean smiles to her, a confident grin on his face before leaving. Faith is left flustered as Colin comes over to meet her.
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Ohh it could be interesting if anything happens with Sean and Faith good stuff Bry
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EXT. BANKSIDE - RIVER THAMES - DAY
Jamie is sat alone on a bench in the distance. Micheal and Stacey walk along the bankside talking.
Micheal: Well I certainly didn't expect you to turn up...
Stacey: Wouldn't you have come if you'd known?
Micheal doesn't answer this.
Stacey: Look, I know it's a lot to come to terms with, but I'm not lying to you Micheal...he is your son...
Micheal: Forgive me for being reserved, but it's taken you 18 years to point this fact out!? And now I'm suddenly meant to believe you, and welcome him with open arms!?
Stacey: I've had my reasons...
Micheal: Go on, enlighten me...
Stacey: Well you were with Diane, you had the kids, I didn't want to play marraige wrecker...
Micheal: I suppose I should be thanful for that at least...
Stacey: What have to gain from telling you he's your son if it wasn't the truth!?
Micheal: I dont know...the cost of selling your story to a tabloid!?
Stacey: Don't you think I'd have done that sooner if I wanted to. I've brought that lad up on the council estates, that could have helped me out, but no...I didn't stoop that low...
Micheal raises an eyebrow, but doesnt comment.
Stacey: If you want a DNA test, do it, he's yours, I know he is...
Micheal: So if it's not for the money, why tell me about him now then?
Stacey: Becuase I'm dying Micheal...
Micheal is shocked by this sudden announcement.
Micheal: You what?
Stacey: Cancer...but he doesn't know it, please don't tell him...
Micheal: I'm so sorry...
Stacey: It's just one of those things, I'm coming to terms with it. But it's Jamie I'm worried about, I don't know how he'll come when I'm gone...he needs a father figure in his life, so I thought it was about time he knew the truth...
There is a silence, Micheal is unsure of what to say.
Stacey: Just do me one favour and be there for him Micheal...please...
Micheal: Alright then...
Stacey gives a faint smile of relief. Micheal hugs her, realising that he has to face up to his responsibilities as Jamie's father.
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INT. FIVE STAR HOTEL LOBBY - DAY
Noel walks of the lift, having just left Jess in his bedroom, he heads out of the hotel, as he does so Marie walks over to him.
Marie: Oi! Noel!
Noel sees her, but continues to walk off, choosing to ignore her.
Marie: Don't ignore me knob head, I'm talking to you!
Marie chases after Noel, annoyed at him ignoring her.
Marie: Speak to me you ignorant ******!
Noel: (Condesending) Do I know you?
Marie: You pig! You knew me enough last week when you were shagging me sensless!
Noel: I dont tend to remember faces, that's not what I'm intrested in...
Marie: You make me sick...let me fresh your mind, you slept with me then threw notes at me like some cheap whore!
Noel: Well that's what you are isn't it?
Marie looks at Noel with contempt.
Marie: You can't treat women like that!
Noel: If you wanted respect, you'd choose a better career. Get out my face you tart!
Marie: One phonecall to the papers and you'd reputation would be in shreds...
Noel: Like they're gonna believe a grubby slag like you, out my way man, I dont need this ****!
Noel pushes Marie out of the way.
Marie: You aint getting away with this! Either you give me some money or I go to the papers!
Noel: On your bike love!
Marie: I'm serious, look here's my number...call me and we'll finalise the details.
Marie hands Noel her buisness card before leaving. Noel looks at it through gritted teeth, realising she has him between a rock and a hard place...
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INT. ASTONS' HOUSE - DAY
Jenny is sat alone in the house, Micheal having been out all day with Jamie and Stacey.
She looks at her phone inbox, showing no new messages. She looks down. She gets up and looks at herself in the mirror.
Jenny: Stuff this...
Jenny puts on her jacket, and picks up her handbag, heading out of the house...
EXT. HALESOWEN TRAINING GROUND - DAY
The players are leaving the ground, and walking towards there cars. Noel seems distracted, Marie's ultiamatum buzzing through his mind.
Luke: Hey mate, gonna come for a couple of drinks at Stringfellows later?
Noel: Erm nah mate, got somewhere I need to be...
Luke: Oh ar...what's her name? :p
Noel:(Jokingly) Leave off mate...
Luke laughs as he heads of to his car. Noel gets out Marie's card from his pocket and dials her number.
Noel: Yeah, it's me... Feathers...it's in Soho, I'll see you there...
Noel puts down the phone, a look of venom on his face, what is he plotting?
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me wonders too!! I bet it is something Evil.. I don't like that Noel one bit.. Glad Micheal is going to accept Jamie.. wonder how the missus will react
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I didnt see them shocks coming, Jamie is Michaels son!