Lauren taped what Olivia was saying! :eek: Brilliant! Lauren was definetly one step ahead, i am so glad she stopped Jared making the biggest mistake of his life!
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Lauren taped what Olivia was saying! :eek: Brilliant! Lauren was definetly one step ahead, i am so glad she stopped Jared making the biggest mistake of his life!
EXT. OLDWAY MANSION - (2002)
Will is sitting in his car, rock music on at full blast. Olivia steps outside and walks towards his car. She bangs on the window but he refuses to answer. She continues to bang until he winds the window down, a look of frustration on his face.
Will: What!?
Olivia: He's ended it...
Will: Good
Olivia: Me and your father, over...
Will: Couldn't have happened to a nicer pair.
Olivia: Ok Will I'm sorry for what I said... you know I didn't mean it...
Will: Oh you meant it alright... "I wouldn't even go as far to say I liked you"... you said it less than five minutes ago!
Olivia: I've been confused Will, I never knew what I wanted... your father proposed...it seemed the right thing at the time, but it's been tearing my heart ever since...to go with him or you... I didn't want to hurt Jared...after all he's been so good to him... but it's you I love you Will...
Will doesnt respond to this.
Olivia: I said I love you Will...
Will: If you loved me you wouldnt have dumped me for my father...if you loved me you wouldn't have said the things you said...you don't know the meaning of the word..
Olivia: I do Will, you have to believe me baby... I was blinded by Jared's money..I'd never had that much in my life... but then I realised that money can't buy you what's most important...it can't buy you love...
Will: Do you know what Olivia? I don't care anymore...
Olivia's heart sinks as Will begins to reject her.
Will: I've taken about as much **** as I can from you... you're a liar and a cheat... not just to me but to my whole family...
Olivia: But Will...you love me...you said as much... and I love you!
Will: My father rejected me in there... said I'm no son of his... and that's all becuase of you... yeah Olivia I have feelings for you... but they dont even compare to that what I have for my family...you see Olivia, with me family will always come first...now please...just go away...
Olivia: (Quietly) But I love you...
As rain starts to beat down on Olivia, Winds winds the window up, she cries out.
Olivia: Will! Will! Please dont do this to me! Please!!!
Will raises the volume of his music, and cries to himself. As Olivia walks away he wipes his eyes and looks at Jared standing at the entrance to Oldway Mansion, gesturing for his son to come to him...
I am so glad Will has rejected Olivia...will she be out of the Ashworths lives for good though?! Will Will manage to forgive Jared?! I can't wait to find out how this turns out!
INT. OLDWAY MANSION - (2002)
Will walks into Oldway Mansion, dripping wet from the rain outside. Jared takes off his jacket and wraps Will in it. Lauren hugs her brother who cries in her arms.
Lauren: Don't worry Will, it's all over now.. we haven't got to see her ever again...
Will: I loved her Lauren...I loved her so much...
Lauren: She didn't deserve it Will, there's much better woman for you out there....
Will: It feels like my heart has been torn apart... I hate her for what she's done to me!
Jared: To us...don't forget she's cheated us both...today was meant to be my wedding day....
Lauren: Yeah well, thanks to us we managed to convince you...
Jared: I'm sorry I didn't listend to you sooner, she pulled the wool right over my eyes...
Lauren: It's a bit too late dad...I wont forget this in a hurry...
Jared: Look Lauren...we are strong and together becuase we are a family...there is no point arguing between ourselves...
Lauren: Never a truer word spoken dad...
Jared walks up to Will and touches him on the shoulder.
Jared: Come on son, I don't want us to fall out over this... she's in the past now, we need to concentrate on the future..okay?
Will dries away his tears and hugs his father. The camera zooms out, and the cuts to Olivia outside in the pouring rain. A black cab has just pulled up.
Driver: Miss Zitec?
Olivia: Yeah...
She stares at Will and Jared hugging each other, and whipes away her tears. She strokes her stomach.
Oliva: Looks like it's just you and me now bump...
Olivia steps into the cab, and closes the door behind her.
Driver: Where you off to darlin'?
Olivia: Anywhere... anywhere far from here...
As the Cab pulls off Olivia looks once more at the Jared and Will, the two potential fathers of her child...
END OF PART 5
Duh duh daaaaa
Glad she didn't marry Jared, but shes gonna be back for sure if the child she is carrying is one of theirs.
Brilliant stuff Bry
Olivia is bound to return if she's pregnant with Jared or Will's child...i wonder who the father is though?! Great stuff, please reveal who the father is soon. :D
OMG :eek::eek: that had everything!!! I am so glad Jared saw her for what she is.. Who is the daddy??? Will? Jared? or just another man she had hidden away??
Excellent stuff bry!!! :clap::clap:
As promised just read all of this (dont want Bry to hate me do i lol) Good writting Bry some of that was very funny, made me happier anyway
Part 6: A Bitter Revenge...
EXT. INT/ PRIVATE MENTAL INSTITUTE - DAY (2004)
Jared's luxury sports car pulls up at the entrance to what appears to be a large mansion. A well maintained house and gardens, it is actually a private mental institute for those with mental health problems and those who have been sectioned.
Jared walks trough the entrance hall and into a communal room, a mad man is being dragged into his room to be given his daily medications, Jared looks on, a sick feeling in his stomach.
A couple of residents are sitting playing a game of chess, others are sitting, talking or carlessy wondering about. In the corner an old and frail woman called Gillian (Anette Crosby) is sitting by the window, motionless and silent, staring into space, not even blinking her eyelids.
Jared stands on the spot, looking at the woman from a distance, a concerned look on his face. A nurse comes up to Jared, obviously knowing him well.
Nurse: Mr Ashworth, it's been a while since we saw you come here...
Jared: I'm a very busy man... and it's a long way to travel...
Nurse: Indeed it is...I can assure you we are looking after her well here, its the best place she can be...
Jared: How is she coping? You know on a long term scale...
Nurse: (Sighs) We've had Gillian here for what...must be about 30 years now...
Jared: (Sad) 33...
Nurse: There hasn't been many signs of improvement since... it's a sad fact to deal with Mr Ashworth... but I think she will be like this forever...
Jared: Thanks...
Jared leaves the nurse and heads towards Gillian. He takes a seat beside her and holds her hand.
Jared: Hello mom...it's me... Jared
Gillian does not respond or aknowldge Jared's prescence, she continues to stare into space. Jared is disheartened as his smile fades.
INT. UNIDENTIFIED HOSPITAL - (2003)
Olivia is in a delivery room giving birth to her baby, she is alone, bar the mid wife. Olivia is breathign heavily and pushing with all her energy.
Midwife: Come on, just one more push...
Olivia: I can't do it!!!
Midwife: You can!!! Now push!!!
She screams loudly as she exerts the final push.
INTERCUT
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - (2004)
The scene cuts to a woman orgasming at the end of sex. The woman is blonde and good looking. She has been sleeping with Will.
Will moves away from her, as they take seperate sides of the bed. The woman is happy and excited, whereas Will has no emotions on his face. She wraps herself around him, hoping for some affection.
Blonde: That was absoultely amazing...
Will closes his eyes and frowns as she touches him, he grabs her hand and moves it away from her.
Will: Get off me...
Blonde: You okay Will?
Will: I'm sorry...
Blonde: Sorry?... Sorry for what?
Will: I shouldn't have done this...
Blonde: Don't have any regrets... I sure dont...:p
Will gets up and puts on his boxer shorts.
Will: Look you're not my type...it didn't mean anything... I'm really sorry... we shouldn't have done this...
Blonde: Excuse me!?
Will: Look you have to believe me, I didn't mean to hurt you...or use you...it's just...
Blonde: You dont know what you want....
Will: Exactly...
The Blonde, offeneded gets up and puts on her underwear.
Blonde: You make me sick...think that's all us women are good for... pig!
The blonde slips on her dress, and holds her high hells in her hands, she gives Will a look of disgust and leaves the room.
Will sits down on the bed, and looks at himself trough the mirror, he looks at himself disgusted and then lowers his head in shame. He rubs his hand trough his hair in stress, and closes his eyes to avoid tears.
The sound of high hells can be heard as Lauren walks into the room, she stands beside Will, who is looking worse for wear.
Lauren: Hey bro... what's up? You look like ****...
Will: I feel like it...
Lauren: Are you okay?
Will: No... no I'm not..
Will suddenly bursts into tears. Lauren sits down beside her brother and holds him as he cries in her arms.
INT. PRIVATE MENTAL INSTITUTE (2004)
Jared is sat next to Gillian, he has a photo albumn in his hands, trying to show his mother some family photos.
Jared: This one was taken last year... we went over to the chaueat in France...
Gillian doesnt look at Jared, she continues to stare into space.
Jared: Mom are you going to look or what!?
No response. Jared grabs his mother and shakes her, she turns her head and looks at him motionless.
Jared: You recognise this people dont you mom...?
Gillian shakes her headly slightly.
Jared: You must do! It's your grandchildren mom!!
Gillian continues to shake her head, looking into Jared's eyes, bewildered.
Jared: Lauren...and Will... and me...
Jared starts to get emotional at his mother's lack of rememberance. He quickly flicks trough the pages to an old black and white photograph of a man, taken in the 1950s.
Jared: Ok then...what about this one...you know who this is... please tell me you know who this is mom!?
Gillian: ...Graham...
A slight smile of hapiness and hope appears on Jared's face.
Jared: That's right...Graham...your husband...what do you remember about him mom!?
Gillian:...I can;t... remember...
Jared: (Distressed) But he was your husband mom! You HAVE to remember him!?
Gillian shakes her head once more.
Gillian: (Confused) Who...who are you are?
Jared: (Quivering) I'm Jared.... I'm your son...
Gillian: I...don't have...a son
Jared: (Emotional) Of course you have a bloody son! I'm your bloody son!!
Gillian starts to shake in terror of Jared's anger. The nurse hears the commotion and walks towards the pair.
Nurse: I think it's best that you leave now Mr Ashworth...
Jared: She doesnt even know who I am anymore!!
Nurse: Dont take it to heart Mr Ashworth, it might just be one of her bad days...
Gillian is still shaking in fear.
Jared: My own mother...scared of me... doesn't know who I am... oh what's the point anymore!?
Jared storms off, leaving Gillian alone. Jared leaves the communal room and stops in the coridoor. Tears start to role down his eyes, he whipes them away and pulls out a peice of paper from his pocket.
The paper has the name of Hilary Blackstock on it, along with a mobile phone number. Jared dials the number and puts the phone to his ear.
Jared: Hello Hilary... it's Jared Ashworth... I think it's about time we had that meeting...
Jared fights back the tears, a look of deep seriousness on his face.
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE (2004)
Lauren and Will are seated on his bed, he is now dressed in his dressing gown, holding a glass of whiskey that Lauren has just gave him.
Lauren: Well you're the only man I know that's got depressed after wild sex with a busty blonde...
Will: She wasn't my type...
Lauren: She's every man's type...
Will: Not mine, I don't go for the easy tart usually do I...
Lauren holds back what she is thinking about Olivia.
Will: I thought that if I got out that... chatted up a bird... went with her...then something would change inside me...I'd feel better for it...
Lauren: I take it that it didn't then...
Will: I just can't get over Olivia... with all that's happened you'd think I'd hate her, but I don't... I loved her... I still do...
Lauren: She doesnt deserve your love... and you shouldnt give it her Will! There's plenty more tarts like her out there... you need to get yourself a good respectable woman...
Will: I dont want a good respectable woman, I want her...
Lauren: She was a gold digger Will, nothing more, nothing less... you deserve way more than her...I'm never gonna let a woman hurt you like that again...I promise you...
Will: It's too late Lauren... the damage is already done... everywhere i go, everything I do reminds me of her... what is the point of carrying on eh?
Lauren: You're a sucessful barrister, you could pull any woman you wanted...you have your health...good fortune...and me and dad...
Will: You know aswell as I do that me and dad havent been the same since...you know... the wedding day... I just feel so uncomfortable around him...
Lauren: I think you need a break Will, get away from here for a while...
Will: Yeah...I think you could be right... that's just what I need...
Will reflects on this, a slight smile emerging on his face.
MORE TO BE POSTED LATER
Great stuff! It's good that we're finding out about Jared's mother, Gillian. It must be so hard for him knowing that his mother doesn't even know him anymore :(
And the Ashworths are finally getting connect with the Devon Seas characters, what with Jared contacting Hilary, can't wait to read more! :)
S whats the Jared/Hilary connection?!
Powerful stuff Bry - looking forward to the next installment
Just caught up with this. Amazing stuff. So how does jared know hilary then?? And i have a feeling we'll be seeing Olivia again.... x
INT. FIVE STAR RESTAURAUNT - 2004
A piantist is playing the piano in a quality five star restauraunt. A glamarous red head is sitting down at a table, looking out over the devon clifftops. A close up shows her manicured hands holding a cigarette. She is on the phone.
Red Head: Segal darling... good to hear from you... how are you?.... oh amazing... look I shouldn't be much longer over in the UK... the funeral has been sorted and everything...
Jared Ashworth walks into the restaurant and heads towards the red head.
Red Head: Well mom had a good send off, that's the main thing... anyways I have to go... adios baby.
The Red head snaps her phone shut and places it down.
Jared: Up to your old tricks as usual I see...
Jared sits down, the camera shows the red head: Hilary Blackstock.
Jared: If memory recalls your mother died back in the 80s...
Hilary: I've been telling lies all my life, so why stop now?
Jared laughs at Hilary's joke. Hilary pours them both a glass of champagne.
Hilary: I must say it was a shock to see you call me out of the blue like this...I naturally presumed youd thrown away my number
Jared: I never get rid of a number, never know when you might need it... especially if it's the number of a woman so beautiful as yourself...
Hilary: That line worked along time ago Jared... but I know you... your not just here to flirt with me...
Jared: How observant of you...
Hilary: Well we were bed buddies for a good few years... you tend to pick up on things like that... go on... enlightn me as to why you asked me here...
Jared: Your mutual "friend"... Richard Taylor...
Hilary: (Disgusted) What about him?
Jared: I've let him get away with things for too long... thought it would be best to just leave it...
Hilary: What you mean about your father and...
Jared: It's had such an effect on us all... for so long...and to think he's out there, living his life...I want that man to suffer!
Hilary: There's a time that I'd have shared your hatred... but now...I couldnt give a damn what he did with his life...
Jared: Hilary I need you to do me a big favour...
Hilary: How big?
Jared: As big as they come...I want you to go back to Baymoore and marry Richard...
Hilary chokes on her champagne.
Hilary: Did I just hear you correctly!?
Jared: The pair of us were good together... and now we can work together...get our revenge on that scumbag, for all the heartache he's caused us both! What do you say!?
Hilary: This is pure madness! You are asking for us to rekindle our affair, and for me to remarry Richard!? Are you on drugs or something!?
Jared places his breifcase on the table and opens it, it is filled with crisp bank notes, Hilary's eyebrow raises.
Jared: And plenty more where that came from if you say yes...
Hilary: Intresting proposition...
Jared: So is that a yes then?
Hilary Well how could I possibly refuse?
Jared and Hilary toast the deal, and smile at each other seductivley
EXT. MIAMI HOTEL (2006)
"Miami" by Will Smith is playing as we see various shots of a luxury hotel in Miami. The shots show the sparkling pool, and the beautiful woman lying on deck chairs beside the pool.
Will Ashworth is dressed in a leightweight cream suit, wearing dark shades. He checks out the women as he walks by, getting some admiring looks back.
Will sits down on one of the stools at the circluar bar by the poolside. He orders a drink and stares out at the bikini babes swimming in the pool. The bartender hands Will a drink.
Will: Thanks, how much do I owe you?
Bartender: Nothing, the young lady has paid for it...
The Bartender steps to one side and gestures towards the woman sitting at the other end of the bar, she has long blonde hair, wears shades and is drinking an exotic cocktail. She gives him a breif smile and then stirs her cocktail with a stick. Will picks up his drink and sits down beside her.
Will: Do you mind if I sit down beside you?
Blonde: Be my guest...
Will: Well I can't say I've had many free drinks in my time... so I like you already :p
Blonde: I felt in the mood to buy you a drink...I've been at this bar for the past two weeks and every man I've seen has been some fat yank or a jumped up ****...
Will: I take it I'm neither of those then...
Blonde: Well your not fat...and certainly not american... and judging by that suit you have style...
Will: It's what's beneath the suit that matters...
Blonde: Apparantly so...
Will: Look I'm usually this...erm...forward...but do you want to take these drinks back up to my room?
The blonde gets up and wraps a serong around her waist.
Blonde: I was thinking the exact same thing...
Will gets up and directs her towards his room.
Will: I'm Joe Fletcher by the way...
Blonde: The names Taylor (removes sunglasses) Tanya Taylor...
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE (2006)
Jared is sitting ih his office, he lights a cigar, and takes a deep exhale. He is on the telephone.
Jared: Yes...it's well under way by now Hil... this time next week you and Richard will be married... It's like music to me hears... finally we can get our revenge... okay... i'll speak to you soon...bye...
Lauren walks into the room, carrying the newspaper.
Jared: I wish you'd stop moping around the house like a lost soul...
Lauren: I'm a lady of lesuire...no comitments... but what is a girl to do eh?
Jared: I tell you what you need, a good man in your life... give you something to take your mind off the "boredom".
Lauren: After the last one...no way... It'll be a long time before I trust a man again...
Jared: The right one is probably just around the corner...
Lauren: I suppose so... anyways I'll leave you to your buisnes...there's bound to be something on the TV...
Lauren places the newspaper on the desk, and leaves the room. Jared picks up the newspaper and turns to the buisness section. A large photo of Richard and Nick Taylor is shown, they have smiles on their faces and the accompanying article highlights their financial sucess in Devon.
Jared rips the page out of his paper and holds a lighter to the page. As the page starts to burn he drops it into his ash tray and watches as Richard and Nick burn away into ash.
Jared: You've had your time...now it's mine... it's time to pay...
END OF THICKER THAN WATER
A brilliant final episode Bry! I never thought the blonde was Tanya! And is Will someone else because he said a different name?! Is he under a false identity?! :eek: And Jared put Hilary up to marrying Richard! I can't believe it! :eek: Why does he want revenge?! Brilliant stuff, now i can't wait until Devon Seas returns next week!
So what did Richard do to Jared's father then?! And what did he originally do to Hilary?! Ooo the Tanya/Will thing will bug them all - it will be funny to see the looks on their faces when that one comes out.
Great stuff Bry - all ready for the new season of DS now! :cheer:
Just read this, great stuff, though im a tad confused but im sure ill work stuff out when it comes back properly :)
yeah I want to know the same Em.. what did Richard do to Jared's father?
Brillant stuff as usual bry.. roll on 30th September for the new DS season
Its kind of told us nothing, but told us a little bit too - talk about intriguing! How to get the viewers in!! :D :lol: Well, I'll be there for sure - just to find out that connection.....Quote:
Originally Posted by Siobhan
Thinking about it though - Hilary is one heck of a nasty one - she had the twins kidnapped (which wasn't anything to do with Jared was it?!) which resulted in their death, she's married Richard in collusion with Jared, because of something to do with Jared's father, and possibly herself too (though no clues to that either) and you/me have gone into the house and very maybe possibly shot her (though I think its me/you thats dead and Hilary is going to be fine)
Bring on the new series of DS!!!! :cheer:
NO WAY.. we can't die huns!!!! I think Emma jones stays.. and the real Siobhan Burke (hilary adopted daughter) comes back and kicks ass!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by jojomum