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sharon and dennis are avin a bebe Rach
they're aving a little bebe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry for the delay once again I'm really glad your all replying your all amazing and I love reading what you think
Jake picked up his five-month-old daughter as the two figures entered the club
Kerrie- awww Jake Moon and a baby a sight people never thought they would see
Jake- you can mock all you want you wait until Noah wants a kid
Kerrie- well if he wants one he’ll have to find some other bimbo to do it cos I certainly aint
Dennis- hello Jake
Jake- Dennis back already everything all right
Dennis- surprisingly yes your brother actually used the Hoover
Jake- I knew he was coming down with something is Sharon with you
Dennis- yeah she’s looking forward to meeting you at last
Jake- seen Chrissie yet
Dennis- that’s what I want to talk to you about
Kerrie- is dad in the office cos I’ll leave you boys to it
Jake- yeah he is
Kerrie- want me to take her
Jake- cheers
Kerrie took Lia from his arms and headed into the back office
Dennis- I saw her she seemed I don’t know not herself
Jake- she’s just tired don’t worry about it
Dennis- I will though I care about her
Jake- I know you do
Dennis- she lost Den she got you and Lia I thought things were ok
Jake- they are
Dennis- Danny said something about nightmares
Jake- well Danny should learn to keep his mouth shut Chrissie is fine I promise
Dennis- if there is something
Jake- you’ll be the first to know
Dennis- I better go see you later
He walked out
Fab!!
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that's a bit defensive Jake, but we all know she's started going mad because of Den the evil git, he's dead and he still can't leave her alone!!!! EVIL GIT EVIL GIT
If she told Jake about what happened with Den i'm sure he'd help her. I mean at first he'd be weirded out but you can tell he'd come round because he loves her and they have a little bebe and he loves her and they have a little bebe............................
great as usual! :D so sweet that dennis is worried about chrissie! :) post more soon please, cant wait to find out what happens next
This is fab stuff ! I really like it!
Chrissie amd Dennis are so sweet, post more soon
Luv ya
Layne
x x x
Fab as per usual. more more more
xxx
Ta very much for all the replies thanks a lot :cheer: :wub: :bow:
Jake decided to head over and see Chrissie to make sure she was ok taking his daughter with him
Jake arrived in the Vic the pub was quietly discussing the return of the most controversial couple ever to grace the square
Jake- Mo where’s Chrissie
Little Mo- upstairs she’s erm cleaning again
Jake- she cleaned yesterday
Little Mo- well she’s cleaning the whole flat again
Jake- thanks Mo
Jake headed up the stairs and into the kitchen where Chrissie was kneeling on the floor scrubbing out underneath the sink
Jake- baby you did that yesterday
Chrissie- I want to keep busy Jake is that such a crime
Jake- no but
Chrissie- but what
Jake- I don’t want you wearing yourself out
Chrissie- I’m not Jake I’m cleaning
Jake- you’ve cleaned this flat half a dozen times this week already talk to me Chrissie please
Chrissie- talk what about hmmm
Jake- whatever is bugging you
Chrissie- well right now the only thing bugging me is you
Jake- fine me and Lia will get out your hair and let you get on shall we
He turned and stormed out
Chrissie sighed she hadn’t meant it but right now running after Jake was the last thing on her mind
Poor Chrissie, she needs some real help. Fab babe. More more more
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aahhh poor Chrissie don't mess it up girl YOU love JAKE
JC forever n ever n ever
This is great, poor chrissie, Jake come back she didn't mean it!!!
Luving this script
Post more soon
Luv ya
Layne
x x x
She didn't mean it! More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
brill! :D jake you know she didnt mean it! :) more soon please, cant wait
Once again because of my exam tommorrow I amy not be posting until Friday so here are two more parts thanks to all my wonderful readers and repliers your all amazingly brilliant :wub: :angel: :heart:
Dennis returned to the flat and found Danny and Sharon having a cup of tea and a gossip
Danny- well he’s back and he doesn’t exactly look overjoyed
Dennis- Danny can you give us a minute
Danny- sure I need to find Jake anyway see you later
Sharon- bye
Danny left
Sharon- he seems nice
Dennis- he is on occasions I’ve just spoken to Jake about Chrissie I’m really worried
Sharon- she’s a big girl Dennis
Dennis- I know you’re mad at her over the Den thing but she meant well
Sharon- no one wants to hear that about your dad Dennis
Dennis- and you think I did
Sharon- I didn’t say that
Dennis- then why are you acting like you’re the only one affected by this
Sharon- I’m not
Dennis- listen to us even now when he’s not here he’s managing to come between us
Sharon- your right I know you are
Dennis walked over and wrapped his arms around her
Dennis- I love you
Sharon- what more than yesterday
Dennis- of course but not quite as much as tomorrow
He kissed her
Dennis- but I’m still worried about Chrissie
Sharon- just give her time to adjust yeah she’s a mum now
She kissed Dennis hard and grinned
Dennis- what
Sharon- well Danny’s out and the flat’s empty it’s just you and me
Dennis- really
Sharon- don’t act like you didn’t notice Dennis Rickman I know you and your one track mind
Dennis scooped her up in his arms and Sharon giggled as he carried her to the bedroom
Jake sat on the bench with his daughter fast asleep in his arms he stared at her pink cheeks and perfect little fingers he stroked them gently and watched her stir in her sleep he smiled his beautiful little girl just like her mum
Jake- looks like mummy is cross with me angel but we’ll make it better for her shall we although I’m not sure how
Danny saw his brother and made his way over
Danny- everything all right in paradise
Jake- paradise what’s that
Danny sat down- things not good
Jake- things are fine
Danny- meaning they’re far from fine
Jake- me and Chrissie we’re just not getting on
Danny- what do you expect your new parents
Jake- no it’s different she’d changed like over night one day we’re fine the next she’s cleaning the flat top to bottom for the third time this week she won’t talk to me
Danny- maybe she’s scared
Jake- then why won’t she talk to me
Danny- maybe you should talk to her
Jake- I tried
Danny- then try harder and if that fails buy her a present
Jake- is that your answer to everything
Danny- well I’m just making a suggestion it’s up to you what you do
Danny stood up
Danny- I better go
Jake- yeah see ya
Jake stared down at his little girl thinking for a few minutes
Jake- I know what I’ll do yes I do but first we need to go shopping
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh bless Danny he came up with some good advice there.... :wub: :cheer: :wub:
keep it coming or i will have to pay Christine to fail you on the exam tomorrow..... :angel:
Bless brotherly love.
aaaaaaawwwwwww. danny is so sweet. good luck in your exams. then more
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That is so cute!!!
Post more asa you can!
Good luck with exams
Luv ya lots
Layne
x x x
great! :D so sweet that dannys trying to be helpful! :) more soon please, cant wait
(ps. good luck in your exam, hope it goes alright)
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
give us more!! (please)
its great :cheer: :thumbsup: :bow:
More, more, more dude. 'Tis just as amazing as the first!
Thanks for all the replies mine and Angeldelight's exam went OK we hoped we pass we're just getting ready for a huge night out so I love ya all :wub:
Kerrie opened her front door hours later the house was quiet Noah must still be at his meeting if he was ever at one in the first place
She pouted at the thought of Noah with other women it ate her up inside
Entering the lounge she switched on the light and slumped on the sofa
Kerrie flicked on the TV there was nothing on as usual oh goodie just in time for Holby City
Kicking off her shoes she settled down for the next instalment of the complicated love lives of Chrissie and Owen and the dirty dealings of super bitch Connie who of course was her favourite character
A couple of hours ticked by and the sound of the door turning awoke Kerrie from her sleep
It was pitch black and the silhouette of a figure caught her eye as he quietly tried to climb the stairs
Kerrie got up and headed into the hallway
Kerrie- there’s not point creeping up there you know not when I’m down here
Noah- sorry I’m late meeting went on longer than expected
Kerrie- course it did angel
She headed towards the kitchen and poured herself a large glass of wine
Noah followed
Noah- if you think I’m seeing another woman your off your head how many times do I have to tell you I don’t want anyone else I want you
Kerrie- flattering yourself sweetheart
Noah- Kerrie…
Kerrie- I’m going to bed ALONE
Noah- fine
Kerrie headed towards the stairs she knew she was being unfair she knew she was being paranoid but she couldn’t help it
She turned and watched him staring out of the kitchen window
Kerrie walked over
Noah- you made yourself very clear Kerrie
Kerrie- no I didn’t
She placed her arms around his waist
Kerrie- I love you but I get jealous I can’t help it
Noah turned to face her
Noah- I would never cheat on you never
He gently kissed her
Kerrie- I know that really
Noah- I wouldn’t dare anyway
Kerrie grinned and wrapped her arms around his neck
Awwww
Awwwwwwwww, is just right!
This is great sug, glad ya exams webt ok!
more soon
luv ya
layne
xxx
great! :D kerrie and noah are so sweet! :) more soon please, cant wait
(ps. glad your exam went ok)
So sweet. Glad your exams were alright. more more more
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MORE, now!
oi get back here right now and post some more.... please don't make me hurt you
Thanks soooo much i'm glad it went ok too and thanks for all the lovely replies glad your liking it
Dennis lay in bed that night thinking about Sharon, Chrissie and Den and the mess that he’d left behind
He knew Sharon needed to find him to put ghosts at rest to find out why he could do such a thing but deep down Dennis already knew the answers he’d heard them all before
Den was obsessive and controlling and that was why he’d ruined their plans
Dennis realised if he and Sharon were ever going to get on with their lives and move on they’d need to find Den talk to him let Sharon ask him the questions she so desperately needs answering as soon as possible he’d start making enquiries.
Chrissie also lay wide awake that night her and Jake hadn’t spoken since their row earlier that day she wanted to tell him, she wanted to tell him so badly but she couldn’t she was risking too much
Chrissie turned to Jake whose eyes were closed and she gently kissed him
Jake stirred slightly and opened his eyes
Jake- you ok
Chrissie nodded
Jake- come here
He wrapped his arms around her as she lay her head on his bare chest gently listening to the beating of his heart
Chrissie- I’m sorry about earlier
Jake- me too I should have listened not stormed off
He kissed her lightly on the top of her head
Chrissie closed her eyes, she felt safe in Jake’s arms no-one can hurt her not now not ever
wow babes this is so briliant... fantastic... you better post some more... don't find Den he's a NASTY MAN a NASTY MAN
Dennis don't go finding Den. It won't look very nice. Jake and Chrissie are very sweet together. more more more
xxx
Deenis den ain't to far away!! LOL!!!
this is excellentie darlin, Jake and Chrissie *goes off into daydream|* If only the Show could be like this!
Post more soon babes
Luv ya Loads
Layne
x x x
This is fab! Lovin' Jake and Chrissie :wub:
Post more soon, pretty please with a cherry on top and icecream inside :bow: ! Lol!
Hello I'm writing loads at the mo so for all my wondeful readers here is the next part
Tina- Ruby wakey, wakey sweetheart come on we need to get ready
Ruby sat up and rubbed her tired eyes
Ruby- just five more minutes
Tina- you said that half an hour ago
Ruby climbed out of bed and headed into the shower
Pat walked into Tina and Ruby’s room
Pat- I’ll make you both a nice cup of coffee oh and Johnny rang he wanted to make sure you weren’t having second thoughts
Tina- what did you tell him
Pat- not to be so daft and to get ready
Tina grinned
Pat- excited
Tina nodded- and nervous all at the same time
Pat- happens to the best of us
Kerrie turned over to see her boyfriend was fast asleep still she gently blew in his ear
Noah- what the hell did you do that for
Kerrie- I’ve got to go over to Pat’s in half an hour
Noah- and I was sleeping
Kerrie- not any more your not
She kissed him
Noah- you know what you are
Kerrie- no but I’m sure your going to tell me
Noah leant in and whispered in Kerrie’s ear
Kerrie grabbed the pillow and hit him with it before kissing him
fab babes, can;t wait for the wedding!!!
I wasnt more script NOW! Please! :wub:
I'm writing more of my script as we speak,so i'll post it asap, luv ya
Layne
x x x
Ps Lovin your banna!!!
More! Like, NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
great! :D loving the jake and chrissie parts! :) more soon please, cant wait