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Originally Posted by Siobhan
Bry are u taking notes here LOL Siobham ain't that the damn truth :rotfl: :rotfl:
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Originally Posted by Siobhan
Bry are u taking notes here LOL Siobham ain't that the damn truth :rotfl: :rotfl:
hope so... I am sure Bry has lots of things coming up with these guys... can't waitQuote:
Originally Posted by JustJodi
awww nick and vicky yay :) hehe
when you said bacardi and coke i thought of little britain haha sorry :p
more soooon hehe
this is brilliant. pity we couldn't see it on telly. it'd make a nice change for us.
lol, same here!!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by crazylea
Man those Bacholear boys are great lol
was trying to think of a female drink, but shes too young for the G&T etcQuote:
Originally Posted by crazylea
next part up in a few minutes!
Jenkins Manor - Night
Richard is sitting alone in the study, tears run down his face as he looks at the picture of his children. He rubs his finger over Ed's face...
Richard: Goodbye my son...daddy will miss you...
he lays the picture down flat, unable to stare at it. Tanya walks in.
Richard: Tanya...i thought...?
Tanya I couldnt sit around my house any longer...i just kept thinking...and it was upseeting me...we neeed to be together at a time like this...wheres Nick?
Richard: Hes down the pub with Vicky Mansfeild...
Tanya: Her again!? Hes spent more time with her in the last 24 hours than...
Richard: Its his way of dealing with it...besides theyve been friends for years...i suppose she's consoling him...
Tanya sits down and there is a silence for a while....
Richard: So...ya know...how are you coping?
Tanya: Coping?....I'm not coping....you and nick might be able to blot it out...but lets face it...neither of you were close to him like i was....you always hated him...and Nick only came back a few years ago....ive always been close to Ed....i brought him up...we were one...seperate we were nothing..(starts to cry) every second since you said yes on the beach i have been crying on the inside...one big dark raincloud has overshadowed by life...and i cant see it clearing...i dont know how im going to live without him dad...i really dont...
Gary rushes in fast hearing Tanya's raised voice
Gary: Tanya babe...oh come here...
He rushes over to her and holds her as she cries in his arms...
Tanya: I swear to god dad...im not going to let this lie! Craig Harvey is going to regret the moment he ever brought Ed down to his sad little level...im going to tell the police everything!
Richard: (Panicky) No...no you cant!
Tanya: Dad...that man was responsible for your son's death! You know it! I know it...and im sure as hell that the whole of Baymoore know it! He will go down...he will pay for what he has doen to this family...
Richard: We are paying for what Ed did to him! Dont you undestand that! And if we go to the police it will be more than a fag end that he uses on us...it will be the end of a gun!
Gary: You what!? A fag end.....! Your telling me that Craig Harvey set fire to Val's!?.....He put Tanya's life in danger!?
Richard: Yes! And it was a warning...a warning for us to keep shut about everything to do with Ed! So no Tanya we will not be going to the police!
The doorbell rings and Gary goes to answer it.
Tanya: You might not want to, but i do! How can we let this lie! Ed's dead...theres no changing that, but we need to have some conclusion to this chapter in our lives! And if it means Craig going to jail for his crimes then so be it! Im not afraid of him...that ******* will pay for what he did to Ed!
Richard looks ghost white, Tanya turns around, standing beside Gary is Craig, dressed in a long black coat, holding a gun.
Craig: Is that right Tanya? Well we'll see about that...
oooo cant leave it like that!!! more!!
darn it Bry don't leave me hanging like that,,, :crying: Good stuff very upbeat and makes u wanna turn to the next page to see what happens next,., u go my friend !!!!:cheer:
Whhooooaaa - now there is a cliffhanger till the next episode if there ever was one!!!
:eek: you can't leave it like that!!!!!!!!!!!!
i thought i might have a break this weekend and leave it until monday... :p only kidding...what a cliffhnager that was eh!?
Jenkins Manor - Night
Craig runs up to Craig and sticks the gun in her side...she starts to panick
Craig: Not scared of me? Yeah right looks like it....
Gary runs up to Craig and tackles him, Craig lets go of Tanya who falls to the floor.
Craig: Your all talk...you make out to be some tough bird but your nothing but a stupid blond bint...
Gary: You wanna shut your mouth!
Craig: Really? Because this (waves gun) says otherwise.
Richard: Look Craig, what is the meaning of all this eh? To put the frightners up us?
Craig: Yes... i've just come back in town and found out that that smack head son of yours is dead...
Richard: Yes convient that is...you call in your mob to chase him to his death, then you and Mandy "go out of town" for a while...guilty concience?
Craig: I made it clear to him...that he should never return to Baymoore! If hed done as he was told then hed be safe and well in the spanish sun by now...but no...that idotic moron had to come back...
Tanya: But did you really have to kill him!?
Craig: Im a man of principle! I stick to my word! I dont let tramps like him mess me around! I never let old scores settle...
Tanya: Neither do I...
Gary: Tanya, just drop it...
Tanya: Im determined to make you pay for what you did to Ed, and if that means a bullet in the gut then so be it...
Craig: I didnt come around here tonight to shoot any of you...it was a warning...to make sure that when the police start asking questions...my name dosent come up in their enquiries...do you get me... (looks at Tanya) and i swear to god i wouldnt just be you that i hurt Tanya...it would be the whole lot of you...including them little kiddies of yours...bag of bricks in the irish sea...no skin off my nose...
Tanya goes mental and tries to attack Craig, Gary restrains her.
Craig: Tonight...is the end of it...finished. You shut your traps and we can all move on... nice study by the way...youll have to give your interior designers number...
Craig walks out of the house, Tanya is in tears on the floor.
Tanya: I swear to god! I will not have him threaten the twins like that! No way! Ok so maybe not now, and maybe not the police...but i swear i will make him pay...one way or another...
Greasy Gary's Cafe - Morning
Romeo and Chris are in the cafe.
Romeo: I am abosultey knackered....i didnt get a wink of sleep
Chris: Same here...all i heard was Tom and that new bird of his at it like a pair of randy rabbits...
Romeo: so much for sensible Tom eh? one date and hes jumping into bed with her...
Chris: Yeah well who blames he, she is one sexy saucepot...
Romeo: And your best mates girlfriend...so keep your eyes away and your mouth closed...
Chris: But common...shes like top quality woman...she's wasted on him...
Romeo: And you...so keep your thoughts to yourself...speak of the devil...
Tom walks into the cafe with Luqina.
Tom: This...is the local cafe...not exactly the best grub in britain but its ok!
Gary: Hey i heard that!
Tom: Oh look who it is...me old muckers...Chris and Romeo...this my friends is Luqina...my new girlfriend...
Romeo: ALright?
Chris: Hi there...
Tom goes to get some breakfast. Luqina sits down, she moves her coat around a bit and shows nothing but a bra underneath, Chris mouth opens but Romeo kicks him underneath the table.
i havent been reading this (shame on me), but i just looked over some and its great!
you really should! youll soon get into it, and if you get confussed then me or one of the devon seas fanbase will fill you in! :DQuote:
Originally Posted by Jada-GDR
oo loving the bit with craig!!! very good :)
I still like Craig :p
Baymoore Bingo Hall - Day
Claire and Emma are walking into the bingo hall.
Emma: Christ Claire, ive got better things to be doing on a Saturday morning that playing Bingo....
Claire: Do you think i want to spend my day with the poisinous perms? No...but we have to come and show mom some support on her first day of work...
Emma: She'll be fine...shes a gobby mare...so calling out a few numbers wont be any trouble....
Claire: Look just come in, have one game, and ill take out shopping in Dartmouth okay?
The pair walk into the hall where Val is coming on stage in a shiny jacket.
Val: Good mornings ladies and gents...I'm Val, as if you didnt know, and i will be calling the balls today...
Cuts to Margaret, Annie and Josie who are sitting next to each other ready to play a game.
Margaret: Makes a change from holding them...
Val: Yes i heard that thank you Miss Kage...well have none of that today thank you very much...now eyes down ladies...and the first ball out...Flirty Thirty...number 30...
Margaret: And the rest...
Val: You 3 arent getting plenty...number 20!
Margaret: The cheaky...
Josie: Give her some respect, the girl can dish it out just aswell...
Val: Overweight....28....
Margaret: We know love!
The old women laugh at this.
Val: I'm Free...number 3
Maragret: So we've heard!
Val starts to find the fun side in it. Cuts back to Claire and Emma.
Emma: Stuff this for a game of soldiers...look at her...she's fine...common Claire, we're off to the shops...
Claire: Yeah...i suppose she's gonna get on just fine...
:lol: i love val shes great
:rotfl: Great banter!!
Baymoore Beach
Claire and Emma are eating ice creams and have loads of shopping bags in their hands, they walk towards a bench overlooking the beach and sit down.
Claire: Christ sis, by feet are killing me...thats the last time i take you on a shopping trip...i dont know whats more damaged by shoes or my bank balance!
Emma: Yeah well them clothes are just screaming to me be brought...
Claire: It's been nice tough today...i mean we dont get to spend much time with each others these days...me being around Romeos all the time...
Emma: Oh hows things with the "Italian Stalion"?
Claire: Yeah its ok...not exactly hearts and flowers, but life isnt...
Emma: Oh im sure it is...you just havent meet "the one"
Claire: Theres no such thing, they're all a bunch of w******s ent they? I doubt theres a specially designed one that waiting for me at the other end of the country...
Emma: Well I believe in it...infact I've found my one...
Claire: Oh common Ems, your only 17...
Emma: Age dosent matter Claire, when you find them you find them...
Claire: Whatever...so then who is this lucky bloke? Does he know it?
Emma: No...not yet...but he will do...It's Tom...
Tom is in the distant, wearing only swimming shorts he walks out of the beach hutt and sits on his raised lifeguard chair. Claire chockes on her ice cream
Claire: (coughs) Chuffin 'eck Em! I nearly chocked on my flake! Tom!?
Emma: Yeah i really feel like we made a connection at the churchyard for nans funeral...
Claire: He was just being friendly...
Emma: I dont think so...
Claire: Well you know best dont you? Look as far as i know he went out on a first date last night...so if you wanna get with him youd better do it now before he gets serious with his new bird...
cool part :)
Andrews House
Claire and Emma are in Emma's bedroom. Emma has dolled herself up to go and speak to Tom.
Emma: How do i look..?
Claire: A million smackers...but honestly Emma i dont think you should...
Emma: If i dont ask, i will never know...
Claire: And what if he says no?
Emma: I'll make sure he doesent
Emma walks out of the room. Claire shakes her head in disaproval.
Beach Hutt
Tom goes into the hut, he puts a shirt on and starts to do up the buttons. Luqina enters...
Luqina: Heya sexy...theres no need to go doing that...
Tom: Oh hiya Luqina...thought youd gone back to Exceter...
Luqina: Yeah, but i couldnt bare to be away from you for another moment...
Tom: I dont mean to sound rude, but we've only just met...
Luqina walks up to Tom and starts to undo his shirt buttons, he enjoys it.
Luqina: What you think I'm too clingy...you want to finsih it?
Tom: Oh...erm...no...i didnt say that...erm i think I'd better go back to work out there...
Luqina: Oh come on Tom..half an hour wont hurt....
Luqina lowers the straps of her dress...
Baymoore Beach - Day
Emma strolls down the beach, whistling "Your the one that i want"..she is happy. She approaches the beach hut and hears noises, Tom and Luqina are clearly having... :wub: ...Emma knocks on the door.
Luqina: Get lost!
Luqina and Tom laugh and carry on. Emma runs off and clings to the other side of the hutt, she starts to cry foolishly as she slides onto the floor in tears.
val is super... she is my fav so far ... :)Quote:
Originally Posted by crazylea
Emma strolls down the beach, whistling "Your the one that i want"..she is happy. She approaches the beach hut and hears noises, Tom and Luqina are clearly having... :wub: ...Emma knocks on the door.
Luqina: Get lost!
Luqina and Tom laugh and carry on. Emma runs off and clings to the other side of the hutt, she starts to cry foolishly as she slides onto the floor in tears.
obviously Luqina and Tom have no idea it was Emma,, poor girl,, oh well,, her mate tried to warn her !!!! Good stuff Bry,,, :cheer:
awww poor emma. and btw how do you pronounce luquina lol
"lew -quin- a " ?? Bry ????Quote:
Originally Posted by crazylea
close!Quote:
Originally Posted by JustJodi
lew guin a
btw jodi its her sister that warned her not her mate
ahhh right thanks.
Jenkins Manor - Day
Richard and Tanya are in the living room.
Tanya: Right then, let's get down to it...the funerals this friday so it's about time we made the arrangements...
Richard: Well cant we leave it up to the funeral director?
Tanya: We could...but theres no personal choices...its all formal...nothing original...nothing to do with Ed...we need to add those little touches...stuff Ed would have liked and stuff..."
Richard: To be honest with you love I'm not in the right state of mind to...it's too depressing...
Tanya: Its not a walk in the park for me either dad...its not pleasant, i grant you that...but it needs to be done...so then where are we going to have the wake?
Richard: I dont know, anywhere but the 'Rum...
Tanya: Why not?
Richard: Tanya it was only 2 weeks ago when our family was being insulted by the whole of the village...i doubt anyone will be coming to Ed's funeral...so why have the wake in a place where they all hang out...
Tanya: Stuff the lot of them...The Red Rum was part of Ed's life...it seems only right we have it there...
Richard: Fine then...to tell you the truth Tanya...i will be glad when this ordeal is over...i dont think im going to be able to face the funeral...
Tanya: You will...and then we can move on from Ed, turn the chapter in our lives, the Taylors keep on fighting till the end, trust me, this time next week our lives will have changed forever...
Costa Del Sol (Spain) - Day
A luxurous spanish villa. The spanish sun glistens on the torquese swimming pool. Hilary Blackstock (played by Rula Lenksa) is sunbathing on a deckhair, dressed in a glamorus bikini. Her manicured hands picks up a mobile phone.
Hilary: Hello...British Airways...yes i'd like to book a 1st class ticket to Exceter airport for this coming Friday...no...just one way... credit card number?
Hilary picks up a credit card, the name of the account holder: Segal Lorenza...
Hilary: 2423 5435 4543 56765...thank you...
Hilary puts down the phone and smiles to herself...
Hilary: (To self) Richard Taylor...your going to regret the day you cheated me... (smiles)
Mansfield's House
Vicky is taking clothes form her warbrobe and pressing them against her by the mirror to decide what to wear. She's on the phone to Nick.
Vicky: (into phone) Of course im looking forward to tonight...its just hell picking something good to wear...
Nick: Oh i'm sure you'll look superb whatever you wear... it isnt clothes i look at, its the face...
Vicky: Oh well i'll make sure i spend hours glamming up my face then...anyways id better go and have a bath before i run out of time.
Nick: Okay then...cant wait unti later...bye
Rebecca knocks on the door and comes in.
Rebecca: Who were you on the phone to just?
Vicky: None of your buisness...
Rebecca: Sounded like a male friend...got a new man in the pipeline...
Vicky tries to conceal it but has a big smile on her face
Rebecca: Oh come on tell me all about it...
Vicky: Id rather not mom..its early days...i dont want to curse it...
Rebecca: Well i hope it works out for you...i started to think youve live out your days a sad old woman like me...
Vicky: Your time will come...eventually...but god help the poor sod who it turns out to be!
Rebecca: Oi you! Ah well id better leave you to it...just make sure he doesent hurt you this time...
Vicky: Oh he wont, thats one thing im sure of...
Vicky has a big smile on her face
ooooo hillarys coming looks exciting!
yay more vicky and nick :p
i can see them becoming the new shannis! :lol: what they gonna be called?Quote:
Originally Posted by crazylea
Nicktoria? Nivicky? Vinick? :lol:
im sorry the past few das have been boring but im moving on, and from friday it all changes... until now its been to establish the show and set up characters, soon is when all the fun starts!
Vinick :lol: sounds good!!!!
Hilary is coming, wonder what she'll do?!
Fab honey more soon x
Vinick.....:rotfl:... fab idea!!!!
Mansfields House Extern Night
Nick's car pulls up outside the Mansfields house. Vicky is in the passenger seat then.
Nick: So then...you're home...
Vicky: Thanks Nick for a really lovely night...
Nick: Made a difference from a smokey pub anyways...(jokes) and the good thing is i dont owe you another date now...
Vicky: Oh...er...i was hoping there'd be more...
Nick: Really?
Vicky: Oh common Nick...you know you want it...
Nick: What...cofee?
Vicky: No, stuff the caffine...
Vicky kisses Nick passionatley, Nick pulls away.
Nick: You knoiw..i dont really fancy our first time in the back of a car...
Vicky laughs, the pair get out of the car and run inside.
Boring???? are you mad Bry... it has been cliffhangers and excitment... still my fav soap on these boards.. it has taken over my love of EE, there are the second one's I read nowQuote:
Originally Posted by bondboffin
whooo hoooo looks like some one is gonna get SOMETHING:rolleyes: :rotfl: Great stuff Bry... :love:Quote:
Originally Posted by bondboffin
looks like everyone is getting some except poor emma.... tom, nick and patrick (who doesn't want it from the wife but the mistress)Quote:
Originally Posted by JustJodi