really good, please post more asap! :cheer:
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really good, please post more asap! :cheer:
Its great more soon please!
yeh its brill... more soon hopefully xx
are you still doing this brill story?
I'll update tonight!
oh ok, i can't wait!
Sorry I took so long to update bit its hard when there isn't any cute Demi and Leo moments to inspire me! :(
Part Ten
Demi did listen to what her mum said,she did try her very hardest to keep away from Leo.She couldn't help talking to him it was irresistable for her,everytime Leo smiled,she smiled too.She knew there was no way that they'd ever be together,but this seemed to make her want him more.Now Demi considered Leo as a 'friend',which was much better than 'the boy who I sit next to in English'.
She was passing through the park on the way to school on a sunny morning.Somehow Darren,George and Rachel had zoomed ahead.She passed by some girls who were heading towards the bus stop.Demi noticed most of them to be in the year above her.She also saw a crowd of boys who were at least sixteen.Being quite experienced at bunking off herself Demi could tell by the looks on their faces that none of the boys had any intention of going to school.
She was thinking about this so much that she walked straight into a boy.She couldn't really see him but she could tell that he was cute.Then he looked up and Demi instantly recognised him."Leo!"
"Demi!What are you doin' 'ere?"
"Goin' to school.Where are you goin'?"
"Uhh..nowhere."
"Bunkin' off?"
"Yeah.You better go."
"I don't really feel like goin' to school today...we're friends.. right?"
"'Course we are!"
"So whats the problem?"
Demi and Leo walked over to the bench and sat down.
"Are you ok Leo?"
"Me?Umm...I fine...just fine."It was very obvious to Demi that he was lying.She slowly pulled up his sleeve to reveal bruises.All the way up his arm,purple bruises.
"Leo!D...did he do it?"
"Do you mean my Dad?"Demi nodded.
Leo sighed,"Yeah he did."
"Oh Leo!"
"Its nuffin'.I've had worse."
"Tell me!"
Leo remained silent.
"Oh come on.You know you can trust me."She begged
And Leo did.He told her.Everything.It was horrific the way Ray would get drunk and come home and beat poor Leo up.Leo explained that there wasn't much his Mum could do and how sometimes Ray would turn on her too.Once Leo had finished,there was a tear in his eye.
Demi was almost crying too."I had no idea,"she croaked."Everyone in school knows but they..we have no idea how 'orrible it really is."
Leo tried his best to smile,but it wasn't like his usual smile,which was always full of hope and spirit.
Demi reached for Leo's hand,and at the same time her reached for hers,there hands joined.Then,out of nowhere it was back.Demi could feel that fuzzy feeling in her heart. The two held hands for a few minutes in silence until, eventually, Demi spoke up:
"You know I'll always be here.To talk to.As a friend."And deep inside Leo and Demi bothed hoped that they could be there for each other as more than friends........
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awwww that is so sweet! more soon please :thumbsup:
:thumbsup: it's so sweet! can't wait for the next part! :D
awwthats sweet more please
yeh! its sooo sweet.. worth waiting for!
I'm too tired to post tonight,and I might be busy tomorrow,but I will try very hard to get the next part done.
Its great, more soon i hope
More soon hopefully!
Great, more soon! xx
More hun!
More soon!
Thanks everyone for your replies!
More tonight
Apologies for the wait! :)
Part Eleven
"Demi!"Said Jo,who was obviously trying her hardest to get her friends attention.It was the day after the park incident and Demi and Jo were walking through the playground,while waiting for Rachel to come back from her dental appointment.
"Huh?"
"Are you even listening to me?"
"No,sorry."Said Demi,truthfully.
"What are you thinking about?"
"Nuffin' much."Jo and Demi conitnued to chat until Demi saw him.Leo was with his mates and Demi couldn't help but grin,he was just so cute!
"What ya smilin' at?"
"Me...?"
"Yeah you.You like him don't you?"
Demi blushed,"Like who?"
Joanne smirked,"Leo and don't deny it."
"Oh,Alright"
Demi confessed everything,all her feelings for Leo and how they would never be together,Jo would occaisionally gasp and once Demi had finished she said,"Dems!Thats just so...sad."
Leo and his mates passed by them and he smiled at Demi,"Hey,"he whispered and then rushed off.
It was a while before any of them said anything,until:"I..S'pose its a lil bit sad."Demi said,then remembered something."You can never breath a word of this to anyone else!Ever!"
Jo nodded.
"Not even Rach!"
"Not even Rach,"she repeated.
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:thumbsup: Great! More soon please!
its wicked
Thanks everyone!
fab! can't wait for the next part!!
More soon!
Can't wait for the next part!
More soon please xx
brillant!
Part Twelve
Demi knew it would be hard keeping somethng like that a secret from her best friend especially as Rachel would go on and on about Leo all the time,but there was no option Demi didn't want to ever hurt her feelings,though some part of Demi knew that she couldn't keep it a secret for ever,and was dreading the day when she had to tell Rach the truth.
"Dems!"
"Huh?"Demi had been daydreaming
"What's up wif you,its like your in anotha world or somefin'."
"Oh sorry Rach.I..I'm just.............tired,thats all."
The had reached Joanne's house,Rach knocked on the door.
"Hi guys!"Jo had answered
"Hey Jo."Said Demi
"You comin'?"Asked Rach.
"Yeah,ok."Then Jo glanced back inside,"Mum,I'm goin' out,be back before dinner,bye."She shouted into the house.
They went to 'hang out' round at Demi's place and were having a lot of fun.
"So what about Miss Larn?"Asked Joanne
Rachel shrugged,"She's ok,but its evil of her not to put me next to Leo.You're so lucky Dems."
The continued chatting,until Leo passed by them on his bike.
"Hey Demi."He said.
"Hiya Leo!"Said Rach in a desperate voice,as he continued past them.
Rachel sighed,"I wish Leo liked me."
Demi wasn't sure what to say,"He does like you Rach, but he doesn't fancy you,thats all."
"She's right."Added Jo,with a sympathetic smile.
Rach agreed,"I know. But he likes Demi more."
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Please Reply everyone and I'll get Part 13 done faster! :hmm:
cool its great just caught up. its good more asap! Pleaseeeeee :) lol :thumbsup:
:D fab! can't wait for the next part!
great! i really liked it! more soon please xx
more soon please xx
more soon! i cant wait
i just cant wait any more please post it
its brill more soon please
Thanks again!:D
I'll probably have the next part done at the weekend!
cant wait
omg! more soon please! its brill
On its way :D