:cheer: that is really good and i also cant wait to read the next part its great so far!
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:cheer: that is really good and i also cant wait to read the next part its great so far!
Carry on its great
Glad you all like it!I was going to do the next part tonight,but,I'm really not in the mood now.
ok goodgood cant wait :)
Im not really in the mood to do anything either after seeing leo dieQuote:
Originally Posted by Charmed
Hi guys!I'm a bit bored so I've decided just to do Part three.
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Part Three
It was September,nearly a week had passed since Demi had caused the street scene,with Leo,neither She or Darren had talked to him since.Rachel had felt guilty,she said it was all her fault that Demi had shouted at Leo.Privately Demi agreed with her,but Rach was her beat friend,so she obviously didn't tell her that.
Unfortunately,for Demi and Darren,School had started back.
"And no bunking off this year!"Said Rosie,the morining of their first day,"Please.I'm sick off getting phone calls from that school!"
"No bunking off Mum,"Demi reasured her,"We promise.Right Darren?"
"Right."Darren grinned,he would try of course,but didn't want to make promises just yet.
As they were going out the door,to met,Jo,Rach and David,Demi heard Rosie mutter something under her breath,she couldn't make out exactly what her mother said,but she was sure it was something like,"Yeah right,Heard that all before."
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Demi never liked English.She hated school and English was the worst.Not only did she have it with Leo,but her teacher Mr.Darson,was a,cruel old man,who would shout at you for no reason at all.She thought that it might be a bit better this year,because Mr.Darson had eventually retired,and they were getting the new teacher,Miss Larn,but Demi was wrong....
"Hello class.As you know,I'm your new teacher Miss Larn.I don't know anyone,but we'll get to know each other later on,but first,lets get the seating re-arranged."
There was a silence,the class didn't know what to think,Demi actually thought,as a first iimpression,that Miss Larn seemed ok.But first impressions can be wrong.
"Now,you can call me old fashioned if you like,just as long as you don't call me old,as I'm only 30."Some people,including Demi,giggled."But I like girls to be seated next to boys."
There was a silence.Miss Larn smiled,"Ok,now,first pair.You,"she pointed to Darren,"And the blonde girl,"Her finger moved towards Joanne.
Soon Miss Larn had matched them all up.Except about five or six,including Demi and Leo.
Please Don't be Leo,she thought desperately,Please don't be Leo,Please don't be....
"Leo,Is that your name?"Asked Miss Larn,Leo nodded."Leo and....That girl at the back."She pointed to Demi.Oh great!thought Demi,she was beginning to change her mind about Miss Larn.
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Sorry,that didn't have much in it,but Part 4 will be better :cheer:
its good. cant wait for next part
lol that was great!
that was really good keep writing your really good at it
I think that it is a great script, carry on .