what can i say pinkfairy. it's like a romantic novel. please please write more!
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what can i say pinkfairy. it's like a romantic novel. please please write more!
Skits
Ok, thanks! Maybe I should publish it, I can see it rocketing to the top of the bestsellers lists... Anyway, here's part 6, sorry it's a bit short and a bit rubbishy.
Somewhere only we know, Part 6
For a moment my whole body freezes as I realise that Sharon is awake. Feelings of relief flood through me as the realisation hits me that I am with her again and she is here with me, looking at me and smiling. She wants me.
I then regain the control of my body and I squeak out in a high pitched tone, “You’re awake, you’re not dead, Oh Sharon I love you and I’m sorry!”
Sharon hit me gently on the arm and smiled, “No, you’re wrong I am dead, god knows how I am talking to you! I’m sorry too, I should have never left you and I shouldn’t of taken all those tablets. It’s not you’re fault, it’s all mine. I love you Dennis and I want to spend the rest of my life and more with you.” She spoke quickly, yet it was still clear what she meant. I held her hand more tightly than before and ran my fingers carefully down her silk-like hair.
“ It’s nobody's fault. Are you OK, does it hurt anywhere? Do you feel sick?” I asked her stroking her fingers.
“I have a headache and I feel a bit ill but I think I will be OK.” She said rubbing her head with her spare hand, making her hair scatter over the floor contrasting with the disgusting olive carpet.
“You’ll be fine. I won’t let anything happen to you. I’ve phoned for an ambulance and they should be here any moment.” It’s strange that we were both staying in the same place and neither of us new that they other was only a few rooms away? You didn’t know I was here did you?”
“No, I didn't have a clue where you were here. I’m glad that we are together now though. I though I had lost you forever.” A single tear ran down her cheek as she said this and I wiped it gently with my finger, noticing her soft skin as I did so. I knew how she felt. I thought that I was going to be alone forever as no-one could ever to take Sharon’s place; she was too special to me.
“Shh” I say, trying to comfort her, “Don’t cry, we’re together now and no-one is ever going to change that. I’m never going to leave you.”
At this point the ambulance came and carried a stretcher in with them. They placed Sharon on and I smiled at her and she smiled back too, both of us sure that we were never going to be parted again. As I followed them out to the ambulance I knew that I was never going to be alone again.
Awwwwww bless! This is beautiful. Sharon! WAKE UP!!!!!!!
You make her die and you wont be far off joining her! Tee hee only joking!
Addy- http://s8. ************ .com /Shannis /
without spaces of course! Hope it helps!
Verity! xxxxx
okies the blocked things are Invision/Free (all one word) that's the problemo!
Verity! xxx
Thanks, I will try and get on it!
Part Seven, for everyone who has ever replied.
Somewhere only we know, Part 7
I woke up in hospital and saw my packet suitcases at the bottom of the bed. I smiled. I was finally going home. I had spent the last week in hospital and I had to have my stomach pumped but it wasn’t that bad as Dennis had been there for me, being strong enough for both of us.
I glanced around I saw the huge bunch of white lilies-my favourite flowers, that Dennis had got me. I picked up the note that was concealed in them and began to read it, though I knew the message off by heart.
‘To the most beautiful woman in the world, you mean more to me than life itself. Will you marry me?’
I couldn’t believe he had proposed, and at first I though what he had write was a joke. But when I looked at him he was on one knee with a small box in his hand. Inside was a white gold ring with a large but not oversized diamond that reflected the sunshine that came through the blinds in streams of beautiful light.
I was so speechless that I did not answer for a moment. I knew I wanted to say yes; I defiantly wanted to become Mrs Rickman but the words couldn’t come out for all the thoughts that were in my head.
“Sorry, it’s too soon, I know that now, marriage can come later.” Said Dennis, trying to smile but looking really rejected and upset. He thought that I didn’t want to marry him!
“Of course I’ll marry you, you big adorable idiot! “ I told him, watching his face light up as I said it.
“Thank you! You’ve made me the happiest man in the world. I love you!” He said, sliding the ring, which was a perfect fit, onto my fingers.
“ You do like the ring don’t you, I can always use the one out of the cracker if you would prefer it!” Dennis said smiling. I laughed and then looked down at my ring it was perfect.
And now I was going to become Mrs Rickman. I looked down at my ring again and it sparkled, even though it was only early in the morning. It was gorgeous. Even more so than the pink ring.
I began going into fantasies about weddings and thinking about what dress I would like when Dennis came in, a smile reaching the top of his face. He came over to me and began to kiss me, his soft lips gently massaging mine, parting my lips softly with his tongue. I withdrew my lips and looked seriously at him.
“I want to go now.” I said pouting and blinking my eyelashes at him dramatically.” I hate this place. I keep worrying that I will see someone or something dead. Plenty more time for that later.” I carried on raising one eyebrow at him suggestively.
“I’m going to have to watch out with you! Right, you better get dressed and then we can go, OK?”
“Where are we going to stay?” I asked him. “ I don’t want to go back to that bed-sit anytime soon. It was horrible.”
“I’ll agree with you on that.”, Said Dennis passing me some clean clothes, “I’ve booked us into a hotel near here. I thnk you’ll prefer it to that bed-sit.”
I got dressed and held Dennis’ hand, walking out of the hospital as a pair. Life was perfect.
that was brilliant! :D aawwwww poor dennis blaming himself. it was so emotional, you really felt for both characters while reading it and it was written so well. i like the way you change between both characters thoughts. GREAT! hope theres more soon, cant wait :)
oops, didnt realise there was another page! (that makes me feel so stupid!) great again, absolutely fantastic! :D so glad sharons alright. and YAY theyre going to get married! lol! :) cant wait for the next part, really love this script, hope theres more soon
love this write more please
Heres part eightfor everyone who has ever replied. I probably won't post anymore for the next few days though, but I will be back on, on tuesday.
Somewhere only we know, Part 8
I got the key to the hotel room out of my jean pocket and slowly opened the door. I let Sharon step in first and then I went in behind her, resting my hands on the top of her coat.
“Does it look better than the bed-sit?” I asked her smiling, hoping I would get the reply that I wanted.
“Oh my God Dennis, it’s lovely, it must of taken you ages!” I was pleased; she liked it. She was right, it had taken ages, but it was worth it if it made Sharon happy. I had got several bunches of roses and scattered the petals over the floor and the bed and left one bunch in a vase near the window. I had purchased some strands of fairy lights and woven them through the rail of the old fashioned bed and they were now twinkling slowly but brightly too. I had managed to get the biggest room in the hotel, which itself was an old style hotel though the building itself was relatively new.
I picked up a remote control off a nearby mahogany chest of drawers and turned the CD player on and the music began to play. I turned Sharon around to face me and stroked her beautiful face, leaning toward to kiss her. This kiss began to get more passionate, both off us trying to let the other know who much they meant to us. Then, Sharon grabbed my top and pulled me back, making both of us fall on the bed. We carried on kissing each other and I ran my hand up her back until I reached her scalp, massaging it, her hair sieving through my fingers. I could hear the music in the background and I could relate to the lyrics.
‘And if you have a minute why don’t we go,
Talk about it somewhere only we know?
This could be the end of everything,
So why don’t we go somewhere only we know?’
“I love you Mrs Rickman” I whispered in Sharon's ear, knowing that from now on we would have a world of our own.