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INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - DAY
Michelle has a happy look on her face. Tanya walks over to her.
Tanya: You're looking chipper! What's put a smile on your face!?
Michelle: Oh, just a man..
Tanya: Oh come on sis, dish the gossip!
Michelle: I don’t really want to name names yet, don’t want to curse it..
Tanya: Oh come on! You can’t keep me hanging like this!
Michelle: My lips remain sealed, but he’s invited me away for the weekend to Windsor.
Tanya: Oh lovely, so are you going to make your move on him then?
Michelle: I don’t know, he’s a good friend, I don’t want to ruin things! Besides Tan, I don’t know if I’m ready for another relationship..
Tanya: If I’ve learnt one thing over the years Shell, it’s to make the most of every opportunity, go for it!
Michelle has a confident look on her face, taking in Tanya's words.
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EXT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - DAY
Paul meets Doug outside the Red Rum to hand over the money.
Paul: (handing the money over to Doug) It's all there..
Doug: I'll want more than this Paul.. consider yourself lucky I’ve not killed you for what you did to my daughter!
Paul: And what about Lucy eh? She burned to death thanks to you!
Doug: Well if you don't cough up more money, the rest of your family will be going the same way as Lucy did, you understand me?
Paul looks terrified over Doug's chilling threat.
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EXT. TORQUAY SHOPS - EVENING
Michelle and Will leave one of the expensive clothes shops.
Michelle: I hope the others aren't wearing anything too fancy, I don't want to end up sticking out as the fashion tramp...
Will: You won't, that dress is gorgeous, it really suits you...
Michelle: Look Will before we go way I want to say something...
Will: Go on...
Michelle: About what you said a couple of weeks ago...
Will: Look I heard what you said, we're going just going as freinds...
Michelle: Well maybe I don't want us to go as friends anymore...
Will: I don;t understand...
Michelle leans in and kisses him on the lips.
Will: Wow, I wasn't expecting that...but it was nice...are you sure you're ready to do this?
Michelle: I've got to move on at some point, so why not now?
Will: Exactly. Well this has certainly shone a new light on this weekend, i reckon me and you are going to have a lot of fun...
Michelle smiles at Will, a huge grin on her face.
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EXT. BAYMOORE STREETS - NIGHT
Hannah is walking back from her date with Kevin. Andonis steps out of Singh & Sons and notices that she is distressed.
Andonis: Hannah! Hannah!
Hannah stops and turns around taking a few deep breaths.
Andonis: How did the date go?
Hannah: Bad! I thought you said he was nice!?
Andonis face is full of guilt at misleading her.
Hannah: You knew he wasn't didn't you!?
Andonis: I didn't want to hurt your feelings, I thought he might have been nice to you...
Hannah: Well he wasn't! He was a pig!
Kevin and his friends walk down the street on the opposite side of the road. They notice Andonis and Hannah talking, and start shouting over to them.
Kevin: No wonder she didn't fancy me. Look likes she prefers those of the Asian persuasion...
Andonis: I'm more of a man that you'll ever be!
Kevin: Ooooo has curry breath got the hots for Hannah, eh!?
Andonis shakes off this suggestion to save the embrassment from Kevin and his friends.
Andonis: No, of course not!
Kevin: Whatever! You two are welcome to each other, you pair of tramps!
Kevin and his gang move on down the road.
Hannah: "No, of course not"
Andonis: Hannah, I didn't mean...
Hannah: Save it...
Hannah barges past Andonis and storms off home, even more hurt than before.
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EXT. TORQUAY SHOP - NIGHT
Jacqui is in Torquay, shopping. She has just come out of a clothes shop, where she sees Doug. A paniced look crosses her face, and she runs down the road to catch a taxi.
Jacqui: Taxi! Taxi!
Jacqui rushes over to the taxi and quickly gets in.
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EXT. BAYMOORE STREETS - NIGHT
Andonis runs after Hannah.
Andonis: Hannah! Please, wait!
Hannah: What is so bad at me hey!? Do I really deserve to get treated like dirt!?
Andonis: Of course not!
Hannah: Since I've been down here, men treat me like crap!
Andonis: You just haven't met the right man.
Hannah: He’d do a runner if he knew about all my baggage..
Andonis: Do you see me running!?
Hannah: What are you saying?
Andonis: I'm saying you're as fit as and your such a great girl. :)
Andonis and Hannah get close and they kiss.
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Michelle doesn't know about Will and Tanya.. I wonder if Tan would have been as happy for her if she knew who the man was???
Doug sounds nastier than Craig!!!
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It is with much contemplation and deep regret that I inform you all that Devon Seas will no longer be written.
With increasing work and social pressures, It is becoming hard for me to come on to the internet every day and write episodes. Plus you also have to consider the great deal of planning that is required, of which I simply haven't got the time to do at the moment.
I also need to focus on my studies, and spend my spare time writing different things, rather than focus just on Devon Seas.
However I will never say never, it may be back in some different shape or format at some point in the future. I thank all of those who have stuck with it and supported my work, especially Siobhan.
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:crying::crying::crying: Understand your reason Bry but I will sadly miss this.. I hope it does return at some stage.. It was brilliantly written and I enjoyed reading every bit of it.. You should be very very proud of yourself for writing such a wonderfully soap
Davey and Abi.. thanks for helping Bry since this started. You both wrote very well and I thank you
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I just want to say a big thank you to Bry for letting me help you write some of this - it was a pleasure to help you write some of your Devon Seas, and you should be very pleased that you invented such a brilliant creation - I hope it's back sometime in the future! :D
