Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh Craig,, I knew I was gonna hate you more and more,, you SOB.. hope you burn in HELL.. :angry: of course being in "organized crime" hes gotta cover his tracks..... :mad:
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh Craig,, I knew I was gonna hate you more and more,, you SOB.. hope you burn in HELL.. :angry: of course being in "organized crime" hes gotta cover his tracks..... :mad:
OMG - Whats he like!!! I dont believe it!!
Ok girls lets form a posse and go look for the SOB, and tear him from limb to limb..then burn him !!!!!!! What a horrible person !!!!!!!:angry:
now thats hardly pleasant is it Jodi!? that would be just as bad as him now wouldnt it!? :pQuote:
Originally Posted by JustJodi
Craig isn't a pleasant person,, unplugging a mans life support system, then killing an innocent nurse,, so yea,, he doesnt deserve any pleasantness thank you very much :ninja:Quote:
Originally Posted by bondboffin
I am with Jodi on this.. Craig is a nasty piece of work and doesn't deserve to be walking the street.. gary does/did.. he is a hero who tried to save his kids.Quote:
Originally Posted by bondboffin
INT: TORBAY GENERAL HOSPITAL
Richard is sitting on the seats alone. Hilary walks over, looking concerned.
Hilary: I can't beleive this...
Richard: Tell me about it. More to the point, why would anyone...
Richard stops, mid sentence. Hilary puts her hand on his shoulder.
Hilary: What is it?
Richard: Dont say anything to Tanya... But the police are involved now...
Hilary: You what?!
Richard: About Gary's.... Gary's death... They're treating it as suspicous...
Hilary: But we all saw...
Richard: Someone unplugged the life-support machine, Hilary. Why would anyone do that?!
Hilary: But.... I.... I dont... why would anyone do this?!
Hilary stares into space, shocked. Richard stands up, and walks to the coffee machine. He gets a coffee for Hilary and passes it to her.
Richard: Come on, we've all got to be strong. For Tanya...
Hilary nods, and sips at the coffee. He gets another coffee for Tanya, and looks around for her...
Richard: Where is she?!
Hilary: Who?!
Richard: Tanya! Whats she doing wandering around after all this?! Her mind must be screwed up... god knows what she'll do...
He calls down the corridor
Richard: Tanya?!
uh oh!! Tanya is gone missing!! Does she suspect something??
Where has tanya gone ...?? I still can't believe Craig has done that evil :angry:
BAYMOORE BEACH
Amy is sitting on the beach, running the sand through her fingers, thinking. Patrick walks up behind her, and sits next to her. He puts his arm around her. She pulls away....
Patrick: I dont know what to say, Amy...
Amy: As if what happened in Ireland wasn't bad enough, this all happens!
Patrick: I thought we'd put Ireland behind us...
Amy: So did i, but then your bloody daughter turned up on the doorstep!
Patrick: I didn't realise she was pregnant! What more can i say?!
Amy: The only reason we came to Devon was because of you and Niamh. I thought we'd got through all that, but you couldn't even be carefull with her, could ya?!
Patrick is silent.
Amy: She was my best mate, Patrick. Do you know how that felt?! To know your husband was having an affair with your best mate behind your back?!.... And i thought w'd got through it by coming to Devon.... but everytime i look at her, all i see if you and Niamh together!
Patrick: But Amy...
Amy: (interupts) Everytime i see her, i think of the biggest betrayal you did. How can i live with that?!
Don't live with it amy chuck him out and get rid of him for good
INT. Psychiatric Centre - DAY
Gregg sits alone in a padded visitor room, the only furniture is a table and two chairs. A large glass window is one of walls, where security watch trough.
The door opens and in walks a doctor with Tanya. Gregg's face lights up.
Gregg: Tanya...hehe....Tanya....you've come to see me...
Tanya sits down nervously, eyeing up Gregg in his straight jacket.
Doctor: I'll be next door... (to Gregg) behave yourself you nutter...
Gregg: I'm not a nutter!
Despite his best efforts to protest this the doctor leaves the room.
Gregg: You okay?
Tanya doesnt talk to him.
Gregg: Tanya...are you okay!?...The family...they alright?
Tanya (Calm) Alright? No...they are not "alright"...Jessica...and Jacob...they're dead...and Gary's...he's dead...
Gregg: Dead!?... Wha?....What!?...How!?
Tanya erupts in anger and stands up banging her first against the table. This disturbs him.
Tanya: Because of you! You Killed them! You! I hope your bloody happy! :angry:
Gregg: (Confused) Me!?
Tanya: Yes you! You set fire to the warehouse! You killed them! (Tanya shakes Gregg violenlty) You killed my family! You *******!
The security get up from their seats in the room next door.
Tanya: Why did you do it! (Continues to shake Gary) Why the hell did you do this to me!?
Tanya starts to punch Gary hard, he whinces with the pain.
Gregg: I didnt mean to...she paid me...she paid me to steal the kids...
This stuns Tanya, she looks hurt and confused.
Gregg: She!? Who's she!?
The doctor and secuirty guards come in and restrain Tanya.
Doctor: I think you'd better go now...it was a bad idea for you to come...
Tanya: Who paid you!? Who!?
Gregg: Hilary!
...
Oh no Hilary is caught out my god whats gonna happen next???
:eek: So tanya knows it was hilary what is gonna happen, more now please!
Ok Tanya knows but the thing of it will any one believe Hilary had any thing to do with it:searchme:
So Tanya knows - thats great, but whos going to believe her - Hilary has protested already, everyone thought Tanya was going on about it when she initially said that Hilary had something to do with the twins disappearance, so why would that change now..... And whos going to believe Greg after everything he has done....me thinks no one
Oh my god, Tayna know but nobody is going to believe Gregg, he is in a mental hospital.. Hilary is going to get away with it
I would have serious complaints to make though if I were a relative of Gregg and hearing him being called Nutter - totally unprofessional - I could understand a security guard saying it, or a helper, or assistant, but not the doctors....Quote:
Originally Posted by bondboffin
But great stuff still Bry and Abbey - keep it coming!!! Though doesn't look like Hilary will get her just deserts :angry:
I have to agree with Em on the first part of her post,, I can understand a sadistic guard working grave yard shift .. banging on the door and saying "shut up you nutter" or " button it you loony",, but I would have some serious doubts a doctor would utter such nonsense...it would be totally unethical and unprofessional,,Quote:
Originally Posted by jojomum
Actually the stories are getting reaallllly good keep up the good work Abi and Bry....... I certainly hope at least one villian gets punished :angry:
But which villian 1) Gregg - stalked Tanya for months and set fire to the warehouse with him and the kids in it (he escaped but clearly a loon at this stage) 2) Craig - unplugged Tanya's husband life support machine cause she was brave enough to stand up to him on 2 occasions (nearly died herself in the first one) and then he kills the nurse who could identify him as the last person to be seen with Gary or 3) Hilary - she started all of this, brought Gregg back, paid him to take the kids. Has talked with Craig about getting Tanya back in some way or another.. the choice is yoursQuote:
Originally Posted by JustJodi
at the moment Gregg is not going any where any time soon, hes locked up in an asylum, Hilary is visibly bothered by how things went, and some one taped her "confession" ..Craig was seen by way too many people in the hospital, the nurse maybe dead, but the CCTV's in the hospital will also tell the tale too,, dunno but at least one should be punished,, :searchme: Would love to see all 3 lumped together and punished but...........
TORBAY HOSPITAL
Tanya storms back down the corridor. She spots Hilary, and walks over to her, intimdatly...
Hilary: Tanya! Richards been looking for you! We were worried!
Tanya: Worried my ****...
Hilary: Tanya?!
Tanya: Shut up trying to be all nice with me. How the hell can you even look me in the eye, Hil?!
Hilary: I dont know what you mean...
Tanya: I know. Gregg told me. About.... About you paying him...
Hilary: He's a mad man, you shouldn't listen to a word he says...
Tanya: Stop trying to deny it! You paid him to take my children Hilary! And now... and now they're dead!
Hilary: Calm down Tanya...
Tanya: Stop that! You killed my children, and my husband.... And your going to pay for it, Hillary. If its the last thing i do...
Tanya storms off, in tears. Hilary grabs her phone, and talks into it...
Hilary: Craig?.... We need to talk...
BUSTED! Why is Hilary ringing Craig what is she gonna do now?
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - MORNING
Claire is lying in her bed, having just woken up. She looks at a picture of her and Romeo in love:wub: . She holds back the tears and places the photo flat down on the beside cabinet. She switches on the tv, the Trisha Goddard show is on.
Trisha: Hi, and welcome to the Trisha Goddard show...today..."My girlfriend's pregnant with my best friends baby..."
Man: (To Woman) You are nothing but a dirty little slag!
Woman: I love you! I want you back in my life...i didnt mean to!
Man: I dont love you! You betrayed me!
Claire switches off the tv. She starts to sob to herself. There is a knock on the door and in comes Val with a cup of tea.
Val: Two fat lumps...ozzing with milk...just how you like it!
Claire: What!?
Val: I made you a cuppa...
Claire: Oh thanks...
Claire whipes away her tears on the quilt.
Val: Hey! Hey! Whats the tears for babes?
Val runs over to Claire and sits on the side of the bed, hugging her daughter.
Claire: It's going to haunt me forever isnt it mom...i ent gonna be able to live with the guilt...
Val: We all make mistakes Claire...it's how we deal with them that counts...It's best just to forget about it...and move on...
Claire: I cant tough can I!? (points to stomach) Not with this inside of me!! It could well be Chris's baby!
Val: And it could well be Romeos...your taking things out of propotion hear Claire...Romeo doesnt know what happened...and you and Chris are hardly going to hell him... what he doesnt know wont hurt him...
Claire: But I'll know...every day of my life...I'll know i betrayed him...and lied to him...its just one big mess!
Claire starts to cry again.
Val: Oh love...i hate to see you like this....but you need to cheer up...or Emma and your dad are gonna get suspicious...and we can do without them knowing...until you've made up your mind what your going to do...but your my daughter...and i love you...i know...whatever decison you make...it'll be the right one.
Claire stops crying and looks at Val.
Claire: Thanks mom...
Claire shows a small smile.
INT. DEVON CLIFFSIDE - DAY
Hilary is sitting bt the top of a cliff, looking down on Baymoore beach from a tourist spot with picnics baskets, where Craig told Ed to get out of Baymoore last year.
She looks around nervously, checking her watch. She looks out into the cliffs and sees the burnt wreckage of the warehouse by the harbour. She holds back the tears.
Craig: Want a chip?
Hilary looks up and sees Craig standing there with a bag of chips in his hands, he places them down on the picnic table by Hilary.
Hilary: Chips part of a gangsters daily diet?
Craig: Let's not make this meeting seem out of the ordinary okay? We dont need tounges wagging...
Hilary: Oh i'm sure you'd chop them off if they did...
Craig laughs sarcastically at this, then gives Hilary a serious look.
Craig: Whats up then...you dont call me urgently demanding to see me unless its major...
Hilary: Tanya knows....
Craig: (Worried) About what!?
Hilary: About the kids at the warehouse of course...
Craig looks relieved...
Hilary: Why what did you think she knew...?
Craig: Nothing, just ignore me...how do you know she knows!?
Hilary: That phyco Gregg told her...
Craig: Phyco being the word...no ones gonna listen to him...hes doolally tap.. but if they do find out the truth, you dont mention me in it! Do you get me!?
Hilary: If its jail or the truth...i cant make no promises...
Craig: You'd only go down for a couple of years...you were the middle man...you gave Gregg my money...he carried out my plan...if Tanya...or the police ever found that out, I'd be totally and utterly screwed...
Hilary: ...as long as you dont tell anyone about my involvment...
Craig: Dont wory Hilary, i dont fancy poridge either...
Hilary grabs a chip and smiles at Craig. The pair laugh together in satisfaction.
what a *******??? he organised all this!! and he is going to get away with it.. Ok Craig in now enemy number one :angry:
Some how i dont see Hilary and Craig getting caught i hope they dont i love them
:eek: I am not liking this at all :angry: They are mean and evil!
BUt hang on didn't Hilary confess it on a tape ..... ::hmm:
INT. Red Rum Flat – Morning
Amy is on the phone to Val. She looks over at Patrick and Hayley who are laughing and joking at the breakfast table. She has a frown on her face.
Amy: (Into Phone) Happy Birthday babes! I’ll drop your prezzie round later…yeah im not too bad… I tell you what that Hayley is getting on my wick…she thinks she rules this place…she’s only been here five minutes…
The camera cuts to Hayley and Patrick who are talking.
Hayley: And well he was always being a bit of a fool…don’t see what I saw in him really…so I didn’t even bother telling him that I’ve come over here.
Patrick: (Laughs) Your learning the ways of the O Brian family fast love!
Hayley: Difference is I don’t leave them with babies…
There is an awkward silence between the pair as Amy walks towards them.
Hayley: (Sarcastic) Oh your off the phone at last…
Patrick: BT’s best customer she is the amount she gasses.
Amy gives Patrick an unimpressed look.
Hayley: (To Amy) So then you going to eat this fry up I cooked for you?
Amy: No…I’ve lost my appetite… what you after anyways?
Hayley: Nothing just trying to show my gratitude for you letting me stay here…
Amy: (Under Gritted Teeth) Not that I had a say in the matter…
Hayley: You know mumbling is the first sign of Insanity.
Amy tries to swing for Hayley when she isn’t looking but thinks better of it.
Patrick: So then Hayley…you going to enrol up at the local college?
Hayley: Yeah I was thinking of going down there today…seeing what courses they do…I was thinking…
Amy interrupts Hayley, intentionally to annoy her and break down her conversation with Patrick.
Amy: Patrick we need to get the food sorted for the wake…
Patrick waves Amy off and continues to talk to Hayley. Amy grits her teeth and stands with her hands on her hips.
Patrick: Any ideas what job you want to do in the future…
Amy: Maybe she’ll follow in her mothers footsteps and clean pub toilets…
Hayley: What did you just say!?
Patrick tries to avoid an argument between the pair…
Patrick: Just ignore her, shes probably on her time of the month and all that…woman’s stuff…
Amy is about to explode but instead she storms of the room in a rage.
INT. Andrew’s House – Day
It’s Val’s birthday, the room is filled with torn up wrapping paper and an assortment of presents. Claire and James are sitting with Val on the sofa. Emma walks in with her college bag on her back and a piece of toast in her hands.
Emma: Right then mom I’m off…have a good birthday…
Val: I’ll try to too love…thanks for the presents.
Claire and James say their goodbyes to Emma, she leaves.
James: Come on Val, cheer up, its your birthday for Christ’s sake!
Val: Yeah well a funeral isn’t the number one thing to have to do on my birthday is it?
Claire: Come on mom… that’s not till later…enjoy the day as much as you can. Do you like your camera?
Val holds up a camcorder. She stares at it as if its alien.
Val: Erm…well…I haven’t got a clue how to use it…
James: We’ll show you…
Val: No, I want to learn for myself…
Val gets up and steps backwards, trying to capture Claire and James on the sofa, she crashes into the coffee table and knocks down her pile of presents.
Val: Oh crumbs!
Val moves the camera up to her face, and squints her eyes, to find which button to press. She presses record
Val: Say hi fro the camera.
James is waving with a big smile on his face, Claire has a slightly worried look on her face due to the pregnancy.
Val: Its filming! We hey! That’s a stage up!
Val trips over one of her books and the camera falls on the floor and starts to rewind. Claire and James laugh at Val.
James: (Joking) Well I don’t think Spielberg’s out of job yet!
INT. Honeysuckle Cottage - Day
No Doubt’s “Don’t Speak” begins to play. Tanya is sitting alone in her bedroom, staring into the mirror at the dressing table. She is dressed immaculately in black. She looks at a picture of her, Gary and the children. Wet mascara runs down her face.
Tanya opens a draw and brings out a bottle of gin and some pills. She stares at them and the mirror contemplating whether she should use them. She sees the depressed look on her face and puts them back in the draw, she runs the mascara from her eyes, holds her head up high and walks out of the room.
INTERCUT:
INT. Torbay Church – Day
Tanya walks down the main isle of the church, residents of Baymoore packing the church. Hilary and Vicky follow her, tears running down their faces. Behind them Richard, Nick, James and Patrick carry the coffin on their shoulders. There is not a dry eye in the whole church.
As “Don’t Speak” plays we see various shots of the Taylors and the residents crying, and the faint mutterings of the vicar carrying out the ceremony. Tanya gets up from the crowded pews and goes up to the front of the church.
Tanya: The fact that this church is packed to the rafters…shows how much of a man Gary was…he was a great friend to everyone who knew him…every in Baymoore liked him…despite their opinions on my family…
Craig stares at the coffin, unemotionally, Mandy holds his hand for comfort.
Tanya: He was…a great man… words couldn’t describe him… he had no faults… he was always friendly and supportive to anyone who needed some cheering up… that café of his… he served up more advice than fried breakfasts…
Nick smiles slightly at this, Gary being his best friend.
Tanya: He was genuine…he didn’t care about himself…just those around him.. he adored the ground that our kids walked on… he loved them unconditionally…and when we lost them…he went trough so much heartache, as did i…
Hilary holds back the tears, choking up with guilt.
Tanya: He did not deserve to die the way he did! He has been taken from us all so cruelly! We all loved him! He loved us…but now he’s gone!
Hilary starts to burst into tears, Richard hugs her in comfort.
Tanya: (Points to Hilary) And it’s all because of that bitch there!
The church erupts into shocks and mutters, as Tanya points aggressively at Hilary.
Tanya: Hilary Blackstock, who you all “adore” so much, was responsible for Gary’s death!
Hilary begins to shake, staring at Tanya with a gormless look on her face. She looks at Richard for support, shaking her head at Tanya’s accusations.
Richard: Tanya, stop this absurdness now!
Tanya: Gregg told me everything! How she paid him to kidnap my kids! To kill my kids! To kill Gary! It was all down to Hilary! She hates me and this is her revenge!
Richard gets up from his seat and grabs Tanya forcefully away towards the vestry.
Richard: Enough of this Tanya! You are speaking nonsense!
Tanya: I hope your happy you evil bitch! You murdered my family! You have their blood on your hands!
Hilary is starting to have a panic attack, Nick is holding her in support. The residents of Baymoore are looking at each other in shock. Craig straightens his tie and shows no emotion to the scene in front of him.
Tanya: I hope you rot in hell!
:rotfl: at val and the camera!
:eek: I diddn't think tnaya would confront her at the funeral :eek: Evil hilary but evil-er Craig :angry: he better not get away with it!
INT. TORBAY COLLEGE - DAY
Emma is walking down the coridoor at college. A group of chavy teenage boys are blocking the doorway to her classroom.
Emma: Can i get past please?
Kevin: Whats it worth eh?
Emma: Oh Kev' stop pratting around will you?
Kevin: How about a quickie round the back of the bikesheds? :p
His friends laugh at this.
Kevin: Come on i know your gagging for it... the feel of a good white man...
Emma: What the hell do you mean by that!?
Kevin: Well your going out with a "Paki" ent ya!?
Emma: Shut up you racist! Besides... he's not from Pakistan...he's from India...
Kevin: Same thing...he's still scum
Emma looses her temper and slaps Kevin around the face. He moves towards her and pushes her up against the lockers.
Kevin: No one slaps me, you stupid little bitch!
In the distance is Hayley, she walks down the coridoor confidently.
Hayley: Oh! You! Pack it in yeah!?
Kevin: Who the hell are you!?
Hayley: Your real life nightmare if you dont let go of her right away...
Kevin: I'm not scared of you!
Hayley: Wanna bet!?
Hayley kicks Kevin in the groin, he falls to the floor in pain. His friends back away.
Hayley: You touch her again and I'll do worse than that!
Emma and Hayley walk off, leaving the group of chavs speechless.
Emma: Thanks for that...
Hayley: No worries...it was nothing.
Emma smiles as the pair head out of college.
INT: TORBAY CHURCH
Richard drags Tanya into the Vestry of the church. He makes her sit on a chair, and stands over her.
Richard: This isn't the place nor the time to bring all this up, Tanya!
Tanya: Aren't you listening to me?! Its her fault we're here! Its her fault.... that Garys dead!
Richard: Shes done no such thing. Look, i understand this is hard for you, and you might no be seeing things very clearly or anything, but please, Tanya, dont say something so hurtfull and wrong.
Tanya: Its the truth though!
Richard: Hilary would do no such thing.
Tanya: But Gregg...
Richard: Greggs a madman, Tanya! Surely you can see that?! He's mixing up your mind, so you dont blame him for anything. Just shifting the blame onto her.
Tanya: But shes not as innocent as you think. She never has been. Theres always been this fued between us, you must have realised?! She'd do anything to hurt me... including
Richard: (interupts) Hilary might not be perfect, but dont you dare accuse her of murder!
Tanya: Can't you see what she's like, Dad?! Shes killed my husband and my children! How can you live with that?!
Richard: Hilary has done nothing. I can understand you being emotional on a day like this, and i dont want this to sound harsh... but it needs to be said. This so called "fued" was nothing to do with Hilary. Its either something you've dreamed up.... or your the one that started it.
Tanya: How can you say that?!
Tanya's eyes well up with tears...
Richard: I know todays tough for you. I wouldn't expect anything different. But you need to accept that Gregg is the one to blame, not Hilary.
Tanya: But...
Richard: And if you can't.... then theres no point you being part of our family.
:eek: But then you could see that coming really couldn't you......
Silly man - wearing those rose tinted glasses again :angry:
INT. BAYMOORE BEACH - DAY
Emma and Hayley are walking on the beach sharing a bag of chips.
Emma: I'm glad you stuck up to that idiot...he's always like that...
Hayley: Jerks like him need to be taught a lesson... and I taught him a lesson he'll never forget
Emma smiles, and laughs lightly to herself.
Hayley: What's so funny?
Emma: Oh...it's just a coincidence...i met my boyfriend Andonis in the same circumstances... he was helping me...
Hayley: Maybe its a sign of a good friendship to come then...
Emma: You never know...life works in perculiar ways...you seem cool tough...
Hayley: Yeah...you do too...:)
There is a silence for a moment, the pair are enjoying each others company.
Emma: So then, you enjoying Baymoore?
Hayley: Its ok i suppose...just really boring...theres nothing to do here...
Emma: Welcome to my world! I've had to grow up here for the past 18 years!
Hayley: Saying that it's better than Ireland...just wished i'd got to know my dad sooner...
Emma: Your dad!?...What...the Red Rum...!? Oh my god... Patrick!!! :eek:
Hayley: You know him?
Emma: Yeah of course, my sister Claire works at his pub... god ent he a dirty dog! A daughter stashed away with no-one knowing...
Hayley: It was as much a shock for him as it is for everyone around here...just hope they take to me...
Emma: Of course they will...your a great person..we have so much in common...I can see us becoming really good mates..
Hayley: Yeah, so can I...
The pair smile friendly and head off down the Beach
The Singh's House - Day
Iqbal and Kash are sitting in the dining room discussing finances. Mohammed is playing on his playstaion, Andonis sits on the sofa staring into space.
Sanjita walks into the room and sits next to Andonis.
Sanjita: You okay son? You seem... down...
Andonis: I'm fine mom...
Sanjita: You dont look it...is everything fine?
Andonis: I said so didnt I!?
Sanjita: Ok no need to snap Don'... you and Emma are still ok arent you?
Andonis: Yeah we are...it's just college its getting me down...
Sanjita: What the exams getting to you or something?
Andonis: No its some of the lads...they have been pushing me around...calling me names and stuff...
Sanjita: You what!? Why!?
Iqbal and Kash walk into the living room, after Sanjita speaks up so loudly.
Andonis: Becuase I'm Indian....
Kash: What's all this?
Sanjita: He's getting bullied at college
Kash: Bullied!?
Andonis: I never said that Mom...it's just cus im Indian...they are giving me some stick..
Kash: Racial abuse!? Right that's it, Im phoning up your college prinicple striaght away!
Andonis: No dad, that's gonna make it worse!
Kash: I dont care! I will not allow this to happen to my son!
Sanjita: Kash...you know how it goes...when you tell on the bullies...they make it twice as worse!
Kash: We can not let it continue Sanjita!
Iqbal: Kash...just dont...thing's will sort themselves out without you intervening.
Sanjita smiles at Iqbal for standing up for her and Andonis. The pair share a long lingering look - it is clear they are sitll together.
Kash: No! I will not drop this matter! Pass me the phone Sanjita!
Andonis covers his head in his hands. Sanjita and Iqbal grind their teeth.
INT. Singh House - Day
Kash is shouting into the phone in the living room. Sanjita and Iqbal are in the kitchen.
Sanjita: He can be so stubborn when he wants to be!
Sanjita is washing up the dishes in a rage.
Iqbal: Well he must be good in bed...
Sanjita turns around in an amused shock
Sanjita: What!?
Iqbal: Well there must be something keeping you with him...and not in my bed every night of the week.
Sanjita laughs and smiles flirtatously. Iqbal moves towards Sanjita and presses his body against her. She leans back as he advances and kisses her neck and feels her body.
Sanjita: We shouldn't be doing this...he's only next door...
Iqbal: So!? I want you so bad...
Sanjita: I want you to...
Iqbal: Then why are we keeping this secret...
Sanjita: Because...
Iqbal: Because why?
Sanjita: (Sighs) I want to see you tonight...
Iqbal: You can see your brother in law anytime...
Sanjita: I mean "see"..
Iqbal moves away as Kash calls for Sanjita. He passes her the keys to his flats.
Iqbal: My place...tonight...I'll be waiting...
Sanjita holds the keys close to her heart. She then walks into the living room...
INT: HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE- day
Tanya is sitting emotionless in the front room, her eyes red with tears. Richard is sitting on the edge of the stairs, watching over her concerned. Theres a knock at the door. Tanya doesn't react, so Richard gets up and answers it. Its a policeman.
Police Officer: Sorry to intrudude at such a difficult time for your family, but i need a quick word with Mrs Donagoon.
Tanya replies, without looking up, her gaze fixed.
Tanya: I'm in here.
PO: So you are.
The policeman enters, and stands in the front room.
PO: I'm sorry to inform you, but the investagation into Gary's death hasn't thrown up any new leads. I'm sorry to tell you, but at this point, the investagation cannot be taken any further.
Richard looks shocked and concerned, realising Tanya doesn't know about it yet...
Tanya: Investagation? What investagation?!
PO: The investagation into Gary's death. I'm sure you were informed about the suspicious circumstances he died under...?
Tanya: Suspicious circumstances?! What suspicious circumstances?!
Tanya looks to Richard...
Tanya: Dad?!
Richard: (to the PO) I'm sure you understand, i didn't think it was the right time to tell her. Not after everything. So if you dont mind...
Tanya: Whats going on, Dad?!
Richard looks to the floor, thinking. He then sits on the chair next to Tanya, and holds her hand.
Richard: When Gary died, his life support machine had been unplugged. It was keeping him alive, all his vitals working...
Tanya: And someone turned it off?! Why didn't you tell me about this?! About my own husbands death?!
PO: I dont think this is the right time for me to be here. I just wanted to inform you about the leads. If anything turns up, you'll be the first to know.
The police officer leaves, and Richard continues...
Richard: No one knew anything for certain at the time, and you were in such a state... no one could be expected to be able to take in all of that. I didn't tell you, because i thought that would be best for you. Maybe i was wrong, but who knows...
Tanya: My husband was killed, and you thought not telling me was the best thing?! What kind of person are you?!
Tanya stands up in rage, standing over Richard.
Richard: Your kids and husband had died. I didn't want you doing anything stupid...
Tanya: So you lied to me!
Richard: I didn't lie. I would have told you, when the time was right...
Tanya: And when would that be? A Week? A Month? A YEAR?!
Tanya storms over to the window, furious. She looks outside and sees a car pass, similar to Craigs. She flashbacks, of whirring pictures of Craig at the hospital, as her voice says over the top....
He was there. Craig was walking down the corridor of the hospital. When Gary died, he was there... but why?! Why did he turn up...? He went into Gary's room..... why?! Why was he there....? He wasn't there to see me, he barely said a thing to me...
Why was he there...?
What did he do?!
Tanyas eyes open fully, as she realises that Craig was there, and involved.
Tanya: Craig....
Richard: You what?!
Tanya: Craig. He was there. When Gary died.... he was there!
Tanya grabs her coat, and runs over to the Garage to confront Craig...
Uh oh, this is soooo going to end in tears