What a brownie point for Gregg no he should not have done this in the first place
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What a brownie point for Gregg no he should not have done this in the first place
Scratch the brownie pt. hope he is nabbed and hung, shot, gassed, and burnt :DQuote:
Originally Posted by bakedbean
EXT. ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
Hoards of police officers get out of the cars and runs towards the warehouse. A senior Police officer speaks trough a megaphone.
PO: Gregg Bryant! This is Torbay police... we have you surrounded! Come out with your hands up! I repeat come out with your hands up.
Tanya is crying to herself. Richard is holding her. Nick holds Vicky tightly. Hilary works her way round from the back entrance to the family.
Hilary: Oh my god! What's happening!?
Richard: They're just about to storm the warehouse, what took you so long?
Hilary: I had to go and find a callbox for the police...
Richard: What about your mobile?
Hilary: Battery's flat... what about the children? Are they in there?
Richard: They must be...
PO: This is your last chance Gregg! Come out with your hands up or we'll come in to get you!
INT. ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
Gregg is walking around the warehouse, muttering a lulabye. He is throwing petrol all around the warehouse, inclduing on the children. They are screaming.
Gregg: Hush little baby, don't say a word, Momma's going to buy you a mockingbird
Gregg covers his eyes from the blue sirens. He starts muttering louder to bloke out the Police Officer's calls.
Gregg: Dont worry Kids...not long now...we're going to a better place...up above...
All of a sudden the doors are kicked open and sworms of police officers charge into the warehouse. Gregg smirks at the officers.
Gregg: Bye bye...
Gregg lights a match and throws it down onto the petral. The warehouse instantly goes up in flames, the police officers and unable to get to Gregg or the children.
POs: ****! Get out of here! Come on quick!
EXT. ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
The police run out of the warehosue fast.
POs: Fire! Quick call the fire brigade!
Tanya looks at Gary in horror.
Tanya: (Devastated) Oh my god...my babies!
Pos: He's covered them in petrol!
Tanya: Omg NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
Gary steps away from the family and throws off his jacket.
Nick: Gary...wha...wha what are you doing!?
Gary: I've got to save my kids...i've just got to....
Richard: Dont be a fool Gary! You'll die!
Gary: I've got to Richard!
Gary runs off towards the burning building.
Tanya: (screams) NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! GARY!!!! NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
Richard and Nick have to restrain Tanya from running towards the buildining. Vicky and Hilary clutch each other in fear. Hilary has a worried and shocked look on her face, it is clear that things have gotten more serious than she had intedned.
Tanya: Come back! Gary Please!!!!!!!!!!
Gary: I Love you Tanya!!
Gary runs into the building...
Who will die? Who will survive?
Holy *******.... Bry U got me by the edge of my seat,,, please let the kids live,, :crying: And Gary too !!!!!!!!!!!
Oh My Godddddd!!!!
You better post the next bit bry or abbey - and pretty darn quick!!! :rotfl: I need to know whats happening....NOW!!!!
(Please :D )
arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrghhhhhhhhhh Bry and Abi,, give me a fix quick on whats gonna happen next,, arrrrrrrrrghhhhhhhhhhh I gotta know I hafta know gotta gotta hafta hafta !!!!!!!!!:rotfl:
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE:p
I think they are all going to die dont ask me why i just have this feeling. Hilary what have you done!!!
:eek: What?????? Just caught up! And Oh mu god, i hope its hilary and gregg that die meanies!
You must post more i need to know what happens please x
EXT. ABANDONDED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
The fire engines pass the gates to the warehouse. A sign is fixed to the gates:
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Tanya: Please! You've got to save my husband! And my kids! Please! Im begging you..!
PO: The firemen will do the best that they can..
INT. ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
Gary runs into the warehouse, his body natural falls back with the heat of the fire. He starts to cough as he breaths in the smoke. In the distance he can see Gregg running up a metal staircase to the rooftop.
Gary: You *******! Why did you do this!?
Gregg: All I ever did was love her...and she threw it all back in my face!
The cops storm in from the roof entrance and grabs Gregg. He shouts loudly in frustration.
Gregg: See you in hell Gary!
The police lead Gregg up onto the roof and into a police helicopter. Gary continues to cough, he charges into the flames toward his kids who are screaming.
Gary: Dont worry kids...daddy's coming to save you...
As Gary gets towards his kids, he sees flamable gas signs, he looks around in a panic and sees the room is filled with gas cansiters...
Gary: ****!
He begins to untie the children from the chairs. We get constant cuts to the flames approaching the gas canisters. The firemen enter the warehouse but it is too late...
BOOM!
EXT. ABDANODNED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
The entire warehouse explodes, parts of the building are flung into the air and land in the nearby water. The police, firemen and the Taylors are forced back by the impact of the explosion.
EXT. RED RUM - NIGHT
The punters rush outside as they hear an explosion.
James: What the hell was that!?
Val: Oh my god! Look! (Points) Over there!
In the distance the burning wrekage or the warehouse can be seen.
EXT. ABANDONDED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
The police are rushing from the warehouse, pushing the Taylors as far away from the building as possible.
Tanya: Nooooo!!!!!!!! GARY!!!!!!
Hilary wanders off from the others, she starts to panick and breath heavily, she throws up into the water. Firemen frantcily run around shouting commands and getting the hoses out from the engines. As they run into the warehouse...
BOOM!
A second smaller explsosion rocks the warehouse. Tanya screams frantically.
Tanya: NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow! :eek: This is brilliant! Definetly keeping me on the edge of my seat!
OMFG!!!!
Whats Hilary going to do about this - i can't believe it!!! I'm......dumbstruck!
EXT. ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
A few minutes have passed. Richard leads a faint Hilary back to his car. Nick holds Vicky who is in absolute shock.
Tanya is on her kness in tears. She shes a crowd of fire men leaving the warehouse. She runs up to them as they carry out the bodies of Jessica and Jacob.
Tanya: Oh my god! My babies... are they ok!? Please tell me they are ok!?
The firemen look at each other, unsure how to break the news.
Tanya: How are they!? Speak god damn you!!!
The police officer touches Tanya on the shoulder.
PO: I'm ever so sorry Mrs Donagoon...but...they havent made it.
This news hits Tanya like a bullet to the gut. She stops crying as she is in so much shock...
Tanya: No... no they... cant be...my babies arent dead... MY BABIES ARENT DEAD!!!
Tanya suddenly bursts into tears, she falls to her knees and crawls over to wear the firemen have placed their bodies. She screams out as she cradles the bodies of her dead children.
Tanya: No...no...my babies...my precious little darlings...
Nick runs over to Tanya
Tanya: Tanya...i dont know what to say...
Tanya: (Mutters) Just leave me....leave me with my babies...
Fireman: (To PO) Sir! Over here!
The police officer runs over to the firemen as they bring out Gary. Nick runs over to them.
Nick: Oh my god! How is he!?
Fireman: He's alive...just... we need to get him to the hospital immediatley...
Nick runs over to Tanya.
Nick: Tanya...they've got Gary...he's alive...thank god...he's alive...
Tanya has not aknowledged this in the slighest. She is staring out into the sea, cradling her dead children in her arms.
Nick: Tanya!? Did you hear me!? Gary's alive!
Vicky: Come On Nick...we'd best go in the ambulance...
Nick and Vicky leave Tanya alone. They get into the ambulance with Gary. It speeds off away from the warehouse.
The police lead a handcuffed Gregg into the back of a police car.
PO: Gregg Bryant i am arresting you with the kidnap and murder of Jessica and Jacob Donagoon, you do not have to say anything, but anything you do say may be taken down in evidence and may be something that you later rely on in coirt...
The police lower his head and throw him into the back of the police car. Gregg starts to mutter a lulabye again. As he stares out of the window at the burning warehouse and Tanya.
Gregg: Rockabye Baby, on the treetops....
The scene cuts to Tanya on the harbour platform, crying uncontrobably, cradling her dead children. The chilling muttering of Gregg can still be heard as the screen fades to black
When the wind blows, the cradle will rock
When the bough breaks, the cradle will fall.
And Down will come baby, cradle and all!
:eek: :crying: Ermmmm, I'm in total shock, I don't know what to say, but want to say something, ermmmm - noooooo - those poor children!!! Gregg you ******* and Hilary, you need to strung up for your part in this!!
nnnnnnooooooooooo how could you do that Gregg.. Hilary is the ultimate bitch.. The poor kids.. Tanya must be devestated.. I hope Gary is ok.. poor man.. seen his kids die like that :angry::angry:
I hope Hilary and Gregg burn in hell
Oh my god i mean oh my god what the hell has just happened how can you do this? Even Hilary has gone to far this time and Gregg what the hell why should he survive and not the damn kids.
INT: HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE
Tanya is lying on one of the kids beds. Shes clutching a teddy in her arms, and sobbing into its head. Richard walks into the room...
Richard: I... I dont know what to say...
Tanya says nothing, just carries on sobbing into the teddy bear...
Richard: You're not alone, Tanya... we're all here for you, you know that...
Tanya: They're gone... My babies.... They're... gone....
Richard fights back the tears...
Richard: We can get through this as a family...
Tanya: No we can't... how can we get through anything anymore?! my kids.... my kids are dead... How do i cope with everyday, Dad?! How do i cope?! They were my life... and now they're gone...
Richard: You've got to keep hope...
Tanya: For what?! My life was their lives... they meant the world to me... i was their mother!....
Richard: You've got to keep hope in Gary... he's not gone, Tanya. We've got to hope... and pray... that he survives...
Tanya: I can't cope with this anymore... my two children... the kids i gave birth to.... they kids i devoted time and love and everything to... they're gone... What did they ever do?! Why wasn't it me in that building?!
Richard: You've got to be here for Gary. Help him...
Tanya: I'm not fit to be anything anymore... i was a mother. That was just what i was... now what am i?!
Richard: A wife, Tanya, A wife.
Richard leans over and gives Tanya a hug...
Richard: I'll... I'll arrange the funerals...
Tanya sobs into Richards shoulder. Heartbroken.
:eek: :crying: Oh my god, oh my god, the kids nooooooo :(
Poor Tanya, but at least gary is alive!
Hilary and Gregg need to die for what they have done, although gregg i think has gone a tad physco!! Evil people :angry:
ah poor Tayna... god know what she is going through :(:(
Poor, poor Tanya will she ever be happy.
EXT: HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE
Richard is walking out of the cottage slowing, reeling from whats happened. Nick walks up the path the other direction. They meet...
Nick: Hows she doing?
Richard: How do you think shes doing? Shes a wreck... I dont know what to do, Nick... how can you comfort someones that... thats lost both their children?!
Nick: We just need to be their for her, i guess. No matter how hard that is...
Richard: She needs to focus on Gary... help him survive... I'm just gonna go make some calls about... about the twins funerals....
Nick: Dont worry, i'll keep an eye on her...
Richard: Thanks, Nick.
Richard turns to walk off. Nick grabs his shoulder as he passes...
Nick: I'll take Greggs job in the buisness for the time being. We dont want to look around for a replacement- not just yet, eh?!
Richard: Thanks. Your one in a million, Nick. Good man.
Richard walks off, leaving Nick on the path. For the first time in hours, he smiled. Happy to have got his apraisal :)
Ommmmmmmmmmmmggggggggggggg those poor tiny childeren:crying: Gregg should have burnt to a crisp in there not those kids, where was Hillary in all this,:mad: I sure hope that Gregg mentions Hilarys name and they lean on her. I do hope Gary pulls thru,, Poor Tanya,, all of her problems started when hilary came back !!!!!!!!!!!!!!:angry: :angry:
INT. RED RUM - MORNING
There is a persistant rattling of the front door to the pub. Amy walks through the bar.
Amy: Yeah hold your horses im coming...im coming...
Amy unbolts the door and opens the door with a smile...
Amy: Good morning...oh...it's you...
The camera shows Patrick standing outside in the rain.
Patrick: Mind if i come inside?
Amy: It is half your pub...
Amy walks away from the door as Patrick enters.
Amy: What do you want now Patrick? And make it quick...becuase I've got a pub to run...
Patrick looks around at the empty pub.
Patrick: Looks like it..
Amy: Havent you done enough already Patrick!? Is it your soal purpose in life to upset me...whatever you've got to say...i dont want to hear it...
Patrick: We're over...
Amy: I know we are...we have been since the moment you slept with that cheap little tart!
Patrick: No i mean me and Natasha...
Amy: Oh...
Patrick: Just thought I'm come to let you know...
Amy: And why does this concern me!?
Patrick: I dont know i just...didnt know who to turn to...
Amy: Well it's not me... so you can turn right back out that door...
Patrick: Amy... ive got no ties to her now... she's made that clear... all im asking is for one more chance... you and me... we can work it out cant we?
Amy laughs in disbelief.
Amy: You're unbelivable...dya know that? No i dont want you... and im never going to want you! So just do me a favour and get out of my pub!
Amy ushers Patrick out of the pub.
Amy: And dont bother coming back...cus your bared!
Patrick: From my own pub!?
Amy slams the door in his face. She rests against the door holding it shut. Patrick continues to bang the door.
Patrick: Amy!...Amy!...Just hear me out!
His voice is drowned out as we hear and see Amy sobbing once more.
Good girl Amy - don't let him back in. Once a cheat - always a cheat!!!!
Good girl I am real proud of you Amy, kickin out that lying cheatin SOB..
Wahey.. go amy.. kick his sorry ass into next week!!!
Jodi, in response to Gregg mentioning Hilary, it won't matter. The guy is mad so she will just say he is not talking straight and again she will get away with it all
Yea Yea I got caught up with the moment :rotfl: The guy is starkers thats for sure !!!!!!!!!!!:ninja:
TORBAY GENERAL HOSPITAL
Tanya is standing at the doors to Garys room on the ward. Shes leaning against the wall, gazing into the room. Nick walks up behind her, and gives her a cup of coffee...
Tanya: I didn't ask for this...
Nick: You need a drink, even if you wont eat. Keep up your strength, and all that
Tanya: Whats the point anymore?
Nick: Tanya?
Tanya: Whats the point in doing this anymore. Look at him... what if he doesn't pull through? What do i do?!
Nick: We've got to all be strong... and no matter how hard it is, just keep positive. He'll pull through, and when he does, he's gona need you ready to stand by him, and help him...
Tanya: My whole world has fallen apart, Nick. My children... they're dead. My husband is hanging on by a string... I can't face this anymore. I can't face being me. Living this life.... this life thats falling apart around me.... what do i do, Nick?
Nick: I can't even begin to understand what your going through... but we're all here for you...
Tanya: I can't even face going in there, Nick! How can i get through this?! Theres no point anymore.... my lifes all but over...
Nick: You just need to look for hte light at the end of the tunnel...
Tanya's eyes well up with tears...
Tanya: I dont know if i can anymore...
Ah poor woman.. she feels it is all over.. Hilary I hope you feel so much guilt that you kill yourself or better yet, if I was Tanya I would gladly do time for killing her. :angry::angry:
INT. RED RUM PUB - MORNING
The pub is near but empty. Amy and Vicky are behind the bar. Amy is reading the newspaper, with a large article on the Taylor children.
Amy: I just cant believe it...it's not the kind of thing you expect to hear of every day is it... god knows how Tanya is coping....
Vicky: It was awful Amy...i was there...i saw it all...Tanya holding them...even tough they were...im not going to forget that in a hurry... its a scary thought that you could loose your kids like that...
Amy: (Sad) Yeah i suppose it would be...
Vicky: I mean with Daniel...if anyone touched a single hair on his head id go mental! I wouldnt know what to do without him! But i mean they were only 3 years old for christs sake...if they have to suffer then what world do we live in!?
Amy: A sick one... where the good allways get punished...
Vicky: It's a scary thought that the Taylors have enmeies...i mean when me and Nick have a baby...well if we have a baby...
Amy is starting to choke at the concept of never having kids or being able to have close motherly ties to someone. Vicky notices.
Vicky: Oh Amy...im so sorry...i didnt think..
Amy starts to cry
Amy: Its something everyone takes for granted...its just so natural..everyone can have kids...but not me! Why!? What have i ever done to loose out on being a mother!? The amount of crap I've had to put up with with Patrick...and then im deprived of kids!
Vicky hands a tissue to Amy and hugs her friend concerned.
INT. RED RUM PUB - MORNING
A few minutes pass. Vicky gives Amy a shot of whisky in a glass.
Vicky: Get that down you...dry the tears...I'm sorry i didnt think...
Amy: Its not your fault babe...its him upstairs...
Vicky: Dont take it to heart Amy...there's over ways of getting a child...
Amy: How? You cant just buy them over the internet!
Vicky: Surrogacy?
Amy: No...no way... and have the mom change her mind at the last minute...i cant be doing with it... i need to know the kid is mine...
Vicky: Adoption?
Amy: Thats the only other option isnt it...but i dont know if i could live with myself telling the kid a lie every day of its life...
Vicky: Well thats the only option Amy is you want kids...
Amy: Oh i do...dont get me wrong i do...more than anything to the world...
Vicky: Saying that its hard to become an adoptive parent when your on your own...they tend to go for couples...
Something clicks in Amy's head as Vicky says this...
What Is Amy Thinking?
INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Richard is sitting in the longue on the phone to the funeral directors.
Richard: Yes Alan... well... i dont know what ever you think... i want the best...for my...grandkids...send them off well... ok...ill drop the money round later in the week...thanks...bye
Hilary has been eavesdropping on the phonecall. She walks into the longue with a cup of cofee in her hands.
Hilary: There you go hun...
Richard: Cheers
Hilary sits down beside Richard and strokes his arm.
Hilary: Hows it going?
Richard: It's just so...hard...i didnt think it would get to me you know... a couple of phone calls...but it has...
Hilary: I know it's hard...
Richard: I never expected to bury my own grandchildren!... First Ed and now the twins... it's not going well this year...
Hilary: (Sad) I'm so sorry...
Richard: What for?
Hilary: For all this... seeing you go trough all this...
Richard: Its not your fault...its that ******* Gregg Bryant! And to think i welcomed him into the family buisness...
Hilary: You cant blame it all on him...he was mad...
Richard: That doesnt excuse what he did! He's put Tanya through hell! He's killed my grandchildren!
Richard starts to bursts into tears gradually, a concerned Hilary hugs him.
Richard: It's so hard... how are we all going to get through this!?
Hilary gets up and runs out of the room. She goes out of sight of Richard and starts to cry herself, she clings to the wall and lowers herself to the floor in tears....
What is she crying for.. she killed them.. paying Gregg to do the job.. bitch :angry:
I suppose she feels guilty becuse it all got out of hand!!!
Hilary should never have organised it all in the first place - I hope she can't live with the guilt and disappears again :angry:
Tough, she shouldn't have started it.. all her fault.. She knew that Gregg was obsessed by Tanya, she knew he had the kids.. for starters, even if he didn't burn then, he had them ages and they were starving. she could have stopped this ages ago but didn't.. she let that family suffer and I hope she is so riddled with guilt that she can't go on with her lifeQuote:
Originally Posted by bakedbean
:angry: No sympathy for hilary, she organized it or whaver!
But poor tanya ... :crying:
God on amy for not letting him come back but what is her plan?
Bry updated the character page and I got a look at the twinsQuote:
Originally Posted by *Fanatic*Loves Dennis*
http://graphics.iparenting.com/clipa...s/CHI0060B.JPG
How could Hilary do that to such cute kids :crying: :crying:
(btw the little boy is the image of my brother at that age and I reckon ben will look like that in 2 years)
http://www.soapboards.co.uk/forums/s...032#post219032
i have updated the characters profiles with new images for all characters!
Thought you'd updated this then :rolleyes:Quote:
Originally Posted by bondboffin
EXT: TORBAY LUXERY APARTMENTS
Amy is walking slowing up the stairs to the apartments. She gets to floor 3, and walks along the corridor. She stands outside a door, leaning against the opposite wall, looking at it, thinking...
INTERCUT:
Patrick is sitting on the balcony of his flat, looking out to the view. He sips some of his beer, and looks around at the almost-emtpy flat.
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Amy plucks up the courage, and goes to the door. She knocks softly on the door, then again, harder. Patrick opens it, looking nogaljic. He realises its Amy, and smiles...
Patrick: Amy! What are you doing here?!
Amy: Spare me the small talk, Patrick. I need a word with ya.