I can see some blackmail coming up come on Devon Seas
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I can see some blackmail coming up come on Devon Seas
INT: RED RUM PUB
Leah is still sitting with the other women. Tanya walks into the pub, and orders a bottle of vodka to go. She fumbles around in her bag trying to find the money, her eyes stinging with tears. Leah sees her, but continues talking...
Leah: Edward Taylor? Being...
Josie: Richards son, yeah.
Leah: Well, well, well.... we can't be having that, can we?
Leah stand up, and blows kisses to the women...
Leah: Bye ladies!
Leah walks over to Tanya, as she leaves the pub, clutching her bottle. Leah catches up with her, outside the pub...
Leah: Tanya! Slow down!
Tanya: Sorry.... i just wanted to get back... find out if theirs any news or... or anything...
Leah: yeah, sorry about that. I just wanted to ask you something...
Tanyas eyes well up with tears. She tries to wipe them, and drops the bottle. She gets histerical over the broken glass on the road...
Tanya: Oh god, look what i've done...
Leah: Dont worry about it... look, maybe this isn't the best time. I should let you get back...
Tanya: No... dont worry about me... What did you want to ask me?
Leah: Its about Edward...
Tanya looks down, upset at the thought of him...
Leah: I knew this was a bad idea. I'll go...
Tanya: He was my brother... We were so close. I know he did some stuff in the past, but that never got between us... and now he's...
Leah: Gone. I guessed as much. What i wanted to know is... is it true about Craig?
Tanya: That he did it..? Yeah, everyone knows about it around here... All this stuff with the kids makes you forget about that past... everything he did to us... to all of us....
Tanyas eyes well up again...
Tanya: I just dont know how much more i can take.... what is it with me? Why does everyone around me just... go...?
Leah hugs Tanya...
Leah: I didn't want to get you all upset again. Dont worry Tanya. I'll make him pay. For everything he did to you- you and your family. To everyone in this town. He's not gonna know whats hit him.
Aww poor Tanya, please let her kids be found :(
And i want to know what leah is going to do more soon x
GREGG'S FLAT
Gary storms up to Gregg's place, and knocks on the door, trying to be calm. After a few seconds, Gregg opens the door...
Gregg: Gary (sarcastically) Great the see you :rolleyes: I'm busy...
Gary: Good to see you too. And i dont really care if your busy, this can't wait.
Gary pushes past Gregg, walks into the flat. Gregg, shuts the door, and walks after him.
Gregg: This isn't on, Gary. I know you and Tanya have it tough at the minute, but you can't bardge into my flat like this!
Gary: No. This can't wait long enough for formalities.
Gary leans back and thumps Gregg, sending him flying backwards.
Gary: How the hell can you act like you've done nothing?! With everything you've done? This doesn't even cover what i want to do to you....
Gregg wipes blood from his lip, and goes to retaliate. Gary punches him again.
Gary: Hope you can live with yourself.
Gary storms out.
good on you gary. about time someone gave that gregg a punch or two.
:cheer::cheer::cheer::cheer: go gary.. smack that MF.. he deserves all he gets.. Cruel cruel man.
INT: ANDREWS HOUSE- morning
Claire wakes up, and streches. She looks in the mirror, brushes her hair, and starts to walk downstairs. She goes into the kitchen, where Val is….
Val: Hey Darl, you want some breakfast?
Claire: Guess so. What is there?
Val: Little cake things from up town… fruit…. Not a lot really…
Claire begins to look sick…
Claire: No thanks… I don’t really feel too good any more…
Val: Whats up?
Claire runs to the bathroom, and is heard to throw up. Val walks to the slammed door, amd knocks…
Val: Claire? You ok in there?
Claire: I’ll be… alright… in a minute…
Claire throws up again.
uh oh!! Claire is definitely pregnant. who is the daddy, Romeo or Chris???
I think Claire maybe pregnant too, but who's is it!
And go Gary :cheer:
INT: HARVEY's MOTORS- Afternoon
Craig is at his desk in the back office. He puts the phone down, and scribbles a note down. He sighs, and pours a drink. Leah walks in....
Craig: Well, well, well. What can i do for a girl like you, in a place like this?!
Leah: Get over yourself, love!
Craig laughs, and looks back up.
Craig: Well?
Leah: Just something i heard... wondered if you could, you know, fill me in a bit.
Craig: What you heard then? Mind you, i'll tell ya now, people aren't always kinds to me around here, if you get my drift!
Leah: Edward Taylor. Ring any bells?
Craig: Well... yeah, course it does. He was from one of the big familys around here after all! Everyone knows the Taylors...
Leah: Yeah, you more then most, wouldn't you agree?
Craig: Well... no, not really... Wheres this going, Leah?
Leah: Well, when you here that your brother-in-law killed a man... well, the alarm bells do tend to go off!
Craig: You dont know what your on about...
Leah: Dont i?! You sure about that?!
Craig doesn't say a word.
Leah: You'll pay for your crimes, Craig. And hell knows theres been a few, if what i've heard is right!
Craig: Oh yeah? Love to see that!
Craig rolls his eyes, and laughs.
Leah: I'll remind you of that.
come on Leah kick some butt get revenge and for god sake Bry and Abi let those kids go lol
Tanya is alone on the beach, Craig mentions some words like I told you’d pay for your crimes…she hit him and she tries to drown him in the water, Nick intervenes and stops her from doing so. Craig tells her that’s the last mistake she’ll ever make.
EXT. BAYMOORE BEACH - NIGHT
Tanya is sitting alone on the beach, running sand trough her hands, drinking a bottle of Vodka. She looks out to sea, trying to find comfort for her pain. Behind her Craig appears.
Craig: Look at you... a drunken old slag...lying on the beach...
Tanya looks around and sees Craig standing beside her...
Tanya: My kids have been adbucted! I think i have every right dont you!?
Craig: Abducted? Oh yes that's right...(laughs to self) I always told you you'd pay...
Tanya gets up and stares Craig in the face menicingly.
Tanya: What did you just say!?
Craig: Stir people up the wrong way...and well...sooner or later they're gonna fight back...
Tanya lashes out at Craig, she grabs his tie and starts to strangle him.
Tanya: You *******! What have you done to my kids!? What the hell have you done to them!?
Craig pushes Tanya to the floor. She mascare running down her face, her hair ruffled...
Craig: The state of you... the rich and glamrous Tanya Donagoon...reduced to a snizzling wreck!
Tanya: How could you Craig!? I knew you were evil! But to bring my kids into this!?
Craig: I havent Tanya... I havent even touched them... i dont stoop that low...I'm just saying what goes around...comes around... someone like you is asking for trouble!
Tanya: (In Despair) Why!? What have i done!? To anyone!? To you!?
Craig: I told you... not to mention a word to anyone... about Ed...and all that stuff you know about me and him... but oh no... you've gone and blabbed it to the sister in law! Last mistake Tanya...
Tanya: Stop it Craig! Stop threatning me! Stop torturing me! I cant take any more of it!
Craig laughs at her and starts to walk off. She grabs his legs and pulls him down, he falls to the floor with a loud thud. The pair roll and grapple each other on the beach. Tanya drags him towards the sea, and dunks his head in.
Whenever she brings his head up he gasps for breath in despair
Tanya: I know its you! You hate me! Well i hate you!
Tanya keeps his head under the water this time, despite his obvious struggle. Nick sees this horid site from a distance.
Nick: Tanya!?
Nick runs over to the beach and sees the scene in more detail.
Nick: Tanya! Stop it! Your going to kill him!
Nick slaps some sense into Tanya and releases Craig. Craig falls to the floor gasping for breath, drenched.
Nick: What were you thinking of Tanya!?
A drenched Craig gets up, shaking the water from his suit. He spits onto the beach.
Craig: I swear to god Tanya... that's the last mistake you or your kids are ever going to make...
Craig walks off. Tanya and Nick look at each other with comeplete looks of horror on their faces.
Ohh man Devon seas can it ever not stop being so brilliant lol
Oh Craig you *******.. if you have those kids give them back.. they did nothing to you at all :angry:
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - DAY
The lights are off, except for some lamps that are on. The room is decorated with ballons and a happy 18th banner for Emma's birthday. The room is filled with teenagers and music is playing loud.
Claire walks down the stares holding her head. Val walks up to her.
Val: Feeling any better love?
Claire: (Snapping) I would be if it wasnt for this music blaring so loud!
Val: Oh Claire leave off...it's your sisters 18th...let her have a good time...
Claire: Okay...but im warning you...im in a mood to let off some steam.
The doorbell rings and Emma answers it in walks Chris, Tom, and Luqina.
Emma: Hiya guys...come on in...grab yourself a drink...
Claire sees Chris and the others enter the room.
Claire: God what the hell has she invited them for!? She hates Luqina...
Val: Claire! Just stop it will you! Dont spoil the night!
Claire holds her arm in annoyance. Emma is laughing and joking with Tom and stroking him effectionally on the sly. Andondis is sitting alone at the other end of the room. Claire marches over to Emma.
Claire: Oi you! Grow up will you!
Claire grabs Emma away from Tom. The crowded room look on at the scene.
Emma: Claire...what you playing at!?
Claire: Your meant to be 18 not 8! Stop pineing over Tom will you! He dont want you!
Emma: I was just having a friendly chat with him Claire!?
Claire: I saw what you were doing! Your boyfriends only over there! For christs sake Emma you can be a stupid cow at times!
Tom: (Quietly) I think we'd better go...
Emma: No...dont go...ignore this stupid bitch...
Claire: What did you call me!?
Emma: A stupid bitch...
The pair begin a bitch fight in front of the crowd. Val and James run towards them and split them up!
Val: Pack it in! The pair of you!
Claire: Did you see what she was doing!?
James: Get to your room Claire!?
Chris laughs into his drink at this.
Claire: I beg your pardon!? Did you just...!?
James: Just get up there and shut up!
Claire storms past the gawping crowd in tears. The room is in silence. Val puts on the YMCA.
Val: Oh my favourite! Come on folks dance with me! You know you want to!
Val starts to sing and dance, people laugh at her, Emma covers her face in embarassment.
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - NIGHT
Gary is emptying the living room bin. There are 3 empty bottles of Vokda.
Gary: Erm...Tan...
Tanya: What?
Gary: I think we need to have a chat about these...dont you?
Tanya: What about them?
Gary: 4 in as many days?
Tanya: Gary...i think i have an excuse...
Gary: Well...
All of a sudden there is a loud smash as a brick is thrown trough the living room window. Tanya screams as the brick narrowly misses her.
Gary: Christ! ... Tanya are you ok!?
Tanya: (Panicking) Yeah... what was that!?
Gary picks up the brick, it has a note wrapped around it in cut newspaper letters.
YoUR KiDs tImE HaS RAn OuT!
Gary looks at the note in horror.
Tanya: What....what is it Gary?
Gary doesent answer. Tanya walks up to him and looks at the note. She bursts into tears.
Tanya: Oh my god...no... what are we going to do!?
INT: ANDREW'S HOUSE- night
Val is still dancing along to YMCA. She walks up the stairs, while doing it, and tries to subtly go upstairs. She disappears, and the room roars with laughter, and carries on drinking and dancing. Val rolls her eyes, walks into Claires room, and slams the door behind her. Claire is lying on the bed, staring into space
Val: Well?
Claire: Well what?
Val: What was all that back there? Its her 18th girl- let her have a laugh for god's sake!
Claire: Just leave it. I can't handle all this... not now... not now that i'm...
Claire rolls over, and faces the other direction, and covers her face...
Val: Come on, tell me whats up? You can't just snap at your sister like that without a good reason. Or at least i'd hope not, or your gonna have some serious questions coming your way!
Claire: I thought everything was going to be ok... i really did. I mean, i knew it could happen but.... but things like this dont happen to me... not me...not now...
Val: Things like what?
Claire says nothing...
Val: Claire?
Claire: I'm pregnant... did a test earlier, after being sick and all that. What the do i do....? What the hell do i do...?
Claires eyes well up with tears, Val sits next to her, Claire sits up and cries into Vals shoulder...
Val: Come on... dont cry...
Val runs her fingers through Claires hairs, bites her lip, and lets Claire carry on crying, without saying a word...
OMG - the brick - the kids - whats going to happen?? And whos the daddy?! Whats Claire going to do!!
:clap: great stuff still guys - keep it coming!
nnnnnnnnnoooooooooo!!!! the time can't be up.. give her kids back you *******s :angry::angry::angry::angry:
Oh my god, :eek: No the kids need to be alive oh god?! Craig is evil, she shouldn of drowned him.
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - NIGHT
Claire is in floods of tears, holding her knees on the bed, Val is comforting her in support.
Val talks to Claire and she explains the situation to Val, she asks if Claire is going to keep it and she says she don’t know what to do.
Val: Cheer up love...things could be worse...
Claire: Worse!? They couldnt get any worse if i tried!
Val: It's not the end of the world darl'...theres never a right time to start a family...but once the baby is hear...it'll all work out... you and Romeo...it'll all work out...
Claire bursts into tears again.
Val: What...what did i say?
Claire: It's not Romeos!?
Val: Then who the ruddy hell's is it!?
Claire doesnt answer
Val: (Concerned) Claire?
Claire: It was just one stupid one night stand... it didnt mean anything... and now... its ruined everything...
Val: Do you know who he was?
Claire: Of course i do mum! I'm not some cheap little tart you know!
Val choses not to respond to this.
Claire: When Romeo finds out...he'll never forgive me...and that's it...we're over...all I've worked for...gone...oh my god how could i be so foolish!?
Val: There's always a way out...if you feel you have to take it...
Claire: What an abortion!? I havent thought that far ahead...
Val: I'm not advising it...but its there if you need it... im there if you need me...you havent got to see all this trough on your own.
Claire: (Emotionally) Thanks Mom...
Val strokes Claire hair to comfort her. Val has a disturbed look on her face.
Ooo Claire - what are you going to do?! Get away from it all - clear your head girl. Decide what you want without interference....
you tell her emz :lol: lmao :D
:rotfl: Not that I'm into DS or anything of course - I'm not addicted and keep forgetting its a script and not real, nope, definitely not, no way......:rotfl:Quote:
Originally Posted by Jada-GDR
EXT. SINGH & SON'S CONVIENANCE STORES
Vicky walks out of the shop with a carrier bag. She is on the phone to Nick.
Vicky: Yeah well i thought you could do with cheering up...what with Tanya and the kids everything...a night in could do you good...just the two of us...and a nice dvd...
A flash sports car speeds into the village and pulls up beside Vicky.
Vicky: Anyways...ive got to go hun...ok bye...
Vicky puts down the fun and admires the car. The cars roof folds down to show Kyle driving the car, dressed in a smart suit.
Kyle: Alright Vicky, looking sexy as usual.
Kyle gets out of the car, chewing a peice of gum, a cheaky grin on his face.
Vicky: Kyle... :rolleyes:
Kyle walks right up to Vicky and almost rubs his body against her. She turns her head in disgust.
Kyle: How you been?
Vicky: Fine...looks like you've found yourself a small goldmine...
Kyle: Not really... an investment of mine has finally come trough...
Vicky: A horse? :rolleyes:
Kyle: You know me Vicks, im a man who likes to keep his secrets, thats what you liked about me all those years ago...
Vicky: What you doing around here? Ive made it clear...you ent seeing Daniel.
Kyle: (laughs to self) That's where you wrong Vicky babes... becuase ive got myself the best family lawyer in the biz... and he thinks i have a very good case of custody for him...
Vicky: Your lying...
Kyle: You want to take that chance? If your not gonna be civil then I'll have to drag it trough the courts, costing me and you money and Daniel...a lot of unecessary stress...
Vicky: If its what it takes to keep you out of my son's life...
Kyle: Fine then...you've got yourself a battle on your hands...
Kyle puts on his designer sunglasses, and blows Vicky a kiss, he grins to himself and gets back into his car. Vicky has a worried look on her face.
INT: RED RUM PUB
Patrick and Natasha walk into the pub. Natasha is holding onto Patricks arm, laughing with him. They go to the bar, and order a drink. Amy walks out and sees them...
Amy: What the hell are you two doing in here?!
Patrick: Just getting a drink like everyone else in this pub!
Amy: Well i'd rather you wouldn't....
Amy walks sheepishly over to the other side of the bar. Val, who is leaning on the bar rolls her eyes at the pair. Natasha sees...
Natasha: What was that for?
Val: You know what it was for
Natasha: We've done nothing wrong..!
Val: Apart from split these two up, you mean! Your a bitch, Natasha! And your just as bad, Patrick!
Patrick: Leave it out, Val.
He picks up their drinks, and takes them to a table next to the Singhs. They all look ackwardly at them, and turn the other way..
Patrick: Oh for gods sake, people! We're just having a drink- no crime!
No one says a word, they just mumble disaprovingly under their breath. Natasha looks around, her eyes welling up with tears...
Natasha: I can't cope with this much more...
Patrick: Come on, they're all a bunch of *******s. Leave them stew on their own.
Natasha: But i can't. How can you ignore this Patrick?! How they're being with us?!
Natasha runs out the pub, as she bursts out with tears...
EXT: RED RUM PUB
Natasha is leant against the wall to the pub, covering her face with her hands to hide her tears. Patrick runs out after her, spots her, and puts his arms around her...
Natasha: I just can't cope with this any more. They wont even look us in the eye anymore... They wont let us be together. Not now, not ever. We might as well face it now!
Patrick: We're nearly their, Nat. This is the final hurdle, before we can be together- just you and me against the world. They will accept us. One day soon, they have to.
Natasha: But when though? 6 months? A year? 3? How long will we wait....? I just can't cope with it anymore...
Patrick: All we have to do, is hold our heads up high, and dont elt them fase us...
Natasha: Well, thats not as easy as it sounds!
Patrick: We're together now... we can't break us unless we let them. We hold your head up high, and they wont get you, Nat. No one can.
Natasha: how can i pretend its not getting to me though?!
Patrick: I dont know... you'll find a way though. We can make it. You and me are great together. Just give us a go, and we'll prove to the lot of them how great we can be. Yeah?
Natasha wipes her eyes, and smiles weakly...
Natasha: (doubtfully) yeah...
What is claire gonna do?! Will Kyle win the battle? I don't think natasha and patrick are gonna last !
Patrick and Natasha - they aren't going to last - he doesn't really love her and if she truly loved him, then she'd not care what everyone thought - they should leave town - get out of there and leave poor Amy alone
INT. PATRICKS AND NATASHA'S FLAT - DAY
Natasha is alone in the bedroom, packing a suitcase. She calls Baymoore B&B.
Natasha: Hiya... Annie? Yes...it's Natasha Jones... i was wondering if you had any spare rooms at the B&B?
Patrick walks into the flat, with some shopping, he heres Natasha on the phone and approaches the bedroom.
Natasha: Oh for god sake, not you aswell! You willing to see me on the streets just becuase of your morals!? .... Do you know what im sick of being judged...its your loss is you want to lose customers...
Natasha puts the phone down in anger. Patrick is standing in the doorway, he coughs. Natasha turns around in fear. She stares into his eyes and says nothing.
Patrick: What's all this? Off on holiday?
Natasha: Patrick...I wasnt expecting you back so soon...
Patrick: (Looks at suitcase) Clearly... giving up on us are you?... I thought you had more backbone than to run off when someone has it out with you...
Natasha: Not someone Patrick! Everyone!... They all hate me...becuase of what we've done... they used to like me and now...
Patrick: You've brought it on all yourself!
Natasha: Oh and you were the angel gabriel werent you!? Your the one that left your wife for me, but its me that gets the stick!
Patrick: Because your the marraige wrecker... if you hadnt been so fast to pull down your knickers then none of this would ever have happened!
Natasha slaps Patrick across the face.
Natasha: Your a *******! A selfish *******! You dont give a damn about anyone but yourself...well I've had enough of it... i dont want to be lynched out of my home becuase of you... your not worth it...you dont deserve me!
Patrick: Deserve you? That makes you sound special... your a cheap little tart... two a penny!
Natasha: Do you know what Patrick, i could spend a whole afternoon slapping you round the face... but there's something much better i can do to you... to leave you here...in this grotty bedsit, all on your own... and then you'll realise how you've treated me...and amy...
Natasha picks up her suitcase and leaves the room without saying goodbye. Patrick sits alone in the bedroom, his head in his hands.
Oooo go Natasha - but will she stick to her word....:hmm: whats Patrick going to do now....
I knew that was going to happen because Patrick just can't face up to things that he ruined his marriage with Amy because he had a fling With Natasha!
INT: RED RUM PUB
Annie and Eddie are walking by the pub, talking. Tanya, Nick, Hilary and Richard are standing outside the pub...
Richard: Come on Tanya, just a little drink together as a family, thats all i wanted.
Tanya: I can't go out and have a drink, while my kids are missing!
Hilary: (mutters) Like thats stopped you...
Richard gives Hilary a "shut up" look. Annie and Eddie walk past the family. Tanya overhears their conversaion...
Eddie: Well i thought that old warehouse was empty, but i could have sworn i saw some people around there earlier. Strange, really. You used to know everyones going's on around here, but things have changed haven't they!
Tanya follows them...
Tanya: What was that?!
Eddie and Annie stop, Nick, Richard and Hilary catch up with them...
Eddie: I was just saying how things have changed around here, recently...
Tanya: Not about that. About a warehouse...?
Annie: Apparently theres been some people around that old warehouse on the beach front...
Eddie: I heard then last night. Making an awfull racket they were. So i had a look this morning... theres definetly something going on. You dont normally get those types around this area..
Richard: (suspicously) What type..?
Eddie: A man, grown up, but he certainly hadn't had a shave in a while. Hardly respectable, if you ask me. There was a some children as well... 2 maybe? They didn't look very happy to be going down their with him, in my opinion. Pushing them down their like that- hardly the sort of behaviour you get from an adult! And a car... smart, but a bit torn up. Like it had gone down a rough road...
Tanya: :eek: my god.. the children!
Nick: The car... what colour was it?
Eddie: Dark. Mind you, i was a fair distance away...
Annie: And his eye sight certainly isn't what it used to be, isn't that right, Eddie?
Eddie nods slightly...
Eddie: Why is this all important?
Nick: Gregg... That must be Greggs car...
Tanya: That means... omg, he's taken my babies!
Tanyas eyes well up with tears, she turns to run down to the beach, Richard grabs her, and hugs her, while she cries into his chest..
Richard: Now, now... we need to sort this rationally...
Tanya: I don't care about rationally, i just want to find my children!
Tanya and Richard rush off towards hte beach. Nick closely follows, shaking his head with shock. Hilary pauses for a moment, then looks back up at Richard and Tanya, with a look of shock on her face. She thanks Eddie and Annie, and slowly follows, in shock...
I'm confused - why is Hilary suddenly looking shocked?? I thought she wanted bad things to happen to Tanya.....
Great stuff though - is it the twins??!!
INT. ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
The dark and dingy warehouse, a few beams of natural light shine trough the broken windows. Melissa and Jacob are tied on chairs, their backs together. They look weak and malnurished. Dirty rags are tied around their mouths. They are crying and whining.
Gregg is siting in a chair facing them. He has let himself go, wearing a dirty tracksuit and an overgrown beard. He is playing with his hands in a sinsterly addictive way. He is rocking himself and singing lulabyes to the children.
Gregg: Rockabye Baby, on the treetops. When the wind blows, the cradle will rock. When the bough breaks, the cradle will fall. And Down will come baby, cradle and all!
There is the sound of high heels across the concrete floor. Gregg instantly turns around.
Gregg: Who's that!?
Out of the shadows appears Hilary.
Gregg: The game's up Gregg... they've found you out... the cops are on the way... you've had it...
Gregg has a nervous look on his face. Hilary genuinally appears to be on the Taylors side.
Gregg: But... but...
Hilary walks up to him and strokes his face. She hands him a breifcase filled with money.
Hilary: Theres a quater of a mil in there... job well done.
Hilary has a smug look on her face.
:eek: Hilary!!! You complete ..... :angry: Now shes hand over money what are they going to do with the twins though.....
INT. ABANDONDED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
Hilary hands over the money to Gregg. As she does this police sirens can be heard, and blue lights illuminate the warehouse.
Hilary: ****!
Hilary grabs the money back from Gregg. She starts to run out of the warehouse.
Hilary: (To Gregg) Come on you imbaceal! Do you want to get yourself arrested!?
Gregg: But the children...
Hilary: Leave them! They will be found in a minute...
Gregg: No...i cant leave the children...
Hilary: Sod you then! But if you mention my name to the police than so god help you!
Hilary runs out of the back entrance of the warehouse. She runs across the wooden platform and finds herself an alcove to hide in behind some crates of fish. She breaths heavily.
The camera pans over the rooftop of the warehouse, where we see an aerial view of the police cars speeding down the wooden plaform to the fornt entrance. Police rush out of the cars, and Tanya, Gary, Richard, Nick and Vicky all stand by.
IS GREGG'S GAME UP?
WILL HILARY GET CAUGHT?
WILL JESSICA AND JACOB SURVIVE?
Ohhh my god this is so exciting i dont want Hilary to get caught but Gregg he can go straight to hell lol
I want both of them caught, and it will put Richard in his place and it will give Tanya a bit more credibility.. she was right all along about Gregg and Hilary both.. Of course Hilary will probably come up trumps, and claim she found the KIDS AND SUSSED out Gregg and got the money back,, etc.. I want HILARY caught only cause she is a nasty piece of work and Greg deserves to burn in Hell for going along with it ( he gets a tiny brownie point cos he was a bit concerned about the kids.. note: I said "a bit " ):angry: :angry:
Great script BB! It's all getting exciting :)