That kicked butt Bry...love it....... whahoooooo:thumbsup:Quote:
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That kicked butt Bry...love it....... whahoooooo:thumbsup:Quote:
Originally Posted by jojomum
Torbay Graveyard
Mandy and Craig make a sparkling couple.............NOT
What an entrance!!!!! :clap:
INT. Red Rum Public House
The room is in silence.
Hilary: And this man...who you consider so highly...is nothing but a cheating...uncomiited marraige recker! He had an affair whilst i was at home with my six year old child!
Richard: Get out!
Hilary: And he wasnt much cope in the bedroom department either...
Val bursts into hysterics.Nick rushes towards Hilary and grabs her as Richard charges towards her.
Nick: Leave it out mom, dont cause a scene....
Hilary: Get off me Nicholas! I came back here to name and shame this scumbag...he's ruined my life and im not going to let him get away with it!
Val: You tell him Hilary!
Richard grabs Hilary.
Richard: Right that's it...
He forcefully drgas her out of the pub infront of many onlookers
Richard: Get out here! No-one wants to hear your sordid little lies!
Hilary: It's all the truth! Your the one that made it sordid!
EXT.RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE
Richard chucks her out onto the street...
Hilary: Woman beater...wish to add that to your cv aswell!?
Richard: Look i dont know why youve come back here, but i suggest you clear off back to where ever youve been hiding for the past 30 odd years!
Hilary gets up gracefully and walks towards Richard.
Hilary: Leave? And give you the satisfaction? I dont think so...i want to make you suffer for the state you left me in...and that wont be done with one slanging match in a run down drinking hole! You can hide away from your past Richard, but is coming back to haunt you...and im not leaving until we sort this mess out once and for all...
Val and co are peering out of the windows from the inside...
Richard: Okay then, you want to talk? Let's talk... but we're not doing it infront of an audience...
OOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH sounds like fun... can't wait to see what Hilary tells Richard,, guess Val knows Hilary pretty well:hmm:
Baymoore Beach
The sea hits the beach slowly as the tide starts to come in. Richard and Hilary walk across the beach.
Richard: Theres no crowd now, no one to perform to..its you and me...now lets have some honesty.
Hilary: Honesty Richard? That's rich coming from you...
Richard: Look it was one kiss...
Hilary: So you say...
Richard: Just one kiss!
Hilary: Which in my books is still infedelity....
Richard: She meant nothing to me...
Hilary: Really? Well its funny that you ended up married to her...
Richard: It was because she was pregnant with Tanya...once you left i felt obliged to continue seeing her...and well once she was pregnant that sealed it...i never loved her...it was you i loved...
Hilary attempts to defend this but stops...she removes the front and speaks from the heart
Hilary: Then why did you kiss her... why did you break down our marraige?
Richard: I never knew you were going to come back...i thought that was it...youd left me for good...and she just came onto me, so i responsded...
Hilary: (laughs to self) the gentlemanly thing to do...well i came back, i was always going to...our marraige was woth salvaging...i meant my vows!
Richard: And so did i!
Hilary: Marraige is based on trust Richard! We had our family...we had Nick and you accused me of not being satisifed, of having an affair! So what i flirted...it was part of my nature...i never meant any harm in it..i loved you...i was besooted by you...and it hurt me to think that you thought so little of me....
Richard: That was a mistkae looking back...
Hilary: Hindsight is a wonderful thing...but it cant turn back the clock...theres all things we regret...and my life has been full of them...the day i left you...life just kept on going downhill...to the point where my own son left me...he couldnt bear to look me in the face...the haggered old woman...who had raised him...but no he wanted to go and live with his rich daddy...the man that had turned me into the woman he despised...
Richard: You know I'd have taken you back....anytime that you returned....
Hilary: What with a new wife and two more children...i dont think so...
Richard: Well ciructsmances have changed...Doreen...she died of a stroke..and well i only have one child other than Nick...Tanya
Hilary: That littlle madam...Nick told me all about her...daddy's little princess...i doubt she'd like me stepping in her mother's place...
Richard: She's mature enought to understand...look Hilary i know theres many bridges to cross...but your the only woman I've ever loved....your "the one".
Hilary: And so where you to me...and when "the one" cheats on you...and destroys the happy life you lead...it ruins you...i was heartbroken...you ruined my life!
Richard: There must be something there still...a reason why you came back?
Hilary: Becuase my life has been one big disaster since the day i left you...and ive im ever going to rebuild my life i need to find closure in the this chapter of my life...to finish it once and for all...to say my peice and erase you from my life for good...
Richard: Theres no need to...I still love you...the moment you walked into the Red Rum i felt like running over there and kissing you....my feeling have never gone away...we're getting old...and we need to grab every opportunity that we can get....how about it a fresh start!? You and me?
Richard gets excited and holds her hand. Hilary swipes it away.
Hilary: I dont think your understanding me here Richard...i dont want a relationship...i want revenge...how can we get back together when the only feeling i have for you is one of utter hatred....
Hilary gets up...
Hilary: No...no way, it will never happen.
Richard: Hilary...im not going to give up on "us".
Hilary: There is no us...and youve got a long road of redemption before i even consider the idea...
Hilary walks off leaving Richard alone on the beach...
awwww, i can imagine that happening. Thats really realistic.
*wipes tear from eye*
brilliant !!!!
Wow Hilary really kicked him below the belt.. was great Bry... can't wait to see what ur gonna give us to read next...:clap: