What a date, eh?! Friday the 13th and all that :rotfl:
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What a date, eh?! Friday the 13th and all that :rotfl:
*sings* I'm so excited, and I just can't hide it!!!
Baymoore Streets
The streets are empty and quiet, the sounds of church bells can be heard. A funeral cart drawn by a black horse rides down the streets, followed by Richard, Nick, Gary Tanya, Melissa & Jacob (The Twins) Vicky, Daniel, Amy and a few others. Tanya is crying and Gary is comforting her.
Andrews House
Val and James look on from their garden
Val: Not much of a turn out is it?
James: That's what they get for treating us lot round here like rubbish...
Harveys/Kage House
Mandy is dressed up in black she comes downstairs where Craig is reading the newspaper.
Mandy: Come on get yourself ready, youve got a funeral to go to...
Craig: (shocked) But...but we barely even knew the lad...
Mandy: Its all about respect Craig...and you can deny it as much as you like but i know that you had something to do with that poor boys death...now get up and ready
Craig: (mutters to self) Ok, but we're not going to welcome...
Oh my god.. poor richard. Hiliary is making a return on the day he buries his son... :clap::clap:
well done Bry
excellent as usual.
Torbay Graveyard
Everyone is standing by the graveside, one by one they throw dirt onto the coffin.
Vicar:We have entrusted our brother Edward to God's merciful keeping;
we now commit his body to the ground, earth to earth, ashes to ashes,
dust to dust; in sure and certain hope of the resurrection to eternal life through our Lord Jesus Christ, who died, was buried and rose again for us.
To him be glory for ever and ever. Amen.
All: Amen
Craig and Many appear in the distance and head towards the crowd. Tanya spots them and charges towards them, Gary follows.
Craig: Tanya, my deepest condolences...
Tanya: How dare you! How dare you show up here!
Mandy: Wait a bit Tanya, thats a bit harsh!
Tanya: Harsh!? If it wasnt for this scumbag then Ed would still be alive!
Craig: Me? I havent done anything...
Tanya: No need to hide it from your wife, im sure she knows what your really like! This man sold my brother drugs, ran him out of town and then chased him to his death! And this is the man you share a bed with every night...
Mandy: Look Tanya...
Tanya: Dont bother! Nothing you can say will bring my brother back! (To Craig) I hope you can live with this for the rest of your life...
Craig: I've done worse in my time...and some stupid little kid drowing himself is no big issue for me
Tanya punches him to the floor, Gary grabs her and pulls her back. Craig licks the blood from his nose and smiles. He gets up...
Craig: You stupid little bint...you're going to regret doing that....
Tanya: What you gonna do! Kill me too!
Craig: No...i can think of more intresting things than that...forget what i said before...the rift is far from over...you Taylors will regret the moment you ever crossed Craig Harvey!
Craig storms off, with Mandy.
Tanya: (Screams) You *******!!!!
Craig laughs to himself as he and Many walk off.
Mandy: I think you need to explain a few things to me...
Craig: I dont need to explain anything...to you...
Mandy: But im your wife...
Craig: So? I dont have to answer to anyone...
I don't think i like craig! lol, this is fab honey i am loving reading it xxx
INT. Red Rum - Night
The pub is crowded with people for Ed's wake. Richard talks to Amy at the bar
Richard: Thanks Amy...it's nice of you to put on this spread and everything...
Amy: Its no problem Richard, its the least i could do...
Nick: Hey dad isnt it about time that you said something...
Richard walks up to the microphone, Amy rings the pub bell to get everyones attention.
Richard: Its times like this you know who your true friends are...at my sons graveside barely anyone turned up...but now your all here for the free food and grub...that makes me sick personally...but today i shall forgive you...as this is exactly what Ed would have done in any other cirucumstances...
there is a nervous uncomfortable laugh at this joke
Richard: I shant make him out to be a hero, or a great man, as he wasnt...but today lets show some compassion for a man who lost out...a man who had all his life to live, and to prove to his family that he was a good man...
EXT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE
A taxi pulls up outside the pub. Out steps Hilary: glammed up and looking devine. She gracefully walks over to the cabdriver. And gives him a fity pound note, he looks suprised.
Hilary: Keep the change...
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE
Richard: So love him or hate him...raise your glasses to be son...to Ed!
All: To Ed!
There is a deafening silence as Hilary enters the pub. Richard looks as tough he has seen a ghost. Nick, Val and James all have shocked looks on their faces. Hilary's high heels scrape across the floor.
Val: Bloomin heck! I never thought it'd see you again!
Hilary: (Gives Val a dirty look) Dito...
Tanya notices Richard's shocked face.
Tanya: Dad who is she?
Hilary walks closer
Hilary: Oh come on Richard...it hasn't been that long has it?
Tanya: Dad?
Hilary: No? Then I'll do it for you... (To pub) Ladies and Gentlemen...I'm Hilary Blackstock...Richard's ex wife...
Shocks everywhere
What an entrance!!! :cheer:
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Originally Posted by jojomum
I second that! Fab :cheer: