Does he want to swear any more times :rolleyes: temper temper!
Can we have some ****ing more please :angel:
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Does he want to swear any more times :rolleyes: temper temper!
Can we have some ****ing more please :angel:
lmfao you hipocrit Layne :pQuote:
Originally Posted by Layne
only 3 a day, one more to do for today, posting it in a bit :D
Scene 12
INT. FIVE STAR HOTEL BEDROOM - DAY
Noel walks into the bedroom of a luxury five star hotel, the porter brings in his bag.
Porter: Do you require anything sir?
Noel: Yeah, you're silence, you didn't see me here alright?
Noel hands the porter a £50 note.
Porter: Erm sir, my son's a big fan of The Lions, could you possibly...?
Noel: You want an autograph!?
Porter: If you could sir...
Noel: This is my personal time, so **** off...
Offended by Noel's brush off, the porter promptly leads. Noel puts on some music and takes off his jacket, seconds later there is a knock at the door.
Noel checks himself out in the mirror before opening the door. Stood there in a short dress, skimpy top and sunglasses is Jess.
Noel: Well I didn't think you'd come...
Jess: I thought I might aswell see what's on offer but I made my mind up...:p
Jess walks into the room. Noel closes the door behind her, checking her out as he does so.
Noel: Did anyone recognise you?
Jess: No don't worry...
Noel: If your dad found out, he'd have my bollocks for breakfast...
Jess: Well we'll just have to make sure he doesn't find out then, wont we? :cool:
A grin on his face, Noel leans in for a kiss. The pair end up making out as he lowers her onto the bed...
Ohhh she went with him, this is getting good - keep it up :D
omg rachael!!!! tut tut
and that noel needs a good kick up the jacksy!!!
I have a feeling the boss might soon find out :p
& i am not a hipocrit..:angel:
Scene 13
EXT. HALESOWEN TRAINING GROUND - DAY
The Halesowen United youth squad are training on the pitch. Over Timbaland's Throw it On Me we see very fast paced shots of the players kicking the ball around and tackling. The shots focus on Jamie Cox.
Charlie, manager of the Lions is watching from the distance at the players. He nods his head in approval of Jamie's ball skills. He looks over to a bunch of fans who are watching the footballer's play, he walks over to them.
He pulls one of the girls away from the group, to her annoyance.
Charlie: What are you doing here!?
Danielle: Get off! Stop man handling me dad!
Charlie: What you down here for? Shouldn't you be revising?
Danielle: Exams are over dad...
Charlie: Well surely you've got better things to be doing with your time then hanging out at training grounds!
Danielle: What's wrong with admiring the totty?
Charlie: You, can do a lot better than these...
Danielle: True, they'll only the youth squad...
Charlie: I meant Footballers in general! I want you marrying some brainy doctor or hot shot lawyer...
Danielle: Why would I want to? What they earn in one year, these lot can earn in a week.
Charlie: I'm not having you throw your education away for a footballer Danielle. You're much better than a WAG, I want you to have you're own career...
Danielle: Yeah, I'm looking at modelling agencies at the moment...
Charlie: I mean a proper career, I wish you'd get this model rubbish out of your head.
Danielle: It's not rubbish dad, it's what I want to do!
Charlie: I haven't got time for this now, we'll talk about this later young lady!
Charlie walks off, Danielle is left fuming from his lack of support. The team have now stopped playing, Jamie comes up to her, a cheaky grin on his face.
Jamie: So what's a pretty lass like you doing alone down here? Anyone would think you're after a date...
Danielle: Not with you I'm not, why would I want a baby footballer when I can get a real one :rolleyes:
Danielle walks off, Jamie laughs to himself at her immaturity, he licks his lips checking her out as she goes.
Charlie: Oi Cox! Get yourself dressed and up to the stadium, Micheal Aston wants a word with you...
Jamie: Really? What's he want?
Charlie: You'll see, now come on, you don't want to keep him waiting.
Jamie heads off to the changing rooms, a curious look on his face.
Noel seems lovely, Not, wouldnt even sign an autograph how rude. Rachel really doesnt like Astons wife des she. Think she feels a little threatened. Poor Colin. Hope he doent get chucked off the team, the old ones are always the best.
Scene 14
INT. MICHEAL'S OFFICE - DAY
Micheal is sat in his office, feet on the desk, smoking a cigar. He is on the phone to the manager of rivals 'City.
Micheal: Oh stop it, you'll have me sobbing into my scotch...NOT. Get over it you big puff, Carter moved of his own accord, he knew to jump off a sinking ship...just so happens we're gonna go to the top this season and kick your sorry excuse of an **** into the 1st division! Oh shut up you melon my ex wife moaned less than you, I'm hanging up... prick.
Micheal puts the phone down in frustration. There's a knock on the door.
Micheal: Yeah, come in.
Colin walks into the office, Micheal - comfortbale with his surroundings, doesnt put his feet down from the desk.
Micheal: Colin? Shouldn't you be at training?
Colin sits down, a worried look on his face.
Colin: I need a word with you Micheal...
Micheal: A word? More like a drink...you look like **** warmed up in a mircowave...
Colin: Thanks :rolleyes:
Micheal gets up and pours Colin a drink.
Micheal: Come on, pour your heart our to Aunty Micheal...
Colin: What are you playing at signing Carter!?
Micheal: I don't see how that's any of your buisness Colin...
Colin: I'm the captain, I think I have a right to know!
Micheal: I take it you don't approve then...
Colin: Of course I don't ****ing approve! What's the plan eh? Sign up Carter and drop me!?
Micheal: Wooo wooo hit the pause button kid, who said anything dropping you!?
Colin: Do you think I was born yesterday Micheal!? You don't sign up one of the premiership hottest stars and let him be underdog to me. Come on, what game you playing eh?
Micheal: Football Colin! That's what game I'm ****ing playing! I signed him becuase he's a bloody good player, he can do a lot for the team...so can you. I aint dropping you from the squad, you're a good skipper...
Colin: Really? :rolleyes:
Micheal: I might be ruthless but i'm not bull****ter, I promise you, your safe as skipper here. I want you both on this team working together...I have no reason to drop you...so get on with your job, get me the results I'm after and we'll all be as happy as a heffer in a cake shop :D
Micheal slaps Colin on the cheaks to cheer him up. Micheal has a confident look on his face, Colin's mood is lifted a bit from this news.
Scene 15
INT. MICHEAL'S OFFICE - DAY
Micheal and Charlie are in his office talking about Colin.
Micheal: I swear, he was in here convinced I was gonna drop him!
Charlie: And are you?
Micheal: Of course not, got no reason to have I. But I tell you something for nothing, I aint gonna have some paraonoid premadonna telling questioning every move I make...
Charlie: I'll have a word, he's just getting on a bit, most players are like that at his age...
Micheal: Yeah well, he best remember his place. Where the hell is this Cox kid eh? Thought we said half past?
Just as he says this, Jamie walks into the office, looking a bit flustered.
Micheal: Speak of the devil and he shall appear, what took you so long kid, sat nav knackered? You only had to drive five minutes down the road!
Jamie: Sorry Sir, was just getting ready...what do you want?
Micheal: Have a seat kid...can I get you a drink?
Jamie: No thanks, only fruit jucies and smoothies for me...
Micheal: Bloody hell, they've got you trained well aint they?
Jamie: Well if you want to get anywhere in this game...
Charlie: See, told you he had his head switched on Micheal
Micheal: I dont care about your head, it's your ball skills I'm intrested in...
Charlie: No worries on that front, he's better than some of the lads on the main squad.
Jamie looks embarassed by Charlie complimenting him.
Micheal: Well I haven't got time to stand outside watching the youth team, so I'll take your word for it...
Micheal gets up, pacing the room. He circles around Jamie, making him feel intimidated.
Jamie: Premership football aint no walk in the park kid, it's bloody ruthless. I've seen big men crack under the pressure...It seperates the men from the boys, what are you my son?
Jamie: A man sir...
Micheal: I should bloody well hope so, I dont want no fairies on my team, it's a football squad not Swan Lake. We all start from somewhere, I was in your position 40 years ago, someone gave me the chance, and I've never looked back...
Jamie: What are you saying sir?
Micheal: What I'm saying is, I'm giving you a place on the main team.
Jamie: (Excited) You serious boss!?
Micheal: I sure am, but don't you dare let me down, you hear me!?
Jamie: Don't worry I wont! Oh god, thanks sir, you don't know how much this means to me! :D
Micheal: Go on, on your way, you'd best go break the news to your team mates.
Jamie leaves, a spring in his step. Charlie has a smile on his face, pleased at Micheal's decision.
Charlie: Good decison Micheal, he's gonna be great on the squad.
Micheal: Well, if it means I get a bottle of scotch and a box of Cubans when I go up to heaven, it's worth it. Cheers :D
The pair chink together their glasses of Scotch.
Absolutely brilliant (as ever) well done :D
great yet again :cheer: keep up the good work
More great writing :) I'm loving this!! Well done x
Scene 16
INT. STRINGFELLOWS NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT
Famous nightclub owned by Peter Stringfellow, Timbaland's Give It To Me is playing in the background. The squad are out to celebrate Jamie's promotion to the main squad.
Luke: (Jokes) So then, the baby gets to play with the big boys :p
Jamie: I'm no baby...
Luke: That's what you've got to prove...you best be able to handle your drink...
Jamie: I dunno, I haven't really drank in ages...
Noel: You've got to get used to it when you're around us!
Luke: Come on, what you all having? First rounds on me...
The squad liven up at Luke's offer of drinks. Jamie sees Danielle from the other side of the club, he sees her checking him out, finally showing at intrest in him. He laughs at her sudden change of opinion, and ignores her, trying to act cool.
Noel: Oh look, Carter's come...
Sean comes into the club, and gets looks from a lot of the clubbers. Colin isn't pleased to see him.
Colin: Who invited that prick?
Micheal follows Sean into the club, to Colin's suprise.
Micheal: I did...got a problem with that?
Colin: (Through gritted teeth) No boss...
Micheal: Good, becuase I want you two to get along, depsite this problem you have with him...
Colin: It's not that easy boss...
Micheal: Well I suggest it is, unless you want me to rethink your place on the squad!
Micheal walks off, leaving Colin fuming at being told what to do.
Scene 17
INT. STRINGFELLOWS NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT
Jamie is at the bar having a laugh with some of the team, Danielle comes over to him, a confident look on her face.
Danielle: Hiya, Jamie isn't it?
Jamie: Oh I thought you only chatted to "real" footballers...
Danielle: Yeah about that, not the greatest starts is it, can we forget I said that?
Jamie: I suppose so, seen as I'm in a good mood...
Danielle: Yeah dad told me the good news, well done you, bet your girlfriend's pleased isn't she?
Jamie: I haven't got one...but I think you knew that didnt you?
Danielle takes a seductive sip of her alcopop, giving Jamie a mischevious look.
Danielle: Maybe :cool:
Jamie: And what about you?
Danielle: Are you asking me out on a date?
Jamie: Well erm...
Danielle leans in and snogs Jamie. He is taken aback by the sudden move, but enjoys it all the same.
Danielle: Hows that for an answer? You can take me out tomorrow night, but it better be good :p
Jamie raises an eyebrow, a smile appearing on his face.
Scene 18
INT. STRINGFELLOWS NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT
With Jamie chatting to Danielle, Noel checks out the women around the club. He notices a blonde (Kellie Shirley) walking out of the mens toilets, followed shortly after by a man in a suit, he slyly hands her some money before walking away. Noel walks over towards her.
Marie: Yeah, what do you want?
Noel: Can I get you a drink?
Marie: Vodka and red bull...
Noel: Please?
Marie: Well you either wanna get me one or you don't.
Noel shakes his head, unable to believe her cockiness, without questioning it he asks for the drinks.
Noel: Noel Roberts...I'm the...
Marie: Goalkeeper at The Lions, yeah I know...Marie...
Noel: So Marie, what you doing alone in a place like this?
Marie: Work here dont I...
Noel: Barmaid?
Marie: No, let's just say I charge for...services...
Noel's phone rings, it's Jess calling, he cancels the call and returns to talking to Marie.
Marie: Girlfriend?
Noel: Nah, it's no-one...so if I was to give you some money, reckon you could come back to my hotel and...service me?
Marie: As long as you've got the money, sure...
Noel: Come on darling, does it look like I haven't got money? (To barman) Forget the drinks mate, I'm heading off.
A confident grin on his face, he leads Marie out of the club and back to his hotel room.
EXT. STRINGFELLOWS NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT
Jamie walks down the stairs of Stringfellows and out onto the street, a phone in his hands trying to get reception. He smiles politely at a group of fans who recognise him.
He dials a number and paces the street until he gets a response.
Jamie: Yeah, I'm in...I'm gonna make sure Aston pays...you mark my words...
Jamie has a look of venom and determination on his face.
END OF EPISODE ONE
Wow, just caught up! I wonder what Jamie is up to?!
OMG what is he up to :eek: good stuff again :cheer:
Oooh er i wasn't expecting that! What is Jamie up to???
More more more :angel: please x
brilliant first epside, danielles a bit forward isn't she.
Loving Colin's moods there is going to be fireworks between him and Carter.
Scene 1
INT. FIVE STAR HOTEL BEDROOM - MORNING
Noel is asleep, in bed with Marie the hooker. She rolls over, putting her arms on him, he wakes up and jumps out of his skin, getting out of bed.
Marie stirs, a smile on her face, her make up has faded and her hair is a mess.
Noel holds his hands behind his head in disbelief.
Noel: Christ, what was I thinking!?
Marie: Oh thanks :rolleyes:
Noel: You're a hooker, you're not paid for an opinion or feelings...
Marie: You *******!
Noel: Come on, get out of my room you grubby little whore!
Marie: If I'm grubby, what does that make you for getting with me... god you make me sick.
Noel: Piss off out of my room you slag! What is it? Money you want! Here have this!
Noel throws a few notes on the bed, totally degrading her.
Noel: No get the hell out of here...
Marie: You pig...
Noel: Are you gonna go, or d'ya want me to throw you out!?
Marie gets up, puts on her dress and picks up the notes, humiliated. She casts Noel a look of contempt as she leaves the room...
Scene 2
INT. JAMIE'S FLAT - MORNING
Jamie's flat - a luxury open planned flat, looking out onto the River Thames. Jamie is walking around the room, in his boxers, on the phone to someone.
Jamie: Look don't rush me, I need to build up some confidence with him don't I? I'm just the new bot, it's gonna take a while before I get in his good books...
In the background he can hear the noise of someone walking into the room.
Jamie: (Huriedly) Look I've gotta go...
Jamie hangs up the call, just as Danielle walks into the room, wraped in only a towel - she obviously stayed the night.
Danielle: Who you on the phone to this early?
Jamie: No one...
Danielle: It must be someone important at 7 in the morning...
Jamie: (Snappy) It's nothing okay!?
Danielle: Fine...no need to snap...
Jamie walks over to Danielle and wraps his arms around her.
Jamie: Sorry, it's just a bit stressful, knowing I've got to prove myself to everyone....
Danielle: Well you certainly don't have to where I'm concerned, last night was amazing :p
Jamie: Really?
Danielle: Yeah, you're quite good for a skinny little runt :p
Jamie: Quite?
Danielle: Okay...very :D
Jamie leans in for a kiss, as he drops her towel and lowers her onto the sofa...
Scene 3
INT. MICHEAL'S OFFICE - DAY
Micheal is sat in his office, reading the sports section of the newspaper, there's a knock on the door.
Micheal: Yeah, come in...
Sean walks into the room, looking a bit concerned.
Micheal: Sean, what an unexpected pleasure...
Sean: Alright boss...just wanted a word if it's okay...
Micheal: Of course it is, I've always got time for you. Take a seat.
Sean sits down, looking uneasy.
Micheal: What's on your mind then?
Sean: It's Colin...
Micheal: What about him?
Sean: I don't want to be stepping on anyone's toes boss...
Micheal: Nonsense, you're not...
Sean: If me being here is going to cause conflict for the group, then maybe it's best if I...
Micheal: I didn't sign you to this club, for you to be watching your step all the time...
Sean: I just can't help feeling that Colin hates me...
Micheal: You leave him to me, he's just paranoid that you're gonna take over as skipper...
Sean: That's not my intention at all boss, I've just come here to play football...
Micheal: And he'll get that into his head eventually. As far as I see it I've got big plans for this club, and signing you is my main way of getting there...now get out on the pitch and work your magic :D
Fab Bry i'm not sure what Jamie is up to but i don't like the sound of it
I hope Marie does a kiss and tell on Noel :rolleyes:
More soon x
INT. MICHEAL'S OFFICE - DAY
Jenny walks into Micheal's office, carrying many shopping bags. Micheal's eyes buldge at the number of bags she has.
Micheal: Hard day shopping!?
Jenny: Yeah, Oxford Street don't know what's hit it...
Micheal: Well you're only 40 once...
Jenny: Oh god don't remind me...
Micheal: It's nothing to be ashamed of.
Jenny: It is! I'll be getting crowds feet, sagging, everything!
Micheal: Nothing that money and a trip to a cosmetic surgeoun wont cure :D
Jenny faces widens at this. She walks behind Micheal and begins to massage his shoulders.
Micheal: Oh god, I swear I wasn't this much of a handful when I was a player...
Jenny: The boys playing you up?
Micheal: It's all this Colin and Carter buisness, Colin feels threatened by him...Sean doesn't want to step on his toes...they need sorting out!
Jenny: You should have expected that when you signed Carter...
Micheal: They best both show up tonight!
Jenny: Why? What's happening tonight?
Micheal: I've arranged a party for you...
Jenny: Oh god no...you haven't told them how old I am have you!?
Micheal: Of course I did, what's the big issue?
Jenny: Micheal!
Micheal: So what if you're 40!? You're the sexiest 40 year old I've ever laid my hands on...
Jenny smiles as Micheal leans in for a kiss and begins to undo her blouse...
Good stuff Bry :cheer: Looking foward to the next part :D
INT. NOEL'S CAR - DAY
Noel is in his sports car, driving to the training ground. His phone rings, he answers it, with just one hand on the wheel.
Noel: Yeah?
Jess: It's me...
Noel: What do you want!?
Jess: Hello to you too... can we meet up?
Noel: I dunno, it was fun, but...
Jess: Are you ditching me!?
Noel: No I just think we should cool it a bit...we don't want your dad finding out...
Jess: You let me worry about dad...
Noel: No Jess, it's too risky man...
Jess: You seem like the kind of guy who likes to take a risk...
Noel: Look, just sod off yeah!?
Noel hangs up the phone on Jess. He throws his phone onto the passenger seat, and speeds off down the road.
Not a very nice man is he? Good stuff Bry :cheer:
INT. HALESOWEN STADIUM - DAY
The first match of the season. We see various shots of the game being played.
We see Luke kicking the ball across the pitch. Colin shouts over to him.
Colin: Luke! Luke over here!
Luke kicks the ball Colin's way, but Sean runs into the way and picks up the ball to Colin's annoyance.
Sean kicks the ball, past a couple of players and blasts it into the back of the net. The crowds cheer as Colin scores the winning goal of the game.
The final wistle blows. 'The Lions' have won. However Colin is left fuming, giving Sean daggered looks at the players all crowd around the man of the match...
i don't like Sean hes a bit like Joey Barton, Greedy. Glad they won the forst game though. Come on the Lions.
Its really good.
I dont think Colin is going to find it easy getting on with Sean. Good stuff Bry
Colin needs to get over himself :rolleyes:
Told you I would get around to reading it and with an open mind too... It is no DS but it is good.. I am really enjoying it..
Not liking Noel at all but can't wait to find out what Jamie is up to.. Good work Bry...
Just caught up loving it, can't wait to find out about Jamie and if Maria does a kiss and tell.
I am not liking Noel at all! What a nasty character - i hope Marie tells the newspapers of her night of passion with him! Jess deserves someone better too, she shouldn't waste her time on a man who's just going to mess her around..
Great that the Lions won the first game. :thumbsup:
INT. HALESOWEN STADIUM - DAY
The team walk into the changing rooms, a buzz with excitement at winning their game. They begin chanting one of the fans' favourite songs.
All: Aston's Claret & Blue Armry! FC! FC! Aston's Claret & Blue Army! FC! FC!
One by one the players congratulate Carter, shaking his hand and patting him on the back.
Luke: Nice one mate, you did good out there...
Carter: It was nothing really, just a goal...
Charlie: Just a goal!? That goal won us the match! Well done Sean, you've got us off to a great start! :D
Noel: Drinks all round later, what d'ya say boys!?
The team cheer. Colin storms into the room, fuming, he marches over to Sean and pushes him against the wall.
Colin: What were you playing at eh!? That ball was mine!
Sean: Says who!? It's anyones ball, I got there first!
Colin: I called for it! You stole me goal!
Sean: Get over yourself! What exactly is your problem!?
Colin: You are, you stupid ****!
Sean pushes Colin off him, the pair begin brawling in the middle of the changing rooms.
Colin: Walking in here, thinking you run the place! Well you don't! I do!
Luke and Noel split the pair up, and keep them away from each other. Charlie walks into between the pair of them.
Charlie: For god sake! What is it with the pair of you! You're supposed to be grown men, but you're acting like kids in a bloody playground!
Sean: He came at me boss, what am I supposed to do!?
Colin: That's right, suck some more ass why don't you!
Charlie: ENOUGH! The pair of you! This is the final straw, d'ya hear me!? Anymore of this nonsense and there's gonna be some serious trouble, do you understand!?
Sean: Yes boss...
Colin doesn't respond.
Charlie: Colin!?
Colin doesn't respond, he grabs a towel and storms out of the changing rooms, wiping himself as he leaves. Charlie shouts after him.
Charlie: Colin! You get back here now! Colin!
look like Colin is quiting and not been kicked out.. he needs to get over himself