Ohhhh cant wait for more i need to know what happens
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Ohhhh cant wait for more i need to know what happens
Scene 11- Keynes Road- Night
(Cleo and Selena are heading back to their flats after their night of bar work at Nightlife Nightclub)
Selena: Had a good night then? I thought it was quite a success for an opening night..the clubbers were just flourishing in through those doors as soon as Nightlife opened!
(Cleo becomes quite tearful. Selena notices..)
Selena: Oh Cleo! What's wrong?! I haven't upset you have I?!
Cleo: No it's not you...it's just tonight...tonight's got to me...all the memories came flooding back of the night of the fire!
Selena: Oh Cleo...i should've known! Are you ok?
(Cleo bursts into tears)
Cleo: No not really...i loved him Selena...i loved Rob but he died in my arms! :crying:
Selena: Cleo, you have to try and get over him! The harsh reality is that he's not coming back!
Cleo: I've tried to get over him! Believe you me! But i just can't...i loved him so much! I still love him now, i'm never gonna get over him! Never! :crying:
Selena: Oh come here Cleo..
(Selena gives Cleo a warming hug)
Cleo: Whoever started that fire at Nightlife, they better watch out because i'm gonna nail them sooner or later and they'll wish that they had never been born! :(
Selena: Come on Cleo...why don't you come back to my flat..?
Cleo: I don't want to impose on your family Selena..
Selena: You won't! My husband will understand, your going through a tough time, i bet your feeling lonely being in that flat on your own!
Cleo: Your right...i'm feeling lonely...very lonely...i've got no one...
Selena: Now that's not true! You've got me...now come on..come to my flat..we can have a coffee. :)
(Selena smiles at Cleo as Cleo wipes the tears from her eyes. They both continue walking towards Selena's flat)
Finally I managed to read it all,since I finally have some free time. What a great start and sereis this already is, SO much drama already. 2? people dead already,I loved the you opened it and I really dont like Jason lol.
Scene 12- Nightlife Nightclub- Night
(The nightclub is shut. Nicola storms into Jason's office, ready to confront him again)
Nicola: So are you gonna explain to me how those drugs got on the office floor?!
Jason: I'm growing sick and tired of this Nic...can't you just lay off the subject?!
Nicola: No i'm not gonna "lay off the subject"! I want answers Jason...this is our nightclub, this is our marriage, i thought we promised no more secrets?!
(We see Jason's face turning angry)
Jason: There's no secrets to tell! I don't take drugs and i don't know how that packet of cocaine got on the office floor ok?!
Nicola: No it's not ok! Your gonna tell me the truth right this instant!
(Jason clenches his fists as he gets more angrier than ever)
Jason: Right! You bloody asked for it bitch!
(Jason charges at Nicola and punches her in the face. Nicola staggers backwards and hits her head on the wall before slumping to the floor. Nicola lays on the floor wiping her hand over her bleeding nose, she looks terrified)
END OF EPISODE 1
Oh My God!!!!!
How could Jason do that?!!!
Really really dont like him now
And so the plot thickens
the bouncers have killed someone, jason has smacked nicola one and Cleo wants revenge...
bril stuff. keep it up dave!
Dave, Im back up to speed with this now, and its great....gripping stuff.
Jason....needs a good bashing I feel.....he is worse that Max Branning...he is not only a womaniser, but a wife beater now...how much worse can he get?:angry:
OOOHHHH!!! I just caught up with this, it's absolutely brilliant! more soon please!!
Scene 1- Nightlife Nightclub- Morning
(It's the morning after the night before. Jason and Nicola live above the nightclub in a flat. Nicola heads into the bathroom after waking up on the office down in the nightclub. She goes in the bathroom and looks in the mirror and sees the massive bruise on her face that was caused by Jason hitting her. Nicola stares at it for a while, she becomes tearful, she wipes the tears from her eyes, trying to not cry but the tears overcome her and she breaks down and staggers to the floor, crying her eyes out over Jason's vicious attack)
Scene 2- Libby's Flat- Morning
(Libby wakes up next to Nightlife DJ Brad. She looks over him and snarls in disgust as he carries on sleeping. Libby gets up and notices Brad's clothes all over her bedroom floor. She grabs them and chucks them out of the bedroom window and into her back garden. She heads downstairs with a sinister smile on her face. She goes into the kitchen and picks up a petrol canister. She heads into her back garden and pours petrol all over Brad's clothes before setting them alight. Libby laughs)
Libby: Oh dear...dear Brad! You really didn't know what type of woman you were messing with did ya?! :D
(Libby laughs knowing Brad has no other clothes with him. He'll have to head back to Nightlife Nightclub completely naked)
Fab as always dave, well done :D I despise Jason
that last one made me laugh :p
Scene 3- Nightlife Nightclub- Morning
(Jason is down in the nightclub picking up empty glasses and bottles after the opening night that took place the night before. Nicola comes down into the nightclub, her bruise clearly visible. Jason starts talking to Nicola in a nice manner, as if nothing happened the night before)
Jason: Oh Nic...your up early..:)
(Nicola is speaking uncomfortably)
Nicola: Yeah..well..
Jason: Well it's not like you! I know you usually like your lie-ins...go on get back into bed..i'll make you breakfast in bed!
Nicola: No it's ok..i'm not hungry, i just thought i'd come down here and help you tidy up after last night!
Jason: There really is no need love! And anyway, you look absolutely terrible! Look at that bruise on your face...
(Nicola turns away from Jason, clearly uncomfortable. Jason edges closer to Nicola and grabs her chin)
Jason: Now we wouldn't want anyone questioning how you got that bruise on your face now would we?!
(Nicola is tearful and replies nervously)
Nicola: No..
Jason: So i think it's best that you stay upstairs while you recover from that bruise...don't you?! After all, we don't want any paranoid folk to ask questions..
Nicola: Yeah ok...i'll stay upstairs...until i recover...
Jason: Good girl! And remember, don't come back down until that bruise has dissapeared...understand?
Nicola: I understand...
(Nicola heads back upstairs. She goes back into her bedroom and crumples to the floor in tears)
not only is Jason a bit of a serial Cheater he HIT his wife !!. this is great stuff Dave, just got up to speed. I think its realy good.
That Jason is getting worse.
Great stuff dave
Scene 4- Libby's Flat- Morning
(Brad wakes up in Libby's double bed after sleeping with her the night before. He hears crackling noises from Libby's back garden and is horrified to look out of the window and see all his clothes on fire. He is completely naked and realises he has no other clothes to wear. Brad shouts out from the bedroom window)
Brad: Lib! What the hell do you think your doing?! Those are my clothes burning!
(Libby laughs at Brad)
Libby: Oh dear Brad! It seems you'll have to walk back to Nightlife in the nude! :D
Brad: (horrified) Libby, why are you doing this?! What have i done to you?!
Libby: I'll tell you what you've done...you've made me endure the worst experience in bed ever!
Brad: So your punishing me by burning my clothes?!
Libby: Yep...that sums it up basically...plus your a gullible prat...did you actually think that i fancied you!? Your the most ugliest man that i've ever met!
(Brad has an angry but upset look on his face)
Brad: Right that's it!
(Brad runs downstairs and into Libby's back garden naked. He shouts at Libby)
Brad: Your gonna get my clothes back now!
Libby: Sorry hun! It looks like they've gone up in smoke...no can do! :D
(Libby goes back into the house as Brad stares at his clothes burning in the fire in shock. Libby is inside and locks the doors and windows. Brad turns to try and go back inside but is unable to get in, realising Libby has locked the doors)
Brad: Libby! Open this door...
(Libby laughs at Brad from inside)
Brad: Libby! Open this door! I'm completely naked here...it's humiliating!
(Brad rushes to Libby's front door and bangs the door, hoping for Libby to let him in)
Brad: Please Libby! Let me back in...i need to put some clothes back on! I'm going to freeze out here!
(Libby laughs from the front window inside her flat. She picks up the phone and dials in a number)
Libby: Hello...police please....i would like to report a scene of indecency..:D
O dear.
Lol that made be laugh, harsh but funny
Scene 5- Outside Nightlife Nightclub- Evening
(Russell and Terry make their way to Nightlife for another night of standing on the door as bouncers)
Russell: Terry..i can't face it..
Terry: We have to do it Russ...
(Terry and Russell look down the alleyway where Russell viciously beat up Kev Peters. To their amazement, Kev has dissapeared from the alleyway..all there is left is a pool of blood...)
Russell: Oh ****! He's gone! :eek:
(Russell and Terry both look at each other, paniced looks on their faces)
Wheres Kev gone, and Libby you go girl, i like her style !!!
Keep it up Dave.
Where's Kev gone, actually ive onyl just realised that they left him there!
Fab stuff again dave, really dont like Jason, vile man
Scene 6- Nightlife Nightclub- Night
(The nightclub has opened to clubbers for a second night. Clubbers are dancing to the music. Jason is over by the bar and sees Madeline and Abi in the distance sipping on their drinks. Jason charges over to Madeline and Abi)
Jason: I need a word...
(Jason grabs Madeline by the arm and pulls her to his office. Abi follows. Jason shuts his office door and confronts the pair)
Jason: You both have some explaining to do...especially you Madeline...
Madeline: What's wrong Jason?! I gave you a good seeing too in this office...what more do you want?!
Jason: It's what you left behind that matters!
(Jason goes to the club safe and takes out the packet of cocaine to show Madeline and Abi)
Jason: Is this yours?
Abi: Err..
Jason: Don't deny it! I know it's yours...what the hell do you think you two are doing taking drugs in my club?! I could end up in deep **** because of you two!
Madeline: Look i'm sorry Jas! It obviously just slipped out of my bag...
Jason: What were you thinking?! I have a good right to go to the police to report you two for dealing drugs on my premises!
(Madeline laughs)
Madeline: You hardly seem the type to go to the police...and besides if you do, i'll just say you supplied them too me...after all, your fingerprints are all over them!
Abi: Not so smart now are you eh?!
Jason: Fine...i won't go to the police, but i'll tell you what i am gonna do...i'm gonna ban you from this nightclub!
Madeline: (outraged) What?! :eek: You can't do that! You have no right!
Jason: I have every right if your possessing drugs on my premises! Now go on! Get out and piss off!
(Madeline and Abi leave Jason's office, with angry looks on their faces. Jason pours a glass of alcohol and drinks it in one gulp)
Scene 7- Nightlife Nightclub- Night
(Clubbing friends Vicky, Tim and Gemma have come to Nightlife to enjoy a night of clubbing)
Gemma: Well i must say this is quite a good venue...they play good music, should come here more often...
Tim: Yeah i must say this place ranks quite high on my list...i've been to worse nightclubs!
(Gemma and Tim look over and see Vicky, a sad look on her face.)
Tim: Come on Vick! Stop feeling sorry for yourself and get that drink down you!
Gemma: I thought we all agreed to come here to forget today and have a good time...especially you Vick...you have to get over Guy, hun!
Vicky: I promised that i would forget about him and enjoy tonight, but i just can't!
Gemma: Come on let's have a dance Vick...i'm sure a boogie on the dancefloor might help you forget him!
Vicky: Well there's no harm in dancing i spose...
(Vicky and Gemma get on the dancefloor and start jumping up and down, dancing to the club music along with the rest of the clubbers. Tim has a smirk on his face)
Tim: I guarantee that this will cheer you up Vick..
(Tim gets out a tablet and puts it in Vicky's drink. Tim has just spiked Vicky's drink)
Tim the swine.....:nono:
Oh and dont get me started on that Jason.....:angry:
Really enjoying this, Dave....:D
Cant wait to see whats happened to that Kev fella......:eek:
A spiking drink storyline interesting and shocking at the same time.
Love it
great work again dave. that libby is a bit of a psycho isn't she?
great work Dave im really enjoying this. keep it up, its great. Jason is villain of the year.
Scene 8- Police Station- Night
(Brad is in an interview room being questioned by police over his scene of indecency)
Policeman: I won't tell you again! What were you doing showing off your genitials to half of Crompton Street?!
Brad: I've told you it was a bloody set up! Why won't you believe me?! I've done nothing wrong, that mad woman burnt my clothes!
Policeman: Sorry but i fail to believe that...when we got to the scene, the poor woman looked terrified!
Brad: It was an act for god sake...well all i can say is that she's fooled you!
Policeman: Stop trying to wriggle your way out of this! I'm sure it wasn't a pretty sight for that street seeing your private parts, and that's why we have to take action...
Brad: Action!? For christ sake, why are you bothered about this?! You should be out there searching for the paedophiles, the rapists, the murderers walking these streets! You should be out there catching the real criminals, not dealing with someone like me who ended up half naked in public!
Policeman: We don't need a lecture on how to do our jobs, this distressed woman reported a scene of indecency, you were standing outside her front door, your private parts clearly visible....we have to act on that!
Brad: Distressed?! She wasn't distressed! She was loving every bloody minute of it and you failed to notice that! Libby wrapped you round her little finger...and you fell for her story that i went to her house to show off my private parts in an unnecessary manner!
Policeman: I've had enough of this...as this is your first offence, we're gonna chuck you in a cell for the night, hope that'll teach you lesson!
Brad: I don't deserve to be locked in a cell! I've done nothing wrong! I bet you didn't bother to look in her back garden did you eh?! You would have seen the remains of a recent fire there...i would have been proved right! The stupid cow has set me up!
Policeman: Oh shut it!
(Two policeman walk in and grab Brad and drag him to a prison cell. He fails to try and fight them off, realising he has lost the battle to prove his innocence)
Scene 9- Nightlife Nightclub- Night
(Jason is standing at the bar, watching Duncan djing and providing the music for the clubbers. He storms over to him)
Jason: In my office now!
(Duncan looks at Jason puzzled. He follows Jason to his office as the music keeps playing on the cd. They enter Jason's office. Jason shuts the door)
Duncan: What's up boss?
Jason: Where's that brother of yours?
Duncan: I don't know boss...i did try calling him, he knew he had his shift!
Jason: I rely on you two to provide the music for this club! You know that's a very important job don't you?! The music is what attracts the clubbers to this place!
Duncan: Yeah i know...
(Jason starts shouting)
Jason: So why is your bloody brother not here?!
Duncan: Look i'm sorry, something must have happened...and that's probably why he's not here!
Jason: When your working for Nightlife Nightclub, this nightclub must come first! I can't have unreliable working here...you must understand that..
Duncan: Yeah i do...
Jason: So that's why i'm getting rid of him...tell your brother he's sacked!
Duncan: What!? But why?! Your overreacting here! :eek:
Jason: I'm the boss...i call the shots! Now get back out there, i'm still relying on you atleast, get out there and play the music that the clubbers love!
(Duncan leaves Jason's office, gobsmacked his brother has just been sacked)
awwwww Lol poor Brad, its still very funny
Scene 10- Nightlife Nightclub Toilets- Night
(Abi and Madeline are in the women's toilets)
Abi: Maybe we should just go Madeline...you heard the boss..we're banned!
Madeline: Jesus Abi! This nightclub is great! There's no way i'm getting "banned" from here!
Abi: We can't do anything about it! We have to leave!
Madeline: Nope no way am i leaving! That man can't tell us what to do! I'm staying put!
Abi: He'll end up chucking us out if we don't leave off our own accord!
Madeline: I'm not leaving this club without a fight Abi...we're gonna get revenge, and i guarantee that Jason won't be a happy bunny once he finds out what we've done! :D So are you with me or are you gonna do what that ******* says?!
(Abi rolls her eyes, realising she hasn't got much of a choice in the situation)
Scene 11- Nightlife Nightclub- Night
(Jonathan is behind the bar with Selena, trying to speak to them over the loud club music)
Jonathan: I haven't seen Nicola all day! Have you seen her about?!
Selena: No....why?
Jonathan: Oh no reason...it just seems a bit strange that's all...she's usually up and about doing something, she owns half of this club after all!
Selena: She's probably got the cold or something...it's going around at the moment...
Jonathan: Possibly..
Selena: Or she could be just relaxing...putting her feet up, making her husband do all the work! :p
Jonathan: No...there's something else...something's wrong i can feel it..
Selena: Well if your so concerned why don't you just go upstairs to her flat and see her?!
Jonathan: Yeah maybe......
(Jonathan then remembers Jason's threat)
Jonathan: No actually i won't..your right she's probably just got the cold or something..
poor jonathan, he's only trying to help and that jason has him scared to death.
excellent work again.
I know, Jason is so evil. Jonathons trying to be a good friend.
Scene 12- Outside Nightlife Nightclub- Night
(Vicky, Gemma and Tim are all walking back from Nightlife nightclub after enjoying their night out. Vicky is all over the place, jumping up and down, squeeling as she speaks)
Vicky: Oh yeah tonight was the bloody greatest! Phwoooar! Did you see that hunky person?!
Gemma: Oh my god Vicky! Your well out of it...and i swear you didn't have too much to drink!
Vicky: I'm not well out of it! I'm just feeling on top of the world that's all!
Gemma: Something's made you feel on top of the world and i don't know what!
Tim: Well i'm just glad your happy Vik...and you've got over that prick of an ex-boyfriend!
Vicky: What ex-boyfriend?! (laughs) See i've forgot him! I don't even know his name anymore!! Wahoooo!
(Vicky jumps up and down in excitement)
Gemma: Vicky..i'm glad you've cheered up and got over Guy...but you really are acting weird, i'm concerned!
Tim: Gem...don't spoil what is a great night! You wanted to see her get over Guy, you wanted to see her with a smile on her face! Look at her, she's happy!
Gemma: Yeah..but she doesn't seem right, i know when Vicky's happy...and this isn't Vicky happy! This is Vicky acting all weird...
Vicky: You talking about me?! Why ya talking about me?! Is it coz i'm invincible?!
Gemma: Vick..your freakin' me out!
(Vicky looks at Gemma and screams)
Vicky: I'm invincible!!!
(As Vicky says this, she runs into the road and jumps up and down)
Vicky: I'm invincible!!
(A car suddenly speeds past and mows Vicky down. The car brakes. Vicky is lying motionless on the floor, blood draining from her head as she lies, eyes wide open. Gemma screams in fright. Tim looks on, a shocked look on his face)
Oh My God!!!!! Vicky.
Great work Dave.
Scene 13- Outside Nightlife Nightclub- Night
(An ambulance has arrived outside Nightlife Nightclub. They have put Vicky on a stretcher and put her in the ambulance. A paramedic approaches a tearful Gemma and a shocked Tim)
Paramedic: Only one person can come in the ambulance with Vicky..
Tim: You can go Gemma..
(The paramedic accompanies Gemma into the ambulance. Tim turns away and breaks down into tears, realising the consequences of his actions)
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(Jason is staring at the ambulance as it drives away. He speaks to himself in anger)
Jason: This is all i bloody need! A suspicious accident taking place on my club's doorstep! It's going to ruin Nightlife's reputation, clubbers are going to be put off!! :angry:
(Cleo suddenly approaches Jason)
Cleo: Sorry Jas...but we've got another problem on our hands, the toilets have been flooded...
Jason: Christ! I don't think i can take much more of this...
(Jason goes back into the nightclub, ready to deal with the flooding in the toilets)
I bet Tim is feeling really bad for spiking her drink and as for Jason he deserves all the trouble to cope with.
hehe
Scene 14- Nightlife Nightclub- Night
(The club is closing for the night as the toilets have flooded and have started to seep through and flood the nightclub itself. Jason is running his hands through his hair, it's clear that he's stressed. Jason shouts in anger as the final few clubbers leave the nightclub)
Jason: I don't bloody believe this! This had to be done on purpose...someone did this! Someone did this on purpose! :angry:
(Madeline and Abi hears Jason's shouts from inside the nightclub. They both laugh)
Madeline: Come on Abs...let's go before he explodes! :D
(Madeline and Abi laugh as they walk away from Nightlife Nightclub)
Scene 15- High Street- Night
(Cleo and Selena are walking home after their shift at Nightlife Nightclub)
Selena: Well that was another eventful night!
Cleo: (half listening) Yeah..
Selena: I do hope that girl who got knocked down is ok though...she seemed like she was bonkers when she was leaving...
Cleo: Well drink can make you do funny things..
(Selena looks at Cleo, clearly concerned)
Selena: Are you ok?
Cleo: Yeah i'm fine! You don't need to keep asking me how i'm feeling! I'm fine ok?!
Selena: Alright..but i can't help but be concerned for my mate...you were in tears last night...i was worried about you!
Cleo: Well i'm fine now! Like you said, i have to move on!
(Selena glimpses at Cleo's hand and notices a cut)
Selena: How did you do that?
Cleo: Do what?!
(Selena grabs Cleo's hand and examines it)
Selena: That cut looks quite deep!
Cleo: I cut it on a bit of broken glass at the club ok?!
(Selena stares at Cleo, clearly not convinced. Selena pulls up Cleo's sleeves and sees cuts on her wrists)
Selena: Christ Cleo! What the hell have you done?! :eek:
(Cleo looks at Selena and starts crying)
Cleo: I can't take it anymore! I can't live my life without my fiance...i need to block out the pain of losing him! :crying:
Selena: And slitting your wrists is the answer?! Harming yourself is the answer?! Cleo..you need help...
(Selena looks at Cleo, concerned. Cleo continues to cry and breaks down into tears on the pavement)
END OF EPISODE 1.2