Sequel To Deception - Moving On

Oh my god so many replies you all amazing and I thank you for reading :bow:

A week flew by and the wedding plans were running pretty smoothly now the dress fiasco had been fixed
Tina- I thought you said you were sorting it
Johnny- I am don’t panic
Tina- I will panic I get married in four days and I have no wedding cake
Johnny- it’s all under control
Tina glared at him and stormed off upstairs
Ruby- nice one dad
Johnny- don’t you start as well go over and see your sister?
Ruby- fine
She grabbed her coat and left the house
Just as she was about to knock on the bright red door of Kerrie’s house the sound of a window smashing stopped her dead in her tracks and a shoe whizzed past her and landed on the street
Kerrie lent out of the window
Kerrie- sorry Rubes…you threw a bloody shoe at me
Ruby shrugged there was no way she was going in there and she made her way over to Stacey’s
Noah- can you blame me you’re a raving loony
Kerrie- me a loony you smashed a window not me
Noah- and I just happened to smash a window cos I felt like it did I no it just happens my girlfriend decided to spend six hundred pounds on a coat
Kerrie- so we can afford it
Noah- any money we spent we would talk about it you said after I bought the new TV
Kerrie- well that’s different we didn’t need a new TV
Noah- and you don’t need a new coat you already have nearing on thirty
Kerrie- I have twenty nine don’t exaggerate
Noah- oh I can’t be doing with you when you’re like this
People passing by the house looked up tutting and listening to the feisty pair arguing
Kerrie- going somewhere
Noah- yeah to go and have a drink
Kerrie walked over to where he stood
Kerrie- and leaving little old me here all on my own
She kissed him
Kerrie- am I forgiven
Noah- I don’t know about that
Kerrie- you better go to the pub then
She went to walk out but Noah grabbed her arm she turned walked back towards him and smiled

Ruby- she was going mental
Stacey- I bet she was if someone threw a shoe at me I’d show them what for
Ruby- well this is Kerrie
Stacey- she’ll eat him alive
The girls laughed

awwww i really love Kerrie and Noah as a couple it's fun to see them fight, but they do love each other!!!!!

yeh stacey i agree she shouldn't have let that go so easily but there again i bet she's all ready thought of some sort of pay back

Brilliant again, What more can I say.

Fantastic! This is really good :cheer:
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Great, post more soon!

This is great, its really funny!!!
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Luv ya
Layne
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Fab as normal. Like the fights between Noah and Kerrie. More.
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this is brill babes, but i need to know more, why aren't you posting????? :searchme: breaking down :crying:

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dennis and Sharon very very soon I promise thanks for all the wondeful replies from all you wonderful readers

Jake sat on the edge of the bed watching Chrissie sleep he placed a note on the pillow before lifting up the carrycot with Lia in and made his way downstairs
Little Mo- is she all right
Jake- just tired
Little Mo- I’ll make sure she gets plenty of rest
Jake- I’ll be at the club with this one if there is any problems
Little Mo- go on I’ll be fine it’s not that busy
Jake headed to the club with his young daughter
Johnny- we have company I’m honoured
Jake- you don’t mind it’s just Chrissie’s exhausted she isn’t sleeping well at all in fact she’s got worse since Dennis’s letter arrived must be nervous about seeing him and Sharon again after Den and everything
Johnny- if you want the day off I don’t mind
Jake- no I’ll be fine she just needs some rest she’s having some really horrible nightmares as well as long as she sleeps she’ll be fine
Johnny- yeah but will you
Jake- I’m fine I’ll be even better when Chrissie is
Johnny smiled at Jake trying to reassure him but Jake had a niggling feeling that there was something Chrissie was keeping from him

Better and better every single time.
I look forward to reading more.

it can only get better.
more more more
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Oooh Fab!
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oh wow babes this is absolutely brill it can't get any better (apart from when Sharon and Dennis get back, obviously) i really don't them to split Jake CAN'T find out about Den NEVER NEVER NEVER

Hope he doesn't find out, it might split them up....

Just caught up, loving it as always forever special Friend!
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Layne
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Sorry for the delay :wub: :wub: :wub: Your all wonderful people

Kerrie stared at Noah as he dressed
Kerrie- so
Noah- so what I’ve got to go I’ve got a meeting
Kerrie- really what kind of meeting
Noah- the kind where you do business my sweet
Kerrie- well as long as it is just a business meeting
Noah- and what’s that meant to mean Kerrie
Kerrie- nothing
Noah- I’m not seeing anyone else believe me your enough woman for any man
Kerrie pouted
Noah leant over and kissed her
Noah- I love you no one else all right
Kerrie nodded and kissed him once again
Noah- I’ll call you

The back door to the Queen Vic opened
Sharon- I’m not sure this is a good idea
Dennis- look Chrissie was just trying to make you see what Den did and it got us back together didn’t it
Sharon- she tricked me into coming here
Dennis- yeah but without that where would we be now Den’s gone
Sharon- I still would like to see him I want to finish what we started
Dennis- don’t get upset about him he’s not worth it
Sharon- I know
They dumped their bags and headed upstairs
Chrissie was in the kitchen sitting sipping a cup of coffee her nerves were shot to pieces
Chrissie- Jake…
Dennis walked in followed by Sharon
Chrissie- you’re here already I wasn’t expecting you till the end of the week
Dennis- we got an earlier flight Chrissie are you all right?
Chrissie- it’s just really good to see you both again
She hugged Dennis and then Sharon
Chrissie- Sharon I’m sorry about your father what I did was unforgivable
Sharon- it’s fine so I hear you’ve got a daughter
Chrissie- Lia her daddy’s taken he out
Sharon- congratulations
Chrissie- thanks do you want a drink or something
Sharon- no we better get over to the flat we just thought we’d come and see you first
Chrissie- well later come over have some drinks we’ll all catch up you can meet Jake and Lia
Dennis- we will
He kissed Chrissie on the cheek
Dennis- you all right
Chrissie- just tired it’s nice that you’re back
She swallowed hard as the couple left the kitchen and headed downstairs

I feel Chrissie is going to tell someone soon, she can't keep quiet. Can just see Jake pushing a baby around. More more more
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Fantastic :D
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brill! :D just caught up. bet chrissie tells someone soon, wonder who though? jake would be so sweet looking after the baby! :) cant wait for the next part, hope its very soon

oh wow they're back YEY YEY YEY : am shouting it from the rooftops: i think she should tell Jake he'd indersatnd, he would, wouldn't he? he would, wouldn't he? he would, wouldn't he?

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I feel Chrissie is going to tell someone soon, she can't keep quiet. Can just see Jake pushing a baby around. More more more
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I've got that image to, awwww!
this is great darlin, please post ,more soon, Pretty please with sugar and a little cherry on!
luv ya
Layne
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This SO sweet!

Come on post some more :cheer:

Sorry AGAIN for the delay not been one for ages but here is the next part LOVE YA ALL :wub: :wub: :bow:

Sharon and Dennis left the Vic through the cellar and out into the Square they felt the eyes descending onto them
The whispers, the stares, and Zoë Slater on her market stall froze solid when she spotted the couple
Dennis saw her and protectively placed an arm around Sharon and they headed to their old flat
Dennis opened the door with the key and was surprised to find it quite tidy
Danny wandered out of the bathroom with just a towel wrapped around his waist
Danny- you must be Sharon
He leant over and kissed her on the cheek
Dennis- watch it
Sharon- Danny right
Danny- I cleaned the flat for you a rarity so I hope you feel honoured
Dennis- very
Danny- if you want me to move out just say the word
Sharon- no you’re fine where you are
Dennis- who else is gonna clean the place
Danny- very funny have you heard Johnny’s marrying Tina and Kerrie is living on the Square
Dennis- with Noah
Danny- yep you should hear the rows
Dennis- I can imagine
Sharon- I better unpack leave you boys to catch up
Sharon headed into the bedroom
Dennis- right spill now
Danny- what
Dennis- Chrissie what’s up she seemed really on edge earlier
Danny- Jake’s really worried about her she’s not sleeping
Dennis- the baby
Danny- no she’s having these nightmares
Dennis- what kind of nightmares
Danny- I don’t know but Jake’s worried
Dennis- where is he
Danny- club
Dennis- I’m going over…Sharon
Sharon- what
Dennis- I’m just off to Scarlet’s I won’t be long
He headed out of the flat

Ooooh fab again!
MOOOOOOORE!

This is great, i love the bond Dennis and Chrissie have, i hope its like that when they do come back!
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Luv ya
Layne
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Get back here right now!!!

wow you knoe i love this scprit, post more NOW!!!!!!!!!!!

Like FLD said, love the bond. Think though Dennis might have a problem with Jake when he reurns (what with him 'kissing' Zoe). Fab babe. more more more.
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brill! :D loving it! so sweet that dennis is so worried about chrissie! :) hope theres more soon, cant wait

I love the bond between Dennis and Chrissie (even though they're not really related)!

Sorry for the delay and thanks for all the replies I love ya all :wub: :wub:

Kerrie left the house and was chatting on her mobile when she spotted Dennis
Kerrie- I’ll call you back
She rushed over
Kerrie- all right gorgeous
Dennis- a little birdie told me you were around how’s things
Kerrie- there all right what about you Sharon
Dennis- she’s at the flat
Kerrie- how does it feel to be back
Dennis- better is Chrissie all right
Kerrie- yeah loving being a mum and Jake’s been a complete angel
Dennis- she seemed a bit off
Kerrie- she’s a mum she’s being kept up all night then there’s the puking, the endless feeding and changing and the crying no wonder she’s a bit off
Dennis- I’m going to the club
Kerrie- oh goodie come on I’m off to see daddy considering I’ve been blown out for a meeting
She linked arms with Dennis and they walked off
Dennis- so how are you and Noah
Kerrie- well I haven’t killed him yet if that’s what you mean
Dennis- you love him too much
Kerrie- don’t tell him that I don’t want him getting a big head
Dennis grinned

Chrissie sat in the cellar staring at the concrete her whole life was being based on a lie her relationship with Jake, having Lia, the pub
She wanted to tell them all the truth but she couldn’t exposing that would destroy all she had left and there was no way she was letting Den beat her again

great! :D poor chrissie! :) more soon please, cant wait

Oi! Get back here and post more NOW!
Poor Chrissie!

Poor Chrissie!

Poor Chrissie. Fab as usual. More more more
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This is amzing babes, i love it! So glad dennis is back! Poor poor Chrissie wonder what she'll do?
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Luv ya
Layne
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this is amazing!! i love kerrie and dennis! they're really sweet friends! :heart:
poor chrissie tho! :crying:
more more more please :cheer: :bow: :clap:

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