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Fantastic... totally gripped on this. First thing I read when I got back. Excellent work BB can't wait for the next lot!!!
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Fantastic... totally gripped on this. First thing I read when I got back. Excellent work BB can't wait for the next lot!!!
hiya siobhan!Quote:
Originally Posted by Siobhan
welcome back to the boards! I finally have Devon Seas top fanatic back to comment on the show! :D
how was your holiday? did you have a good time?
Valentinos Restaurant
Rebecca and Richard are sitting down drinking cofee, over looking the beach from one of the windows.
Rebecca: I just dont know what i can say that will make you feel any better...
Richard: There's nothing you can say, nothing no one can say, words cant make me feel better...i feel as a big peice of my heart has been torn from me...and i dont know what to do....
Rebecca: I felt the same when Valentino died...the emotions are just...
Richard: Valentino was a 60 year old man with a diagonsed illness Rebecca...he'd lived his life, and you had time to prepare for it... but Ed, he was 18...he hasnt lived at all...and he was just so cruelly taken away from us...
Rebecca: Richard...
Richard: (looks at beach) that beach down there...he spent half of his life down there...building sandcastles...dating his girlfriends...(laughs to self) how ironic that he ends up dead on that beach
Rebecca: Its cruel i know, but you cant let it get you down...you have to remember the good times Richard
Richard: Good times? There werent any...and that was my fault...i made his life unbearable for the good part of his life...always arguing, fighting... he didnt have much of a life...
Rebecca: That wasnt entirley your fault tough...Doreen death didnt help matters...
Richard: You know, he phoned me the night he died...we meet up...he wanted money for a new start...and even then i didnt give him what he wanted...he came back to say a goodbye and i threw it in his face... if he hadnt come back...he'd have lived...its my fault Rebecca! It's my faults he's dead!
Richard cries, and Rebecca consoles him.
been a suspicious soap watcher.. I have feelings that Ed is not dead, Richard is protecting him from Craig, finally doing right by his son!!!! :hmm::hmm::hmm:
Still loving this.. Holiday was great!!!!, thanks BB Missed the soap boards and had a lot of soap watching to catch up on... I have done Devon Seas, now in the middle of EE, then on to H&W... busy days work ahead.. hope the boss doesn't walk by my desk :rotfl::rotfl:
Poor Richard nothing ever goes right for him!
awwww :(
lol devon seas before eastenders! im touched!!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by Siobhan
ed was in a body bag! how can he be alive!? :p
This is soap land and anything can happen lol im reading all your episodes at moment and i am hookedQuote:
Originally Posted by bondboffin
ah ha.. he was only identified by his Dad who knew he needed to disappear!!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by bondboffin
besides if Den can come back so can Ed
seriously Bakedbean.. it is very very gripping stuff and I love every part that comes out...Quote:
Originally Posted by bakedbean
thats a good theory actually siobhan :p
but richard did seem genuinely upset
true but he has to be or else Craig will know it is fake... Sorry BB, but this is what happens when you write a good script lots of speculation and discussionsQuote:
Originally Posted by crazylea
Torbay Hospital
A bustling A & E department. Vicky burst trough the crowds in a panic.
Vicky: Hello can you help me please, it's my son...Daniel Mansfield...he was admitted earlier...
Recepitionist: Hold on one moment...
Vicky: Hurry up! I need to know how he is...
Nick: He's fine...
Vicky turns round to see Nick sitting in the waiting area.
Vicky: Nick...what are you doing here?
Nick: I brougth Daniel in...
Vicky: Oh thank god someone found him...when i get hold of the driver I'll...
Nick: I was the driver...
Vicky gives Nick a venomous look
TO BE CONTINUED LATER THIS AFTERNOON! :p
ooooo! good stuff!!!
and yeah suppose so siobhan!
This is great stuff, Bry!!! Just been looking at yuor spoilers thread as well, looks like more fab stuff is to come! Can't wait! :)
Torbay Hospital
Vicky: You what!?
Nick: Look im sorry vics...
Vikcy: Vics!? Dont go calling me sweet little nicknames you moron! You've ran over my son!?
Nick: He came out of nowhere, one minute there was no one in sight then...
Vicky: Thats right! Blame it on the kid! I dont suppose its your fault for one second is it...?
Nick: I didnt say that i was...
Vicky: He'd better make it, or i swear i dont know what i will do to you!
Nick: Calm down, he's only broken his leg...nothing major!
Vicky: Nothing major!? Its the principal! If things had turned out differently he could be fighting for his life in an operating theatre by now!
Nick: Yes but thankfully he isnt
Vicky: God you Taylors take the....god knows why Mom wants anything to do with you all. Its one drama after another with you lot...!
Nick: Whats that meant to mean!?
Vicky: Well whilst your brothers being found dead on the beach, your driving like james bond and running over my son!
Nick: (shocked)Wait a second...Ed's dead?
Vicky stops the arguing, and realises what an idiot she's been.
Vicky: Oh god...you didnt know...i just presumed...
Nick: I hadnt got any idea....how?.....when?
Vicky: About an hour ago...a body washed its way onto the beach...that's all i know...
Nick: Oh god!....Hows dad...and Tan?
Vicky: They'tre fine...and Mom is looking after Richard at the resturaunt....loook i think you'd best go home...
Nick: No, i want to stay here...to make sure Daniel's ok...its my fault he's in this mess...
Vicky: You dont have to you know...
Nick: No i insist.... after all what use can i be to dad?...i...just cant believe it...
Vicky: It came as a bit of a shock to everyone i think...
Nick: I bet we're the talk of the town by now...
Vicky: Of course you are...your the Taylors...when ever havent you?
Nick stops crying and looks at Vicky, she smiles and holds his hand.
Vicky: Dont worry...it'll get better with time...
Another fantastic part
awwww that was evil out of order of her.
It does sounds like something out of Eastenders or another soap like that, its really cool!!
ooo that was good. more please :p
More soon please! *finally kinda caught up lol*
more more xxxxxxxxx
seems to me that nicke and vicky could get it together and as for ed not being dead well everyone saw richard hillman in a bodybag dead :hmm: but in inside soap latest issue it tells how letters signed by him get delivred to the house and apparently Phil Gails new fella who beats david (so unfair) last name is hillman. good job bb
yay caught up with it....another great read
(devon seas and bond all at the one time anyone would think your trying to brainwash me bb :p )
can life get any better!? :lol:Quote:
Originally Posted by Luna
Bachlor Boys House
Chris and Romeoe are eating breakfast and watching the morning news, in walks Tom whistling withe delight.
Romeo: Oh get him! Mr cheary! What you got to be happy about?
Tom: I, my good friend, have a date tonight...
Romeo: Oh of course (sarcastic) how could i forget...
Chris: Where you meeting up?
Tom: You seriously think im gonna let you two know that? You'd be sniffing around them and causing a scene if i told you...
Chris: Us!? Your two best friends (smirks) how could you acuuse us of such a thing!?
Tom: I have a good feeling about this one...and theres no chance that im going to let you two mess it up!
Chris: Mess it up!? You need advice from us two sex gods if you want a sucessful date...
Tom: I'll be just fine thanks...
Tom walks out into the halway and dials a number on the housephone
Tom: (Quiet) Hello...Rebecca? Hi its Tom Adams...can i book a table at Valentinos for tonight...yeah great see you then...
Tom puts down the phone.
Tom: Right them im off down the hutt for work! See you guys tomorrow!
Tom leaves.
Chris: Come on Romeo! We need to find out where hes taking her tonight!
Romeo: Why is it that important?
Chris: We need to see is shes hot or a minger!.... i know...redial!
Chris runs into the hallway and presses redial.
Rebecca: Hello Valeintos?
Chris puts down the phone!
Chris: Shazam! We have the venue! (rubs hands together) Oh what a nigth we're going to have!
oo theyre gunna mess it up for him :p bless haha
lol, sounds like something my mates would do!
Torbay Hospital
Nick and Vicky walk slowly towards the plastering room.
Nick: Ya know, we never really made a connection...but its still hit me hard...
Vicky: I felt like that when Valentino died, i mean he wasnt my real dad...and id never really considered him as one either...but for months after it felt so strange...i think its just a matter of spenidng so much time without someone that it feels weird when they're no longer around...
Nick: God knows how Dad's going to feel...
Vicky: Like his worlds fell in...so you and Tan need to be there for him...
Daniel: Mom!
Daniel rushes across the coridoor on crutches.
Vicky: Hey! Hey! Take it easy yeah!? ANyone would think you were ok...
Daniel: Its only a broken leg...
Nick: (jokes) That's what i said to your mom and she went balistic... now i tell you what...ill run you and your mom home...and on the way were pop into the toyshop... what dya say?
Daniel: Yay! Mom can we go!?
Vicky (Laughs) Yeah sure...
Nick gives Daneil his car keys
Nick: I tell you what...go and get into the car...i just need to speak to your mom...
Daniel hobbles off on his crutches
Vicky: Take it easy!
Daniel: Will do...
Vicky: (to nick) You dont have to go spending your moent on him...
Nick: No, its the least i can do...i want to try and make it up to you both...
Vicky: Well you seem to have pleased him well enough
Nick: Yeah...that just leaves you...fancy going for a drink tomorrow?
Vicky: Yeah (smiles at Nick) Why not?
AwWwWwW!!!!!!
awwww loves in the air :p
Valentinos Restauraunt
Tom sits nervously alone at a booth. Natasha walks by with someone meal
Natasha: (Jokes) Stood you up, has she?
Tom: Ha, ha very funny...
Natasha walks off and serves a diner. Chris and Romeo walk in dressed up smart, Rebecca is at the doors to show diners to their tables.
Rebecca: Romeo? Its your night off, what are you doing here?
Romeo: Long story...
Chris: We're spying on Tom... we need a booth by him...but he cant see us...
Rebecca: I hope you'll actually be eating something...
Romeo: Of course...
Chris: Staff discount...seen as Romeoe is the resident chef here...
Rebecca: Dont push it...
Cuts to Tom who is staring out of the window. A shadow casts over him, he looks up. A woman with glamaorus hair, fake tan, jewlerry make up and a fur white coat stands by him.
Luqina: Tom Adams...?
Tom: Erm...yes...?
Luqina: Luqina Jerval...im your date for tonight
Tom gives a nervous laugh and gestures her to sit down...
Luqina: Is there something wrong?
Tom: No its just...you are really beautiful...
Luqina: Why thank you...your not too bad yourself.
The pair begin to flirt outragously, Chris and Romeoe peep across, mouths wide open...
Natahsa: Want a cloth to whipe away the drewel?
THe pair hurry back to their booth.
Chris: I dont get it...how can a nerd like Tom pull a fine specimen like that...?
Natasha: That, my sad little friends, you will learn one day...
Tom and Luqina are laughing out loud, Chris has a depressed look on his face.
Chris: Tom's got her, youve got claire...and all ive got to look forward to is a bowl of spag bol...what a life eh?
Nick and Vicky want each other you can tell great as ever BB
awww poor chris :p
This is fab Bry - only wish I'd got into it earlier :bow: :D :cheer:
Red Rum Public House - Night
THe following night. Patrick is changing a bottle of vodka for the dispsenser at the bar. Amy walks in.
Amy: Heya babe...just got back from town.
Patrick: Joy for you...spent all my money again?
Amy: Oh no i didnt go for shopping...
Patrick: Really!? Well wonders will never cease...so then what have you wasted your afternoon doing then...?
Amy: Oh i went to the doctors.
Patrick is shocked by this and drags Amy into the hall away from the punters.
Patrick: What do you mean "you went to the doctors!?"
Amy: I booked an appointment for us to go and see him on Tomorrow....
Patrick: Ive already told you im not getting pocked and proded and looked at by a doctor...especially in that department...
Amy: Oh christ Patrick, dont be so pafetic...if you want a baby then you need to make allowances...
Patrick: I dont want a baby....you do...im just doing this to shut you up...'
Amy: Well i'll keep going on until you agree...
Patrick (Annoyed) I dont suppose I have a choice do i?
Amy: No
Amy walks off into the bar, Patrick has a disatified look on his face
Red Rum Public House
Nick and Vicky walk into the pub...
Vicky: When a Taylor asked me for a drink i half expected it to be at some fancy resturaunt...
Nick: Oh i'm sorfry i jus thought you know...familiar setting and all that...
Vicky: Oh no...i prefer this...im not too keen on formality, makes me feel all nervous, dont know what to do or say...i prefer to be myself...
Nick: I'll let you into a little secret...i dont like them either...(laughs) so what can i get you?
Vicky: Erm... a barcadi and coke please...
Amy: Hi Nick...sorry to hear about your loss...what can i get you..?
Nick: Erm...a pint of tetleys and a barcadi and coke please...
Amy: Coming right up
Nick: So then...hows Daniel doing?
Vicky: Oh he's fine...been glued to that game you brought him...you really shouldnt have...
Nick: No, if it cheers him up then thats all that matters...
Amy gives Patrick his drinks, he pays her and the pair go and sit down at a table.
Vicky: So then, hows your dad coping?
Nick: Dont know really, hes been keeping himself to himself, spends all the time in his study, we've decided to let him be...its probably his way of greif...
Vicky: As long as he knows that your there for him...thats all that matters... i donno...it hasnt been a good new year so far for you has it?
Nick: I dont know its had its up sides...
Vicky: Oh why...found yourself a bit of hapiness have you?
Nick: Yeah (smiles) you could say that...
Vicky looks up at him and smiles.
Nick: I tell you what...a smoky pub isnt really the best place to meet up, how aout dinner tomorrow at Valetinos...?
Vicky: Do you know what? That sounds great...
Horray.. Nick and Vicky!!! Can wait for more of this Bry.. excellent job again :cheer::cheer::cheer:
Chris: Mess it up!? You need advice from us two sex gods if you want a
Chris: Shazam! We have the venue! (rubs hands together) Oh what a nigth we're going to have!
With "friends" like those who needs enemies !!!!!!
Bry I love this !!!! JJ
You know what lads are like if their mate is going on a blind date, they have to be there to slag him off or mess it up...Quote:
Originally Posted by JustJodi
Especially when the mates think they are the original LOVE GODS :rotfl:Quote:
Originally Posted by Siobhan
yeah which most men do :rotfl::rotfl:Quote:
Originally Posted by JustJodi