Could you please carry on, as you havent done it for ages.Its great!!!
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Could you please carry on, as you havent done it for ages.Its great!!!
yes it would be great if you did more
Sorry guys!Started back at school last week and have been quite busy.I'll try and do more soon.
ok great
have just read all of it its great:) welldone
Well tell your school you need time off to be a writer! well done.
well done. its excellent
I just started reading this. Its really good.
xxx
Please carry on! you haven't done some for ages...
Part Five
Demi and Darren where on their way to school,it had been three weeks since they'd started back and Demi and Leo had called a truce.Privately,Demi thought that the whole truce thing was working quite well.She hated Leo,and he hated her too,but it felt nice to have someone to talk to in english.In class,Demi thought Leo was quite funny,but out of class she liked to Laugh at him and not his jokes,After all he was an annoying,little...well Demi could go on forever telling everybody exactly what she thought of him,he seemed to think the truce worked too,so really it was the best of both worlds!
"Darren,you sure you wanna go today,I mean we can always bunk off."Demi didn't want to go to school today,she had slept late and was really tired as she was on the phone talking to Rach 'til midnight last night.So,naturally for Demi,she was trying to persuade her to bunk off.
"No,Dems,not today."
"Oh...but,Darren.Come on we've not bunked off since last term!"
"I'm really sorry,but any day except today my mate Paul fighting today..."
"Yeah!I forgot that was today,he's fighting with Leo's mate,Doughnut aint he?"
"How did you know?"They where approaching the bus stop.
"Um...Leo told me."Said Demi,quietly
Darren looked surprised,"Leo...told you!Do you two actually talk?"He said with anger in his voice
Demi glared at her brother."No Darren!It's not like that..you know how much I hate him!Just 'cause I talked to him in class once or twice.Its not as if I'm gonna fall in love with him or summing am I?!"
"Lets hope not,"muttered Darren,but loud enough for Demi to hear.
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Demi and Darren went to school with the rest of the class,they had English first.
Everyone was walking to their seats and sitting down,preparing for the lesson.Demi looked over at the table that she and Leo sat at and noticed that Leo was missing from the class.Oh well,she thought,He'll just be late or something.So she waited.It was 20 minutes into English when she realised that he obviusly wasn't coming to school.Demi sat through the rest of English wondering.
"Where do you think leo is?"Demi asked Darren,as they walked out of the school gates.
"How am I meant to know?"Darren looked as if he really couldn't care less.
When they walked further they noticed a crowd gathering.The fight had obviously begun,and Darren pushed his way to the very front to see.
Where is Leo?Demi wondered,He said in English on friday that he wouldn't miss this!
But then another voice crept up at the back of her head.This is Leo your talking about!Leo Taylor!You've been thinking about him all day!Can it be that you might actually LIKE him?!"
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Sorry I took so long to update.That part was a bit rushed,and I'll try and make the next part better.
Remember to tell me what you think! :thumbsup: or :thumbsdow
very good as always! :thumbsup:
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: this is really good. loving the love hate relation ship between demi and leo they obviously do like each other using their lesson as an excuse. lol
more soon please! :)
more more soon its fantastic!
Please carry on soon, its great, ive been looking forward for you to carry on.
Great! More soon i hope xxx
Part Six
Leo arrived back at school the next day,but Demi didn't get a chance to talk to him because they didn't have English on Tuesday's.It was Wednesday when she saw him again.
"You were off on Monday."She said,trying to sound casual.
"I know."Was his reply
"What happened then?"
"Nuffin."But as he wrote down the answer to number four,she noticed there where two new bruises on his arm.
"Where did you get those bruises?"
"Nowhere."Demi could tell Leo was getting more impatient by the minute but she kept going on...she had too,well wanted to know.
"Was...Was it your Dad?"
"Will you please quit it?!"
Demi was surprised at Leo's sudden interest in the conversation."Excuse me?"
"Just stop asking questions.And messing arround in other people's buiness!"
Demi was very upset by his words,she had meant good,after all.She turned away and stared out the window,she couldn't understand why,but all of a sudden she felt like crying.
Leo seemed to have regretted what he'd said,"Demi...I didn't mean-"
"You meant every word."She tried to sound mean,but it just wasn't working for her."An' you were right I was just messing in other peoples buisness."
"No you weren't.You were just looking out for me.Like a friend."
"But we aren't friends."
"I know that.Just because our parents are in a massive feud doesn't mean we can't look out for each other."
Demi agreed,"Yeah.Maybe...maybe we can look out for each other,like sort-of-mates,only in English of course."
He smiled at her and it was the first time Demi noticed what a gorgeous smile Leo Taylor had....
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Just a short part :) I'm hoping to do more soon over the next few days or more :angel:
awww i love it is so good!
lol i can see his cute smile now, lol its so sweet and cute they are looking out for each other, lol and they really like each other but wont admit it to eachother. lol Kepp it up its Brill! :cheer: :thumbsup:
it's so sweet! i'm luvin it! keep going! :)
its great, i hope they admit they like each other soon, more soon i hope!
more leo and demi are so cute together cant wait for the next part
wow! cant wait for the next part either!
carry on soon, its great
Yeh, carry on soon!
I can't wait for the next part!!!
really good keep going with this story
yeh great! keep it going
Part Seven
Demi and Darren where on their way to the bus stop when Demi spotted Leo in front of them,himself.
"Leo."She called,running towards him.
Darren sighed,catching up with his sister.
Leo turned around and His face lit up,"Alrigh' Dems?"
"Fine.You?"
"Not too bad.Did you see Mr Laton fall off his chair in history?!"
"Yeah,it was well funny!"
Then Darren spoke,"Where are you're mates anyway?"
Leo,"'Aven't got a clue.Robbie an' Thomas bunked off,I've not saw Dohnut for ages an' David said he'd see me after school but didn't show."
"Oh,well why don't you get the bus wif us then?"
"Well if you don't mind..."
Darren mumbled something under his breath.
"'Course we don't,"Said Demi
"Fanks Dems!"
"Anytime,"Demi realised that Leo had called her Dems,this made her feel all fuzzy and warm inside,only her closest friends called her that.
The bus was packed with lots of crowds from school.There was barely any seats left.Darren grabbed a seat next to Sean Jarrley.There was a double seat near the back.Leo sat down and Demi joined him.
They talked all the way home about everything and anythng that they could think of,Demi didn't feel embarrassed talking to Leo,she was totally comfortable.
All off a sudden Leo brushed something off Demi's knee.
"Sorry,"He said,"There was a fly..on your knee."
Next parts ready,Tell me what you think of Part 7 and I'll post it!
awww how cute! this is really good! Please post the next part! :cheer: :thumbsup: lol
thats so cute you need to do more so soon!!!!!
Awwww! How cute!
awww that's cute, a fly on her knee, yeah right leo!
Part Eight
"What was all tha' about?"Asked Darren the second Leo was out of sight.
"All what?"Asked Demi
"You know what!"
"No I don't.Look Darren if you're just gonna keep goin' on about it why don't you tell me what you're talkin 'bout?"
"Why Dems,why him?"
"What do you mean 'why him'?"
"Out of all the blokes in the estate did it have to be him?"
"Did WHAT have too be him?"
"You where flirtin' wif him on the bus an' don't deny it!"
"I talked to Leo on a bus!Its not the end of the world!So will you stop givin' me the third degree!"
Darren was a little startled,"Fine."
Demi tried to smile,"Good."
The opened the flat door and looked around."Dad...Dad?"
Keith was in the kitchen,sitting at the table with the phone next to him,smiling.
"What are you smilin' about?"Asked Darren
"I'm allowed to smile,aint I?"Keith grinned,"What were you two arguing about outside,"
"Oh that..that was nuffin'"Demi looked at her father in an innocent way.
"It sure sounded like it."
Darren looked nervous,"You've still not answered the question!"
"Oh alrigh'.Dawn phoned from France."
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Thanks everyone for all your comments!I'm not sure when I'll be posting Part 9 but I'll try and post maybe tonight or tomorrow. :cheer:
awww brill! more soon please its reall good and really interesting! :cheer: :thumbsup:
It's brill! Cant wait for the next part
cant wait for the next part
aww Demi and Leo are so cute together, more soon please!
:) Thanks Everyone!
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Part Nine
"What?"Demi obviously hadn't expected this.
"She just hung up abou' five minutes ago."
"Well why couldn't you wait 'til we got home,"Darren was a little shocked too.
"Because,I...I didn't think."
"Well maybe next time you should!"Demi shouted,running to her room in tears.
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"Demi....wake up love,"it was Rosie.Demi looked around,she'd must have fallen asleep.
"Oh hi mum,"her voice was very grogily.
"So whats all this 'bout eh?"
"I just really miss Dawn."Demi did miss Dawn but that wasn't why she was crying..
"Do you wanna tell me?"
"Well its not really all about Dawn."
"What else is is about then?"
"Nuffing...there's just this boy..."
"An' you like him?"
"Yeah,Lots.But I know you an' Dad w..wouldn't."The tears had started again.
"Well then...maybe,you'd be better forgetting him.There's plenty more boys."
"I'll try."
"There's a good girl.You don't wanna cause trouble do you?"
Demi sighed,"No mum,you're right."
"Course I am.You know how much trouble you'd cause for your Dad and Ray if its who I think you're talkin' 'bout."
"Yeah,it is.Its Leo."
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Just tell me when you want Part Ten and I'll try and post it in the next few days! :p
brill more soon i want to know what happens :)
brill! cant wait for the next part!