Excellent! Loved that line 'Mum, has he always been such a nutter!' Keep on going, this is good! :cheer:
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Excellent! Loved that line 'Mum, has he always been such a nutter!' Keep on going, this is good! :cheer:
When is the next one going to be posted? :)
I dunno.....maybe tomorrow :)
ok :thumbsup:
wow thats really good. cant wait for the next bit
have you rote part 2 yet :)
no...but I will as soon as I can
ok :)
Part Two
Demi and Joanne had just arrived back from the cinema
"Do ya wanna stay here for a while?"Asked Demi,as the pair approached her room.
"Yeah...ok.Where's your Mum and Dad?"
"Down at the pub probably,and Mickey's at some place called Walfork ... or something like that."
"Walford.My Mum's friend Sharon lives there...well they're not really friends,they used to be,and she's came to our house a few times,but they're not that close now."
"Cool."Demi at on her bed,"Did you watch Hollyoaks last night?"
"No,I missed it."
"Dawn used to love it."
"Do you miss Dawn?"
"Course I do,she's my sister,aint she?"
The door opened and in walked Darren,"Yo.Dems,you got a visitor."
"Hi Darren,"Said Jo,smiling.
"A visitor...who?"Demi walked into the livingroom,where she saw a tall girl,about her age,with dark red hair,who was sobbing her heart out.
"Rachel?Are you ok?"Demi was concerned for her friend
"What happened?"Asked Jo,who had arrived in behind Demi.
But Rachel didn't answer,her face was plastered with tears,and she opened her mouth but no words came out.
"Is......Is it Leo?"Demi asked,knowing the answer.
Slowly and shakingly Rachel nodded.
Demi stood up,"I'll kill him."
"Wait,"Dareen watched her sister put on her shoes and grab her coat,"Where are you goin'?"
"To find him of course!"
Then Darren got up to and headed towards the door.
"Hey wait!Demi,Darren!"
Darren was already half way out the front door,that Demi had left about 30 seconds ago,"You wait 'ere Jo.We wont be long,I promise."
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Demi and Darren spotted Leo chatting to some girl with blonde hair.Demi marched right up to him and Darren followed,closely behind.
"Wait a minute Dems..there's something I need to tell..."But Darren couldn't continue,as Demi had already reached Leo.
"Did you enjoy it then?"She asked.
Leo was dumfounded,"What?"
"Rachels at home,crying her eyes out over an idiot like you!"
"Look,Demi,I thimk Rachel might have got he wrong idea..."
"Yeah,ABOUT YOU ,YOU MEAN!"She had caused a scene now,and everyone that was passing by would stare at her screaming at Leo.
"I don't know what you're talking about!"
"WELL,RACHEL SAID SHE WAS GOING OUT ON A DATE WITH YOU!"
"SHE GOT IT WRONG!"People had stopped to watch,this was actually amusing them.A crowd had gathered.
"S...she got it wrong?"
"Yeah.I didn't ask her out.I went Ice Skating with some friends.I told her that I just wasn't interested."
Demi's face went bright red,"You..did?"
Then a voice pipped up from the front of the crowd."He did say that.'Cause I was there!"Demi noticed him as David Nelson,a friend of Darrens.
"I feel so embarrassed now!"Said Demi,five minutes later,as she and Darren made their way home.
"He got what he deserved,"Said Darren,"An' don't look at me like that.I did try to tell you!"
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Hope everyone liked it! :D .I'm not sure when I'm doing part three.
:thumbsup: Really good. cant wait to find out what happens :)