Devon Seas 2006

Baymoore Pre-School-day

Tanya pulls up in her car, and gets out. She walks through the playground, towards the doors. She sees her kids run to the other side of the playground...

Tanya: For gods sake, what they doing now?

She looks at her watch...

Tanya: I wanted to get home quickly...

She looks across the playground, and sees them hugging Hilary. Hilary guides them towards her car. Tanya storms across the playground towards her...

Tanya: Excuse me, but what the ruddy hell do you think your doing?!

Hilary: Tanya, darl. Now, Now., keep hte temper under control- the kids are around!

Tanya: I'll do what i like in front of my kids!

Hilary: Mothering instinct obivously hasn't matured yet...

Hilary continues getting them into her car. Tanya pushes her away, and gets them back out again...

Tanya: What the hell do you think your doing with my kids?! I'm taking them home, not you!!

Hilary: Its called a favour, taking my grandkids home...

Tanya: Yeah, well, i'm here. Its not your place to just waltze in here and take them, so i'd appriciate it if you didn't!

Tanya grabs her kids hands, and marches them to her car. As she struggles to get them into the car, the camera zooms out, to show a silohette of someone watching her. They laugh, and drive off....

But who is it? And what have they got planned?

OMG - What is Hilary up to now!! She should leave Tanyas kids out of it...... :angry:

This feud isn't between Tanya's kids and Hilary, It's between Tanya and Hilary. Hilary should not be getting the kids involved.

They are not even her grandkids yet!!! she only just came back into richards life and Tanya is not her daughter. Leave the kids out of it Hilary :angry:

If I had been Tanya I would have been calling the police for attemped child napping,, gawd Hilary is a real bad bad bad person !!!!!!!!!!!!!

They are tanyas kids! And who was that watching?!?!

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Originally Posted by *Fanatic*Loves Dennis*

They are tanyas kids! And who was that watching?!?!

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I am assuming Gregg her stalker who has been driving her mad for weeks

It has to be Gregg cos hes the only BOGEY MAN that I can think of , did he just go into hiding ???I have missed reading stuff since over a week ago,, will have to go back and read up on what I missed,, Gregg was a real nasty piece of work :sick:

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Originally Posted by JustJodi

It has to be Gregg cos hes the only BOGEY MAN that I can think of , did he just go into hiding ???I have missed reading stuff since over a week ago,, will have to go back and read up on what I missed,, Gregg was a real nasty piece of work :sick:

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Wait a sec.. didn't Hilary go to Craig (dogdy guy who runs the garage, beats up his wife and already tried to kill Tanya with the burning cig in the hairdressers).. maybe it is him!!!!

BAYMOORE BEACH- day

Emma is sitting on the beach, running sand through her fingers. She gazes at the sea, and starts crying. She wipes her tears away and then carries on running sand thorugh her fingers. She sighs, trying to hold back more tears. Tom is walking on the beach, he sees Emma sitting alone, and walks over to her. He stands behind her, not realising shes crying...

Tom: Dont normally get too many people around here this time of year. I end up just standing here alone most the time. Summer and its, like, way busy though....

Tom looks down at Emma when she doesn't reply. He notices shes crying...

Tom: Hey! Emma, babes, whats up?

Emma cries, and throws the sand in her hands to the beach. Tom bends down, wipes her eyes, and hugs her...

Tom: Come on, no more tears.... whats up babe? This aint like you...

Emma: Andonis..

Tom: Andonis? Whats he done, Emma? I swear if he's....

Emma: Its over. Me and Andonis... Oh god, Tom... I loved him so much... I just..

Tom: You'll be fine, Emma. Andonis must be mad for letting you go like this... its all a bit sudden though, aint it? I thought you guys were good...

Emma: We were... Its his family. They.... (cries some more)... they dont approve of me...me and him...

Tom hugs Emma again, emma clings onto his back...

Emma: I just dont know what to do... He meant everything to me...like...

Tom: Like what?

Emma: (pauses) Nothing...

Emma looks into Toms eyes. She looks away, wipes her eyes, and looks back to Tom...

Emma: How could i screw everything up so badly...

Tom: You haven't. He'll see sense sometime...

Emma: (looks lovingly into Tom's eyes, and says quietly)...but.... but maybe i dont want him to...

Emma tenderly kisses Tom. A moment later, Tom pulls away...

Tom: Emma! Look... this.... this wont work. Sorry Emma, but i...

Emma's eyes well up with tears again. Tom tentiavly hugs Emma, and sheepishly walks off. He turns and says quietly..

Tom: I think i should... just...i think i should just go...

Tom walks off. Emma goes to run after him, but stops on the beach, and collapses onto her knees in tears...

Baymoore Pre-School - Day

Tanya walks runs past the crowds of mother and toddlers in a rush, she is late picking up the kids.

Tanya gets to the gates. Melissa and Jacob are nowhere in sight, Tanya looks around frantically for them.

Tanya: Melissa!? Jacob!? Melissa!?

One of the pre school teachers approaches Tanya.

Miss Laurence: Hello...can i help you?

Tanya: Melissa and Jacob Donagoon!? Where are they!?

Miss Laurence: Erm...i dont know I presume their mother had picked them up...

Tanya: I am their mother!!!

Miss Laurence: Oh well...erm...oh my gosh...

Tanya: Did you see anyone take them!?

Tanya starts to get worried, breathing heavily and looking all around her on edge.

Miss Laurence: No...as well when everyone is being picked up its hard to keep track...

Tanya: You sure you didnt see anyone!? What about a woman... old...red hair!?..Hilary her name is...

Miss Laurence: No i cant remember seeing anyone like that...

Tanya: I swear to god if i dont find them, i'm holding this ruddy nursery responsible!

Tanya runs off in a panic towards her car, everything spinning around her.

Miss Laurence: Mrs Donagoon!? Mrs Donagoon!?

Tanya speeds up the car, as she drives menacingly to face Hilary.

Who Has Taken The Twins? What Will Tanya Do Next?

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Oh i wonder who has taken the twins another twist in Tanyas life im loving this hope the twins are okay

Who has got the kids :eek: Quick next part i need to know!

Who has the kids? hilary? the stalker? quick post the next bit, I hope they are safe

:eek: The children - who has them?? who's watching? So many questions.....next part required.....now!!

oh no! where's tanya's kids??? is it hilary? is it not? dun dun dun!

i think stupid old pattie should end up with NO ONE.

i'll read the rest just now :D

INT. JENKINS MANOR - EVENING

Hilary is making herself a cocktail at the bar. Classical music is playing, all is calm. Hilary sips a mouthful of her drink.

Tanya slams the door and charges in a rage.

Hilary: Tanya, what are you doing here?

Tanya: What the hell have you done with my kids!!! :angry:

Hilary: I dont know what your on about...

Tanya pushes Hilary into the bar in force, Hilary smashes into the glasses of spirits in the cabinet, shards of glass all over the floor. Tanya smashes Hilary's cocktail glass and points the jagged edge near Hilary's throat. Hilary gasps for breath in Panic.

Tanya: Dont you dare mess me about Hilary! Theyve gone missing! And i know you have something to do with it!!!

Hilary: (scared) I swear to you...i havent... please Tanya you've got to believe me...

Tanya: You've taken this too far you evil bitch! It was between you and me...never the kids! You'd better tell me what you've done with them! :angry:

Hilary: Tanya...i promise...i havent done anything to them...why would I? They are near enough my grandkids...i love them to peices...you've got to believe me...

Tanya: Believe you!? Your full of lies! How can i trust you!?

Hilary: Maybe you cant...but i swear...hand on heart... that I dont know where they are Tanya... come on you need to focus on finding them...

Tanya: Yeah...yeah i do..but i swear to god...i swear...if i find out you've got anything to do with this....It'll be more than a sharp glass in your throat! I'll make you suffer like hell!

Tanya removes the glass from Hilary's throat. Hilary gasps for breath in relief.

Hilary: (Venamous) You'll regret that bitch!

Gary walks into the room, oblivious of everything.

Gary: Tanya, what the hell's going on?

How Will Gary React To The Bad News? Has Tanya Over Stepped The Line With Hilary?

Oh what has happened with the kids? Has hilary planned this? More now i need to know ...

INT: JENKINS MANOR

Tanya is standing, still bitterly glaring at hilary. She hears Gary's voice behind her. She drops the glass onto the floor, narrowly missing Hilarys foot, yet still making her jump in shock. Tanya turns and stares at Gary, her eyes wellling up with tears...

Gary: Well? What the hells going on here?! Tanya?!

Tanya stares at Gary, in shock.

Gary: Well come on then! Whats so bad that you've got to.... well, do all this!!

Tanya: (megerly) They're.... they're gone...

Gary: (laughs slightly) Aprils fools day was last week, Tanya!! Come on, whose gone then?

Tanya: The kids...

Gary: To a party? Didn't realise they had a party today. Was i meant to buy a pressie for them to take...? ****, totally forgot..... come on Tanya, whats this got to do with hil-

Tanya: (interupts) For gods sake Gary, Listen! The kids have gone. They've... they've been taken...

Gary is silent for a moment...

Gary: Our... our kids?! Oh my god, Tanya, what.... what we gonna do??!!

Gary holds Tanya as she cries into him. He's eyes well up with tears, as Hilary sheepishly leaves the room, to leave them alone...

EXT: RED RUM PUB

Gary is running around outside the pub, asking random people frantically if they've seen the kids. Patrick and Natasha walk past- Natashas clinging onto his arm...

Gary: Patrick. Natasha... Dont ask questions, but have you seen my kids?!

Patrick: Your kids? (shakes head) Nope, dont think i have... have you Natasha..?

Natasha: I dont really look for them in all honesty...

Before Natasha finishes her sentence, Gary runs off, to ask other people...

INTERCUT

Tanya is banging on people's doors, also looking for the kids....

Tanya: (shouting) Melissa?! Jacob?! You in there?! (welling up with tears) Come on darlings, where are you?!

She continues down the street, banging on doors, and shouting for the kids. She goes past the Singh's house. Kash leans out the window...

Kash: For gods sake, woman. Some on us have work to do. We dont need all you faffing around out there!!

He slams the window shut. Tanya looks up at the shut window, and shouts towards it...

Tanya: Get a heart, Kash!!

She stands in the centre of the road, alone, with no one around her. She mumbles her kids names under her breath, and collapses onto her knees. She cries into her hands, mumbling...

Tanya: Melissa....Jacob...

Where are they??? They've got to find them!! Don't keep us in suspense....post...post...post!!!! (Please :D )

INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT

Hilary is sweeping up the glass with a dustpan and brush, Richard is home and in a panic.

Richard: Well where on earth are they? They cant have just...gone...

Hilary: I have no idea...despite what Tanya might think

Hilary rubs her neck in pain.

Richard: She had no right to firghten you like...in your own home aswell..

Hilary: She's going trough a tough time though Richard...

Richard: Even so, there's still no excuse.

The door slams shut as Gary walks in, holding Tanya tight.

Richard: Oh my god Tanya are you okay!?

Richard runs over to Tanya and hugs her.

Hilary: (To Gary) Any luck?

Gary: No...we've looked everywhere...i just...just...cant believe it...who'd be so evil as to steal our kids!?

Hilary walks over to Tanya and gives her the cordless phone...

Hilary: Tanya sweetie...it's about time you handed it over to the police...you've done all you can...

Tanya glares at Hilary and snatches the phone off her. She dials 999

Tanya: Police please... yes...i would like to....(starts sobbing)...to...er...report two misisng persons...my little babies.... please...just help me...

Tanya bursts into floods of tears, Gary grabs the phone to continue the conversation. Hilary pours herself a shot of Vodka from the bar and necks it in one, rubbing her neck in pain, but with a sinister grin on her face.

Hilary!! Shes got to have something to do with their disappearance - what a bitch!!! And Richard, defending her!! *shakes head*

MARBAL NIGHTCLUB

Marcus is behind the bar, making a cocktail for a girl, whilst looking flirtciously into each others eyes. He passes it to her, and she leans over and kisses his check, before leaning on the bar suductivly. Ruby is the other end of the bar- she watches them, obivously annoyed. Chris comes up behind her..

Chris: Hey you!.... You dont look too happy there! Green eyed monster?! (He winks)

Ruby: Me? Jealous of.... her? Nah...

Chris: (laughs) Ok, Course you're not :cool:

Ruby: So whats a guy like you doing here alone? I'd have thought you'd have girls lining up around the Bay to come with you!

Chris: (laughs) Hardly! No, i just fancied i quick drink. You know, see who turns up...

Ruby looks around

Ruby: Looks like you're stuck with little old me then!

Ruby looks down, then looks up flirtaciously at him...

Chris: Dont put yourself down, Ruby! Your a fab girl...!

Ruby: Aww, bless ya!

Ruby hugs Chris sudectivly, and sips her drink. The camera zooms out, as they carry on flirting...

INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - NIGHT

Tanya and Gary are sitting next to each other on the sofa. Tanya is whiping tears from her eyes with an overused tissue. Gary is holding her hand. The police are in the room asking them questions.

PO: So then when was the last time you saw your children Miss Donagoon?

Tanya: First thing this morning... i ...err...dropped them off at the pre-school as usual... walked them to the gate, kissed them goodbye... and then...well...

PO: Yes?

Tanya: I havent seen them again (bursts into tears)

PO: I can understand how distressing this is for you Mrs Dongaoon...but me need to ask you these questions if there's any hope in finding you children...

Gary: Shouldnt you be out there!? Looking for them!? Instead of asking us questions!?

PO: Mr Donagoon...we have numerous men out on the streets looking for your children...but the questioning could speed up the search...

Gary: Yeah...im sorry...its just...ya know...its just so hard...

PO: We can understand... so Tanya...did you notice anything susciious when you picked them up?

Tanya: What apart from the fact they wasnt there!? :rolleyes: ... erm no...it was just so crowded..with cars and parents...as it usually is... no one saw anything...they just presumed i'd already took them...

PO: Could someone have taken them that knows them... a relative or friend...who has them safe and is unaware..?

Tanya: No...we've asked everyone we know...its got to be someone who hates us!

PO: And have you got any enemies Mrs Donagoon...anyone who'd want to do this to you both...or the children?

Tanya: God yeah... Craig Harvey...

The Police Officer starts to scribble down notes...

Tanya: Hilary Blackstock...

Gary: Oh god Tanya now your being ridiculous!

Tanya: Gary i just know shes got something to do with it! She hates my guts!

Gary: She doesnt! She's a good person...

Tanya: Yeah right...(to police) anyways can you just get out there and do something please!? We're just desperate...we want them back!!!

Yet Again Tanya begins to cry, Gary comforts her.

PO: I promise you Mr and Mrs Donagoon...we'll do the best we can to find your children...

Ok.. have caught up after weekend. What bitch Hilary is.. if she has the kids please say something. poor tanya is worried out of her mind.. Ruby bit of a slut but then again so is Chris who is supposely in love with Claire.. excellent work again guys :cheer::cheer:

Have just caught up poor tanya and gary :( Who has there kids and where are they!?

what a cruel thing to do to tanya. hilary is definitely behind it.

Hilary has got to be behind the missing kids, and another thing is she is really messing with poor Tanya's mind and I am sure that horrible boogey man is also behind it as well, Hilary and the boogeyman should both be put behind bars !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

INT. SINGH HOUSE - MORNING

Kash is drinking cofee and reading his newspaper. Andonis is packing his bag for college.

Kash: (To Andonis) Shouldn't you be off to college by now!? Come on i want your grades to be boosted up...

Andonis: Yeah im on my way dad

Andonis kisses Sanjita goobye.

Andonis: See ya mom..

Sanjita: Bye son.

Andonis leaves the house. Kash gets up from the kitchen table and looks at his watch.

Kash: Its gone nine o clock...Ruby should be down the job centre!

Sanjita: Oh leave the girl be Kash..let her have a lie in!

Kash: Every moment she spends is bed is time wasted... she could get yourself a job in that time!

Sanjita: Is it any wonder she doesnt respect you, when your always on her case!?

Kash: Dont you dare speak to me in that manner Sanjita!

Kash storms up the stairs. He bangs on Ruby's door.

Kash: Get up out of bed you lazy girl! Come on open this door.

The door opens. Chris is standing there in only his boxers. Kash has a disgusted look on his face. Ruby walks up behind Chris and wraps her arms around him and smiles at Kash.

Ruby: Morning Dad...you alright?

Kash: What on earth is this idiot doing in my house! In your bedroom!?

Chris: Hey easy Kash mate, who you calling and idiot!?

Kash: Get out of my house you male whore!!! Taken advantage of my daughter like that!

Ruby hands Chris his clothes.

Chris: I think it was more the other way round :p .

Kash physically drags Chris down the stairs, opens the front door and throws him outisde in only his boxers.

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INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - MORNING

Claire looks out of the window and notcies the comotion. She sees Chris in just his boxers. She has a hurt look on her face. She runs up stairs and to the bathroom where she throws up into the toilet. :sick:

Has Kash Overstepped The Mark? Does Claire Still Have Feelings For Chris?

"throws up in the toilet" do I smell a pregnancy???? Romeo's or Chris's??? :hmm::hmm:

can i just ask - the pictures of amy and patrick in the character page look different to the ones on all the banners, are they the same people?

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Originally Posted by Jada-GDR

can i just ask - the pictures of amy and patrick in the character page look different to the ones on all the banners, are they the same people?

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ive changed the actors now jada for them... they are now proper actors aidan quinn and susan sarandon as oppose to two unkown catalouge models. :)

ahh right thanks :D and keep up the good work :D

INT: JENKINS MANOR

Tanya is sitting on the stairs, holding her face in her hands, yet not crying. Gary is in the front room with Hilary and Richard. Richard hands him a whisky...

Richard: Here, have this...

Gary: Cheers. What we gonna do? They've.... they've gone...

Richard: Hey, no talking like that! Come on, think positive.

Hilary whispers, thinking no one can hear...

Hilary: Think positive my ****...

Richard: Hilary. Stop it. Just... just dont, darling.

Tanya looks over through to the living room, and sees Richard comforting Gary. She sees Hilary roll her eyes at Richard, and stand there smugly watching them. She storms into the room to confront Hilary...

Tanya: Why dont you see what she's like, Dad?!

Richard: What whose like?

Tanya: This bitch here! Shes lying! Its obvious! Shes so smug, so cunning...

Hilary: Honestly, Darl, you're delerious or something. You dont know what you're on about.

Tanya turns and pushes Hilary to the wall. She pins her against it, so she can't move, and shouts into her face...

Tanya: What the hell have you done to my kids, Hilary!? Games over. Just tell me!

Richard jumps up and pulls Tanya off Hilary, and forces her to sit down next to Gary...

Richard: You're going through the worse thing any mother could go through, i'll give you that. But how can you say this has got anything to do with Hil?! She's innocent in all this! Just... just leave her out of this, and get a serious grip on reality, Tanya. Before you do, or say something thats...

Tanya: (sinisterly) Thats what?

Richard:.... unforgiveable...

stupid stupid richard :nono: *gives big slap* (well it might not even be hilary's fault, notice i say MIGHT, but she's still a bitch)

INT. GREASY GARY'S - DAY

A woman is working behind the counter, due to Gary's absence. Marcus is drinking a coffe and listenting to his ipod. Ruby and Natasha come in and sit down next to Marcus, who turns off his i pod.

Ruby: Hiya babes, hows it going?

Marcus: Just taking it easy ya know...before tonight...

Natasha: Up all night every night...you'll get yourself a reputation...

Marcus: What like you and Patrick?

The group laugh.

Ruby: Ignore her...she's becoming a right old jesabelle of late

Natasha jokingly hits Ruby, but the conversation continues.

Marcus: From what i heard on the phone this morning Kash has been saying the same about you...

Ruby: Oh has he now!? Yeah well...

Marcus: Chris werent it!?

Natasha: What Chris!? No way! (Joking) Ruby how could you stoop so low!?

Ruby: Yeah well...i need someone to bide my time...until i get the man i want... my perfect partner.

Ruby eyes up Marcus as she says this. She smiles at him, but he does not get the hints at all.

Marcus: Does he exist!?... We good luck trying Rube!

Ruby runs outside in tears. Marcus is totally oblivious to what he has doen or said. He getsures for Natasha to explain to him.

Marcus: Wh...what have i done?

Natasha: Oh come on, you dont know?

Marcus: Err...no..?

Natasha: She's really into you big time....she loves you Marcus!

Marcus has a shocked look on his face.

Hilary just give Tanya her kids back and richard wise up, you are been played big time :angry:

Singh & sons convienece store

Tom, Nick and Chris are in the Shop, buying some food, whilst talking over the shop displays to each other...

Nick: What are we buying then...?

Tom: I dunno.... food i guess....

Nick: Well dur! Thats what they sell here, you nonce!

Nick playfully hits the back on Toms head. He ducks, making Nick send a stack on cereal flying across the shop floor. Chris notices, and quickly tries to put them back...

Nick: That was your fault, Nick!!

Tom: Shut up!!

Nick laughs, and notices Chris putting everything away quickly. He bends down to Chris's level to help...

Nick: Hey, Whats up? Its only Kash here, he aint gonna care if its a bit messed up...

Chris: Well, he might do, cause its me, like...

Nick: Why? What've ya gone and done?

Chris looks sheepishly to the floor, then looks at Nick, and says quietly...

Chris: Ruby....

Nick: Omg, you and Ruby? Seriously? Gawd, since when?!

Tom obviously didn't hear...

Tom: What about Ruby..?

Nick: Chris has only gone and shagged her!!

Chris: It wasn't like that, Nick!! It was...

Tom: It was what? Was it good? Is it luuuve?! :rotfl:

Chris: Wouldn't go that far, Tom!

Kash comes out from the back of the shop, notices the cereal on the floor. He stops himself from going over straight away, and stands out of view, listening...

Nick: So come on. Since when have you and Ruby been an item?!

Chris: Well.... i dunno really. It just sorta happened.... not that i'm complaining or anything!.... what a women...

Kash steps out from the counter, grabs Chris's hood on his jacket, and drags him to the door...

Kash: Thats my daughter you're talking about! Dont you dare talk about her like she's a cheap prostitute!

Chris: Kash! I....er.... i didn't mean it like...

Kash: I dont care what you meant it like! Get out of here, and leave my Ruby alone! You hear me?!