Woah Ive just caught up on alot that I have missed!
Jason is mad, he is so angry all the time, Im guessing he didnt have such a good childhood.
And poor cleo
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Woah Ive just caught up on alot that I have missed!
Jason is mad, he is so angry all the time, Im guessing he didnt have such a good childhood.
And poor cleo
Scene 7- Nightlife Nightclub- Night
(Helen has took an ecstasy tablet. She has been drinking loads of water due to dancing. Her and her friend Maria are sitting at a booth)
Maria: Bloody hell! You've been drinking loads of water!
Helen: I don't feel right Maria that's why...i've been doing loads of dancing, i've been feeling thirsty..i've had to drink loads of water!
Maria: Are you feeling ok?
Helen: I feel sick Maria, i need to keep drinking or i feel like i'm gonna pass out!
Maria: Come on..if you feel like your gonna throw up, it's best if we get you to the toilet..
(Helen is lounging on the booth. Her face is pale, her eyes extremely blood shot)
Maria: Come on Helen, get up! Let's get to that toilet before your sick! You don't expect me to carry you to the toilet do you!?
Helen: Just help me up Maria...help me up..
(Maria grabs Helen's arm and pulls her up. Helen collapses to the floor. She is in pain, her voice murmurs, she starts moaning)
Helen: I can't feel my legs Maria...i can't feel my legs!
Maria: What!? What do you mean!? Why can't you feel your legs?!
Helen: Maria!! Maria! I can't get up...i can't feel my legs...i can't feel my legs!
(Maria has a paniced look on her face. She tries to help Helen up, but she collapses to the floor again. This time, Helen is in a lot more pain)
Helen: My head! My head's hurtin'! My head's hurting!
(Helen starts screaming)
Helen: My head's hurting!
(Helen holds her head as she screams out. She is in horrific pain, she is unable to feel her legs, her face has gone pale and her eyes look bloodshot and sore)
Maria: Jesus Christ Helen! What's wrong?! What have you done?!!
Helen: I...i...i..i took an ecstasy tablet!
Maria: You what?!! You stupid, stupid cow!
(Helen cries out in immense pain. She is on the floor cradling her head in her arms, screaming out. Nicola runs over)
Nicola: Jesus! What's happening here?!
Maria: Call an ambulance! Call an ambulance! She's took an ecstasy tablet!
Nicola: Oh my god!
(Nicola runs to call the ambulance. Clubbers have now crowded round Helen in a worry watching her on the floor, cradling her head as she screams)
Helen: Help me! Help me! I can't see...i can't see anything!!
(Helen screams even more. The music has been turned off. Helen is violently sick, she violently vomits on the floor continuously. All the clubbers scream as Helen stops screaming)
Maria: Helen?
(Maria checks Helen's pulse. She isn't breathing)
Maria: (screams) Helen!!!
OH My God
need I say anything else, apart from great work dave
Scene 8- Nightlife Nightclub- Morning
(It's the morning after the night before. Helen is on a life support machine in hospital after she took an ecstasy tablet. The nightclub has been sealed off by police as the police begin to launch their investigation into what happened. Jason and Nicola are standing by the nightclub, as passers by see the nightclub sealed off with police tape)
Jason: Jesus Christ! I can't believe this has happened!
Nicola: The poor woman! She was only young, she's in a hospital right now..lifeless..only machines keeping her going! :(
(Nicola is tearful)
Jason: Just bloody turn off the waterworks will you?! You didn't know this Helen woman so why are you bloody crying for?!
Nicola: She hasn't got much of a chance of surviving, i can't help but shed a tear!
Jason: Well you know what, i hope the woman does bloody die! Because of her taking ecstasy, my nightclub is being closed down!
(Jason walks off, an angered look on his face. Tears roll down Nicola's face as she reflects on the young woman who took an ecstasy tablet)
Oh my god, I know I say this every time but really can Jason get any worse?
Scene 9- The Hospital- Morning
(Maria is outside a hospital cubicle. She watches on as Helen is lying lifeless on a life support machine. It's clear Maria has been crying for her friend. A doctor approaches Maria)
Doctor: Are you ok?
Maria: What do you think!? How could Helen have been so bloody stupid?!
Doctor: People experiment with ecstasy everyday...hardly anyone ends up on a life support machine like she has..
Maria: Well why has she ended up on a life support machine eh?! She only took one friggin' tablet! Why is her life hanging by a thread when she only took one tablet?! Everyone else who takes one tablet doesn't end up like this! :(
Doctor: The ecstasy tablet didn't make her end up on a life support machine...in fact, as silly as this may sound, drinking too much water made her end up in this condition!
Maria: Drinking too much water?! How's that!?
Doctor: When you take an ecstasy tablet, it messes with your body...it messes with your bladder, your are unable to produce urea..
Maria: You mean piss?!
Doctor: Yes that's correct..so she was drinking so much water and wasn't getting rid of any of it as waste, she had too much water in her body making her brain swell up..causing her body not to function probably..when she was moaning about her head hurting, it was because her brain was swelling up, the pain she suffered was staggering, imagine a migraine, she was probably suffering from 20 migraines...that should make you realise the pain she went through..
(The doctor leaves Maria. Maria watches on at Helen. She suddenly breaks down into tears, as she dwells on what the doctor said)
END OF EPISODE 1.6
Poor Helen - not very nice at all......Just goes to show, dont mess with drugs!
I really am starting to really hate Jason...a very good baddie! :p Mind you if I was Nicola I would have left him yonks ago!!!
Glad this is going to a second series, now the main characters have been established there's sooo much you can do with them....:thumbsup:
Scene 1- The Hospital- Morning
(Jonathan and Selena are sitting in the hospital waiting room, awaiting news on Cleo. The doctor enters)
Doctor: I have some good news and bad news for you..
Selena: Why? What is it?
Doctor: Cleo's gonna make a full recovery..that's the good news..the bad news is that she has been diagnosed with severe depression...
Selena: I knew it! But that can only be good news surely?! Atleast you can recognise she has a problem..no doubt you'll be sorting it out either!
Doctor: She'll be going to a psychiatric unit...surprisingly, she has agreed to oblige..
Jonathan: That's great news...are you confident that you can make her better doctor? She will recover from her depression won't she?!
Doctor: Of course she will...it's gonna be hard for Cleo, but i have every confidence that she'll make it through..:)
Selena: Thanks Doctor. :)
(The doctor leaves the waiting room. Selena and Jonathan smile at each other)
Scene 2- Nightlife Nightclub- Morning
(Jason is busy dealing with hounding journalists as they take photos and ask questions over the nightclub closing down and the ecstasy incident. Nicola is standing in the background. Suddenly her phone rings. She answers it. The scene cuts between her and Jimmy. Jimmy is sat in a cafe, a newspaper in his hand)
Nicola: Hello?
Jimmy: Hi Nicola...i'm sorry to hear about the bad news about the nightclub closing down..
Nicola: Jimmy! Now isn't a good time..
Jimmy: Why not?
Nicola: Jason's here...he could see me on my phone speaking to you at any moment!
Jimmy: It's not a crime for you to be speaking to someone else on the phone is it?!
Nicola: Look Jimmy...we shouldn't be in contact anymore really...i'm married! Jason'll go nuts if he finds out that i've been speaking to another man!
Jimmy: You've married a monster Nicola! It's obvious why you want me to piss off...it's because i discovered that burn mark on your hand! Jason did that to you didn't he?!
Nicola: Shut up Jimmy! Just shut up! :(
Jimmy: Meet me Nicola..
Nicola: There's no way i can meet you! I can't!
Jimmy: Yes you can meet me...meet me at Dynamo's Cafe...i have a proposition for you...a proposition that could get you out of Jason's hair for good..
Nicola: I ain't interested!
Jimmy: So you want to suffer years and years more of violence from him?! I know he's abusing you Nicola...that burn mark proves that!
Nicola: Just piss off Jimmy!
Jimmy: No meet me at Dynamo's Cafe at midday! You'll be an absolute fool to turn my proposition down..
(Jimmy hangs up on Nicola. Nicola puts her phone back in her pocket and thinks about what Jimmy has said)
Aww I feel so sorry for Nicola, I want her to meet up with Jimmy, as long as jason doesnt find out and harm her .
Great work