Good on you Sanjita - you tell him - have a good time and enjoy yourself!
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Good on you Sanjita - you tell him - have a good time and enjoy yourself!
YOu go sanjita... don't let him rule you.. :cheer::cheer:
i couldn't have put it better myself :)Quote:
Originally Posted by jojomum
EXT. TORQUEY HIGHSTREET - DAY
Tanya walks out of Debenhams carry a lot of shopping bags. She answers her phone.
Tanya: (Into Phone) Yes...hi Gary...erm... yeah ive just done some shopping, I'll head back in a bit...ok byes babes...
In the distance we see Gregg following her. Tanya continues walking but catches someone dressed in a hoody in the corner of her eye. She starts to walk a bit faster, but then begins to run. Gregg continuyes to follow her.
Tanya breaths heavily in fright. She runs out into the road just as car is driving towards her....
WILL TANYA SURVIVE?
INT. GREASY GARY'S - DAY
Claire is sitting down in the cafe, staring into her cup of cofee. She is confussed by recent events. Natasha comes in, and sits down next to Claire.
Natasha: Hiya babes, hows it going?
Claire: Oh Hi Tash...
Natasha: What's up with you? You look right down...
Claire: Just man trouble...
Natasha: You!? Your dating the sexy Italian Stalion! What you got to worry about eh!?
Claire: Erm.. well... he ent in the country...and i just dont know how i feel about him anymore.
Natasha: Let me guess someone else has come along?
Claire: In a way... but i dont know what to do...if i went with him, I'd feel like i was cheating on Romeo...
Natasha dosent say anything: after all she is having an affair! :D
Claire: I just never knew i felt this way about him... and now Romeo's gone...i'm just not sure what to do... i mean for all i know Romeo could turn up at any moment....
Natasha: And so what if he does!? He's the one thats messed you around... at the end of the day Claire babes you have to live for the moment...take every chance you get... becuase you leave this world on your own...so how cares who you hurt?
Claire: That's a bit harsh isnt it?
Natasha: Yeah well sometimes people need that... love is complicated...just have fun...your young...you can settle down when your older...anyways I'd best order me cuppa and get going before Mrs C starts having a go at me...bye babes
Natsha goes to the counter. Tanya finishes her cofee and stares at the moment of her mug, seeing her reflection.
WHAT WILL CLAIRE DO NEXT!?
EXT. TORQUEY HIGHSTREET - DAY
Vicky: Tanya!
Tanya turns around to see the car driving directly towards her. Tanya screams and drops her shopping bags. The car's breaks allow it stop directly infront of her. They bib their horn.
Vicky runs over to a shacken Tanya and picks up her bags.
Vicky: Oh my god Tanya, are you ok?
Tanya: I...I...I...
Vicky: It's okay...you've had a nasty shock... I think it's best we get you back home dont you?
Vicky leads Tanya away, as the car drives off, Tanya looks over her shoulder but by now Greg has disapeared.
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INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - NIGHT
Tanya is curled up in a ball on the sofa, the televison on. Vicky walks in with a cup of tea.
Vicky: Come on, get this down you...got some whiskey in it...will settle your nerves...
Tanya: Thanks....
Vicky: I dont know what's got into you honestly... i mean its not like you to walk into a road when a car's coming...
Tanya: I'm being stalked Vicky...
Vicky: Stalked!?
Tanya: Your the only one that knows this...so dont tell anyone...especially Gary....he'll do his nut...
Vicky: Well...erm...do you know who's doing this?
Tanya: No...i have no idea... but im just so scared...
Vicky sits down next to Tanya.
Vicky: Christ Tanya...have you told the police!?
Tanya: I can't...they wouldnt believe me...and besides im a Taylor...i should be able to fight this...
Vicky: Stuff being a "Taylor", this almost cost you your life earlier, you need to do something about this Tanya!
Tanya: Get out!
Vicky: What!?
Tanya: I dont need you hassling me! Just get out!
Vicky leaves relucantly, Tanya slams the door on her and starts crying. Tanya runs into the living room turns off the lights, draws the curtains and switches off the tv. She curls up into a ball once more and starts crying to herself.
Tanya: (screams) I hope your happy!
EXT. MARBAL - NIGHT
The residents are queing up for the opening Night of the Marbal Nightclub. The music is blasting out, and the bouncers are slowly letting in everyone.
Claire, Vicky, Natasha, Chris, Tom, Luqina, Ruby, Val and Sanjita are standing in the crowd.
Val: Oh come on lads we're freezing our legs off out here!
Chris: Thought you were gonna say someat else for a second then :p
Val: Oi you cheaky!
Kash is locking up the shop and he sees Sanjita in the crowd.
Kash: Sanjita!?
Sanjita: (To Val) Oh god, here we go...
Val: Just ignore him darl'....stick with us and enjoy your night...
The group head on inside. Kash brages trough the crowds to get to Sanjita.
Kash: Sanjita dont ignore me!!!
Hazey The Bouncer: Oi mate! There's a que get to the back!!!
Kash: I have to see my wife immeditaley!
Kash squeezes trough. The nightlcub is dark, loud and busy. Everyone is having fun and dancing. Val and Sanjita head to the bar.
Val: Hey darling 2 barcadis and cokes when your ready!!
Sanjita: I hope Kash doesnt cause a stir...
Val: Just let him... im in the mood for a good old barny!
Kash storms over and grabs hold of Sanjita.
Kash: Come on out of here now...
Ruby: Get off her dad! Honestly who do you think you are!?
Kash: Her husband! I will not have her behave like this!
Sanjita slaps Kash
Sanjita: How dare you control me! And humilate me infront of my freinds! Just get out of my way kash and let me enjoy my evening.
Kash: I forbid it!
Hazey: I think you'd better come out here...
Val: Your a ruddy control freak Kash!
Kash: And your a cheat little tart... i will not let you bring Sanjita down to your low level!
Claire: Eh watch your lip! That's my mom your talkin' about!
Kash: Like mother like daughter...dressed like a tarlot with your short skirt and your "boobtube"....
Val: Right that's it!
A brawl starts between Claire, Val, Ruby, Sanjita and Kash. Hazey the bouncer talks into her walkie talkie.
Out of the managers office step Iqbal and Marcus, dressed in smart suits.
Iqbal: Break it up! Now!
Hazey and another body guard restrain Val and Kash. Iqbal walks into the centre of the group.
Iqbal: How dare you brawl in my club like this!
Kash: Iqbal!? Marcus!?
Iqbal and Marcus are relatives of Kash's. The singh family are reunited.
hey, just finsihed catching up with all your episodes i really wnt to say wow some of the stuff ive read of yours on here is so talented with this and sbbb i really dunno what else to say other than wow :thumbsup:
thanks for your commentsQuote:
Originally Posted by diamond1
its hard work doing the two, but the end results are worth while.
So the singh family are reunited sounds intresting
I am finally getting caught up with this *cheers* This is fab well done, can't wait to read more :p xx
INT: MARBAL NIGHTCLUB- day
Iqbal is cleaning tables in the nightclub. He's humming to himself, when Kash coems up behind him. Iqbal jumps...
Iqbal: Bloody hell, Kash!! You trying to kill me or something?
Kash: That depends, i suppose... (sniggers)
Iqbal: On what....?! Come on Kash, dont be so stupid...
Kash: What are you doing here then?!
Iqbal: You're gonna have to make more sense than that...
Kash: Why you back from India?! I thought everything was going great there.... and why the hell did you buy this hell hole?!
Iqbal: Excuse me. This "hole hole" is my buisness.
Kash: Gawd knows why!!
Iqbal: Is it so bad that i might want to make something of myself?
Kash: Become a doctor then!
Iqbal: Come on, Kash. Stop sounding like Dad. i can do what the hell i like...
Kash: (mockingly) stop sounding like Dad.... honestly. anypne would think you've had a bloody personality transplant. Being a doctor is acceptable, its good. This place is just...
Iqbal: Is just what?!
Kash: You know what i mean, Iqbal
Iqbal: This is the 21st century Kash. We dont all have to become doctors now, or didn't anyone tell you? I can do what i want, when i want, and nothings gonna stop me. Not you, not religon.... not anything. So if you dont like, then you can just go piss off, can't ya.
INT: MARBAL NIGHTCLUB
Ruby is sitting flirtaciously at the bar. Marcus is making her a drink, she leans over the bar to talk to him....
Marcus: wo wo wo! You trying to make me see too much?!
Ruby sits back up, and adjusts her top
Ruby: Well that depends...
Marcus gives her a drink, and sits down close to her
Marcus: And whats that then?
Ruby: Nothing.....
Ruby smiles flirtaciously at Marcus, and sips her drink. He smiles back...
Marcus: So you seeing anyone tonight?
Ruby: Not sure...
Marcus: Oh really?!
Ruby: Well you know... if some gorgeous hunk comes my way, then i might get busy...
Marcus: :eek: I'm offended!!
They both laugh, and look into each others eyes for a moment longer than normal. Iqbal walks in, holding some letters...
Iqbal: Oi, oi! Whats going on here then?!
Marcus and Ruby both jump, and move away from each other, grinning...
Iqbal: No need to stop on my behalf....:D
Marcus: Dont be stupid!! We were just....
Iqbal: I could see what you were doing!! Honestly, shes your cousin! People of today, eh?! Either trying to shoot each other, or get off with each other...
Iqbal walks out, laughing to himself. Marcus and Ruby look back to each other, and smile...
Claire has an argument with Romeo over the phone, she is In tears, Chris wipes away her tears and comforts her, she ends up kissing him passionately.
INT. MARBAL - NIGHT
Tom and Luqina are snogging. Chris and Claire feel like gooseberrys. Claire's phone rings, Romoe is calling her.
Claire: Hiya babes... hows you?.... yeah i'm fine i suppose... any chance that you'll be coming home soon.... oh.... well no... im not happy with that.... im starting to think that you dont give a damn about us!!!!.... you what!? well if you feel that way then we might as well just forget it... no youve said what you really felt... oh just get lost!
Claire cancels the call and runs off towards the toilet in tears.
Vicky: Claire!?
Vicky starts to get up to comfort Claire, but Chris gets up before her.
Chris: Dont worry...I'll go...
Chris walks past the crowds and goes over to Claire.
Chris: Claire, whats up?
Claire: Its Romeo...the selfish pig! He has no intentions on coming back has he!?
Chris: I donno Claire...
Claire: He's treating me like an idiot! I just dont know if i love him anymore
The mascara runs down her face. Chris lightly strokes her face, whipping away her tears. Claire goes in for a kiss and Chris responds. The pair end up kissing passionatley.
cant belive chris would do that to romeo ....
another thing the mile high forum? please excuse me for being a bit dumb but i have been looking for ages for the after hours episodes way back when you first posted about them but i still cant find it can you give me help of where to find it please?
cheers
its in the chat section of the mile high forum...Quote:
Originally Posted by diamond1
you can acess the mile high forum once youve got 1000 posts, i cant post some episodes in hear as they are unsuitable for a younger audience
Bryan this is really good both you and Abi are superb Writer's! I try not to miss an episode just like i am with eastenders:p But if i do i go back to where i last read and i read from there.
INT. BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE - MORNING
Claire wakes up with the noise of Tom and Luqina having sex in the next room. Claire lefts herself up and looks at Chris who is lying naked, asleep.
Claire closes her eyes wishing it was a dream, she quietly gets out of the bed and put her clothes on. Chris starts to stir put goes back to sleep.
Claire rushes down the stairs and ends up sitting on the staircase in tears, regretting the actions of the previous night.
EXT. BAYMOORE BEACH - MORNING
Ruby is walking towards home after staying out clubbing all night. She looks plastrerd from last night. She rubs her head in pain.
Natasha is about to go into Valentinos restauraunt to go to work. She bumps into Ruby.
Natasha: Christ Rub babe, you look as rough as sand paper!
Ruby: Cheers....
Natasha: I take it you contiunued the party after we went home...
Ruby: Yeah went into Brixham and got slozzled!
Natasha: And know your seeing the side effects...
Ruby: Hey it's all part of the fun...
The girls laugh.
Ruby: So then did you get lucky last night?
Natasha: Nah i'm still set on getting back with my married man...
Ruby: Dodgy buisness...
Natasha: Yeah well he's good where it coutns... anyways you pull last night?
Ruby: Erm not exactly but I have got my eyes on someone...
Ruby looks over the road and sees Marcus bending down to pick up some crates for the nightlcub. She smiles and licks her lips.
Claire:wall: :wall: what have you done :confused: I have a feeling you are gonna regret it even more when Romeo does turn up !!!!!!!!!!!!! You dumb cow.. letting your hormones rage !!!!!
Ruby ruby tsk tsk, what are we gonna do with you ...Nat,, leave that horrible horrible married man alone, if he can cheat on his wife with you, what makes you think he won't do it to you IF IF IF he ever leaves amy for you...... dream on my girl you are NOT SPECIAL .. you were just a tumble in bed !!!!
Have you posted the Claire/Craig bit, as I can't see it in there :searchme: Or is it somewhere else?? Or am I being daft?? :D :D (Actually don't answer the last question! :rotfl: )Quote:
Originally Posted by bondboffin
BAYMOORE BEACH
Claire is sitting on the beach, looking out to see, shivering. Chris walks up behind her, and sits down next to her. He goes to kiss her, she pulls away...
Claire: No, Chris... just....just dont.
Chris: Claire, whats wrong babe? First you just up and leave this morning, then your like this...
Claire sighs and looks out to see again. A single tear rolls down her face.
Chris: Claire! Talk to me Claire! for Gods sake, i thought after last night we were...
Claire looks back to Chris, and stares him in the eyes harshly...
Claire: Last night. Last night was nothing. it was a mistake. A huge, dirty mistake. It shouldn't have happened.
Chris: But i thought it meant something. To you AND me....
Claire: I was....it was a betrayal. Something that shouldn't have happened. Sorry but i love him. After everything, i still love Romeo. i can't stop thinking about him, every moment since.... since last night.
Chris: But you said...
Claire: I know. I know what i said. I just feel so cheap right now, so..... so dirty. Please, Chris. Just forget last night ever happened....
Chris: But what about me...?
Claire: Sorry...
Claire runs back to the promenade, another tear rolls down her face. Chris stays on the beach front, alone, and looks out to sea.
I was just wondering that myself actually!! :lol: I went to go have a look, so i know where i'm going from with my episodes, and i couldn't see it either... :hmm:Quote:
Originally Posted by jojomum
Well, it can't be both of us having blonde moments :rotfl:Quote:
Originally Posted by Abi
i decided graphic discritions of sex in a bog wasnt necessary in the end! :D
:rotfl: Thats ok - just from that, I now know what happened :rotfl: Cheers hun :DQuote:
Originally Posted by bondboffin
:rotfl: classic!!!! :rotfl:Quote:
Originally Posted by bondboffin
Good news Em- we're not going mad!!! :lol:
:rotfl: I was panicking thinking I'd missed it.....but then when you hadn't seen it either i thought maybe it werent me - bry - you shouldn't have teased us like it!!! :rotfl:Quote:
Originally Posted by Abi
:clap::clap::clap: this just gets better and better, fab work as alway Bry and Abi.
Oh my god Claire you idiot!! i knew you would do something and regret it...
INT: RED RUM PUB
Claire is sitting at the table alone. She is staring into a drink, thinking. Chris comes and sits next to her...
Claire: We said all we needed to say yesterday, Chris.
Chris: No, we didn't. Look... we can work on this. Theres something between us, you know there is...
Claire: A spark, maybe. But thats all it is.
Chris: We can work on it though. Just give us a chance, Clare. You never know, it could work.
Claire: It could...
Chris: (puts his arm around her) So lets give it a go then.
Claire wriggles away from Chris's arm..
Claire: It could, but i dont want that. I dont want us. You and me... we just wont work....
Chris: but how will you know untill you give us a shot?!
Claire: I just do, Chris.
Chris: (pauses) This is about Romeo, aint it?
Claire: Yeah... look, i'm gonna tell him...
Chris: What?! Tell him what exactly?!
Claire: About.... you know what about!! I'm not keeping secrets from him... Do you understand?
Chris: (sarcastically) Oh yeah, course i understand! Go on, tell him all about it! Make him a meal as well, while your at it!
Claire: Dont be like that Chris...
Chris: Like what? Go on, if you dont want secrets, then tell him. As soon as you can, if thats what you want (pauses). But i know your not that stupid.
Claire: Dont even...
Chris: Your not gonna tell him anything. Thats not you, is it Claire?
Chris hands Claire his mobile phone
Chris: So go on, if you think you can, then why not do it now?
Claire sits and stares at the phone. Chris takes it back.
Chris: Didn't think so...
INT. MARBAL UPSTAIRS FLAT - DAY
Natasha gathers the remainder of her items and walks out of the flat just as Iqbal and Marcus are walking in with theres.
Natasha: God would you jump in my grave as quick?
Marcus: What!?
Natasha: I ent even out of the front door before moving your stuff in... this was my home...
Iqbal: Look i dont feel good about this... but you only rented it... and this flat came as part of the club... and we need someone to live...
Natasha: Yeah well lucky for you i got a flat down the road isnt it...
Marcus: Give dad a rest he said he was sorry...
Natasha: Yeah whatever...
Natasha walks out of the scene. Iqbal and Marcus sit down on the sofa.
Marcus: I dont know...its a big move ent it dad...from India to err...Devon...
Iqbal: I reckon it was the right one...its best to stay close to your family... we need them to get us trough it son...
Marcus: It's been a year since mom died tough....
Iqbal: Yeah...but India was plagued with bad memories.... no point upsetting ourseleves... a fresh start is just what we needed, and besides... running a nightlcub is what I've always wanted to do!
Marcus: Uncle Kash isnt the best person to be around...
Iqbal: You'll get used to him...besides youve got your cousins...and this country is far more liberal... you can live your life without your gran breathing down your neck...
Marcus: God you know how to talk your way into things dont you!
The pair laugh
Iqbal: Yes I think we will have fun here...
EXT. ANDREWS HOUSE - NIGHT
Patrick flicks trough a wod of bank notes and places them into an envelopes, he sighs at the displeasure of having to hand Val money. He walks up to the Andrews' House and knocks on the door. James answers.
James: Alright Paddy mate, what can i do for you?
Patrick: A grand here...give it to your beloved with...
James: Wow wow... a grand!? Wait a second mate... what's this for?
Patrick: Oh its blackmail...im sure she'll tell you it all...
James: Look mate we dont need your money....
Patrick: Juts give it her please James mate...
Patrick starts to walk off
Patrick: Oh and you can tell her from me... she's a bitch!
James starts to leave the house to hit Patrick
James: Oi mate! That's why wife your talking to!
Patrick: Speak to her! Then she if its justified...
Patrick walks off leaving a confused James alone outside in the cold.
Oh nasty nasty patrick.. telling James about Val's blackmail
INT. RED RUM - NIGHT
Amy and Patrick are behind the bar, there are very few punters in.
Patrick: Christ it's as dead as a stiff in here tonight...
Amy: I blame Marbal... that place has took all our buisness....
Patrick: Yeah well we need to get the buisness back or we'll be out on the streets...really is there any need for a nightclub in a village like this!?
Amy: We'll obviously there is, seen as its packed to the rafters everynight...
Patrick: I've got a good mind to march over there and give him a peice of my mind!
Amy: And what good would that do eh!? Look the shine will soon go off...they'll come back...they just need some persuading...and not with your fists...how about a karoke night this friday!?
Patrick: A karoke night!? What kind of pub do you think i run here...
Amy: An ABBA theme...i can imagine it now... disco balls and fancy dress! That'll get em all in... a 100 quid prize for best singer!
Patrick: And wheres the 100 quid come from? Aladin's lamp!?
Amy: No... but think of all the moolah we'll get in the till... oh i cant wait its going to be so fun! :D
Patrick is not too impressed :rolleyes:
INT: MARBAL NIGHTCLUB- night
Claire, Ruby and Natasha walk into the nightclub, and try to look through the crowd...
Natasha: Its a bit busy tonight aint it?!
Ruby: Nothing wrong with that. All the more men, if you get my drift!!
Claire: (playfully hits her arm) Your dreadfull, Ruby!!
Ruby: Dont you know it!!
They push through the crowd towards the bar. Claire sees Chris, Tom and Luquina at the other end of the bar.
Claire: Might have known that lot would be here....
Natasha: Typical men, trying to pick up every living thing in a skirt! Whose that? With Chris?
Claire: I....erm.... i dunno. Never seen her before...
Natasha: Ah well, looks like someones in for a good night!!
Natasha looks away, and orders a drink. She notices Claire is still staring at Chris and the others.
Natasha: Whats up Claire?
Claire: Nothing..... nothing at all....
Ruby leans against the bar, as Marcus walks past. She grabs his shirt, and pulls him next to her....
Ruby: hey stranger!
Marcus: Hey Ruby, sorry, i'm a bit busy right now...?
Ruby: Going to see another girl are we?!
Ruby sticks her bottom lip out, and laughs.
Marcus: no, nothing like that!
Ruby: Is that cause of your girlfriend in India?!
Marcus: No.... we split...
Ruby: Really?! I didn't know...
Marcus: Look, i really have to go, i'll catch you in a bit...
Marcus walks off, leaving Ruby trying to hide the smile on her face...
INT: ANDREWS HOUSE
Val is sipping a glass of chardonny, while perching on an armchair. James coems up, and drops the bundle of banknotes on her lap...
Val: Whats this? Raining money all of a sudden, darling?
James: I thought you'd be able to explain to be actually.
Val: you're gonna have to give me more clues then that, babe!
James: Its from Patrick. Does that help?!
Val: I was wondering when this was going to arrive... (she looks up, and see's his obivously angry face) darling, its just a bit of cash...
James: Its a bloody grand! Why the hell is he doing giving you that kind of money?!
Val: This and That. You know how it is.
James: Well, no i dont! I dont want that bloke thinking this family is a charity case! I'll provide for this family no matter what!
Val: I'm sure you would, mind a bit of pocket money wont go a miss.
James: Just tell me why he's gving you the bleeding money!
Val: I know something about him. The poor darling doesn't want it getting out, so he's giving me little presents like this, Convinent aint it?!
James: So your blackmailing him!? Val, how could you?!
Val: Easily. He's breaking poor Amy's heart- i might as well get something out of him before it all gets out!
James: What d'ya mean "breaking her heart"?!
Val: He's having it off, with someone else. An affair, a bit on the side, whatever you want to call it. Fact is he's doing it. With someone, not too far from Amy's friendship circle...
:hmm: I wonder if Val will tell James who it is
I hope she does or maybe a bit of blackmail???
INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Gary and Hilary walks into the living room. Richard is sitting down with some files, Melissa and Jacob are playing on the floor.
Hilary: Busy day at the cafe?
Gary: So so, not too bad for this time of the year...just come to pick up the kids, they been ok?
Hilary: Yeah as good as gold... (to kids) come on kids up you get Daddy's here...
Richard turns around as Gary enters the room.
Richard: Oh hello Gary, hows things?
Gary: Not too good really Richard...
Richard: Still no improvment?
Gary: No...she's just sitting in the house...not doing nothing... not going nowhere...
Hilary: Sounds like she needs to snap out of it...no good getting stuck in a rutt
Gary: Easier said than done... she's convinced she has someone stalking her... and i dont reckon this is going to go away anytime soon...
Hilary has an evil and satisified grin on her face.
INT. MARBAL - NIGHT
Natasha and Ruby are having fun in the nightclub. Ruby is staring over at Marcus in the distance.
Marcus is changing a whisky bottle, a blonde at tyhe bar checks out his ass and starts chatting him up.
Blonde: Nice view in here...
Marcus: Want a postcard of it? :p
Blonde: Oh theres me hoping to get the real thing...
Marcus: Patientce... i have a club to run...
Blonde: Why call it Marbal?
Marcus: Well im Marcus and me dad's Iqbal... put them together and what do you get!?
Blonde: Marbal... so your Indian then?
Marcus: Yeah fancy taking away and Indian to your place? :p
Blonde: Only if i get double helpings...
Marcus: Oh I'm sure I'll be able to deliver....
Marcus and the Blonde begin to snog over the bar. Ruby sees this and runs outside in tears. Natasha follows her.
Natasha: Ruby whats up babes? Why you crying for!?
Ruby: Its him! In there!
Natasha: What Marcus!?
Ruby: Yeah! Snogging that cheap little tarts face off right in front of me!
Natasha: So bloomin' what? What's the big issue?
Ruby: I love him Tash'! I love Marcus!
Natasha: But he's your cousin!?
Ruby: I've loved him for years! Ever since we were kids!