Good stuff! I wonder how Romeo and Emma will nail Luqina, this should get very interesting! I really like Hayley's character! I wonder if she will worm her way out of the lock in situation!
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Good stuff! I wonder how Romeo and Emma will nail Luqina, this should get very interesting! I really like Hayley's character! I wonder if she will worm her way out of the lock in situation!
OOoo - there will be trouble for Hayley!!
Go Romeo! Get Luquina out!
Great stuff Bry
I knew it.. Hayley was just asking for trouble with the lock in. I wonder how much of her and Adonis is aquated to drink???Quote:
Originally Posted by jojomum
INT. RED RUM PUB - NIGHT
Hayley's friends have now left. Hayley is sat in one of the booths, Amy and Patrick sitting either side of her. The two police officers are sitting directly opposite.
PO: Locks in are a serious offence, you do realise that?
Amy: Of course we do officer, we THOUGHT we could trust Hayley to be on her own...obliviously not...
Patrick: (To PO) Look mate...there's been no harm done, can't you just let it go?
PO: If we "let it go" for every crime that was comitted sir we would be living in a world of tyrany..
Hayley: Look please...I didn't mean to break the rules...it was meant to be a party...upstairs...but they just got out of control and came downstairs...
The police officer roles his eyes. The front door opens and in walks James, looking tired.
PO: Detective Andrews...
James: (To Amy) I just got your call... what's been going on?
PO: This young lady has had a lock in...
Patrick: James mate, can't you sort something out?
James gestures for the police man to speak to him by the bar. He gets up and walks towards James.
James: Look mate, they are good people...they dont usually do this kind of thing...
PO: What are you suggesting Detective?
James: Dont charge them... make up some story...
The officer is clearly uncomfortable about this.
James: Look if anyone says anything blame it on me... I'll take the blame...okay?
The officer gives James a friendly nod. He walks over to Patrick and Amy.
PO: All right then listen up..we're gonna let you off with a cauation this time... as long as you make sure this wont happen again...
Amy: Certainly officer, I'll make sure it doesn't...
Amy gives Hayley a scornful look, Hayley folds her arms and rolls her eyes.
PO: I have no option but to inform the brewery...what they decide to do is there decison...
Patrick: The brewery! Oh come on we could loose our licence!
PO: Be thankful that you're not in a prison cell! (To other office) Come on then...let's go...
Patrick shows the officers out. He goes up to James.
Patrick: Cheers for that mate :) ...
James: No worries, anytime...that's what coppers are there for :D
The camera cuts to Amy and Hayley who are giving each other daggered looks. James leaves, Patrick walks up to Hayley.
Patrick: I think it's about time you go to bed young lady...
Hayley: But it's only 1!
Patrick: Now...
Hayley gets up, a smug smile on her face.
Amy: Don't think you've got away with this lady... I want a serious chat with you tomorrow... sleep well :D
Amy has the final line, she smuggly looks at Hayley, finally getting one up on her.
INT. ST MARY MAGDALENE CHURCH (TORQUAY) - MORNING
The vicar is polishing the candlesticks at the front of the church. Luqina walks in and glides down the isle as if it were a catwalk, wearing a revealing dress, deisgner sunglasses and high heels that click along the floor. The vicar turns around and faces Luqina.
Vicar: Luqina...:rolleyes:
Luqina: Morning vicar! :D Hows it going? Been praying to him up there!? :D
Vicar: If you mean god, then yes everyday, which any follower of the church would do...
Luqina: Nah..I can't be doing with that...have more important things to do with my time...like filing my nails...
Vicar: Is there a reason for your visit to St Mary's today?
Luqina: Mary? Whose Mary?
Vicar: The name of the church...
Luqina: Oh right, whatever... anyways yeah... I want to get married here! :D
Vicar: I've already explained to you Luqina, that I can not marry divorcees...
Luqina: Oh go on, just this once... please... do it for the sake of the lord above! :D
Vicar: It is he who said we shouldn't...
Luqina: God he needs to get into the 21st century! Theres no point getting married if you havent already been the past...it's the trend these days...
Vicar: You foul woman...
Luqina: Look I'll put it to you simply... you marry me and Tom... or I tell Jane about what you get up to with the sunday school teacher behind closed doors...
Vicar: I beg your pardon! Me and Chasity have never...I would never cheat on my wife!
Luqina: You wanna take the risk? Just one word to Jane and that's your marriage down the plugole...and your god wont be able to remarry you remember...:p
Vicar: But it's untrue! I would never commit adultery!
Luqina: Trust me Vicar I can lie for England... a couple of mock up photos, a pair of dirty knickers... I'll have your marraige in tatters before you can say divorce settlement...
Vicar: God help you!
Luqina: No, you help me! A marriage for a marraige...so then, what do you say!? :D
Vicar: Does it look like I have a choice? :rolleyes:
Luqina plants a kiss on the Vicar, leaving her red lipstick on his lips.
Luqina: Brilliant! I knew you'd see sense! I'll see you soon then Vicar! tata!
Luqina walks off swinging her handbag and walking gleefully, a smile of satisfaction on her face.
what a cow!! I hope she get caught out. come on Romeo.. get working on this quick
INT. VALENTINO'S RESTUARAUNT - NIGHT
Rebecca is laying tables at Valentinos, before the lunch time rush. Richard comes trough the door carrying his breifcase and wearing a large winter coat.
Rebecca: Richard, what a pleasure to see you...
Richard: Just thought I'd pop in for a coffee, the finest in Baymoore...
Rebecca: Well it has been since Gary's cafe closed down...
Richard: Yeah well we hope to get that up and running again soon... just want to leave Tanya to deal with it... anyways will you join me for a coffee?
Rebecca: Of course, I always have time for an old friend...
Richard sits down at one of the booths, with a view looking out to sea.
Rebecca: So then, what's up?
Richard: How do you mean?
Rebecca: Well you are usually for two busy to fit coffee into your shcedule, so I'm guessing there's something troubling you...
Richard: Well yes...there is...I come for advice really...
Rebecca finishes making the coffees, she walks towards the booth, puts the cups down and sits down.
Rebecca: Come on then, spill...
Richard: It's Hilary?
Rebecca: Isn't it always..
Richard: Well you remember Siobhan... she was our daughter...
Rebecca: Come again!?
Richard: Turned out after Hilary left me...well she was pregnant...but put the baby up for adoption...
Rebecca: Jesus...I had no idea...
Richard: Neither did I... well we found out she was a con artist...lied all along... but the point remains...me and Hilary have a daughter out there somewhere...
Rebecca: Oh my goodness...
Richard: You see I want to find her... make up for lost time...but Hilary is admanet not to get to know her...
Rebecca: So its a question of whether to go against Hilary or not...
Richard: Exactly, but she's having none of it...
Richard's phone rings.
Richard: Sorry...do you mind?
Rebecca: No, not at all...
Richard gets up and moves to the other end of the restuaurnt, where he picks up the phone.
Richard: Hello... Jack!? :eek: Oh my god...you've found her!?...
Richard rushes back towards the table, and gets out a pen and paper and writes down the adress.
Richard: Thank you so much!... I'll bring in your cheque later on today! Thanks Jack!...Bye!
Rebecca looks intrigued at the conversation.
Richard: Oh my goodness Rebecca... that was the PI...he's found her...he's found my daughter!
:cheer::cheer:guess who's back, back again, Siobhan is back, don't tell hilary!!!!
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From Tomorrow...
Michelle Grosvenor played by Claire Goose
at last romeo is back.....wonder how he is gonna stop luqina (have to admit far more intrested to see his reaction when claire comes back-him chris ooo theres gonna be blood)
but for now the bachelor boys are BACK!!