Oh will i now??? lol, course i will honey! I am catching up as we speak, Offical devon seas catch up day today!!!!Quote:
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Oh will i now??? lol, course i will honey! I am catching up as we speak, Offical devon seas catch up day today!!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by bondboffin
THE RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE
The pub falls silence. The sound of Tanyas high heels can be heard as she approches Val.
Val: Well look who it isnt...the blonde bimbo who cant put out a ruddy' cigarette!
Tanya: Shut it Val, i dont even smoke!
Val: No you shut it, the fire was caused by a fag end, and you were the only one in the shop! Now thanks to you ive got no choice but to sell up!
Tanya: Im sorry to hear it Val...
Val: Sorry!? Your not sorry! I hope your happy with yourself you stupid little cow!
Tanya: Right that's it!
Tanya charges towards Val, who gravs Tanya hair and pulls it, a vicious bitch fight begins infront of a packed pub.
Richard: Eh! Eh! Break it up! What are you playing at Val!?
James: Defedning herself against your ruddy family! You thing you can control our lives around here! Well here's new for you! You cant! People around here have had ti with you and your stuck up family! If it sisnt Ed causing trouble and lowering the tone of the village its you looking down on us as tough we are not worthy!
Margaret: Here! Here!
Richard: Well at least what i know what you all think! You should be grateful! If it wasnt for me and my "stuck up family" youd have no homes or buisnesses! And this public exhibiton is the thanks teh Taylors get! Well thank you very much!
Richard storms out. Everyone looks ashamed
awww lol. god part :)
JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Richard is sitting alone, shirt rolled up, some buttons rundone, he is stroking hus hair with his hands, he has a bottle of whisky by him and hes looking at a photo albumn... he begins to open a bottle of pills
Nick: Dad! What the hell are you doing!?
Richard: Whats it look like?
Richard quickly tries to knock back the pills, but Nick grabs them of him in a rage.
Nick: No! I'm not going to let you do it! Christ dad why!?
Richard: What have i got to live for!?
Nick: Dont come that Dad! You've had a bad week...we all have them...but we dont try and top our selves! It'll pass! You'll get over it! Your not this weak dad, your a Taylor...and we are made of stronger stuff than this!
Richard: But...
Nick: No buts... is this the way? Leaving me and Tanya to cope with everything on our own..?
Richard: Your better off without me...no one likes me...you dont, i heard it all, and i doubt Tanya thinks highly of me since Ed left...and well that peformance down the Rum showed that that lot dont give a toss about me! I've got nothing to live for Nick...id had an unhappy life...
Nick: No you havent...youve had 3 children and a sucessful carreer!
Richard: Yes but ever since your mother left me, all those years ago ive neve been happy! Ive just had to move on with life...marry Dorren... provide for the family...
Nick: Exactly! You've moved on...so why not do it again!?
Richard: Maybe i dont want to Nick...maybe i cant anymore...
Richard's phone rings...
Nick: Well arent you going to answer it...?
Richard looks at it...
Richard: It's ed....
Richard picks up the phone
Baymoore Holiday Park
Ed: Meet me at the holiday park...now....
Baymoore Holiday Park - Night
Nicks car pulls up outside the entrance. Richard gets out, Nick starts to.
Richard: No Nick, i think id better deal with this on my own...
Nick: Okay then, i'll be outside if you need me...
Richard heads into one of the caravans, from the corner of another one peers Craig with an evil look on his face.
Richard: Ed? (Ed appears) Oh Edward thank god your safe, we've all been worried about you...
Ed: Look dad i havent got time for the trisha nonscene, i need to get out of the country now and i need money...
Richard: Well why didnt you say...i mean i havent got anything on me...
Ed: Typical! Even in my hour of need you cant give me what i want!
Richard: Its not by choice, i didnt know you needed, you didnt say...
Ed: Christs sake dad! Ive come here at a risk! Craig wan ts me dead, ive been escaping his men for 2 weeks now! He knows im here, and if i dont get out soon he's going to kill me!!
Richard: Look Ed, there has to be another way to sort this mess out...
Ed: There isnt, you can make deals with men like Craig! He's a madman, if he wants me dead then he'll sure as hell make sure i end up with a bullet in my gut! Im tried of running dad! I need a new life!
Richard: look....(hands over credit card) have this...it'll do for now...and well we'll have to sort something out at a later date...
Ed grabs it and attempts to leave the caravan
Richard: Look soon I'm sorry for everything, if i could turn back the clock i would, made life better for you...
Ed: You cant change how you feel! You've told me exactly what you think of me! You never loved me like you never loved mom! So why would you want to have a relationship with me!
Richard: If you listened to me!
Ed: I dont want to listen! Its not just Craig im running away from It's you! You and the ruddy Taylor family! Im sick of it! Its nothing but trouble! I need to find my way in life...without you, or Nick or Tan...infact stick the card (throws back at richard) ive had it with life...if i get caught i get caught, im better off dead...
Ed walks out, Richard is on the floor in tears. Ed walks down by a caravan and Craig grabs him. Ed kicks him in the groin and runs off towards his car.
Craig: Your a dead man Ed! (into phone) get him...
Ed gets into his car and speeds off. A car with Craigs men in is in pursuit. Nick beeps the horn and Richard runs out
Nick: Quick Dad! They are after Ed!
Richard rushes in.
Craig: Youd better order his reif Richard, becuase hes a dead man!
Devon Roads
A deadly carcash is in pursuit against Ed and Craigs men. Fast sppeds, swerving for pedestrians. Richards car is following them.
Richard: I hope he makes it...
Baymoore Parade
The Baymoore residents are around a huge christmas tree, singing christmas carols. The cars come down the parade, Ed swerves, but Craigs mens car hits the tree, residents move out the way, the tree falls down, everyone screaming. The gangsters start to shoot at Eds car, Richards car approcahes the bay. Ed revs up the car and speeds down the pier, spectuactulary crashing into the water. The car sinks.
Richard runs up the pier where his son has just commited suicide
Richard: No!!!!!!!!!! Edward!!!!!! No!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
The reisdents all rush down onto the beach, Nick runs to his had, who falls to his knees in greif.
Richard: Come back Ed! Please come back!!!!!!!!
end of the 2005 episodes! Hope you've enjoyed Devon Seas this year, it will return in 06!
:eek: Blimey!
nothing like a death at crimbo! :cheer: and you have to wait until janary to see what happens next! :pQuote:
Originally Posted by Abi
wow!! that was brill!!
Oh my gosh what a fantastic episode that is certainly the best episode i have read in a long time. Suicide on Chritsmas Day only you could do something as daring and spectacular as that i cannot wait till the new year but i have a funny feeling ed could still be alive???
I have to say bondboffin that was absolutley fantasic! Poor richard. Well done on a absolutley fantastic episode.