aww that is so sweet! more soon please :cheer:
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aww that is so sweet! more soon please :cheer:
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Please write more soon
The next parts on its way,sorry,but there's not much action in it.More of a dream.
Part Fifteen
It was Saturday and Rachel and Joanne were out having fun.Demi really wished that she could join them. Keith and Rosie were in the kitchen and Darren and Demi were watching a kids film called 'The Green Train and the Blue Car,'.Well Demi wasn't really watching it she was thinking about Leo.This was a huge crush she had,one like never before she couldn't stop thinking about him and most nights she'd have dreams about him.
Last nights dream was scary,not a nightmare,just scary.Demi had a dream that her,Jo and Rach were in school,on a normal day.Then Leo walked up to her and Rach started flirting with him,all of a sudden he started kissing Demi.
Demi grinned,that had totally been the best part of the dream.
"What ya smilin' at?"Asked Darren,in a rather irrated voice.
"Ohh...am I grounded from smilin' an' bein' 'appy now?"
"Well no..."Darren looked puzzled."Oh,I don't care,whateva!"
In the dream once Leo and Demi stopped kissing they both confessed that they fancied each other rotten.Unfortuneately though,Darren had spotted the pair and rushed over and punched Leo.He then started beating Leo up.Leo was left with quite a few bruises,but he still managed to lock lips with his new girlfriend once more.Then Ray came running in the school gates with a huge knife and stabbed his own son.Demi screamed out in horror.Leo was rushed to hospital,then was announced Dead.Demi was,of course Devasted.
Near the end of the Dream was after Leo's funeral,everything had happened in one day.Demi went home to a family that disowned her.Every last one,her Mum,Mickey,Darren,even her Dad who was really disappointed in her even though she'd just suffered a terrible loss,they threw her out onto the streets.
Demi went to Rachels house,but Rachel also hated her for taking away the boy she fancied,even though Leo and Demi were only together about half an hour,Rach blamed Demi for his death.
Demi was deeply saddened by the actions of the people close to her but expected Jo to be on her side.But she was wrong,Jo agreed with Rach and said that she had acted like a terrible friend.
So Demi had to drag herself back to the Millers' and sat down,on the cold floor outside their flat,she felt so empty.Then Ray appeared and started to call her a 'Tart murderer' he repeated it louder and louder until it was screaming out in Demi's head.
Then a black hole appeared and a cold ice hand grabbed Demi and pulled her into the hole,which swallowed her up.
Demi couldn't remember the rest of the dream,though she was sure she'd woke up after that.The thought of the dreams events made her shiver.
"You alrigh'?"Asked Darren.
Demi could tell he was trying to appologise for being so cold earlier."Yeah."She said,not too sure of herself."I s'pose I am."
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I know that wasn't much of a 'cliffhanger' and I am sorry if anyone found it boring,though I was out of ideas and tried my best.
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its brillant! well done post more soon please
denfinately :thumbsup: that was the best part yet!! what a terrible dream for demi though ... awww
more soon please!
please post more soon! i cant wait!
post more soon please! its brillant!