Again fantastic stuff Bry and Abi.. I am totally gripped. Way Way better than eastenders and I love my EE
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Again fantastic stuff Bry and Abi.. I am totally gripped. Way Way better than eastenders and I love my EE
INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - DAY
Amy and Val are standing in the kitchen drinking coffe...Amy is loading the washing machine, including Patrick's coat from yesterday.
Amy: Things are finally looking up for change Val, its weird, i feel like a little girl again...
Val: Thats good to hear babes...
Val feels guilty of not telling her friend about Patrick's affair. Amy finishes loading the washine machine, she switches it on and it begins to wash the clothes.
Amy: Its like...ever since we come back from that holiday hes been a different bloke...its like we were kids again.. im lovin it Val!
Val: Once a cheat always a cheat thats what I say...
Amy: Oh no Val...im sure he has changed this time... i think hes realised hes getting too old for bed hopping with girls half his age... he knows that me and him are forever...
Val: Yeah okay babes...but he'll hurt you again... im sure of it...
Amy: (Jokes) Why? Know something i dont do you?
Val finds it uneasy lying to her friend.
Val: Of course not babes...im just saying...you know what hes capable off.
Amy: Yeah and if he ever cheats again I'll chop his knackers off! :D
The pair laugh. The washing machine makes a funny rattling noise and stops working. The pair look on at the machine in bafflement...
Will Amy Find Natasha's Earing?
Amy is starting to drive me nuts.. and how big is this earring to make so much racket in the washer :rotfl: Surely it isn't larger than Pat Evans ear bobs :p Val should fess up, but again if she does will she fess up for blackmailing old Patrick ???
INT. NICKY'S FLAT - DAY
Patrick is lying on the bed in his underpants.
Patrick: God how much longer do you expect me to wait for this suprise...
Natasha: Just a seocnd longer babes...
Natasha walks in dressed in a tight superwoman swimming costume. Patrick wolf whistles to her.
Natasha: You ready for take off Superman!? :p
Patrick pulls Natasha onto the bed, the pair start to wrestle around the bed giggling and having fun.
Natasha: God this feels so right... i cant wait for us to be an item...
Patrick: I told you babes...you'll never be mroe to me than the other woman...
Natasha: We'll see about that....
Patrick: What?
Natasha: Did Amy find my earing yet?
Patrick gets up off the bed in shock.
Patrick: You what!?
Natasha: My earing... i accidently lost it in your coat pocket :p
Patrick: What!? Are you mad!?
Natasha: I'm mad for you... and I'll do anything to get you...
Patrick rushes to put his clothes on...
Patrick: How could you be so stupid!? I swear if Amy find out...
Patricks rushes out of the flat. Natasha likes her lips in triumph.
Natasha: Superwoman saves the day :lol:
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - NIGHT
Tanya is alone in the cottage. She is watching the Paul O Grady Show, the phone rings. She jumps out of her skin but answers it.
She doesnt speak, but hears heavy breathing...
Tanya: Will you stop this! Whoever it is...please just leave me alone!
Tanya puts down the phone and curls up in a ball, she starts to shake nervously. Tanya sees a figure cut across the living room window, and then the sound of a milk bottle being knocked over outside.
Tanya jumps out of her skin again. She runs to the front door and opens it. She picks up the milk bottle and looks around.
Tanya: Just go away!
Tanya runs inside a nervous wreck. The camera zooms out to Gregg, who is waiting around the corner with a sinister look on his face.
Tanya gets a phone call when shes home alone, she shouts down the phone, hears a noise outside. She goes outside and screams. In the distance Gregg stares at her and smiles.
ooh scary stuff! and i cant wait for natasha and patrick's affair to be exposed - hopefully it will anyway
Brilliant stuff yet again!! I so wish this was on my tv, but in other ways, its even better imagining this happening......
Damnnnnnn I am scared.. I am afraid to take the dog out for a walk now, Gregg is a real bad boy,, Bry you do real well with the sinister stuff,, u go baby !!!!!!!!:cheer:
INT: HARVEY'S HOUSE
Mandy is struggling to drag a bag across the living room, to the sofa. Craig walks up behind her, picks it up, and takes it for her...
Mandy: Thanks for that...
Craig: Look, i'll give ya a hand...
Craig tries to put his arm around her waist, and help her to the sofa. She screams in pain
Mandy: ****ing hell Craig! What you trying to do?!
Craig: well a thanks wouldn't go amiss!
Mandy: Thanks for nearly breaking my other ribs you mean?!
Craig shakes his head, and sits on the armchair opposite her. She struggles down, and eases herself into the sofa. Mandy looks over into the kitchen...
Craig: What d'ya want? A drink...? coffee yeah? Am i right...?
Mandy: Craig look..
Craig: Its tea aint it. Right, ok...
Craig walks over to the kitchen. Mandy calls him back...
Mandy: Stop all this. It aint suiting you, ya know.
Craig: What..?
Mandy: Trying to be all supportive all of a sudden. Its not you, so stop pretending it is! If i want a drink, then i'd do what i've always done, and get it myself- broken ribs or no broken ribs.
INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - DAY
Patrick runs up the stairs and into the kitchen, where Amy is making herself a sandwich. Patrick stares at her...wondering if she has coottoned on...
Amy: Afternoon babes... fancying a sandwich?
Patrick: Erm..Amy...
Amy: What do you want on it... maybe...Earing!?
Amy throws the earing at Patrick.
Patrick: Look Amy let me explain...
Amy: I always knew you were stupid but to leave clues so ruddy obvious as that around!!!! I just cant believe you Patrick!!! Just when i thought that you and me were on the up... you have to bed some cheap little slapper!
Patrick: I havent worn this jacket in ages...it isnt recent...
Amy: And that makes it all the better does it!?
Patrick: Look babes...you know im a changed man now...and i dont want anythign to change that...
Amy: Earlier on...id have believed all that bollocks...but now... this earing... it might not be recent...but its reminded me what your really like... i cant control you... because you are just a lying cheating scumbag.
Amy lowers the breadknife down to trouserline. He has a look of horro on his face
Amy: I dont ever wanna be messed with again!! You understand me Patrick!? Becuase if you do... ill be having a sasauge sarnie instead of ham salad you get me!?
Patrick nervously nods...
Amy: Now i know your a cheat... and i know your probably having it off with some floozy at the moment...but it stops now... im sick of being the ruddy mug Patrick! And if you carry on... then i swear thats the end to you and me... i'll divorce you..
sausage sarnie!!!!! :rotfl: love it!
INT: HARVEY'S HOUSE
Mandy is in the bedroom, packing clothes into a case, whilst holding her side...
Craig: What the hell do you think you're doing?!
Mandy: Get a grip, Craig. what does it look like?
Craig: Mandy dont you even think about...
Mandy: Oh yeah, thats it. Dictate every single bloody thing i do, again and again, as per usual!
Craig: Well if you stopped being so pathetic and packing all your ****ing stuff, then maybe i'd stop!
Mandy: This aint just about now. This is about always. you're not the person i married- face that, and just leave me to pack in peace
Craig: No way (shouting) No way are you leaving me! Now get your ****ing **** down those stairs and forget about this.
Mandy: Thats right, Craig. Get all melodramatic, and drag this out longer than it would have done...
Craig: Well what d'ya expect?!
Mandy drags the bag down the stairs, Craig chases after her...
Craig: Stop being so stupid, Mandy. You can't leave me!
Mandy: Forget it, Craig...
Mandy opens the door in rage. To her shock there is someone standing outside. A woman dressed in designer clothes, carrying too large suitcases, she is wearing an austalian hat, she turns around with a confident look on her face and looks to kill for.
Leah: Hiya sis...long time no see
Oooh the sister from Oz eh!? Is she going to sort Craigs backside out then?! Hope so!!
Great stuff again guys - keep it coming......
INT: HARVEY'S HOUSE
Leah is standing, with one hand on her hip, and one out right inspecting her nails. She bends down seductivly, to adust her fish net tights, then stands back up, and ruffles her hair. Craig is standing in the kitchen, making coffee, looking back at her every few seconds. Mandy is with Leah...
Mandy: You should have said you were coming back, Leah! Honestly, just turning up like this!
Leah: Well hun, i had to leave in a hurry. But now i'm here and (laughs)... i'm here to stay
Mandy: Well...erm. what d'ya mean? What happened?
Leah: Ryan. Well... (looks to check Craig isn't looking, then says slightly quieter)...he was cheating on me, with some slut. He was cheating on...me! I couldn't beleive it.... i mean, come on. What could she have that i dont?!
Mandy: couldn't say...
Leah: Anyway, i left the stupid *******, and thought i'd come back to see my big sis! (sees her obviously painfull side) and it looks like i've come just in the nick of time.
Leah gestures to Craig disapprovingly. She then sits down, pulls out a diamond covered mirror frm her gucci handbag, and reapplies some lipgloss. Craig comes in with some coffee, and places it in front of her.
Leah: Dont drink coffee, love. Bad for the teeth, you know? No wait, you wouldn't, would you?
He picks up the coffee, and takes it back to the kitchen, obviously annoyed. He pulls Mandy's arm as he does so...
Craig: How do we stand then? Last thing i know, you were about to leave me...
Mandy: There is no we. End of.
INT: RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT
Patrick is pacing the flat, checking his watch every few seconds for the time. He walks to the curtain, and peers out the window. He spots Natasha walk to the side door to the flat. He goes to the mirror, checks himself, then opens the door as she is walking up the stairs. She walks in and immeditaly kisses him passionatly...
Natasha: Hey big boy...getting keen to see me, are we?!
Patrick pulls away from Natasha, and stands back at the window, looking out. Natasha walks up behind him, and puts her hand on his shoulder...
Natasha: Whats wrong, Patrick...?
Patrick: I can't do this anymore
Natasha: Can't do what..?
Patrick turns to face Natasha
Patrick: This. You and me. We can't carry on like this anymore. I'm sorry but..
Natasha: You want to go public? Well you know how i feel about it, need you ask more?!
Patrick: No, you're getting this all wrong... You and me. We're over Natasha.
Natasha takes a step back
Natasha: What?!
Patrick: I can't lose Amy, not for you at least. She's my wife, i need to stick by her and...
Natasha: What d'ya mean "not for you at least"?! What are you trying to tell me Patrick?!
Patrick: I dont WANT to be with you Natasha. This has been fun, dont get be wrong, but thats all it was. Fun and sex. Now that stops. Because i'm married, and i can't lose Amy. Is that blunt enough for you?
Natasha: But i thought that we...
Patrick: You thought wrong. "we" dont exsist anymore, Natasha. Not now, not ever.
Natasha tries to retaliate, but can't find the words. She whispers under for breath...
Natasha: You meant the world to me Patrick...
Patrick doesn't hear, and she storms out.
INT. HARVEY'S HOUSE - AFTERNOON
Leah and Mandy are in the living room. Craig walks past them, putting on his coat.
Craig: I'm off down the garage...leave you two ladies to catch up on all those years that youve lost since you pissed off to Australia...
Leah gives Craig a menacing look.
Leah: Best place for you... anywhere but here...
Craig laughs it off as stupidity and leaves the house.
Mandy: You know Leah, you really shouldnt start a fight with him... hes a dangerous man...
Leah: Oh dont.... your making me shake in me Jimmy Choos... trust me Mand' i find Lala more menacing than that pillock...
Mandy: (laughs) I tell you what...it certainly makes a change having you back around the place...lets hope its for keeps this time...
Leah: The way i left it...i can safely assure you i wont be going back down the Ozzyland for the forseebale future...
Mandy: Oh lucky them, did they get the Leah Kage treatement?
Leah: First hand, hardcore...
The pair laugh. Mandy gets up off the seat. She gives out a sound of discomfort due to her broken ribs
Leah: You ok Mand?
Mand: Oh yeah im fine...just me old age...
Leah: For frigs sake your only 45...whats really up eh?
Mandy lifts up her top to show Leah the bruised body.
Leah: Christ Mand! Did you have a hit and run with a sumo wrestler or someat!?
Mandy: 3 broken ribs... it kills...
Leah: Yeah and ten guesses who's behind it...
Mandy: Look Leah...please just leave it... we could all do without the aggro...
Leah: Aggro!? Well tough...hes gonna get it! Im not gonna let him smack my Sister Around like a Pita Bread! I'm gonna give him a peice of my mind.
Leah grabs her Guchi handbag, swings it over her shoulder and marches out of the house confidently.
Go Leah!!!! Yey - Is she gonna sort Craig out!???! I hope so, he needs sorting thinking he can treat Mandy like that...
Mandy mandy, why didn't you just walk , take your sister to your mum's and Amy, you're an idiot, Natasha is going to tell you everything.
excellent job again abi and bry
INT. HARVEY’S MOTORS - NIGHT
Leah’s high hells drag across the concrete floor of the garage. Craig looks up from his desk, and wolf whistles.
Leah: Oh for Christ’s sake… anyone would think you were 20 years old…
Craig: I am where it counts…
Leah pulls a face in disgust to this comment.
Leah: Is that all you men think of…
Craig: The bottom line? Yes… so do what do I owe this pleasure?
Leah: Mandy…
Craig: How did I guess. .. she been telling tales on me?
Craig laughs mockingly. Leah gets angry and kicks him in the balls with her high hells, he falls to the floor in pain.
Craig: You crazy bitch! What did you do that for!?
Leah: No one messes with Mandy!!! Not even you!!!
Craig: What the…
Leah: Broken ribs! You ruddy animal! You should have your ruddy tackle ripped off!
Craig: And you gonna do that then?
Leah: Don’t tempt me… I’m a lot different to the little sister you saw before I went to Sydney Craig… I’ve toughened up… I know the rules… I live in the real world… I’ve dealt with bigger ****s than you….
Craig: You’d be stupid to mess with me…
Leah: You don’t scare me with your empty threats and pafetic whining. Al Capone!? More like Al Murray!
Craig tries to get up, Leah kicks him in the shin so he falls back down onto the floor.
Leah: You want to know why I left Sydney in a hurry?
Craig: (Uninterested) Enlighten me…
Leah: Caught Ryan with some cheap little tart… I gave her a pasting…shes in intensive care now… and as for him… I cut up his clothes and burned down his house…
Craig has a look of shock on his face…
Craig: You’re a ruddy mad woman!!!
Leah: No I’ve got it switched on up here…(points to head) I just don’t let morons like you and Ryan ruin my life… and my family and friends… you don’t mess with me do you understand!?
Craig: I’ve never been scared of a woman in my life, and I don’t intend to start now…
Leah: Well you’d better get scared matey…because if you ever hurt Mandy again, the police will be the least of your worries.
Leah walks out of the garage, leaving a dazed Craig on the floor.
INT: HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE
The house is empty, and silent, untill a few seconds later, when a mobile rings on the coffee table. The camera zooms into it, the screen reads...
Gregg Ringing
It rings out...
1 Missed Call. Read?
The camera zooms back out, Gregg forces the backdoor open, and walks into the house, with a satisfied smile on his face
Gregg: Now, now, now, what do we have here...?
Gregg sits on the sofa calmly, and flicks through magazines on the table. He spots a handbag, and looks through it...
Gregg: Nice purse, Tanyas a suppose... i'll have that...
He walks over to the fireplace, and takes a photo album off the top, and puts both that, and the purse in his back pocket. He goes to walk out, when he spots the phone on the table...
Gregg: 1 missed call?....Nasty bit of evidence that could have been!!
Gregg deletes the memory of his phone call, puts the phone in his pocket, and walks out the back door with a satisfied smile.
Something seriously sinister about Gregg - oh my, don't like him.....bad feeling
Loving leah already - giving Craig just what he deserves!!!
Ok Gregg is scaring me. Poor Tanya!.. Leah, you go girl, not afraid of the big bad wolf and standing up for your sister.. :cheer::cheer:
Leah kicks ***, I am soooooooo glad some one beat him up and it was by a girl !!!!:cheer: Craig is gonna be limping around for some time :rotfl:
Gregg is like the proverbal boogy man, you are scared to be around him,
Go leah...go leah oh yeah someone showed that no good rotten Craig who is boss loving Devon Seas as always
INT. HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE - DAY
Leah walks into the room dressed in a nightie with a strong coffe. Mandy looks up at her.
Mandy: What time do you call this eh? It's nearly middday!
Leah: Yeah well the thought of Fern Britton on my TV is enough to make a grown man cry...
Mandy laughs at this
Leah: So then got any plans today sis?
Mandy: Erm well id best be going to do the cleaning around the Rum in a bit...pay the wages you know...
Leah: Let Craig do that for a change... where is the fat pillock anyways?
Mandy: He's in Exceter...which means he's at his brothel...
Leah: (chokes in cofee) What!? He has a brothel!?... Just as i thought that pig couldn't get any worse!!!
Mandy: Trust me Leah...after all these years married to him...nothing suprises me anymore...
Leah: Why do you stay with him Mand!?
Mandy: Who else can i be with at my age!? The fat ugly cleaner... i know im lucky to have Craig... a comfortable home for the family... i can live to deal with it
Leah: Yeah but you shouldn't have to live with it! If he was my husband id have him in a shallow grave by now!!! It makes me sick to see the way he treats you Mand...
Mandy: Well its not a barrel of laughs either for me Leah
Leah: Im not saying it is... it's just...i dont understand...why havent you divorced him by now!?
Mandy: You want the truth?... I'm scared... of what he'd do to me... of what life id live without him...this is all ive ever known... i dont know the consequences if i did it...
Leah: You wouldnt be alone Mand', what ever decison you made id be right there besides you... scared of Craig!? Dont be.... if you want to divorce him I'll help you...
Fantastic... maybe Mandy can leave if she has leah's guts
INT: HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE
Gary is sitting on the sofa watching TV. Tanya walks up behind him, sipping a cup of coffee.
Gary: Thanks for offering to make me one!!
Tanya: You're welcome :p There's no milk left anyway, so tough :p...
Gary: Give us some money, and i'll go get some more, if you want...
Tanya: Fair enough...
Tanya picks up her bag from the table, and looks through it, paniking.
Gary: Tanya? Whats up?
Tanya: Its not here. My purse- its gone missing...
Gary: Its got to be around here somewhere...
Tanya: This isn't funny anymore, Gary. Thats the third thing thats gone missing in this house.... my phone and photo album aren't around anywhere either!! Gary- whats going on?!
INT:ANDREWS HOUSE
Claire walks into the room, with a big bowl of melted chocolate. They both take a scewer of fruits, and dip it in, while talking...
Claire: Its funny how things change, aint it...
Vicky: What d'ya mean?
Claire: Well a few years back, when we were teenagers or something, this would just be normal wouldn't it? Now its...
Vicky: Babyish?
Claire: (laughs) yeah, a little!!
Claire sighs, shes obviously got something on her mind...
Vicky: Come on, Vicks. Whats up? your not normally like this...
Claire: Its just....how do you know when that sparks gone?
Vicky: Spark?
Claire: Yeah... the spark in a relationship... you know what i mean...
Vicky: I dunno.... is there something you want to tell me? About Romeo?
Claire: Its just... i dont know. He's not the person i first met...
Vicky: Has he hurt you?
Claire: Sort of... i dont know anymore. Claire- i think i'm falling for someone else...
Vicky: Who?!
Claire: Chris... i just can't get him out of my head...
The camera zooms out, to show Chris, who is standing at the top of the stairs. He's been listening to everything...
nice stuff as usual bry and abi
claire: oops
leah: go girl!
tanya: :eek:
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DONT FORGET TO VOTE FOR DEVON SEAS IN THE SCRIPT AWARDS!
Claire you idiot, can't believe you are falling for him..
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - DAY
Lunch time. The pub is busy with the lunchtime drinkers. Claire is serving someone a drink.
Claire: There you go..
Claire gives a punter a drink. He gives her the correct change. Claire goes to the till and put sthe money in, Patrick is doing the same.
Claire: God it's busy this lunchtime aint it?
Patrick: Well they've all flocked to see me and my sexy body :p
Claire: The two blind woman over there maybe, but no one else...
There is a commotion by the doorway, Chris bursts trough the doors carrying a large picnic basket.
Claire: What the...!?
Chris: Thought i'd take you out for the afternoon...
Claire: But I'm working?
Chris: Oh come on, everyone deserves a break every now and again.
Claire: Yeah but...
Chris: Look Paddy mate you dont mind if she has the afternoon off do you?
Patrick: No, go ahead, have fun...
Claire: I'm not sure you know...
Chris: Oh come on! I'm not taking no for an answer... get your coat you've pulled.
Chris drags a slighty happy Claire out of the pub.
BAYMOORE BEACH
Claire is sitting on the beach, blind folded. Chris is getting out foods for a picnic...
Claire: Can i take this off yet?
Chris: Wait a sec.... ok, now you can.
Claire takes the blind fold off, looks at the picnic, and smiles.
Claire: Chris... you did all this for me?
Chris: Course i did....:o
Claire: awww, thanks
Claire hugs Chris. She then sits back down, and looks at the food.
Claire: this is great, but its bloddy cold out here!!
Chris: Tell me about it! Here, 'ave my jacket
Chris stands and takes off his jacket, and puts in over her shoulders. Claire laughs as he does this..
Chris: Whats so funny?!
Claire: You tickled me when you did that!!
Chris: Oh yeah? And your ticklish are you?!
Claire doesn't say anything, just looks at him, and tries not to laugh. Chris jumps over to her, and tickles her. They roll over on the beach...
Claire: No!! Chris, stop!! Argh!!
Chris stops tickling her. They look into each others eyes- Claire is still lying on the ground, Chris is over her. He moves in, and kisses her tenderly. Claire pulls away...
Chris: Whats wrong? I thought we both wanted this....?
Claire: I do... i like you. I like you a lot. But its not fair on Romeo.... i cant hurt him like that. Sorry Chris...
oh no! poor claire, she must be kinda confused!
i hope she doesn't fall for chris's charms. he seems like a bad egg to me.
Mmm poor Claire.. her boyfriend is ignoring her and his best mate is spoiling her.. poor woman must not know what to do
Uh ohhhhhhhh Claire better be CAREFULLLLLLLLL, Chris is leading her down a path right into his bed, Claire is a bit "confused" since Romeo isn't giving her the attention, so shes sort of "liking" the attention but not wanting to fall in a pit......
THE SINGH'S HOUSE- Morning
Sanjita walks down the stairs, while wrapping her dressing gown around her. She picks up the post from the doorway, and take it into the Kitchen, where Kash and Ruby are talking.
Kash: Morning
Sanjita: Is it?!
Sanjita yawns and looks through the post. She chucks most of it on the kitchen, and looks at a mail shot...
Ruby: Whats that...?
Sanjita: Junk, as usual. You know, i swear they deliberatly put this through the door to annoy me...
Ruby: (laughs) I doubt it! Whats it about then?
Sanjita: Marbal. A new place, its opening soon. Looks like an alrite place, doesn't it?
Sanjita shows Ruby the picture on the mailshot. Kash smurks, and sees Sanjitas disaproving face...
Kash: How can you think that looks alright? Its just a glorified hell hole in the middle of Devon! Honestly, what do you think they're deliberatly trying to force all the tramps around here, or is that just a bi-effect?!
Sanjita: Honestly Kash...
Ruby: Well i think it looks good. Heaven knows we need somewhere around here where we can shake our bootys!
Sanjita and Ruby both laugh, Kash rolls his eyes...
Ruby: Well i'm up for going. Looks like a laugh.
HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - Day
Gary is sitting on the sofa, Tanya is pacing the room...
Tanya: Something is seriously wrong here. I can't place my finger on it... but somethings not right...
Gary: You're reading too much into this...
Tanya: No i'm not!!
Gary: Look, i'm sure theres a resonable explaination for all this...
Tanya: What? For my phone and purse going missing? And my personal photos?! Get a grip, Gary. Those type of thigns dont just vanish into thin air!
Gary stands up, and puts his arms on Tanya
Gary: Calm down Tanya. Dont get yourself worked up about something, that you dont even know for certain happened....
Tanya: Gary... i just dont know anymore...Its just...
Tanyas eyes well up with tears. Gary wipes them, and says calmly...
Gary: Just relax, Tanya. Dont get upset about all this...(gets some money from his wallet) Here, take this. Go shopping, and have some fun...
Tanya: but Gary that wont help...
Gary: It'll take your mind off things. Go on, have a laugh
At the shop Val asks Sanjita is shes gonna go to the opening, she says she will. Kash has a go at her, she tells him to get lost he cant control her life.
INT. SINGH & SON CONVIENCE STORE - DAY
The shop has a few customers browsing the eisles. Snajita is doing a stock check, Val bumps into her.
Val: Alright Sanjita babes...how you doing?
Sanjita: Val...erm...yeah...im fine thans....you?
Val: Could be better...ya know how it is... so then you going to Marbal's opening night?
Sanjita: Probably not...Kash wont let me...
Val: Stuff Kash... you know you have the time of your life on our girly nigths out... go with you heart not your head...ive found that works best for me over the years! :lol:
Sanjita: Yeah i suppose it wont do me no harm...
Val: Good I'll see you tonight then... i'd best be off...go up to Torquey...
Val walks off out of the shop. Kash walks over to Sanjita
Kash: Did i just hear that Valarie Andrews asking you to that den of iniquity?
Sanjita: Yes and...?
Kash: And i dont want my wife socialising with cheap harlots and drunken hooligans... you will not be going to this "Marbal" place....
Sanjita: Yes i will Kash.....you dont control me you know...
Kash: Im your husband! You should do what I say!!!
Sanjita: Your wife, not your slave! I have a mind of my own Kash and if i want to go with my friends to a nightclub then I'll do just that! :angry:
Kash: Sanjita!
Sanjita: I'm not having this argument...you dont control my life...full stop. ...Now I'm off to get ready for tonight... so I'll leave you to do the stock check
Sanjita walks off, despite the look of disgust on Kash's face.