fab! :D lol about the camera thing! why do i have a feeling alfie has something to do with the thing that goes wrong? or maybe evil den comes back?! more very soon please, cant wait
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fab! :D lol about the camera thing! why do i have a feeling alfie has something to do with the thing that goes wrong? or maybe evil den comes back?! more very soon please, cant wait
:eek: I can't believe i didn't now you had posted more :eek:
Awww trying for a ickle Baybeee :wub: And schrissie why are you going out for air, don't. And i have got a nasty feeling what might be at home waiting for jake.
More soooon please my lovely munchkin, for me 'cause you missed me! :p
'Cause I missed you..
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Twenty Four
"Alfie." Chrissie called after him.
He stopped and faced her. They hadn't spoken since the morning after they'd betrayed Jake.
"Can we talk?" She asked him.
"Yeah, yeah sure." He said, nodding.
They went and sat on Arthur's bench.
"Please don't tell Jake about what happened." She whispered.
"What made you think that I was going to?"
"I don't know. But I really care about him and I don't want him to get hurt."
"I know. And what happened was a mistake."
"I never meant to kiss you. I guess I was upset, what with Jake proposing. And what happened after that.." She said, trailing off.
"It's ok. I'm not going to tell him."
"Thankyou."
She stood up and turned around, ready to head back to the club. Jake was standing there. She gasped.
"How could you?" He shouted.
"I'm so sorry Jake." She said, her voice wavered as if she was about to cry.
"And you." He said pointing to Alfie. "You're family. Why did you do it?"
"I'm sorry Jake." He said, getting to his feet.
"You knew how much I cared about her and you still did it."
He punched Alfie, causing him to fall to the ground. He turned back to Chrissie.
"Do you really hate me that much to keep leading me on?"
"I'm so sorry Jake. Please forgive me."
"I can't."
He walked back to the house. Chrissie dropped her head and began to cry.
"I'm sorry." She whispered.
brill! :D omg i cant believe jake heard that! more very very soon please
Awww thankoooo :wub: But what :eek: How? no. Jake come back she loves you Jaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaake. Make it all betterer please. xQuote:
Originally Posted by Amber
Ok.. I'm not going to make it better. I'm going to make it worse. Sorry and I'm dedi-ing this to Layne 'cause you gave me the idea :)
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Twenty Five
Jake unlocked the back door and sat on a chair at the kitchen table. He shut his eyes, trying to forget. Tears escaped from his tightly closed eyelids. He heard footsteps.
"Hello loverboy. I hope you don't mind, I helped myself." Den said, sipping his cup of tea.
Jake looked at him. Den saw the tears on his face.
"Oh dear. Have you and that cheating slag I call my wife had a spat?"
He remembered what he'd told Chrissie earlier, "I promise you that I won't let anyone hurt you. Ever. And if he comes near you I'll kill him."
"What do you want?" He spat.
"I'm just here to claim what's rightfully mine."
"You talk about her as if you own her." Jake said, disgusted.
"Where is she?"
"She's out."
"I'll go and find her then."
Jake stood up and held Den by the throat.
"No. You're not going anywhere."
He released his hand from Den's neck.
"You're a fighter I'll give you that."
"Shut up." Jake shouted as he punched him. "You know, you put Chrissie through so much pain. And every minute of every day, I've seen the hurt in her eyes. I'm gonna make you pay for what you've done."
great! :D i knew den would come back, hope chrissie and jake get back together and that jake keeps his promise and kills den lol! more very soon please
Did i ? :confused: Oh yeh i vaguley remember :lol: ! Thankoooo!Quote:
Originally Posted by Amber
And Jake how ever much i'd love you to kill Den, don't 'couz you'll get in to trouble and stuff, just hurt him then hand him into the police or something. More soon please pumpkin. x
Thankyou x
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Twenty Six
They fought.. And fought.. And fought. Jake punched Den again. He saw the blood running down Den's face. Jake grabbed a knife from the kitchen side and held it to his throat.
"Go on then. Do it." Den shouted.
Jake dropped it.
"Oh what's the matter? Are you too scared?" He laughed.
Jake clenched his fists.
"Just shut up." He screamed and punched Den again, this time much harder so he fell to the floor.
"I've had enough." He continued. "Just go home."
He offered his hand to Den. He took it. Jake saw what was in his other hand. The knife. Den forced it into Jake's stomach. He laughed manically at Jake. He fell to the ground in agony, thinking of only one thing : Chrissie.
fab! :D omg how could you let den stab jake?! more very very very soon please