a bit of an Eastenders twist there but absolutley brilliant.
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a bit of an Eastenders twist there but absolutley brilliant.
INT.SINGH & SONS CONVENIENCE STORE- DAY
Amy is talking to Sanjita who is behind the counter of the shop.
Sanjita: You know, i never thought i'd say this so soon, but it seems everything has got back to normal now, sooner than i thought it would, i mean, it's great being back at home and working with Iqbal in the shop...we've got over what happened with Kash quicker than i thought we all would...
Amy: So now Kash is out the way, you and Iqbal can be together, happily..you could even consider the big M?
Sanjita: Marriage?!
Amy: Why not? Like i said Kash is out of your lives now, your divorcing him aren't you?!
Sanjita: Yeah i am, but i can't see Iqbal asking for my hand in marriage..i love him Ams and he loves me, but i can't see him wanting to be tied down...
The camera pans away from Sanjita and Amy, and we see Iqbal in the back room. He's been listening to Sanjita and Amy's conversation all along, he has a look of contemplation on his face.
INT. ANDREW'S HOUSE- DAY
Craig: Tut tut, who's been a naughty girl then?
Emma takes a nervous gulp, her secret rumbled...
Emma: Look...Craig...what do you want?
Craig: Emma, i know your dirty sordid little secret! You killed your own father didn't you?!
Emma looks at Craig. She suddenly breaks down into tears.
Craig: There's no point crying Emma...it's not gonna bring James back is it?! I just came round here to warn you i know...
Emma: I didn't mean to kill him, i swear i didn't! He was my own father for christ sake, i loved him! I would never have wanted to kill him!
Craig: Well i bet the police won't believe that once they find out that your James's murderer...
Emma: I'm not his murderer!
Craig: Wow, calm down Emma! All i'm saying is that it's not gonna look good on you is it...i mean you ran him over and fled the scene, you didn't even stop to see if he was ok!
Emma: I paniced...i didn't know what to do! I wasn't thinking straight, so i just drove away..
Craig: Oh dear, oh dear Emma...your really are in the **** now aren't you eh!?
Emma: Your not gonna tell the police what you know are you Craig?!
Craig grins at Emma, as Emma continues crying.
Craig: Well that depends....:D
Emma: Depends on what?!
Craig: You've got to pay me off Emma, give me £5,000 and i won't breathe a word about what you did to James!
Emma: You can't do that! You can't just blackmail me!
Craig grabs Emma by the throat.
Craig: I can do what i bloody well like! Now if you don't get me that money, i will shop you to the police and you'll end up locked behind bars....do you understand me?!
Craig lets go of Emma's throat.
Emma: Yeah i understand...i'll get you your money..
Craig: Good, bring it to the garage once you've got it, i'll see myself out..
Craig leaves the Andrews house, a smile on his face. We see Emma, she looks a nervous wreck as she wipes the tears away from her eyes.
INT. BAYMOORE BEACH - DAY
Marcus is sat on the beach, looking out at sea, Iqbal walks over to him.
Iqbal: I've been looking all over for you...
Marus: Oh, alright dad, I just got back from Torquay was having a few moments to myself, want anything?
Iqbal: Just a chat really...
Marcus: What about?
Iqbal: You're mom...(Iqbal sits down beside Marcus) I know she's gone now, but I'll never stop loving her, you know that don't you?
Marcus: Yeah, of course, but why you saying this now?
Iqbal: I've just been having a think, about the future. What do you think of Sanjita?
Marcus: She's great, and if she makes you happy that's all we can ask for...
Iqbal: Yeah, well how would you feel if I proposed to her?
Marcus: (Excited) What, you two gonna get married!?
Iqbal: If she agrees, Well I haven't asked her yet, but only if you're happy with it...
Marcus: Of course I am, go for it dad, mom would only want you to be happy....
Iqbal is pleased, having his son's approval of the marraige proposal.
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - NIGHT
Emma sneaks into her mothers room, she is shaking with nerves from her encounter with Craig.
She begins searching through Val's drawyers for money. No luck. Emma sighs in desperation. She puts her arm under the matress and pulls out a wod of bank notes, she smiles to herself with releif.
Val: What do you think you're doing with that?
Emma jumps out of her skin, and turns around to see Val standing in the doorway, a look of disaproval on her face. Emma takes a nervous gulp, unsure of how to explain herself...
:eek::eek::eek::eek: I would never have expected anyone who's doorbell got rung but Emma!! my god! she killed her dad and poor Richard is going to go down for it!! she can't let that happen
Excellent work guys.. once again you have shocked and stunned me
INT. VALENTINO'S RESTAURANT- NIGHT
Iqbal and Sanjita are having a meal at Valentino's.
Iqbal: Nice meal isn't it?
Sanjita: Very nice...but what i want to know Iqbal is why you've brought me here, it's not like you usually take me anywhere special...:p
Iqbal: Well there is a reason behind it actually...i'm just waiting for the right moment to tell you...
Sanjita: (paranoid) Your not breaking up with me are you?
Iqbal: No of course not Sanjita! I love you!
Sanjita: Well spit it out then, you know i don't like surprises! :D
Iqbal suddenly gets up and goes down on one knee to Sanjita. Sanjita looks at Iqbal and blushes. She whispers to him.
Sanjita: What are you doing?
Iqbal: This is why i've brought you here Sanjita...will you marry me?
Sanjita is beaming. She smiles at Iqbal, delighted over what he's asked her.
Sanjita: Yes! Yes, of course i'll marry you!
Sanjita hugs Iqbal and they both kiss. All the other people in the restaurant have been watching the scene in front of them and clap the happy couple.
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - NIGHT
Val: What do you think you're doing with that?
Emma jumps out of her skin, and turns around to see Val standing in the doorway, a look of disaproval on her face. Emma takes a nervous gulp, unsure of how to explain herself...
Emma: Erm...mum...
Val: Emma...what do you think your playing at!?
Emma: Look, mum...i just need some money...
Val: What the hell for?!
Emma: It's just for...
Val: For what!? How dare you come into my room and try and nick my money?! What the hell's got into you Emma?! Why did you want to pinch my money?!
Emma: I'm just desperate ok...
Val: Were you gonna nick my money and not tell me!?
Emma: Of course i was gonna tell you...i just need some desperately, it's an emergency...
Val: What's the emergency then eh?! Come on, spit it out!
Emma looks at Val and starts crying..
Val: There's no point crying about it Emma! I'm furious, dad's just died and now your out too nick my money! How could you even think about robbing your own mother?!
Emma: I'm so sorry...i'm so so sorry..
Val: I know dad has just died, but you shouldn't react by trying to nick your own mother's money! It's just not right!
Emma: You don't understand mum, i killed dad, i ran him over and killed him!
Val looks at Emma, a look of complete horror on her face.
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - NIGHT
Sanjita and Iqbal walk into the Red Rum, smiles beaming on thier faces.
Amy: You too look happy, what can I get you?
Iqbal: I dont know, how about champagne, all around, for everyone!
Amy: Why, what's the ocassion?
Sanjita waves her hand around, to show off her ring.
Sanjita: We're getting married! :D
Amy gets all excited at the news.
Amy: Oh that's brilliant! Congratulations! I'm dead chuffed for you! :D
Sanjita: I know, I've never been so happy in my life :D
Amy rings the pub bell to get everyone's attention.
Amy: Ladies and gentlemen champagne all around to toast Sanjita and Iqbal's engagement!
There is a buzz around the pub, with people cheering and congratulating the pair. Andonis is sat in the corner of the pub with some of his mates, shocked when he hears this.
Friend: You kept that one quiet 'Don....
Andonis: Yeah well you know, not my place to say is it...
Friend: What do you think about your mom getting married again then?
Friend 2: And to your uncle! Talk about keeping it in the family!
Andonis takes a sip of his point, casting a disaporving look to the happy couple...
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - NIGHT
Emma: You don't understand mum, i killed dad, i ran him over and killed him!
Val looks at Emma, a look of complete horror on her face. Val doesn't speak, she just stares at Emma.
Emma: Mom, did you hear me? I said...
Val: I heard you...
Val walks slowly past Emma, totally stunned, she sits down on the bed, lost for words.
Emma: Please mom, say something...
Val: Like what?
Emma: I dont know! Shout at me! Hit me! Do something!
Val sits there in silence, the blood starting to rage inside her.
Emma: I'm so sorry! I never meant to do it! I was just driving along and I hit him!
Val: And you didn't think to stop!?
Emma: I didn't know it was him at the time...
Val: And that makes it all ok does it!? Either way you'd hit someone Emma! You don't just leave them for dead! We've brought you up better than that!
Emma: If I stopped then I'd have got done for...
Val: Done for what!?
Emma turns away from Val, unable to look her in the face.
Val: (Through gritted teeth) Done for what!?
Emma: Drink driving!
Val: You stupid little bitch!
Val slaps Emma around the face hard, Emma falls onto the floor. Val starts slapping at her, Emma bursts out into tears.
Emma: Please mom! Stop it! Stop it! I'm sorry!
Val: You've killed your father! You bitch! He's gone! Dead! And all thanks to you! You stupid little girl! I hate you!
Emma: I'm so sorry! Please mom, you've got to believe me, you can't make me feel any guilter than I already do!
An emotional Val moves away from Emma, running her hands through her hair in despair, she sniffs away the tears.
Emma: What are we gonna do mom?
Val: "We" aren't gonna do anything..."You" are gonna pack your bags and get the hell out of my house!
Emma: Mom, please! I'm your daughter!
Val: No, not anymore you're not...
Emma: (Emotional) Please mom, You can't do this to me!
Val: (Coldly) Get out...now...