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:crying: James is gone.. I can't believe it.. I still don't think richard did it on purpose.. Hilary and jared is behind this.. How can Callum be so callous.. poor Shell when she finds out about her mum
Cheer Bry and Davey... you have me sitting here crying... had to run out and dry my eye before anyone at work saw.. brilliant piece of writing!!!
INT. JENKINS MANOR- NIGHT
Richard is leaning on his mantlepiece, sipping a glass of expensive wine. Hilary comes in.
Hilary: My god Richard...it's only just gone morning and your starting on a bottle of wine!
Richard: I have good reason too...i think i've done something Hilary, something awful...
Hilary approaches Richard curiously.
Hilary: Like what?
Richard refuses to say anything. Hilary folds her arms in dissaproval.
Hilary: I know there's something wrong Richard...you've been acting off since you got back from the Red Rum...now, what is it? Just spit it out!
Richard: I think i might have killed James Andrews!
Hilary: You what!? You can't be serious!
Richard: Perfectly serious Hilary..i've been so stupid, so silly! I was drinking for christ sake! I woke up at a service station with a bottle of drink next too me, i can't remember what happened..i must have killed James! I must have hit and ran him!
Hilary: Dear god Richard! What the hell have you done!? Why were you drinking behind the wheel?!
Richard: Since i've started losing my memory Hilary, i've felt depressed...i mean let's face it, this is the start of me getting old, becoming forgetful, i just needed something to drown my sorrows so i've turned to drink!
Hilary: You stupid, stupid man! I know you starting to lose your memory has been hard, but you've got to face up to it love, your getting old..your not getting any younger..
Richard: I know...i know..
Hilary: So what are you going to do now?
Richard: I feel so guilty Hilary...really guilty...i mean i've killed 2 people...first Siobhan, now James...
Hilary: Siobhan was different Richard...she was a deranged psycho, she was gonna kill us all if you hadn't done anything! There was no other way to get rid of her...
Richard: But i still killed her! And James was an innocent man, a Baymoore resident for so many years and i snatched his life away from him...i feel so guilty Hilary...
Richard starts crying into his hands. Hilary gives Richard a hug.
INT. LYNNE'S HOUSE- NIGHT
Amy and Patrick enter Lynne's living room. Lynne gestures for Amy and Patrick to sit down.
Lynne: So what is this about?
Amy: Well, you see, we got your address from the adoption agency, and well, me and my husband have been desperate for a baby for a long time now, it's the only thing we've ever wanted! And we saw you were on the adoption agency, and thought we'd pay you a visit...we could always adopt your baby...
Lynne: Look i've left it with the agency to pick the most suitable parents for my child, it's the least I owe to my baby!
Amy: Please! I'm begging you! Me and my husband want a baby more than anything! I can't have my own kids, this is my only chance for a child!
Lynne: I'm sorry, but I'm going to do this officially, whoever the agency decides are the most suitable parents for my baby, then that's who my baby will go too.
Amy: What is it to you who the baby goes too?! If you cared, you would never have put it up for adoption in the first place!
Lynne shouts at Amy, hurt by her words.
Lynne: Just get out! Get out of my house!
Amy: I'm sorry...i didn't mean what i just said...
Lynne: Get out!
Patrick: Come on Amy, let's just go...
Amy and Patrick leave Lynne's living room and leave through the front door. Lynne slams the door on them both. We see Amy, who has a paniced look on her face.
Posting on Bry's behalf:
INT. HARVEY’S MOTORS – DAY
Craig is working on a car, when Tanya walks into the garage.
Craig: Tanya, what a pleasant surprise…
Tanya: I’m not here for small talk, I’ve just come to collect Simon’s car…
Craig: How come he cant collect it himself?
Tanya: I don’t think that’s wise given the circumstances, do you?
Craig: What do you mean? :p
Tanya: I suppose you think it’s funny don’t you? What you’ve done to poor Charlie!
Craig: Poor Charlie!? She’s no angel, she’s the one that asked for the drugs!
Tanya: But you didn’t have to sell them to her! Honestly! I thought even you might have some morals…
Craig: Morals are what separate the do gooders from the thilthy rich, it’s about supply and demand, Charlie wanted it, so she got it…
Tanya tries to hit Craig but he reacts fast and grabs her arm.
Craig: I’m getting a slight feeling of déjÃ* vu here Tanya, you really need to learn to control that feisty little temper of yours!
Tanya: Just give me the keys!
Craig grabs the keys and throws them onto the floor.
Craig: Get on your knees and pick them up…like a dog…
Tanya: Piss off Craig!
Craig: Well if you want the car back…
Tanya bends down and picks up the keys, she gives Craig a look of total disgust.
Tanya: You *******!
Tanya gets up and spits in his face, she then turns and leaves the garage, her blood boiling. On her way out she bumps into Jon.
Jon: Tanya, what’s up?
Tanya: Oh it’s him! He deserves to be shot!
Jon: Come on, let me take you for a drink to settle your nerves, you can tell me all about it…
Tanya: No offence but I hardly know you, why would I tell you anything?
Jon: It’s an age old saying Tanya, your enemies enemy is your friend, now come on, the first round’s on me…
Tanya and Jon head off towards the Red Rum, Jon has a huge grin on his face.
Posting on Bry's behalf:
INT. JARED ASHWORTH’S OFFICE – DAY
Jared is sat in his minimalist office, overlooking Torbay harbour, he is reading through some documents when Hilary walks into the room with a grin from ear to ear.
Jared: Hilary, what a pleasant surprise, have we got a lunch date?
Hilary: No, I just thought I’d come and tell you some amazing news…
Jared: Oh yeah?
Hilary: It’s about Richard…
Jared: Don’t keep me in suspense, what is it?
Hilary: He’s only blooming confessed to me that he might have killed James Andrews…
Jared: What do you mean ‘might have’?
Hilary: Well he woke up flat out at the wheel, he has no idea what he’d done that night…the same night James was hit down by a car!
Jared: Two mere coincidences…
Hilary: He doesn’t seem to think so, all we need is one call to crime stoppers and bobs your uncle…
Jared: Or better still, you need to convince him that he did do it, so as he confesses it to the police, then they don’t even need to find evidence…
Hilary: Oh my god! That’s amazing! Why didn’t I think of that?
Jared: Because you’re not cold and calculated enough :p
Hilary: Oh I can be when I want to…and whilst he’s behind bars I can do a runner with his money….
Jared: We all win then…sounds like a done deal, let’s got out the champagne to celebrate…
Jared heads over to his minibar and gets out a bottle of champagne, he opens it and pours him and Hilary a glass. They have huge grins on their faces as they chink their glasses.
Both: Cheers :D
Oh oh!! I think Jared killed James.. he was talking about richard confessing and not have to looking for evidence.. Poor Richard!!
INT. RED RUM- DAY
Romeo and Chris are sat at a booth in the Red Rum having a drink. Emma comes in and sits next to the pair.
Romeo: Emma...what was the call about?
Emma: Well i just wanted to get you both together..
Chris: What for?
Tom suddenly walks into the Red Rum. Chris and Romeo see this and look on with disgust.
Romeo: Oh no! We're not gonna start talking to him if that's what your thinking!
Tom comes over to Romeo and Chris.
Tom: Look guys, please..just hear me out..
Chris: You've got 1 minute...then we'll stop listening to you! :rolleyes:
Tom: I've got a surprise for you both..
Chris and Romeo look at each other, they're both intrigued.
INT. RED RUM- DAY
Tanya and Jon are sat at a booth talking, while drinking their drinks.
Tanya: So I take it that Craig isn't on your Christmas Card list either?
Jon: You could say that...he's a nasty piece of work..Craig needs to be pulled down a peg or two! Anyway, what have you got against him? I take it he's done something awful to you as well?!
Tanya: He's ruined my life Jon, i don't have any proof but, well if i did, i'd make sure he'd get his commeupance!
Jon: What happened?
Tanya: He was responsible for the murder of my husband and my twins...he's ruined my life and i'd love to see him pay, along with my witch of a mother-in law!
Jon: Jesus Christ! I'm so sorry...you must have felt awful when you learnt what happened..
Tanya: I've never got over it properly...i don't think i ever will...he ruined my life Jon, at one point, i didn't even think it was worth living! He snatched the people who i loved most in this world...
Jon: He will pay eventually Tanya, i can guarantee that too you now!
Tanya: The sooner, the better because he can't carry on like this! I mean, he hasn't just ruined my life, it's Mandy's life he's ruined too...the murder of her mother, Margaret...she was sure that he was responsible...but Carl went down for the murder, and I bet the whole of Baymoore know that Craig was responsible for Margaret's death somewhere along the line! He always thought she was a moany old bag who couldn't keep her nose out of anything!
Jon looks at Tanya in complete shock.
Tanya: What's wrong? I haven't said anything out of tone have I?!
Jon: Mandy...she never told me about her mother...
Jon storms out of the Red Rum without saying goodbye to Tanya. Tanya watches Jon leave, puzzled by his sudden departure.
INT. BAYMOORE ARCADE UPSTAIRS FLAT - DAY
Tom opens the door, Romeo and Chris follow in after him.
Romeo: What you brought us here for then?
Tom: Emma's brought the place, we've spent the whole weekend doing it up...
Chris looks around, impressed by the decor and furniture
Chris: Sweet pad Tom, this must have set you back a bit...
Tom: Yeah, well as I say Emma's money, not mine...
Romeo: Look, what's the point of this eh? To rub it into our faces that you have a place and we dont? :rolleyes:
Tom: Look, about that...
Romeo: Here we go, the crooks of the argument...
Tom: Mate I'm sorry for what I did okay!? Dya think I haven't suffered? What I did was bloody stupid, but I want to make it up to you both... I want you to move in...
Chris: You what!?
Tom: That's if you want to...
Chris: Yeah! This place is mint man! Count me in! :D
Tom detects that Romeo isn't as enthuasiastic...
Tom: Romeo? I know it's not a patch on the house...but if we want to live with Bachelors this place is gonna be more like it...just like the guys off friends, what dya say?
Romeo: I suppose so...
Tom: Thanks Romeo! It means so much! :D
Romeo: Yeah well, I suppose we all make mistakes from time to time...
Chris: But the main thing is Tom has got us this place! I think a celbration is in order! You got any cans mate?
Tom: Of course! :D
Chris gets some cans out of the fridge and throws them to Romeo and Tom.
Tom: Well here's to the new bachelor pad then :D
The three of them open their cans, and chink them together - Bachelor Boys reunited.
INT. BAYMOORE B&B - DAY
Jon enters the B&B, in a mood, he slams the door shut behind him. Mandy walks into the hallway, startled by the door slamming. She notices he is in a mad mood.
Mandy: Jon? What's up?
Jon: Just been told something rather intresting...
Mandy: What?
Jon: About your mother...
Mandy: What about her?
Jon: Why didn't you tell me that she was murdered!?
Mandy: It has nothing to do with you, that's why!
Jon: Did Craig kill her!?
Mandy: I don't know!
Jon: What do you mean you don't know!?
Mandy: Yes! Probably! I don't know! Does it matter!? It's not going to bring mom back...
Jon: I can't believe you didn't think to tell me this...
Mandy: Just leave it Jon, it has nothing to do with you...
Jon: I've heard too much bad **** about that man recently, I'm gonna have a word with...
Mandy: For god's sake Jon, can't you just leave it?
Jon: He can't get away with doing all of this stuff to people!
Jon leaves the room, Mandy follows him, trying to convince him not to go.
Mandy: Jon, don't!
Jon leaves the house, slamming the door behind him.
Mandy: Jon! :angry: