This is great well done
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This is great well done
RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - NIGHT
Patrick and Amy go upstairs to have a serious talk.
Patrick: why do i feel like were going around in circles here?
Amy: probably becuase we are...
Patrick: your not going to drop this are you?
Amy: obviosuly not, Patrick please consider it, its what I've always wanted...a little baby to love...it would strengthen our relationship...maybe change the way you are...
Patrick: What do you mean "the way i am?"
Amy: All the affairs and stuff...maybe if we had a family youd change the way you treat me, for the sake of the kids...
Patrick: Kids? How many are you planning on having?
Amy: Loads, why?
Patrick: I just dont fancy reinacting the Waltons every evening for dinner...
Amy: Come on Patrick what have we got to loose?
Patrick: Ok then i suppose so...but your not going to get me changing no nappies...
Amy kisses Patrick
Amy: I'll just go down and get some wine and then well we could make a start...
Patrick: Sounds good...
Amy leaves. Patricks phone vibrates, he reads a text message:
Heya Babe, Hows Da Dragon Doin? Wanna Meet Up..?
Patrick smiles to himself, grabs his coat and leaves Amy alone at the pub.
RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE
Chris and Romeo are sitting down having a drink. Claire comes and sits by them.
Claire: Heya guys...
Romoe: Hiya babe (kisses Claire) how did it go today?
Claire: Not too good...Emma took it badly...hey we bumped into Tom, is it a year already?
Chris: Yeah we felt really guilty, we'd completley forgot...wed be cracking jokes like normal and everything...
Claire: Well now you know, you can make it better...
Claire gestures to the door where Tom enters.
Romeo: Hey Tom make come and have a drink we us!
Tom comes over and sits by them.
Romeo: Look mate we're really sorry, we'd forgotten all about ya parents...
Tom: Why would you have remembered? They werent important to you...
Romeo: Yeah but you are....and we shoulda been there to support you...
Tom: Its ok...im fine now, ive paid my respects...i need to move on with my life..
Chris: Thats the spirit! Now come on we're gonna give you a good night to cheer you up!
more please
Fab, as usual!!!!!!!
TORBAY HOSPITAL
Gary is sitting by Tanyas bedside. Nick is looking at her from the window in the coridoor. Richard comes up towards Nick.
Richard: Alright son?
Nick: Hows she doing dad?
Richard: Ok i think, the doctors seem to think that she will make it... she's just have a rest at the moment
Nick: Is Gary ok?
Richard: As ok as he can be i suppose...i cant believe she was so foolish, falling asleep whilst smoking!? Its not like her...
Nick: Oh well, she's ok, thats the main thing...
Richard: Its just one thing after another for us these days...first Ed...now...
Nick: But it's the fact that we always get trough it that makes us Taylors strong...
Nick: I'd better get off...i need to sort out them files for your conference tomorrow...
Richard: What conference?
Nick: With the developers?
Richard: I'd completly forgotten about that...
Nick: Well its a good job i hadnt, bye
Nick walks off, and as he goes he bumps into Craig.
Craig: Richard...
Richard: Craig, what are you doing here?
Craig: Just come to see Tanya, give her some grapes, the usually nonsence
Richard: Why?
Craig: Because I'm the heroe arent I? Its only the done thing to do...
Richard: Thats what i dont get Craig, one minute youve got me up against a wall threatenbing to kill me and my family and the next your saving... oh my god...it wasnt an accident was it?... it was you!?
Craig: (fake innocence) Me!? The man who saved your daughter? Why would i try and kill her if i was going to save her? Your mad Richard...people will think youve gone potty. Im the hereo of the hour...
Richard: Your one twisted man Craig honestly!
Craig: Twisted i may be yeah, but i am serious! No one, no one at all messes with Craig Harvey... no matter how rich you are or how high up you are on the social ladder it dosent matter, at the end of the day peoiple who cross me dont live to tell the tail... now i dont want no more hostility, take that incident as a warning, to show how serious i am, leave well alone and theyrell be no need for any more unpleasantness... am i making sense?
Richard: Yes, yes you are...
Craig: Good (hands over grapes) Tell Tanya i popped in... (smirks)
Wow there is loads to this, everytime i turn my back you've written another part, i can't keep up with ya. Really good tho, well done.
its a twice daily soap...but sometimes it appears to be more evn tough its only two small parts per day!Quote:
Originally Posted by Lindy
Wow, cool. Well it's good so keep it up.
Val's Hairdressers
Val enters the hairdressers, it is dark and smokey, nothing remains of her "pink" salon. She looks into one of the burnt mirrors and starts to cry.
RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT
Patrick tries to creep in..
Amy: And where have you been?
Patrick: Oh hi Amy
Amy: Dont "oh hi Amy" me, you went without even saying goodbye!
Patrick: Yeah im sorry about that...
Amy: We were meant to be starting a family!
Patrick: We've got all the time in the world for that...
Amy: No we havent, i want one as soon as possible
Patrick: And i want to share my bed with a beautiful woman we dont always get what we want do we?
Amy: Oh get lost Patrick!.... so where did you go last night?
Patrick: Oh met up and had a few drinks with Jack...hes on leave from the Army and he was only in town last night...
Amy: Oh its like that is it?
Patrick: Yes its like that...
Amy: Well if i find out your sleeping around when we're trying to start a family then heaven help you Patrick...
Patrick: Would i ever do a thing like that...(smirks)
BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE
Romeo and Claire are snuggled up on the sofa asleep. Chtris is snoring in the armchair. Tom comes in rattling a wooden spoon in a saucepan to wake them up.
Tom: Come on people! Rise and shine! Chris get to the mechanics! Romeoe get to the restuarunt! Claire...get dressed!
Chris: Its too early for talk...
Tom: Its nearly 9! Come on dont want to loose your jobs do you?
Romeo: I'm not ill...
Tom: Shouldnt have drank so much...
Chris: You've cheered up havent you!? Yesterday you was a bag of myseries...
Tom: Right then im off down the beachut, im cooking spag bol for tea tonight so dont be late!
Tom leaves
Claire: God how old is he? He acts just like my dad... he needs to lossen up a bit...
Chris: Yeah, yeah he does...infact i know what he needs...
Romeo: A smack in the porkchops?
Chris: No a woman!
BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE
The boys have finished their dinner and left the dirt plates on side. They are now drinking cans of beer and watching the football on the sofa....
Romeo: Tom...me and Chris have been thinking...
Tom: Careful...dont try too hard...
Chris: (sarcastic) Ha Ha, very funny...
Romeo: We think its about time that you get yourself a bird...
Tom: Nah dont think so...i had a budgie once...but it flew away when mom was cleaing his cage...
Chris: Not bird as in flap flap, bird as in fine ass and big bazukas!
Tom: Why didnt you just say a woman than?
Chris: Cus they ent women, they're birds....
Romeo: I well its been a while since youve been in the dating game, so us, as the good mates that we are, have decided to give you a helping hand...
Tom: Erm i think i can do it by myself thanks...
Chris: The last two girls ya dated were a nun and a lesbian! Trust me...you need the help
Romeo: (gets out notebook) right then prefernces...blonde or brunette?
Chris: or ginger?
Romeo: Nah no one likes a ginger! (excpet Luna of course! :p :lol: )
Tom: Blonde
Romeo: Ass or boobs?
Tom: Both
The group laugh...
Romeo: Personlaity or looks?
Tom: Erm...personality
Chris: (coughs) Boring!
Romeo: Right that should do it...now we've got a few tricks up our sleeves, we, my friend are going to try internet dating...
Tom rolls his eyes
THE ANDREWS HOUSE
Val is sitting alone in the kicthen, with files all over the place, working hard. James walks in...
James: Val...
Val: Dont speak to me James! I can do without the arguments!
James: Im sorry for shouting at you earlier love...
James sits down beside her
Val: All those years of hard work James...all those years...theyve just gone down the pan...thanks to that ruddy Tanya Donagoon!
James: Dont worry love...we'll get trough it...
Val: No...no we wont...ive been checking the books, I've been in debt for a long time...im not going to be able to come trough this...