That shut Tamzin up (I Hope). i hope Jake can find Chrissie, and he should not reinvent himself into a woman beater. More please.
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P.S Thanks for matching with me
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That shut Tamzin up (I Hope). i hope Jake can find Chrissie, and he should not reinvent himself into a woman beater. More please.
xxx
P.S Thanks for matching with me
Ha in your face tamzin!!!!!
Chrissie come back please!
Thanks for that honey, aw it was for me, thanks! xxx
I'm glad ya like your banner!!!
Post more soon
layne
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Awww brill. More asap please.
yey yey yey... that wiped the smug look off her face... yey yey yey... Go Kerrie Go... Go Jake Go... all we now is Chrissie back... more more more... please post more soon... NOW... more more more...
Sorry for the delay here I am again thanks for reading and the replies :cheer:
Chrissie sat in the taxi with her young daughter in her arms, she had no clothes and none of Lia’s things all she had was her daughter and the few bits in her handbag just enough to live on
Chrissie knew she loved him so why was she running away, he wasn’t Den she knew he would never hurt or destroy her the way Den had
Maybe he got too close to her but even that didn’t explain it, she liked him being close knowing her inside out, loving her for being her
If she couldn’t explain it to herself how the hell would anyone else understand she wasn’t even sure if it was even about the kiss
She pulled up outside a smart looking block of flats, she had nowhere else to go
After paying the cab driver Chrissie rang the bell and a voice spoke
Chrissie- it’s Chrissie can I come up
The buzzer was pressed and Chrissie made her way inside
Amanda opened her door to see a tearful Chrissie staring back at her, pulling her inside she wrapped her friend into a hug
Amanda- what’s going on
Chrissie- I left him
Amanda- why what happened
Chrissie- I don’t know it had changed we had changed
Amanda- did you have a row
Chrissie- no
Amanda- then what
Chrissie- can I stay
Amanda- you know you can as long as you want
Amanda lifted Lia from her mother’s arms and Chrissie slumped onto the sofa trying not to think about Jake and what she had left behind
Chrissie- will you look after Lia for an hour while I go and get her some bits
Amanda- sure are you sure you and Jake can’t work this out
Chrissie- not at the moment no
She grabbed her bag and left
Jake had soon got rid of his guests he made an excuse for Chrissie something about a sick relative and now he sat silently in the empty pub
Without Chrissie he had nothing
He tidied up the empty glasses and made his way slowly upstairs and into the bedroom
Siting down on their bed, the bed they had shared together since he’s moved in well over a year ago
He’d given up ringing her all he got was her answer machine he had lost count of the number of messages he had left begging her, apologising but nothing he had no idea where she was or if she was ever coming back
Oh no, Jake, Chrissie *bumps heads together* You go back no get back together you love each other!!
Amanda yey! i like her *ducks from flying objects*
Post more soon please honey this is an amzing script and i love it!
Layne
x x x
Chrissie's so stupid.
she'll come to her senses eventually.. i mean who wouldn't... this is Jake Moon he's irrestible... just like Dennis... come on Chrissie... think about it... think about what you're doing... YOU LOVE HIM... GO BACK... GO BACk... fab as usual... don't even think about not posting more tomorrow.. hehe...
Chrissie needs to wake up. Glad she went to Amanda, I think she's a great character. Poor Jake know he's feeling like Chrissie did in real eastenders (I was about to say real life but eastenders isn't real life!) before the phonecall. This is great, more please. Please let her come back
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Apologies once again and thanks for reading please keep reading please
Kerrie- I just think it’s a bit odd that’s all
Noah- it’s not your problem Jake and Chrissie will sort it out if there is something wrong
Kerrie- if you say so
Noah- now come on bed
Kerrie- do you think Tamzin will disappear
Noah- I doubt it but she will eventually
Kerrie- always was one to put up a fight
Noah- she’ll go trust me
Kerrie climbed into bed
Noah- right get some sleep I’m going to do a bit of work down stairs
Kerrie- ok
She kissed her husband and lay back onto the pillows
Noah headed own the stairs and grabbed his coat before leaving his sleeping wife alone
Out in the dark he climbed into his flash BMW and set off
Noah pulled up outside a house and knocked on the door
Tamzin opened the door
Tamzin- this is a nice surprise Noah, come in
Dennis- I’m just worried that’s all Chrissie going off to look after a sick relative isn’t very Chrissie
Sharon- I know but if it’s something else they’ve got to deal with it as a couple we can’t go around butting our noses in when we feel like it
Dennis- she was there for me when all that stuff with Den and Zoë came out I’d hate for her to think she was on her own if something had happened
Sharon- if she needs us she can ring now come on bed before you decide to do something stupid
Danny arrived at Katelyn’s flat to find her sitting silently on the sofa nursing her cuts and bruises and a large brandy
Danny- what the hell happened
Katelyn burst into tears as Danny wrapped her into a hug
Katelyn- I felt sick so I went to get some fresh air when someone attacked me
Danny- who
Katelyn- I don’t know it was dark
Danny- I’m calling the cops
Katelyn- no it’s just a couple of bruises no biggie anyway we’re leaving tomorrow morning it doesn’t matter
Danny- it matters to me
Katelyn kissed him- please don’t make a fuss for me
Lying little, well at least katelyn ain't dragging Chrissie into it!!!
Wha the hell is noah doing with Tamzin???
post mroe soon honey
Luv ya
Layne
x x x
Wow, this is fantastic.
Dennis is so sweet wanting to look out for Chrissie. Why has Noah gone to find Tamzin? Please let Katelyn go away. More please
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Class more asap please.
lying... conviving little... TELL HIM THE TRUTH katelyn... awww Noah and Kerrie... he's not doing something stupid is he... i can feel it... awwww bless Dennis wanting to be there for Chrissie... please post more... SOON... NOW... more more more...
Hi guys apologies for the delay in posting but here I am with another part so Enjoy and thanks for reading
Noah- Tamzin
Tamzin went over to the drinks cabinet and poured him a large whiskey
Noah took the drink and downed it in one
Tamzin- what can I do for you
Noah stepped forward and gently put a hand under her chin
Noah- you know what I want
Tamzin smiled- yeah I do…I knew it
Noah smiled to her sweetly as he tightened his grip
Tamzin- ow Noah your hurting me
Noah- you stay away from me and my wife do you understand
Tamzin fell backwards against the wall as Noah pushed her hard, his hands tightened around her, his eyes full of hatred and hers full of fear
Chrissie awoke early the next morning despite having been kept up by a restless Lia missing her daddy
Amanda was making some coffee as she entered the kitchen
Chrissie- morning
Amanda- how are you feeling
Chrissie- I’ve felt better Lia’s asleep at last I hope she didn’t disturb you
Amanda smiled- not at all
Chrissie didn’t want to cry but she her strength was gone it felt like it had been ripped out of her
Amanda watched horrified as her once strong friend seemed to fall apart in front of her, Amanda wrapped her into a scented hug as Chrissie let the last few weeks of emotion spill out of her
Danny and Katelyn had said their goodbyes and were heading off to start their new life away from the mess and Albert Square
After they had gone Jake was once again overcome with a sense of loneliness and a constant ache for Chrissie, he missed her and everything about her
He had opened up the pub but unable to face all the questions and so he’d left everyone to it and decided to do some work at Scarlet’s, Johnny was due back any day from his honeymoon and he had a pile of paperwork to catch up on
As Jake crossed the Square, Noah climbed out of the car he hadn’t slept all night and with a pure white handkerchief he wiped the blood from his knuckles trying to hide the evidence from his wife and prying eyes
Ooooohhhhhhh what's Noah been upto... i hope he's killed her... hit her over the head with a frying pan... Poor Jake and Chrissie... why does he have to be such a man... more more more... please psot more soon... Rach take that banner off it's creepy...
I hope Noah hurt Tamzin. she's evil! Jake and Chrissie need to be loacked in a room and not let out till they've talked! More please
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Hello apologies for leaving it so long but here is the next part and thanks for da replies
Kerrie- where have you been
Noah- I had a load of work to do but now it’s done I can spend the day with my gorgeous wife
Kerrie- where have you been
Noah- working
He kissed her lightly
Kerrie- and drinking by the stench of your breath
Noah- it was a long night
Kerrie- go and sleep it off then I’ll cook lunch
Noah- no I’ll grab a shower then me and you are going out for lunch
Kerrie- why
Noah- to talk
Kerrie- about what
Noah- us, the baby everything
Kerrie- that’s a bit grown up for us we usually just fight it out
Noah- well we can’t have that now can we not in your condition gives me an unfair advantage
Kerrie- true so where are we going
Noah- new Thai place on the High Street
Kerrie- yummee my favourite
Noah- you better get changed
As he took in her jogging bottoms and t-shirt, he’d never seen her so casual
Kerrie- yes sir and you better shower quick you stink
Noah- charming
Kerrie- I won’t be seen out with a smelly husband
Noah- well I won’t be seen out with a scruffy wife
Kerrie- if I’m so scruffy angel why did you marry me
Noah- because you’re the only good thing that ever happened to me
Kerrie- don’t go all sentimental on me please
She kissed him lightly on the lips before heading upstairs to change
Hey. I like Kerrie and Noah they are good together.
lol, I like that. What happened with Noah and Tamzin?Quote:
Originally Posted by Joel_Beckett_Lover
Fabby, more please
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Oooh what's going on... what's he done to Tamzin? something fishy going on their i can smell it.. hehe... post more soon... more more more...
Hi apologies for the delay and thanks Jake Moon Rox and Angeldelight your both brill
Dennis- I’ve called her mobile it’s switched off
Sharon- maybe she’s busy looking after her relative
Dennis- she isn’t looking after any relative so I’m gonna go and have a little chat with Jake because if her relative was that sick she wouldn’t take her seven month old daughter with her
He grabbed his coat and turned to storm out but Sharon grabbed his arm
Sharon- Dennis your overreacting
Dennis- am I
Sharon looked down at the floor, she knew Dennis was right but she didn’t want him flying off the handle and making things ten times worse
Sharon- ok I know something isn’t right but you can’t just go over and have your ‘little chat’ because I know exactly what that means
Dennis- I just want to know that’s all and I promise I won’t lay a finger on him
With that he walked away and out of the door
Kerrie pulled on her jeans and watched as her husband headed into the shower she laughed to herself everything was going so well
Kerrie scooped up her husband’s discarded clothes singing along to the radio when she stopped dead in her tracks as a familiar smell hit her
Kerrie felt herself go icy cold and the blood in her veins felt like treacle as her head slowly began to pound, the haunting flashbacks filled her tearful eyes but all she could see and feel were the flames and yet all she could smell was the petrol
Pulling herself out of her thoughts she glanced down at her husband’s pale blue shirt the smell of petrol overwhelmed her, the one smell she feared after the fire she started well over a year ago the fire that led to her husband’s subsequent arrest and later his suicide
Why did Noah’s shirt smell of petrol? A thousand questions with no answers were running through her head but she knew her husband and she knew no matter what he needed protecting
She headed downstairs and shoved the clothes into the washing machine, Kerrie made her way to the front door and grabbed the shoes Noah had been wearing that morning and pushed them also into the machine before switching it on
Kerrie rushed to the sink and threw up it was like she was back to that night she had destroyed Will’s offices
She couldn’t get the image out of her head of his body as it lay on the cold mortuary slab, his neck bruised from the noose, his eyes wide open and his body so cold and so blue
Picking up the phone she dialled a number
Kerrie- hi it’s Kerrie can you come and sort Noah’s car out it needs a good clean inside and out and I mean a through clean ok cheers babes bye
Why does Noah's shirt smell of petrol? :hmm:
Dennis don't hurt Jake! Please! Brilliant as usual! More soon :)
What did Noah do? This is very supicious. Dennis had better not hurt Jake, will Jake tell him? Can't wait for more
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uh-oh... what's going on... what's Noah done to Tamzin? Kerrie's going to protect him... awwwww that's so sweet... Dennis going all manly *begins to drool* i can just imagine it... more more more... please post more soon... more more more...
P.S. I know i'm brill and pumping up my ego always helps... hehe... hehe...
Enjoy and ta for the replies
Dennis entered the club as Jake sat trying to do some work yet his mind was wandering back to Chrissie and where she could be he had phoned her parents, her brothers, her sister and nothing
Jake looked up as the footsteps approached him he already knew who it was
Dennis- Jake
Jake- what can I do for you
Dennis- heard from Chrissie
Jake- not yet have you
Dennis- no and I doubt you will she’s left you hasn’t she
Jake- no she’s….
Dennis- save it I aint buying it
Jake got up and faced Chrissie’s stepson
Jake- my business not yours
With that Jake turned and walked out leaving Dennis standing in the club alone
Chrissie sat in the empty flat, Amanda was at work and it left her with hours to think too many hours
Lia slept most of the day leaving her with just Jake to think about she missed him in more ways than she could ever describe, the little things he use to do and the way he made her laugh even on the most miserable of days
Standing in the kitchen she looked at the clock it was only half twelve the kettle clicked and Chrissie poured the steaming water into a mug this was the one thing she needed right now a large mug of coffee
Chrissie suddenly felt light-headed, her head began to spin clinging onto the kitchen counter Chrissie managed to sit herself down, what the hell was wrong with her
Maybe it was the stress or maybe she just missed Jake but whatever it was it had to stop
Chrissie reached for the phone and dialled a number
Chrissie- hello yeah I’d like to make an emergency appointment…no I’m not a patient I’m visiting a friend yeah Chrissie Watts thanks a lot bye
Hiya honey, i've just caught up because i've been on holiday, oh my god, wow, well wonder what noah has done,???
Jake and Chrissie *bangs there heads together again!* What is wrong with Chrissie, i love amanda she is great! Shannis :wub:
Please please post more soon honey please for me, because it was my birthday yesterday!!!
Layne
x x x
Why is Chrissie making an appointment? I can think of one way to cure Chrissie of missing Jake, send her back to him! Dennis will learn the truth eventually. More please
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more more more... awww Dennis being all protective... i hope Chrissie's ok... her and Jake need to be locked in a room together to sort this out... hehe... brill babes... keep it coming... more more more
Very sorry for the wait and ta for the replies please keep reading thanks
Kerrie watched as Noah stepped into the lounge ready for their date
Noah- what
Kerrie- …nothing come on or we’ll be late
Noah- where are my clothes I had on earlier
Kerrie- I put them in the wash sweetheart I don’t want a pile of laundry building up
Noah- what the hell are you on about we have a cleaner who does the washing you never touch that machine
Kerrie- well I can start can’t I
Noah- careful you’ll be using the hoover next
Kerrie- ha your funny anyway you didn’t tell me why you’ve been out so late not got a fancy woman on the sly have you
Noah- I was drawing up a business plan for my bank manager so I can expand the clubs
Kerrie grabbed her jacket and the pair headed to the front door
Kerrie- sounds like a plan if I ever heard one
She knew he was lying but she didn’t challenge maybe subconsciously she knew she didn’t have too he was her husband she knew him better than anyone
Chrissie felt so isolated as she sat in the creamy coloured waiting room the smell was enough to put anyone off coming to the doctors she looked around at the different people wishing she could get this over and done with and the hell out of here
Her name was eventually called and carrying Lia she entered the small office type room and a young woman sat behind the desk
Chrissie took to the seat she was offered and the doctor introduced herself
Paula- I’m Paula you said it was an emergency Mrs Watts
Chrissie nodded and told the doctor exactly how she felt
Jake sat in the upstairs flat of the Vic nursing a broken heart and downing a large bottle of scotch
He wanted her back but how could he get her back when he didn’t know where to get her back from
Suddenly the door opened and a young woman entered
Jake- Amanda
Amanda- hello Jake well I’m certainly glad your looking as rough as Chrissie now I think it’s about time you and her had a little chat
Jake- she’s staying with you
Amanda- she’s at my flat with Lia and driving herself insane over you
Jake- I hurt her
Amanda- if you love her you can make it right instead of sitting here wallowing in your own self pity now which is it gonna be sit her and drink yourself to death or tell Chrissie your sorry and you love her
Jake- I’ll get my coat
Welcome back Layne and a belated Happy Birthday hope to catch up with you soon
Happy Birthday 4 Saturday Angeldelight (your getting old like me babes)
Quote:
Originally Posted by Joel_Beckett_Lover
Thanks honey!!!!
And happy birthday AngelDelight for tomorrow!!!!
Fab script honey more soon, what is wrong with chrissie?
And i'm glad amanda went to see Jake
More soon
Layne
x x x
What is wrong with Crissie? Jake and Chrissie had better make up. I wonder what Noah actually did. I hope there's loads to read when I get back.
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P.S Angeldelight happy birthday as I won't be here to say it tomorrow
thanks a lot guys... i am NOT going to old like you... i'm going to be 19...
thanks a lot guys... i am NOT going to old like you... i'm going to be 19... you're really old... hehe hehe hehe
this is brill... Jakey needs to be running to Chrissie NOW... how much does Kerrie know about naoh's done? more more more... please post more soon...
Ta for the replies
Chrissie stared at the doctor
Chrissie- what do you mean…you want to do some tests…why do you think there is something seriously wrong?
Paula- not at all it’s just routine and won’t take long at all
Chrissie- can you find out today
Paula- the test I’m going to do won’t take longer than a few minutes
Chrissie- a few minutes and that’s it you’ll know what is wrong with me
Paula- hopefully it will only tell me what I already know
Chrissie- like what
Paula- just relax Mrs Watts
Chrissie sighed
Dennis opened the door to the flat
Sharon- how did it go
Dennis- he stormed off but at least I know one thing
Sharon- and what’s that
Dennis- there is no relative Chrissie’s left him
Sharon- are you sure
Dennis- positive
Sharon- but she loves him and I know Jake worships her
Dennis- well something made her leave
Sharon- promise me you’ll let this one drop now
Dennis- I can’t
Sharon- well at least take five minutes and help me plan this wedding
She threw a magazine at him
Dennis picked it up and pulled a face
Dennis- I am not wearing anything like that it’s all ruffles
Sharon- well find one you do like then
Dennis walked over to Sharon
Dennis- I’m much more interested in what you’re wearing
Sharon- really well Mr Rickman your gonna have a long wait finding that one out
She kissed him
Dennis- not long at all really the weddings only six weeks away August is creeping up on us fast
Sharon- tell me about it and I’ve still got a million things to do
Dennis kissed her and smiled
Dennis- surely they could wait for half an hour
Sharon- I suppose I could
She wrapped her arms around his waist slowly un-buckling his belt
Chrissie- well what’s wrong am I going to die
Paula- Mrs Watts your test results show……
SHANNIS WEDDING IN 6 WEEKS...
show what? show what? show what? show what? show what? show what? show what? show what? show what? show what? show what? show what? show what?
Well come on tell us is Chrissie going to die, what is wrong with her come on please please tell us!!!
Shannis wedding yey!!
Post more soon need to know please
layne
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this is brilliant can we have more soon
What's wrong?? Please tell me! I will die of shock if you don't and to be honest, I don't want that to happen! More soon please!Quote:
Originally Posted by Joel_Beckett_Lover
oh whats wrong?