Bryan and Abi this has been a fantastic read, always looking for the next chapters:) i love the stuff,,, red rum pub,, murder pub eh ??
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Bryan and Abi this has been a fantastic read, always looking for the next chapters:) i love the stuff,,, red rum pub,, murder pub eh ??
Hey, Jodi, I hadn't thought of that!!!! You could be on to something there!! :hmm:Quote:
Originally Posted by JustJodi
Excellent job again Abi and Bry... I know it has already been said but Amy, wake up love, smell the other woman's perfume on your man's shirt
Wow This Is Fantastic I Cant Wait To See What Happens Next
Red Rum Pub- Upstairs Flat
Amy is on the sofa, flicking through magazines, while listening to an MP3 player. She sees Patrick go to the door and mouth something. She takes her earphones out….
Amy: huh? What was that?
Patrick: (obviously irritated) I said that I’m going out to do some shopping.
Amy: In torquay?!
Patrick: Yeah…
Amy: Its for me isn’t it?! My pressie? (looks excited) Oh my god, it is aint it?! Come on, what you getting me?!
Patrick: Well its…
Amy jumps up, and puts her finger on his lips, to stop him talking
Amy: No! Wait! Don’t say anything! (smiles) just make sure its got diamonds on it!!
Patrick: Expensive taste, as always!!
Amy: Well what d’ya expect?! Just make sure you’re not late back…
Patrick: I’ll try not, but you know what its like sometimes…
Amy: Patrick…..please, just get back soon….
Patrick: Don’t worry. Be back later, bye babe
Patrick kisses Amy, and leaves. Amy backs up against the door, smiling and excited.
INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - NIGHT
Amy walks into the room and places down too plates of food onto a candletight table. Romantic music is playing in the background and scented candles are lit all around the room. She smiles happily.
Amy sits down and looks at her watch, she waits a moment later then gets up her phone and dials Patrick's number.
INTERCUT:
INT. BAYMOORE BEDROOM - NIGHT
Patrick is busy having sex with a Baymoore resident, loud noises can be heard and Patrick's ringtone can only just be heard.
INTERCUT:
INT. RED RUM FLAT - NIGHT
Patricks answerphone message can be heard: "Hi this is Paddy, im not avaible at the moment so leave a message after the beep"
Amy throws the phone on the floor. She then blows the candles out. She sits down to eat her meal but starts crying.
Amy throws the plate at the large photo of her and Patrick's wedding day. The picture falls off the wall and the glass smashes everywhere. She gets down on her knees and starts to weep. The glass in her hands
INT: Torbay GP's- Night
Ryan is in his office. There’s a knock at the door…
Ryan: yeah, who is it?
Hilary: Just little old me..
Ryan stands up, and goes straight over to Hilary, obviously happy….
Hilary: I need a….check up. You think you’ll be able to handle that?
Ryan: Course, its my job. Love to check people up…or out…
Hilary: now, now, now!
Ryan: Little less of the talking?
Hilary: (grins) You know me too well…
They kiss passionately, Ryan begins to unbutton her blouse…. He mumbles…
Ryan: I love you so much…
Hilary: What happened to no talking? Aren’t you a naughty boy!!
They both laugh, flirtatiously…
Hilary: So come on….what d’ya say?
Ryan: that I love you…..
Ryan goes to finish unbuttoning her blouse….Hilary stops him…
Hilary: This isn’t about love. This is sex, nothing more, nothing less. I thought you got that….
Ryan: Course I do….erm… its was a……a moment of weakness….
Hilary: Lets keep it that way…..now where were we?
Ryan undoes her blouse…. The shot zooms out, to reveal the private investigator taking pictures of their silhouettes on the desk in the distance…
Gotcha Hilary has been caught out wonder what she will do if she finds out???
WHAT DOES AMY DO NEXT!? READ AMYS SUICIDAL ACT OF DEPRESSION IN:
DEVON SEAS AFTER HOURS THREAD (FOR 16+ MEMBERS)
INT. SINGHS HOUSE - MORNING
Kash is sitting at the dining table reading his paper, Sanjita is serving up breakfast. Andonis is getting ready for college, Mohammed is studying.
Kash: Mohammed go fetch the post...
Mohammed: Im not a dog dad...
Kash: No but you're my son, so do as your told
Mohammed drags his feet to fetch the post, it is clear he is used to being bossed around.
Mohammed: (To Andonis) And i hope you dont intend to go to college dressed in a tracksuit and trainers...
Andonis: Dad we can wear what we like at college...
Mohammed walks in and hands Kash the post, he opens the mail whilst continuing the conversation.
Mohammed: I dont want you dressed like a "chav", you have to mantain the family reputation (looks at post ) oh what have we here...under acheiveing in maths...and science... and computing...
Andonis: Maybe if you didnt force subjects on me...
Kash: They are for your future...you dont get anywhere in life with a grade in "Media Studies"
Andonis rolls his eyes and stops arguing with him. The door opens..
Kash: Who on earth is that...
Sanjita walks out into the hallway. Standing there is Ruby, the Singh's eldesy daughter. She has a big backpack on her back.
Sanjita: Ruby your home!
Sanjita runs over to Ruby and hugs her. Kash gets up from his seat and heads out to the hallway
Kash: Rubina...finally decided to come back and face some responsiblilty?
Ruby: Welcome back to you to dad...
Andonis and Mohammed go over to Ruby and hug her.
Ruby: Alright dont suffocate me (laughs)
Andonis: How are you sis?
Ruby: Yeah I'm great ta... it's been unbelivable going across the world! Meeting new people, seeing new places...
Kash: Waste of time!...Anyway you've had your fun...now you can go to university and get yourself a career...
Ruby: What like you you mean...owning a grocery store?
Sanjita: (Peacefully) Ruby, don't cheak your father....
Ruby: Yeah well, i've decided im not going to university... i want to have fun...live life to the full
Kash: Fun!? You've been having fun for the past year, at my expense! You will go to university! You will get a career!
Ruby: I'll do what i god damn please dad...im not a little girl no more...im my own person...and i dont have to do what you say anymore...
Kash: Rubina!
Ruby: That's final dad! (To Sanjita) Any brekkie on the go mom?
Ruby and the others head off into the kitchen, Kash is not impressed.
EXT. RED RUM PUB - DAY
Patrick walks towards the pub, a smile on his face and a spring in his step. He sees a group of regulars standing outside the pub door, he looks at his watch.
Chris: Come on Paddy its gone 12, why ent you open?
Patrick: Donno Mate, Amy must have slept in...(to group) ill be open in ten folks..
There is a general displeasment with the crowd. Patrick heads upstairs to the flat.
INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - DAY
Patrick opens the door. The living room is in darkness with the curtains drawn. Patrick swipes the curtains open.
Patrick: What you playing at Amy!? Its gone 12 o clock...
Patrick stops in his tracks as he sees Amy sitting on the sofa, slit wrists and an empty bottle of Vodka. He rushes over to her and grabs the bottle
Patrick: What the hell is all this then!? Turning into a drunk are you!?
Amy: It numbs the pain!
Patrick: What pain is that!? The one in your ****...becuase thats what your being to me at the moment woman!
Amy: You think its all a laugh...cheat on your wife...i wont care will i...im not human am i!? Im void of feelings... as long as you have your fun it doesnt matter about me...what i feel.... what i want and need...
Patrick: What is your probelm exactly!?
Amy: Of all the nights to leave me on my own...it had to be our wedding anniversary!
Patricks shows a sign that he clearly forgot...
Amy: What!? Forget about it did you...!?... Dont worry...im use to that by now... 12 years of marraige... 12 long years... and what a crap 12 years that has been!
Patrick: They are what you make it...
Amy: No theyre what YOU make it!...An absoulute bloody misery!... Living Hell! And thats all done to you!
Amy is in tears, her hair is messed up and dried mascare is all down her face. Patrick grabs her off the sofa, grabs her by the waiste and forcefully drags her into the bedroom.
Amy: Get the hell off me!
Patrick shoves Amy's face near the bedroom mirror.
Patrick: Look at that!... Take a long hard look at yourself... your a state! A bloody ugly wreck! (shouts) Look at you!... And you wonder why i trade you in for another model! Even a blind man would turn their nose up at you!
Amy: I HATE you!
Patrick: (Casually) Good...
Patrick lets go off her, she bursts into tears and runs out of the bedroom and into the bathroom. He smiles and walks down the stairs.
Patrick: (Shouts trough bathroom door) Come on, get yourself together, we've got a pub to run...
just caught up *phew* lol
brilliant. loving the patrick and amy stuff. silly amy!!! cant believe she did that.
EXT. BAYMOORE PIER - NIGHT
Tanya's high hells make a noise as she walks along the wooden peir. She reaches the end and places her hands on the bars. Next to her is a man with a breficase.
P.I: Tanya?
Tanya: Yeah... so then what have you got for me?
P.I: She's been easy buisness...got loadsa of snaps for you... she's spent a lot of time with Dr Ryan Organo... in a more than professional way if you get my drift.
The Private Investigator hands her some polaroids of Hilary and Ryan in a passionate embrace.
Tanya: Excellent...
P.I: Is That all then?
Tanya: For now...
Tanya hands him an envelope of money, he flick trough it and shakes hands with her.
Tanya: Pleasure doing buisness with you.
The Private Investigator goes away. Tanya looks trough the photographs once more. She smiles to herself
Tanya: I've got you now Hilary, you're going down!
Amy you silly silly woman. Leave him and let him run the pub by himself see how much time he has for women then
Just leave him Amy - enjoy your life without that selfish pig - go transform yourself, get a new bloke and let him run the pub on his own.
Amy amy amy dear.....time to move on,, that jerk is not worth it, he doesn't love u girl , wheres your damn pride !!!!.Hey I thought she cut her wrists ??? I am confused:confused:
good one tanya you caught her now how to approach richard with the evidence ?? Hope she isnt stupid enuff to confront Hilary with her findings first .....But Hilary will probably laff in her face...
I do not like Adonis daddy one iota !!!!
yes she did from script above "Patrick stops in his tracks as he sees Amy sitting on the sofa, slit wrists and an empty bottle of Vodka. He rushes over to her and grabs the bottle"
does Patrick not see this? how stupid is he not to call an ambulance
the uncaring lout shoves her face in the mirror, she is bleeding for crying out loud,, gawdddddddddddd hes blind too and a right *******:angry:
ooo tanyas got hillary now. she better be careful!
INT. SINGH HOUSE - MORNING
Ruby sneaks down the stairs in her nightey, she leads a man down the stairs who is buttoning up his shirt and holding his shoes in his hands. He almost falls but she catches him, the pair laugh but she sushes him.
Joe: Whats with all the tip toing about?
Ruby: Dad will go ape if he finds out you stayed...
Joe: Daddy's girl are you?
Ruby: Hell no, but i dont want world war 3 starting out...
Joe: Is he that bad?
Ruby: Worse.
Joe almost leaves the house, but Kash appears in the hallway, hands on hips. He coughs, Ruby squints her face.
Kash: And who is this young gentleman, Rubina?
Joe: Rubina? (Laughs)
Kash: What didnt you even get chance to learn her name before you lead her astray...
Joe: Yeah, but its just...
Kash grabs Joe and chucks him out.
Kash: Get out of my house! Go on!
Kash slams the door shut. Ruby walks down to the hallway.
Ruby: Dad that was totally out of order!
Kash: No whats out or order is you offering yourself out to the male population like some common jesabelle!
Ruby: I beg your pardon!?
Kash: Getting yourself drunk on alcahol...the root of all evil...sleeping with the first man you grab your hands on...
Ruby: (Stunned) I dont belive you...
Kash: And i cant believe you either..i will not let my daughter act like a common tart!
Ruby: I'm my own person dad! I'll do what i like!
Ruby heads off back upstairs.
Kash: Rubina! Dont turn your back on me whilst im talking to you! Rubina!
Ruby slams her bedroom door shut. Kash rolls his eyes and returns to the dinner table.
Jenkins Manor
Richard is sitting at the computer in the study. Tanya walks to the door, with a grin on her face…
Tanya: Would you just come out here for a second?
Richard: Can’t it wait; I’m just going through some plans…
Tanya: No. It can’t.
Richard reluctantly follows Tanya to the lounge. She sits on the sofa, he remains standing.
Richard: Well. What is it?
Tanya: You might want to sit down…
Richard: I’ll be fine, what is it? I’ve got work to do…
Tanya: Its about Hilary…
Richard: For gods sake, wont you just let this drop?
Tanya: Hear me out. Everything I’ve been saying is true and…
Richard: Accusations, accusations, accusations! I’ve heard this a million times before
Tanya: But this time I have the proof
Richard: What….?
The front door is heard shut. Tanya grabs something from the coffee table, and stuffs it in her pocket. Hilary comes into the room…
Hilary: Well, what’s this then?
Richard: (sighs) Well apparently Tanya has proof of what she’s been saying….(mumbles) can’t wait to see this then…
Tanya pushes the photos into his chest…
Tanya: there you go. Everything I’ve been saying, its true. And there’s your proof. Take a look. A long hard look, and see what she’s like. She what she’s hiding. She what she really thinks of you.
Tanya looks smugly at Hilary. Hilary grabs the photos, and flicks through them…
Hilary: What the….? how the hell did you get these?!
Tanya: I have my ways. But you know, it took a lot of luck. After all, I wouldn’t have got the proof, if it hadn’t all been true. Hilary: You’ve been Framed.
Hilary looks shocked; she tries to take the photos. Richard grabs them…
INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Hilary points her finger at Tanya.
Hilary: You... had NO right taking pictures of me...!
Tanya: I didnt take them though...but i have every right... i need to show my dad what an evil twisted little bitch you really are...
Richard: Tanya!... Can you just leave please!?
Tanya: But dad...theres concrete evidence there to send her packing...
Richard: Tanya! Just leave me to deal with it in my own way!
Tanya picks up her handbag and walks out of the room giving Hilary an smug grin as she leaves. Hilary takes off her coat and approaches Richard...
Hilary: Richard...im really sorry...i dont know what to say... ill pack my bags...
Richard: No you dont have to do that... i said all along... there was no relationship comitments to you living here...your free to do what you like...
Hilary: Yes...but i can see how upset you are... ive made a fool of you...
Richard: No you havent... look Hilary... the only thing i dread is that your going to leave Jenkins Manor...
Hilary: For Ryan? (Laughs) Its a casual fling...nothing major...or serious...
Richard: Maybe not this man...but what about the next one that comes along?...I cant bear to see you with someone else Hilary...
Hilary: Where is this leading Richard?
Richard gets down on one knee and pulls out a ring.
Richard: Hilary...will you marry me?
Hilary is in total shock.
Richard, you are an idiot. she is playing you like a fiddle. cop on mister :angry:
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - NIGHT
Amy is lauging and joking with the punters, Vicky is standing in the distance watching her friend.
Amy: Common Vics, you could at least look like you're enjoying yourself...
Vicky: Its work Amy...
Amy: (Laughs) Yeah i suppose it is... but hey a smile wont go a miss will it?
Vicky: Amy, I'm concerned...
Amy: About what babes?
Vicky: You...
Amy: Me!? Im fine...
Vicky: Your not tough, i mean your wrists and everything...
Amy: Look Vics, whats the point of letting it get to me... i need to accept the man he is and get over it... hes never going to like a snivelling wreck that gives up hope is he?
Vicky: But theres no point keeping it all built up inside Amy... it'll all be worse that way...
Amy: He loved the young and fun loving Amy...and that's what he's going to see... he's not going to get me down anymore... and tomorrow... whilst he buggers off to his tart im going to have a party... a good old girls night in...get everyone to come around...
Vicky: (Weary) Are you sure?
Amy: Yeah its been a long time since we all got together with a bottle of wine and a dvd...
Vicky: Knowing us lot tough we'll need a crate not a bottle!
The pair laugh. Amy looks at Patrick who is serving a female.
Amy: No way am i gonna let him get me down...
INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Richard is on his knee propising to a shocked Hilary.
Richard: Well come on...i dont think my knee can stand much more (laughs to self)
Hilary: Oh get up you daft sod...
Hilary walks around the room is disbelif...
Richard: I take it its a no then?
Hilary: What the hell are you asking me to marry you for!? Did you think you'd just skip the dating and romance stage!?
Richard: We've been all there before...
Hilary: (Laughs in disbeleif) 30 years ago! Christ Richard... you cheated on me... we cant just go back to how we were....
Richard: Do you want to?
Hilary: Not partciualry no...the moment i came back here...and again when i moved into the manor... i told you we'd never be an item...
Richard: I know you did but...
Hilary: No Richard! As far as i see it there shouldn't be a but!
Richard: Its just...well I've had it planned for a while... i mean i didnt need Tanyas photos to know you were having an affair...
Hilary: It wasnt an affair! You and me are not an item!
Richard: I know we're not and its tearing me apart! I love you Hilary! I always have done and always will do!
There is an awkward silence. Hilary pours herself a shot of Vodka and downs it in one...
Hilary: The feeling is not the same... and you know that... so why loose your dignity by asking me?
Richard: Becuase i know... you have a buisness head...and as far as i see it, it could work to your benefit...
Hilary: What on earth are you blabbering on about Richard?
Richard: Money... its what you like isnt it... what you want above all else... well i know one thing i do good for and it's just that... if you married me... youd have half of the Taylor Empire when i die... as long as you stayed with me till my dying day...
Hilary: Dont talk daft, your not going to die...
Richard: I will do one day... and sooner rather than later... times getting on Hilary, we're not those young childhood sweethearts anymore...we've seen life...and its drawing to the end, i want to live out my days with you Hilary
Hilary sits down, unable to get her head around things.
Hilary: But Richard... i cant see how any of this benefits you?
Richard: You... are the most important person in my life...always have been...always will be... and you might not feel the same way...but to call you my wife once more...it would just...make my life complete...give it meaning...and over time you never know we could find them old feelings... so come on Hilary...you've got to have some decison surely...what it is?
Hilary looks up and stares him in the face.
INT: Red Rum Pub- day
Patrick is in the upstairs flat, flicking through the newspaper. He picks up his phone, and dials a number, cuts to a woman who picks up her mobile, and walks into the shower room…
Patrick: Hi babes, how you been?
The women’s legs are seen, and a towel drops. Shot stays low, just showing her feet…
Woman: Fine of course, and yourself?
Patrick: Great…would be better for seeing you…what was that noise?
Woman: Just putting you on speaker phone. Caught me just going into the shower. You have a habit of doing that….!
Patrick: What I’d do to be joining you…
The woman is seen go into the shower. Through a transparent glass door, she says to the speaker phone...
Woman: Why don’t ya then? Plenty of room for two, if you get my drift.
Patrick: your onto something there. Amy’s having some pathetic night in with the girls….she’ll never notice. How about that hotel down the coast road? Thick walls, privacy and peace and quiet….perfect
Woman: She’ll be too busy with the dvd’s to care. Then I get you all to myself…..fab. Sounds great, hun.
Patrick: dvd’s?
Woman: huh?
Patrick: Who said they’re having dvd’s?
Woman: Well it’s just the normal kind of thing that girls do, aint it…
Patrick: Since when did you ever think Amy was normal?
Woman: (laughs) well you know…
Patrick: You already knew about it, didn’t ya?
Woman: Course not! Why would i…..?
Patrick: Because she’s invited you. I’m right aren’t I?
Woman: Well i…
Patrick: And you wanted to fool her by going there!
Woman: Where’s this all coming from, babe? One second we’re talking about our little meeting, then you accuse me of all this…
Patrick: Because I can read you lot like a book! Why d’ya think of doing that?
Woman: I dunno… I just thought…
Patrick: Leave it. Just talk about this another time…
Woman: And what about tonight?
The shot goes back to Patrick. He is silent.
Woman: Pat? What about tonight?!
He hangs up.
Patricks little tryst may be falling around his ears..now who is the niked woman in da shower
INT: JENKINS MANOR
Tanya and Nick are in the front room. Tanya is pacing backwards and forwards, looking smug, yet slightly uptight. Nick is on the sofa…
Tanya: I can’t believe today is the day…the day she gets out of my life, and dads, forever! This is too good to be true…
Nick: What makes ya think she’s going anywhere?
Tanya: course she is! Didn’t you see those pictures? There’s no way she can deny any of that, and she’d be thick to even try!
Nick: What she did is her business though. You had no right barging in there and destroying their trusts in each other!
Tanya: She’s the one that’s been lying. She’s the one that did all that crap, not me, so don’t try and get at me cause of it.
Nick: You’re just as much in the wrong as she is. Why did ya have to go and drop her in it? We had it sorted here, we were happy….i was happy. Then you go and destroy it all! D’ya get kicks from this kind of thing?
Tanya: because its about time that everyone saw her for what she really is. She’s not this saint that you all make out she is, so stop trying to make her into it. I did what I did, because Dad deserves to see her for what she really is. Take off his rose tinted glasses and all that. Its about time you did the same.
Nick: I can’t believe you! You get a bloody PI onto her, and then make out she deserved it? She never denied what she was doing, so why did ya have to go and make a big deal out of it?
Tanya: If its not wrong, then why lie about it? Face it, Nick. She dropped herself into it, and deserves everything that’s coming to her.
Nick goes to retaliate, but Richard and Hilary walk into the room holding hands…
Richard: I think we all know that we have to discuss all this…
Tanya: What’s to discuss? She’s got to go, end of it.
Hilary: how wrong you are…
Nick: What?
Richard: Everyone, just calm it…… Look, I’m not going to go around the point, so I’m just going to say it. We’re engaged.
Tanya: (laughs) what?
Hilary: Me and Richard are spending the rest of our lives together. Every moment- together. I’m going to be his wife, Tanya.
Tanya looks mortified, and humiliated. Whereas nick, look ecstatic, and Hilary smug.
Red Rub Upstairs Flat- night
Amy, Val, Claire, Vicky, Natasha, and Mandy are having a night in, in the upstairs flat…
Amy: So I’ve got…..50 first dates, my big fat Greek wedding and love actually…what d’ya wanna watch?
Emma: Not too romanced based then!
Claire: I dunno…. I love a good romantic click flick!
There’s a knock at the door. Amy goes and answers it…
Amy: Sanjita! Omg, you actually got let out?! That’s great news!
Sanjita: Got let out….sneaked out…what’s the difference?!
Natasha: you didn’t?!
Sanjita says nothing, just smiles…
Mandy: omg, she so did!!
Amy: And good on you! Shouldn’t let those so called excuses for men stop us having our fun!
Sanjita: exactly. Hear hear!
Val: Well you know. What would we do without them?!
Amy: We’d have a hell of an easier life, that’s all I know!
Sanjita: I thought you and Patrick were ok……?
Amy: (her eyes welling up) well, so did i….
Amy cries into her hands, the rest of the girls all gather round her, to comfort her. She sits up again…
Amy: Its all a mess. All this time we’ve been together, and he goes and does all this….how can I forgive him for having an affair. another affair. I loved him so much, yet he does all this crap to me time and time again. I can’t handle this any more. Love is meant to be happy and perfect…..its meant to be everything you ever wanted. But what do I get? I get a self obsessed bloke who has affair after affair, time and time again….
Val: (puts her arm around Amy) I didn’t realise it was so bad…
Amy: Well what did you expect? Val, don’t you get it? He’s been having an affair, and lied to me time and time again about it. And you know what….? I don’t know what to do anymore. I really don’t.
Amy cries back into her hands again…
INT: JENKINS MANOR
Tanya is sitting alone on the sofa, staring into space. She’s obviously shocked. Hilary walks in…
Hilary: Just thought I’d tell you. You wont have to call me mum, unless you want to of course… After all, you’re a grown woman, and I don’t want to be seen as old enough to have you….
Tanya: How the hell did you spindle your way into this one?!
Hilary: I did nothing. In fact, you’re the one that pushed me and Richard together. You’re the trigger for our engagement. You and your pathetic little photos. I should really thank you for that, shake your hand or something…. but I was always told not to touch dirt.
Tanya: Your not going to get away with this. I set you up once, I can do it again. You think your going to be his wife? (laughs)yeah right. Happiness only happens in fairytales.
Hilary: but your forgetting. He’s the one that wants to marry me, so theirs no way you can poison him against me. Thanks to you, he’s seen the worse in me, yet he STILL wants to marry me. So as I said, you can’t break us anymore Tanya. The fun and games are over. I’ve won.
Tanya: I’m not thick. I know you wanted this to happen for so long…. You’ve……you’ve set him up haven’t you? Making him marry you…..forcing him!
Hilary: Get a grip, Tanya. Would he really be so happy if I’d have done that?
Tanya: Well i…
Hilary: Just face the facts, Tanya. Richard wants me to be his wife. We WILL be getting married. Half of everything you see around you, will be mine. We’re going to spend the rest of our lives together, no matter what. Nothing will come between us, not even you.
Tanya: You shouldn’t be so self-assured, Hilary. Didn’t anyone ever tell you that you don’t get everything you want?
Hilary: In this case, I do. I’m going to be your step-mum, Tanya….. don’t I get a welcome to the family?!
Ok one of those women in Amys chick party is her husbands bed partner,,sighhh..
Tanya is just too immature.. she needs to grow up and then try to trap Hilary..basically she has only seen the private eye stuff in movies or on Tv she really does not have the maturity to understand the workings of these folks other than taking dirty pictures.. she needs more than dirty pictures to convince Richard.
Hilary also sounds like a 16 yr old who is a play ground bully who has won something from one of her victims,, :searchme:
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - NIGHT
Amy is crying on the sofa, Vicky and Val are supplying her with tissues, everyone else has left.
Val: There you go Amy, blow it all out... as my old mar used to say...
Amy: The way im feeling Val i could blow for england...
Val: Thats a way to get Patrick back...
The three women laugh.
Amy: So much for a girls night in eh? I cant believe im so selfish...
Vicky: Nonscene babes...if you are upset we all want to be there for you...
Amy: Thanks, youre both great, all you girls are...but i want to be on my own now...
Vicky: Ok if your sure?
Amy: Yeah ill be fine...need some time on my own.
Val and Vicky say their goodbyes and leave Amy alone, she starts to cry again.
INT.HOTEL ROOM - NIGHT
Patrick is lying on the bed alone, watching some sport on the tv, he is depressed that hes had to spend the weekend alone. He gets a phone call and he picks it up immediatley.
Patrick: Hi babes, changed your mind then?
Woman: Patrick...i cant believe you... you've really upset her you know...
Patrick: Hey i dont see you complaning...
Woman: It's wrong, she's an emotional wreck...i felt dead guilty...
Patrick: Dont...she deserves it...now come on...get yourslef around here as im bored and horned up beyond beleif...
Woman: Do you know what im sick of doing the running... if you want me then come and get me...ill meet you by the beach later.
The woman puts the phone done. Patrick gets his coat and leaves.
INT. RED RUM - NIGHT
Amy is sitting alone in the dark, the clock is ticking, she sits alone shaking herself on the sofa. Tears slowly rolling down her eyes.
She sends Patrick a text:
Hiya Babes, Missing U, I Need U BK, Luv Amy
EXT. BAYMOORE BEACH - NIGHT
Patrick lies against the wall underneath Valeintos Resturaunt. He gets Amys text and ignores it. He lights a cigarette and blows a puff of smoke out. In the distance a dark shilouette can be seen.
Patrick smirks, and he wolf whistles
Patrick: Hi sexy.. knew you'd not be able to resist me...
We get a shot of her high heels as the camera pans up the back of her.
Natasha: Of course not... you might be hurting her... but im loving every minute of it.
Natahsa and Patrick passionatley kiss and Patrick pushes her against the wall.
Just caught up it's really good!
INT. BOOKIES UPSTAIRS FLAT - NIGHT
Natasha's flat. Patrick and Natashsa are lying together in bed, they are snuggled up in bed together.
Patrick: Talk about the perfect Sunday Morning...
Natahsa: Its great...
Patrick: No It's perfect... we're just so great together its untrue... a good pair...
Natahsa: Yeah...but i still cant help feeling guilty at times...
Patrick: Dont... its harmless fun...
Natasha: Harmless? I saw her last night...in tears! It wasnt harmles...
Patrick: In this world babes you have to look out for number one, and no one else... im having fun...your having fun...thats all that matters...
What a selfish ba*******d.. gawd I hate him:angry: :angry: , and I hope Natasha has a fit of guilts so bad she spills the beans on Patrick.
BACHELORS HOUSE- Day
Claire is flicking through channels on the TV, Chris comes downstairs, wearing just a towel, having come out of the shower…
Chris: Hey Claire, how you doing?
Claire: Good thanks, you?
Chris: Great. Met a fab girl last night. Long blonde hair, blue eyes….just pure sexiness, you know the type. Anyway, one thing lead to another…she’s upstairs if you wondering.
Claire: I wasn’t
Chris: You know what? She’s the best girl I’ve met in a long time. Great looks, great brains, great…
Claire: I don’t really want to know, Chris, I just wanted to say…
Chris: Why’s that? Jealous are we?
Claire: Cause I’m not jealous. I just don’t want to know all the details about your sex life!
Chris sits on the edge of the sofa, right next to Claire. She shuffles to the side..
Chris: you are, aren’t you? you’re jealous of her!
Claire: Don’t be so stupid. She’s welcome to you.
Chris: but you can’t deny all this. This tension between us. Come on, I know as well as you do that we have feelings for each other. Why put yourself through all this, when you’re so obviously obsessed with me…
Claire: What are you on about? Still drunk from last night, or something? Since when has there ever been feelings between us?
Chris: For a long time. Come on Claire, don deny it! You’re only going to hurt yourself, so why don’t we just let our feelings do the talking…
Chris goes to kiss Claire. She pulls away, and stands up, disgusted.
Claire: what was that for? Come on Chris, there’s nothing like that between us!
Chris goes to kiss her again
Claire: There’s no way this is going to happen! I’m not going to suddenly fall in love with you. I don’t want to date you, got that? Not a hope in hell! I just came here to say…
Chris: you know your gagging for it…
Claire: stop this! I’m with Romeo, and i….
Chris: He doesn’t have to know.
Claire: what?
Chris: I’m not making you split from him. No ones stopping you seeing me as well though (whispers) I wont tell him if you don’t
Claire: no… I just….Chris, i….
Chris: It’s a shock, I know. But we’re good together.
Claire: I just…can’t….I’m going to Italy, Chris.
Chris: what?!
Claire: just for a bit… to clear my head. I don’t know how long I’ll be gone… I just wanted to tell you, and say goodbye…
INT. Ryan's Flat - NIGHT
Dr Ryan organos luxury flat overlooking Torquey harbour. He is siiting on his leather sofa watch football. There is a knock on the door, he goes to answer it and standing there is Hilary.
Ryan: Hilary...i...i wasnt expecting you tonight...
Hilary walks insdie
Hilary: (observes untidyness) Evidentally...
Ryan: But its great that you've come...you know me never say no to a...
Hilary: I havent come for sex Ryan...
Ryan: Oh... what do you want to talk then or something?
Hilary: I'll be blunt with you... its over....you and me finito...
Ryan is shocked, he sits down on the sofa devastated at the news...
Ryan: Well...is there a reason why?
Hilary: Im marrying Richard...
Ryan: Marrying him!? But you dont even love him!?
Hilary: Its too good an oppurtunity to waste...and im not going to spoil it by having a quick meaningless fumble with you...
Ryan: It wasnt meaningles to me...
Hilary: Well thats where you and me differ Ryan...all it ever was sex... there wasnt nothing more than that as far as i saw it...
Ryan: You used me!?
Hilary: See it like that if you like... but you had no complaints at the time...
Ryan: You'll never have that spark...that passion...with him...
Hilary: Its not about sex or love with Richard...its money...and im not going to waste away a vineyard in France for a hump with you..
Ryan is speechless. Hilary sits next to him and strokes his face.
Hilary: Look it was good whilst it lasted...were we a good pair... as far as i see it someone like you could be useful on my side... we can do each other favours in the future...
She lightly kisses him on the lips and leaves the flat, and a devastated Ryan alone.
Just cause I can not stand Hilary.. I do hope that Tanya and Ryan join forces and take Hilary down..
Glad Claire is taking off to Italy, things were getting just a tad bit too uncomfortable with Chris ...
Baymoore beach- day
Val and Amy are sitting on a bench, looking out to sea. They’re both gazing out to sea, while talking to each other..
Amy: This is great isn’t it. Just to be able to sit here and chat, and look out at all this..
Val: What I’d do to be sitting in Spain somewhere doing it though…. On the beach, all the booze, all the fags, all the men…..perfect…
Amy: God yeah! It so bloody cold here! Feels like I haven’t seen the sun in ages. Look at me skin, white as a ghost! Imagine being able to just go top up your tan on the beach tomorrow…
Val: Claire’s got it best, aint she
Amy: What you mean?
Val: She’s off to Italy for a while. It’s a bit out of the blue, but I wouldn’t complain if she invited me!
Amy: On her own?
Val: Don’t know. I heard it over the bar, so I don’t know many details…
Amy: I used to do all that with Patrick. Once, we went to Cannes. We went to the port, and he’d booked a boat. We spent the sunset on our own boat, looking out to the sun and the coast. God, it was so nice…
Val: He really did that?! Doesn’t seem the type.
Amy: he was once. Don’t know about now… (pauses) Maybe that’s what I should do. Take him on a holiday.
Val: No offence, but why?
Amy: Well this place, its just when we’re around here, we always have distractions. We can never be together, because something pulls us apart….work and stuff, you know. Maybe if I took him on holiday we could….rekindle things. Spend time together…
Val: Well you could. But when you get back, nothing might not have changed. It could go back to how it is now, just like that.
Amy: not if I make him fall in love with me again. It could go back to how things used to be… the old Patrick. (turns to Val) You know what? I’m gonna do it. I’m gonna win him back.