its really good please carry on!
Wow, it looks like i have written the 100 th post!
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its really good please carry on!
Wow, it looks like i have written the 100 th post!
Lol... yep congratulations! lol :cheer: :clap: lol. Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoy reading it as much as i enjoy writing it! lol :)Quote:
Originally Posted by Leo_in_ee_rules
its really gd more soon please!
great do more soon
thanks, thats ok, i enjoy reading it, as it is a great script, do more soon!Quote:
Originally Posted by xXxJessxXx
I was also wondering , how many parts do you think there is gonna be to this story, the more the better.
luv sheree
well so far i have written about 78, but i am still adding bits in the middle in places where its a bit rusty or rushed.
I have already begun the sequel(What ever its called. lol) and that has about 30 parts in so far, but as i said a couple of pages back it seems a lot of you(Including me) like Leo. and i kind of did something you might not like in the sequel. lol, and i enjoy writing about Leo so i just keep adding bits in beacuse it might be the last chance (bet you can guess what happens) lol.
so it keep growin and growin, so it could be anything from 78 to 108! lol (I doubt) more like 85 maybe. i may even change the sequel completly as i liek writing about Leo so much! lol. who knows.
that would be brilliant if there were that many i love your script so i am glad there is a lot keep going please
please post more soon.
more soon please
xxx
Forbidden Love Part Thirty! Cradle
That night as Darren, Cael and Jimmy sat in the little gap by the garages Demi and Leo sat on the grass by the wall. They could hear them laughing and joking but that didn’t bother them.
“So you are all right after last night aint ya Dem’s” Leo asked as he looked down at her, she looked up frowning.
“Course!” She replied “Why wouldn’t I be…” she asked as Leo shrugged “You aint are ya…” Demi said looking back down to the floor.
“What…!” Leo frowned as he looked at her “No… that aint what I meant… I just didn’t know if you was off with me or something.”
“Leo…” Demi smiled with a little laugh “I aint off with you… how could I be, it was great… because I love you” she smiled up at him as he smiled and kissed her lightly.
“I love you too!”
“Ooooooooo”
Leo and Demi broke from their passionate kiss as they looked up to see three little faces hanging over the wall above them. Leo smiled at his mates as Demi looked up with a smile too.
“Naughty naughty… Kissing behind the bike sheds aye!” Jimmy said jokingly.
“What will mummy say” Cael teased as they all laughed.
“Well don’t go shouting it about aye Cael” Demi said as Leo nodded.
“Yeah Cael I’m serious, none of ya go telling any one” Leo said as he looked up at his mates. “Or I’ll have ya…” he joked as he got up laughing and pulled Demi to her feet as the five of them walked off.
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