Sequel To Deception - Moving On

aahhh poor Chrissie don't mess it up girl YOU love JAKE

JC forever n ever n ever

This is great, poor chrissie, Jake come back she didn't mean it!!!
Luving this script
Post more soon
Luv ya
Layne
x x x

She didn't mean it! More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

brill! :D jake you know she didnt mean it! :) more soon please, cant wait

Once again because of my exam tommorrow I amy not be posting until Friday so here are two more parts thanks to all my wonderful readers and repliers your all amazingly brilliant :wub: :angel: :heart:

Dennis returned to the flat and found Danny and Sharon having a cup of tea and a gossip
Danny- well he’s back and he doesn’t exactly look overjoyed
Dennis- Danny can you give us a minute
Danny- sure I need to find Jake anyway see you later
Sharon- bye
Danny left
Sharon- he seems nice
Dennis- he is on occasions I’ve just spoken to Jake about Chrissie I’m really worried
Sharon- she’s a big girl Dennis
Dennis- I know you’re mad at her over the Den thing but she meant well
Sharon- no one wants to hear that about your dad Dennis
Dennis- and you think I did
Sharon- I didn’t say that
Dennis- then why are you acting like you’re the only one affected by this
Sharon- I’m not
Dennis- listen to us even now when he’s not here he’s managing to come between us
Sharon- your right I know you are
Dennis walked over and wrapped his arms around her
Dennis- I love you
Sharon- what more than yesterday
Dennis- of course but not quite as much as tomorrow
He kissed her
Dennis- but I’m still worried about Chrissie
Sharon- just give her time to adjust yeah she’s a mum now
She kissed Dennis hard and grinned
Dennis- what
Sharon- well Danny’s out and the flat’s empty it’s just you and me
Dennis- really
Sharon- don’t act like you didn’t notice Dennis Rickman I know you and your one track mind
Dennis scooped her up in his arms and Sharon giggled as he carried her to the bedroom

Jake sat on the bench with his daughter fast asleep in his arms he stared at her pink cheeks and perfect little fingers he stroked them gently and watched her stir in her sleep he smiled his beautiful little girl just like her mum
Jake- looks like mummy is cross with me angel but we’ll make it better for her shall we although I’m not sure how
Danny saw his brother and made his way over
Danny- everything all right in paradise
Jake- paradise what’s that
Danny sat down- things not good
Jake- things are fine
Danny- meaning they’re far from fine
Jake- me and Chrissie we’re just not getting on
Danny- what do you expect your new parents
Jake- no it’s different she’d changed like over night one day we’re fine the next she’s cleaning the flat top to bottom for the third time this week she won’t talk to me
Danny- maybe she’s scared
Jake- then why won’t she talk to me
Danny- maybe you should talk to her
Jake- I tried
Danny- then try harder and if that fails buy her a present
Jake- is that your answer to everything
Danny- well I’m just making a suggestion it’s up to you what you do
Danny stood up
Danny- I better go
Jake- yeah see ya
Jake stared down at his little girl thinking for a few minutes
Jake- I know what I’ll do yes I do but first we need to go shopping

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh bless Danny he came up with some good advice there.... :wub: :cheer: :wub:

keep it coming or i will have to pay Christine to fail you on the exam tomorrow..... :angel:

Bless brotherly love.

aaaaaaawwwwwww. danny is so sweet. good luck in your exams. then more
xxx

That is so cute!!!
Post more asa you can!
Good luck with exams
Luv ya lots
Layne
x x x