Whhooooaaa - now there is a cliffhanger till the next episode if there ever was one!!!
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Whhooooaaa - now there is a cliffhanger till the next episode if there ever was one!!!
:eek: you can't leave it like that!!!!!!!!!!!!
i thought i might have a break this weekend and leave it until monday... :p only kidding...what a cliffhnager that was eh!?
Jenkins Manor - Night
Craig runs up to Craig and sticks the gun in her side...she starts to panick
Craig: Not scared of me? Yeah right looks like it....
Gary runs up to Craig and tackles him, Craig lets go of Tanya who falls to the floor.
Craig: Your all talk...you make out to be some tough bird but your nothing but a stupid blond bint...
Gary: You wanna shut your mouth!
Craig: Really? Because this (waves gun) says otherwise.
Richard: Look Craig, what is the meaning of all this eh? To put the frightners up us?
Craig: Yes... i've just come back in town and found out that that smack head son of yours is dead...
Richard: Yes convient that is...you call in your mob to chase him to his death, then you and Mandy "go out of town" for a while...guilty concience?
Craig: I made it clear to him...that he should never return to Baymoore! If hed done as he was told then hed be safe and well in the spanish sun by now...but no...that idotic moron had to come back...
Tanya: But did you really have to kill him!?
Craig: Im a man of principle! I stick to my word! I dont let tramps like him mess me around! I never let old scores settle...
Tanya: Neither do I...
Gary: Tanya, just drop it...
Tanya: Im determined to make you pay for what you did to Ed, and if that means a bullet in the gut then so be it...
Craig: I didnt come around here tonight to shoot any of you...it was a warning...to make sure that when the police start asking questions...my name dosent come up in their enquiries...do you get me... (looks at Tanya) and i swear to god i wouldnt just be you that i hurt Tanya...it would be the whole lot of you...including them little kiddies of yours...bag of bricks in the irish sea...no skin off my nose...
Tanya goes mental and tries to attack Craig, Gary restrains her.
Craig: Tonight...is the end of it...finished. You shut your traps and we can all move on... nice study by the way...youll have to give your interior designers number...
Craig walks out of the house, Tanya is in tears on the floor.
Tanya: I swear to god! I will not have him threaten the twins like that! No way! Ok so maybe not now, and maybe not the police...but i swear i will make him pay...one way or another...
Greasy Gary's Cafe - Morning
Romeo and Chris are in the cafe.
Romeo: I am abosultey knackered....i didnt get a wink of sleep
Chris: Same here...all i heard was Tom and that new bird of his at it like a pair of randy rabbits...
Romeo: so much for sensible Tom eh? one date and hes jumping into bed with her...
Chris: Yeah well who blames he, she is one sexy saucepot...
Romeo: And your best mates girlfriend...so keep your eyes away and your mouth closed...
Chris: But common...shes like top quality woman...she's wasted on him...
Romeo: And you...so keep your thoughts to yourself...speak of the devil...
Tom walks into the cafe with Luqina.
Tom: This...is the local cafe...not exactly the best grub in britain but its ok!
Gary: Hey i heard that!
Tom: Oh look who it is...me old muckers...Chris and Romeo...this my friends is Luqina...my new girlfriend...
Romeo: ALright?
Chris: Hi there...
Tom goes to get some breakfast. Luqina sits down, she moves her coat around a bit and shows nothing but a bra underneath, Chris mouth opens but Romeo kicks him underneath the table.
i havent been reading this (shame on me), but i just looked over some and its great!
you really should! youll soon get into it, and if you get confussed then me or one of the devon seas fanbase will fill you in! :DQuote:
Originally Posted by Jada-GDR
oo loving the bit with craig!!! very good :)
I still like Craig :p
Baymoore Bingo Hall - Day
Claire and Emma are walking into the bingo hall.
Emma: Christ Claire, ive got better things to be doing on a Saturday morning that playing Bingo....
Claire: Do you think i want to spend my day with the poisinous perms? No...but we have to come and show mom some support on her first day of work...
Emma: She'll be fine...shes a gobby mare...so calling out a few numbers wont be any trouble....
Claire: Look just come in, have one game, and ill take out shopping in Dartmouth okay?
The pair walk into the hall where Val is coming on stage in a shiny jacket.
Val: Good mornings ladies and gents...I'm Val, as if you didnt know, and i will be calling the balls today...
Cuts to Margaret, Annie and Josie who are sitting next to each other ready to play a game.
Margaret: Makes a change from holding them...
Val: Yes i heard that thank you Miss Kage...well have none of that today thank you very much...now eyes down ladies...and the first ball out...Flirty Thirty...number 30...
Margaret: And the rest...
Val: You 3 arent getting plenty...number 20!
Margaret: The cheaky...
Josie: Give her some respect, the girl can dish it out just aswell...
Val: Overweight....28....
Margaret: We know love!
The old women laugh at this.
Val: I'm Free...number 3
Maragret: So we've heard!
Val starts to find the fun side in it. Cuts back to Claire and Emma.
Emma: Stuff this for a game of soldiers...look at her...she's fine...common Claire, we're off to the shops...
Claire: Yeah...i suppose she's gonna get on just fine...
:lol: i love val shes great