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Forbidden Love Part Twenty - Eight Morning After the Night Before!
It was the following morning, Demi laid in bed as she felt about Leo, she felt a sudden rush of emotion as a smile was brought to her face. She begun to think about last night. She knew that this defiantly was love that she felt for Leo. After she’d slept with him she felt so happy, so happy that nothing could tear them apart. She knew they had something specially between them and that could never be broken.
Demi didn’t realise how much she loved him till last night, she always knew it was strong… But not this strong, she didn’t know it could get any stronger, she didn’t think it could get any better. She smiled again as she snuggled down under the covers just imagining Leo. She knew someday they’d be together properly, they’d move away to the sea and live happily together, they’d start their own family in a few years time and grow old together. But her images and happiness were soon interrupted as she was brought back to reality with a bump.
“Demi!” she heard her voice, her mothers, Demi sighed rolling over onto her front. “Demi! Breakfast love!” She heard again as Demi sighed coming from deep under the covers and walked over to the door. Demi walked down the stairs and sighed as she walked into the kitchen where her family were eating breakfast.
“Alright Love?” Rosie smiled, “Here ya are” She added as she placed a plate in front of Demi.
“Mum please!” Mickey sighed as he brought his hands to his head. “Do ya have to shout!”
“Mickey love this aint shouting, you wanna get ya self home a bit earlier in future don’t ya!” she snapped with a smile as Mickey sighed.
“Tell ya, I weren’t never out late like you kids are today!” Rosie sighed as Mickey looked up at her.
“Maybe that had something to do with the fact that at my age you had two kids to look after!”
“Yeah your probably right, tell ya don’t none of you get weighed down with a little kiddie, live a little first!”
“Oh mum that’s reminds me, erm Natalie’s coming round later, I’m gonna cook her a meal so…”
“You cook!” Darren laughed as Mickey shot him a glare.
“You’d better tell her to call in for a pizza on her way round!” Demi added as Mickey turned to her quickly a little offended.
“What’s that supposed to mean!” Mickey snapped as he looked at the twins.
“That you cant cook!” Darren snapped as Mickey sighed shaking his head. “You remember what happens when you cooked for that Louise!” Darren added with a laugh.
“Oh yeah! You was cooking her, what was it Mickey, Chicken curry, well supposed to be any way!”
“Look it aint my fault if it turned out, a bit…. Funny!” Mickey snapped looking at the twins as he grinned, “I still say you two had something to do with it.”
“It weren’t us!” Darren protested.
“You ruined that one all by ya self!” Demi laughed as she tucked into her cereal.
“Alright alright, so maybe I aint the best cook, but anyway, I’m giving it a go so could yous lot please go out somewhere!” Mickey begged as he put his hands together looking at Rosie and Keith, he then quickly turned to the twins “Especially you two, I don’t want nothing ending up in the dinner what should be there!”
“Well then you should give up trying then!” Darren teased as him and Demi laughed.
“Alright we’ll go out, you two un all, and I’m sure it’ll be lovely love!” Rosie smiled as she left for work, the twins laughed as Mickey gave them an evil glare.
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Forbidden Love Part Twenty - Nine Mickey's Date Thanks guys for reading this! Only one more post tgo in this thread before it reaches 100! :cheer: lol. thanks again guys for reading and replying!
Later that evening the twins were sat on the sofa watching TV and laughing as Rosie was applying the last of her make up. Mickey came running down the stairs in his jeans.
“You’ll sure charm her looking like that!” Darren joked as Demi grinned.
“Yeah with yer hot body!” She laughed as Mickey sighed giving Darren a shove.
“Look mum I cant find me white top!” Mickey panicked as she searched the living room.
“Alright love, er I think its upstairs, in the clean pile on my bed” Rosie smiled as she faced back to the mirror. Suddenly there was a knock at the door.
“Oh, quick get that will ya I need to get dressed.” Mickey panicked as he hurried upstairs. Demi leapt up from the sofa to get the door before anyone else could have a chance.
“Hi” Demi smiled as she opened the door.
“Alright Demi?” Natalie smiled as Demi nodded. “Is he in?” She asked as Demi nodded.
“So how do ya like Curry then?” Demi asked with a giggle as Mickey hurtled down the stairs. “Thanks Demi, you can go now!” Mickey said gritting his teeth trying to keep a smile on his face.
They went into the living room as Mickey waited for his family to go.
“Oh Mum, that reminds me, I’m going to Brighton with these lot next week, Clint’s van wont get us all in so I’m gonna dive James’s car.” He smiled as Rosie turned round.
“Oh no Mickey, you aint driving love!” She said shaking her head as Mickey sighed. “Not after last time!” She added as Natalie looked intrigued to find out what happened. Mickey brought his hand to his head in embarrassment.
“He was driving his mates to Scotland, bout 11 of em weren’t it Mickey”
“And he was so out of it that he crashed and the whole thing went up side down and everything.”
“Er I was not drunk thank you Demi! It was a dark slippy road!”
“Anyway and they were all trapped in the bus and in the middle of nowhere!” Demi went on as Darren nodded.
“So I think it’ll be safer for someone else to drive don’t ya think Mickey!” Darren said smiling from ear to ear. Mickey sighed as he brought his hand to his face.
“Right we’re off, see ya later!” Rosie smiled as she left the room. “See ya Mickey!” Keith smiled as he left with her.
“You two un all!” Mickey snapped as he pointed to the door. The twins got up sighing as they headed for the door.
“Is Cael out?” Darren asked Natalie Cael’s older sister as she nodded with a smile, Darren left with Demi behind him.
“Oh Nat, don’t eat nothing he gives ya! You’ll regret it!” Demi called form the hallway as Mickey went after them.
“Get Out!”
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