Walking In The Rain

Err, I hope this is in the right place!

"I like walking in the rain, 'cause then no one knows I'm crying"

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‘Sharon, please, just give me one more chance, I can’t give you up.’ Dennis stood in the corner of the room, pleading with her for just a fraction of something, just so he knew she still wanted him like he wanted her. Like he always would want her.
‘Dennis, I can’t.’
‘But why?’
‘Because we’ve tried it and it doesn’t work.’
‘But things have changed since then and there’s Molly to consider. Please, give it one more try.’
‘Molly’s the reason why I won’t give it another go.’
‘Why? What’s she got to do with it?’
‘She’s got everything to do with it Dennis! I can’t let her be hurt!’
‘Why would she be?’
‘Because you’re too much like your dad and I’m too much like my mum!’
‘I am not my father Sharon, and you’re not your mother either, please, one more chance.’ He crossed the room and took her hands softly in his.
‘No, I can’t.’
‘I can’t stand not being with you.’
‘Move on Dennis, please.’
‘But I’d never find anyone like you again.’
‘I’m not the only one for you Dennis. And you’re not the only one for me.’
‘You don’t mean that.’
‘I do sweetheart.’
‘Sharon, I love you, just one more chance, that’s all I want. I’m nothing without you.’
‘Dennis, it doesn’t work, it never does.’
‘It would be different this time!’
‘Dennis I love you, but the way we live now is the way it’s going to be, it’s got to be like that.’ Dennis sighed resignedly and pulled Sharon to him, he hugged her softly and lay his head on her shoulder, this was all they ever would be, just good friends. They were close, they spent all their spare time together, he had everything that he had ever wished for. And he couldn’t stand it.

I know this is going to be brilliant babes, so glad you're posting it here so I can attempt to keep up to date with it! :)

Amazing start, please post more as soon as.

wow... this is great... brilliant... please post more... more more more

Love this start, can't wait for the next bit.

This is great!! Post more soon please!
layne
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great start!! more soon please!!! :thumbsup:

fab! :D whos molly? is it their baby or something? love the start! :) more very soon please, cant wait

Sorry for the delay! Thanks for your replies!

When Dennis woke up Sharon had already gone to work. He got up off the floor, where he’d fallen asleep after his conversation with Sharon, and made his way up the stairs into Molly’s room. She raced across the room into his arms.
‘Daddy!’
‘Hello gorgeous.’ He picked her up and span her round. The only consistent thing in his life, the one thing that never changed, was the way he felt about his daughter. And the way she felt about him, the only person that didn’t keep hurting him, his little angel.
‘So cheeky, you been awake long?’
‘Uh huh, but Daddy was sleepyful so Molly comed back to bed.’
‘Well thank you very much Molly dolly.’
‘Hehe, Daddy’s silly. Did you get drunked last night?’
‘No! Would I ever?’
‘Yep.’ She giggled. ‘You was sleeping on the floor Daddy.’
‘I know, I was tired.’
‘But you has a bed.’
‘Yep, but I forgot to go to bed.’
‘Silly.’
‘Very.’ Molly giggled again and threw her arms around Dennis’s neck.
‘Daddy, what did you do with Mummy?’
‘What do you mean what did I do with Mummy?’
‘She’s goneded.’
‘Mummy’s got to work angel.’
‘But I wants Mummy here.’
‘Yeah, so do I. How about Molly and Daddy get some ice cream and watch cartoons until Mummy gets home eh?’
‘Can fluffy bunny watch too?’
‘Yeah, if he wants to.’
‘But Daddy, he can’t.’
‘Why not?’
‘He got losted.’
‘Daddy better find him then eh?’

ahh the cutenness of molly!!!more soon plz